The Wrong Way by RainDreamer
The wrong way, no one ever does this,
We're the best of friends but at one time longed to kiss,
We have done things in opposite array,
But for us maybe God intended it this way.
I ended it all with following words from a friend,
From a pretend friend, who wanted my world to end.
You were my world, each breathe I took, everything I dreamed,
A friendship shouldn't come from this, but amazingly through the dark it beamed.
Maybe my mistake was some sign,
That you were meant to just be a great friend of mine.
I am feeling happy that we are still so close,
Even though we don't shared what I wanted most.
For now I understand what I have gained from all this,
A special friend, someone who for not one moment do I want to miss.
We're the best of friends but at one time longed to kiss,
We have done things in opposite array,
But for us maybe God intended it this way.
I ended it all with following words from a friend,
From a pretend friend, who wanted my world to end.
You were my world, each breathe I took, everything I dreamed,
A friendship shouldn't come from this, but amazingly through the dark it beamed.
Maybe my mistake was some sign,
That you were meant to just be a great friend of mine.
I am feeling happy that we are still so close,
Even though we don't shared what I wanted most.
For now I understand what I have gained from all this,
A special friend, someone who for not one moment do I want to miss.
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On Halloween I met someone who changed my life. We started dating about two weeks after we met and things went well for almost two months. Then I was convinced by another friend (a guy friend) to break it off with him.
I did and that same day we talked for almost 7 hours about everything and how stupid I was. Today, we are such good friends that I treasure that more than a petty 8th grader "puppy love."
I know it will always be possible for me to have feelings stronger than friendship for him and maybe some day those will come back. But for now I am happy with him as my best friend.
I did and that same day we talked for almost 7 hours about everything and how stupid I was. Today, we are such good friends that I treasure that more than a petty 8th grader "puppy love."
I know it will always be possible for me to have feelings stronger than friendship for him and maybe some day those will come back. But for now I am happy with him as my best friend.
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It was a goood poem that had alot of feelig. it rolled well. keep writting1 - Hanah |
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it is extremly strange! - shell |
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this is a very good poem that everybody can relate to. its very touching, im glad that u and that person r friends, just remember that u can make ur own decisions u dont need anybody to help u with that. but yea. that was a very good poem! nice job(: - alissa |
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friends are the best thing a person can have even if your in love with them - lacey |
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This poem is really truly wonderful and it has guided me on my thinking. Thank you for this. - Jessica |
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i think that this poem was really good for a best friend you have and it is for a special acashion and you want to give them something special. that is why it is a special poem. i loved the poem. - ashley |
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i love this poem it reminds me of me and my friends - Shaie |
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this was a very good poem i feel every words you weas saying something like this happed to me too - nisha |
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good - cookie |
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I can relate to this poem soo much i really like my best friend but i dont know how to tell him. Some people have told me that he likes me too but i dont know. ???? - Shona |
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I love this poem because it's the exact same way that I once felt about one of my friends. - Sandrine |
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I love this peom. I can relate to this alot. That made me think about who my friends really is,and how I feel about this friendship. THANK YOU! - Ciara |
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This is so true! I will always remember it! Thankyou! - Sarah |
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this poem was very good hope you cotinue to write more - NASTASSJA |
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beautiful! i almost cried! - samantha |
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I love it - simone |
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it was nice and it touched me in playful ways and made me really happy - LSR |
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gee my name is sha thats what poeple call me and i want to say that your poem brought tears to my eyes and you go girl keep up the work and always be you a true to yourself holla - nichole |
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this poem kinda reminds me of me and my ex. - cayla |
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HEY! well thanks for letting me read this! it is exactly how it was with me and now my best friend! we loved eachother for about 2 years and some. but then all of a sudden she says she doesnt anymore. and it broke my heart but now we are the best of friends! and i dont want that to ever go away. but yet i still love her for more than a friend! thanks again! - bryce |
