Hand In Hand by ShoeBowl
Laying underneath the stars,
On a warm silent night.
Your arms are wrapped around me,
And everything feels right.
You kiss me sweet and softly,
I feel your warm gentle touch,
You help me feel protected
Under the sweet night sky rush.
My world before me is perfect.
There's nowhere else I want to be,
Except laying underneath the stars
Hand in hand, you and me.
Just when everything is perfect,
And you seem so delicately sweet,
A rush of wind comes past me
As I'm swept beneath my feet.
Nothing could be more right,
There's nowhere else I want to be.
Let's take a walk my only love,
Hand in hand, you and me.
On a warm silent night.
Your arms are wrapped around me,
And everything feels right.
You kiss me sweet and softly,
I feel your warm gentle touch,
You help me feel protected
Under the sweet night sky rush.
My world before me is perfect.
There's nowhere else I want to be,
Except laying underneath the stars
Hand in hand, you and me.
Just when everything is perfect,
And you seem so delicately sweet,
A rush of wind comes past me
As I'm swept beneath my feet.
Nothing could be more right,
There's nowhere else I want to be.
Let's take a walk my only love,
Hand in hand, you and me.
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This is a poem simply about a perfect night. We've all dreamt of or felt that special feeling where everything in the world seems right, and there's no where else you want to be. This poem describes a night of perfect love.
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I luv dat poem alot it really touched me it made me and my boyfriend cry you are very talented an god has blessed you use your talent dn't let dem go to waste because your are gifted cuz dat poem was good - brittany |
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This poem was so good it touched me in somanyways! I have always wanted to laybeneath the stars with that speacial someone!Keep writing poems and never quit. - Molly |
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I really love your poem. I can really relate to it. You put in words what i feel. - Desi |
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yeah this poem is so sweet and it remindes me of smeone i once loved! u go girl! - Elle |
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this really touches my heart cause it makes me think of my boyfriend! - Katrina |
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I LOVED this poem. Its just how i feel about my baby. WOW! - Amanda |
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you made me cry. that was so sweet and i wish i could be back with my bf under the stars. hand in hand. i love this poem. thank you - marci |
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i've always searched for a poem that describes the way i feel about my man and this poem exceeds my feelings - rachael |
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this poem is really sweet. . i really love it. its like while you read it, its like you are in the poem. like reality. - krissy |
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i thought that this poem was very sweet. feelings are hard to explain unless you know how to write them down on paper which shows me that you do. it ROCKS! - sharon |
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This poem is everything i felt inside because my boyfriend is away right now and i wanted to send him a poem and this on stuck out to me. Reading this poem gave me alot of ideas on what i can say to him. Thank You - Brielle |
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I give this poem a 10 out of 10! It touched my heart and me and my boyfriend can enjoy it together! - Amanda |
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i liked this poem because its true. when you feel love its just like this. once you find the one you want to be close with try it its really sweet. - meagan |
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THAT POEM WAS SO SWEET - Shuquale |
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brilliant poem, it seems to just put the words that you try to tell someone into your mouth, because we all know that when you try to tell someone exactly how much you love them it comes out all wrong, If you were to give someone this poem then your feelings for them would be very clear. - carole |
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Oh how i have dreamt of feeling like that. this poem has given me hope again, thank you. - Lena |
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I thought this poem was very good. It describes every girls fantasy or atleast mine. ShoeBowl please continue to write great poems like Hand In Hand. - Krissy |
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I felt really touched by this poem. It is very beautiful. I felt inspired the most of all the poems I have read on this site. It is simple enough to understand and relate to. Congratulations! Excellent! - Haley |
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Oh my gosh i LOVE this poem! I have been married to my husband for two and a half years now and there have been SOO many times i have wanted to say these things to him. just couldn't find the words. Love is such a powerful and awesome feeling! Thanks for putting it into words - Chris |
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this is such a lovely poem really tounched me and mi bf - Nikki |
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This Poem really touched my heart - Joan |
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It seemed so and alive. Great work! - TK |
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i really like this poem because it says a lot about people's first loves. :) - robyn |
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This poem was very good. - Amanda |
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This poem really touched me, I loved it. - martha |
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I really liked this poem. It makes me want to think of all my past memories, and what I want to be. I liked this poem a lot. - Amber |
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i loved it i couldnt said it better my self - jessica |
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This poem is so true. i love the way the poem is described. xxxxxxx - lucy |
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i like this poem I hope one day my life could be like that! - Lauren |
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this was a great and touching poem it touched me - geanette |
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I like, no i loved the poem. - Noneof |
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excellent poem it was also really nice and sweet! - Kerly |
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This is a really touching poem and i really loved it. This is something that i would not be able to express. - Daniela |
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i thought it was a very well written poem and it was also a very good one at that! - Bailey |
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Excellent. You put some of my recent thoughts on paper. Thank you. - Britt |
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i love the poem,im a huge fan of ur poems - Donna |
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THE WORDS YOU CHOSE WERE PERFECT YOU ARE A GOOD POET - MARY |
