I Was Lifted Up On Angel's Wings by WhtDove
I was lifted up on Angels' wings,
And through the Heavens soared.
When I came upon a brilliant light,
I found it was my Lord.
With hair like snow and eyes of fire,
I bowed before His feet.
In His presence it was hard to stand,
My sins felt like concrete.
Head hung in sorrow, tears filled my eyes.
My mouth, it couldn't speak.
My sins were overpowering me.
My soul, it just felt weak.
A gentle hand reached out to touch me,
A voice like thunder spoke.
The love He gave enveloped my soul,
My heart no longer broke.
He put His loving arms around me,
Such peace that I felt then.
I was quite content in knowing that,
He'd do it all again.
Our righteous acts are like filthy rags,
The Lord reminded me.
Come in unto Me my precious child,
For I can set you free.
I was lifted up on Angel's wings,
And through the Heavens soared.
I had been forgiven my sin and...
My soul had been restored.
And through the Heavens soared.
When I came upon a brilliant light,
I found it was my Lord.
With hair like snow and eyes of fire,
I bowed before His feet.
In His presence it was hard to stand,
My sins felt like concrete.
Head hung in sorrow, tears filled my eyes.
My mouth, it couldn't speak.
My sins were overpowering me.
My soul, it just felt weak.
A gentle hand reached out to touch me,
A voice like thunder spoke.
The love He gave enveloped my soul,
My heart no longer broke.
He put His loving arms around me,
Such peace that I felt then.
I was quite content in knowing that,
He'd do it all again.
Our righteous acts are like filthy rags,
The Lord reminded me.
Come in unto Me my precious child,
For I can set you free.
I was lifted up on Angel's wings,
And through the Heavens soared.
I had been forgiven my sin and...
My soul had been restored.
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This poem is about the beauty of forgiveness the Lord gives us. It portrays how one might feel standing in His presence with our sin.
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this poem has touched my heart and i know that every day i have somthing to be thankfull for the love of god and jesus christ. - amy |
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This poem is very beautiful, and a reminder that all our sins are forgiven if we seek ye first the kingdom of GOD and just ask. - mary |
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A scientist I am; a poet I am not. I came to this sight looking for inspiration, thoughts to convey what I felt in my heart--WhtDove your poetry is incredible! Both of the poems that I chose came from your heart; they will be forever imprinted on mine. - Kathy |
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Forgiveness is a beautiful gift of love. - V |
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I think that this poem was excellent. So did my sister. Before we even read it, the title inspired us, and we sang it to the best of our ability. I am only twelve years old, but I know that God loves me so much, He would do anything in His power for me. - Sara |
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I love this poem. It was very good! It was a good inspirationa dn tells the story of anyone who has asked God for forgiveness. Great job! - Sara |
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As a new christian this poam just touched my heart. It is a poam that left me filled with awe because it truelly shows the wonder of Christ, the joy of being forgiven, and the wonderfull power of God's love. - Abigail |
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i should say ur poem wrightly describes god's nature-ALL PARDENING - arjun |
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We should all believe in angels . this piece put you right where the writer wanted you . and enabled you to feel its words - mary |
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this is a pome done by a special person. she was my aunt. i love her and i love this pome. to me i belive she put all of the life in to this. i cry every time i read it. - Selena |
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Very great!Something worth to share with others, especially those who doesn't know that faith in God can be expressed in poems too like prayers. - mylene |
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I just want you to know that this poem has touched my life in more ways then 1 and I want to say thank you I enjoyed this to no limit I even sent this to my mother I hope God blesses you really good! Also I hope to see more from you Thank you Tracy K. - Tracy |
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This poem had me overjoyed in tears. It was very uplifting just when I need that boost. - Evangelina |
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i really like your poems, there really inspirational. Amazing. Keep up the awsome work! - em |
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ABSOLUTELY ONE OF THE MOST (IF NOT THE MOST) BEAUTIFUL POEM I'VE EVER READ! KEEP UP THE WORK. I'LL BE WAITING FOR MORE! - CHERYL |
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This poem reminded me of when I rededicated my life to Jesus Christ. Your poem it just what I felt like. - Candace |
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this is a very good poem as i feel that i'm all alone and this peom has cheered me up - suzie |
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GREAT! I felt it in my heart. - violet |
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hi i'm 14 and i thought that was the most heart warming poem i have ever read in my life. that realy gave me a new perspective. thanks for your beautiful use of talent. you really know what youre writing. you touched my young heart. so i say again. thanks - katie |
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AWESOME! - reese |