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So touching. really sweet - Ezli |
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This is a really sweet poem. If I Had to rate it from a 1-5 I would give it a 5 =) I just want to ask you one question was this poem for a loved one who left or no because Im trying to look for poems about a love one going away because hes going to the army! Just a Question but keep on with the poems. I like this one Love always Your Friend Catianne - Catianne Marie |
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I really like you poem. - Alaina |
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I wish that I would've been able to express myself in that time with this, the feeling was there, I just couldn't get the words out. - Steffy |
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the EXACT same thing happened to me! only we were standing under the stars not laying. this poem really toched me. i love it. he was me first love by the way. that was 2 years ago. and we are still together! - Aigner |
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That was really good reminds me of how things were with my ex maybe I'll send it to him. - Amy |
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I loved this poem it was very inspiring - Kaci |
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Simply beautiful. I wish I could feel that way again :) - whitey |
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this poem is everything that happens in my life . it is total talent. - caroline |
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I think that this poem means so much. I wish I had that sometimes. - Theresa |
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i just liked it, and soon you'll be reading some of my poems!. - Veronica |
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This poem is the sweetest thing I have ever read! It made me cry reading about it because it's everything me and my boy share! - Heather |
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WILL I THOUGHT THAT IT WAS GOOD - Linda |
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I am going to use this for my girlfriends. - Tommy |
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I loved it so much I gave it to my girlfriend wish me good luck. :) - Benjamin |
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This poem was perfect for me. It really hit home; I wish I could get my boyfriend to believe. - Sharron |
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This poem is just heart stopping and I think that it should be in a book. - Tiffany |
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Ofcourse it said in poetry what my hubby and I experience sometimes while holding hands. Can you write one about a long and cozy hug? - Gucci |
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i loved your poem it was beautifull it bought a tear. i love your work - kaela |
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Missy you make me so proud. i love this poem. i hope your doing good in the USMC, i know you are - Katie |
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I thought it was a very uplifting piece of poerty keep up the good work. thank you very much - mike |
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you know i really like what you said you just made me realizies how much i want to be w/ my b/f even if were far away thx. i love poems keep on sending them - becky |
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Now this poem reminds of my girlfriend so much - Alex |
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THAT IS A PRETY POEMS I LOVE THE WAY YOU DESCRB HOW YOU FELL I THANK U FOR LETING US READ YOUR PREETY POEM - SILLA |
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I really liked this poem, It was sweet. It pretty much speaks for all who dream of a night like that. Thank you for sharing it! - Tina |
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IT'S SWEET I LOVE IT & IT'S THE BEST ONE I'VE READ SO FAR. - Janie |
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The poem is great - Mandy |
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you are my best friend in the whole entire world. I want you to know that after we graduate and go our own ways, you will live on in my heart for forever. You are such a good writer and I want everyone who is reading this to know that you are also the WORLDS BEST FRIEND. You are the one who can make me feel the best on the worst of days, your the one who touches my heart everyday, your the one who teaches me more about trust and love with each passing day, I want to thank you for everything you do and everything you are, because you truely are a miracle. Best friends for life. you and me - Katie |
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very nicely writen i like it a lot. - Nikki |
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i really like this poem it really touched me to the heart! - baby |
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I really enjoyed this poem. I think the author has a lot of talent. I hope to see more from ShoeBowl in the future! - Katie |
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great poem,very moveing,just like love should be - colin |
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This poem is a very deep poem, great job - Crys |
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this poem is great! the author has great talent. persue it and write more. i hope to see more poems like this from ShoeBowl. i'll come back to see all the others! - sid |
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this poem really described the relationship i have with my boyfriend.. its a beautiful poem - Laura |
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i liked this poem a lot..it described what i felt exactly but couldn't say to the one i love - Yitzel |
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hello i just loved your poem it touched me in many ways. - Ashley |
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Verry great poem i was impressed! - joe |
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I cryed when i read this poem. It's so lovely and made me think about a kind person that i loved so much. - Maria |
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This poem reminds me of my boyfriend and I! - Megan |
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This is what i call a love poem its sooo sweet and full of pure love just made me close my eyes and dream.You are great. - g.s |
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Very well written. I tought it was very romantic. Good job! - priscilla |
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This is exactly the poem I was looking for. It sounds like what I was trying to write, but I have been stumped the last few days. My 5th wedding anniversary is coming up and this will go great on the gift tag of my gift to my husband. (of course you'll get the credit.) Wish you the best of luck in writing. - N |
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this poem brought back great memories, its as if the poem was written just for me! i loved it. keep up the good work - meg |
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your poem made alot of sense. It was a great poem to send to my boyfriend - Mel |
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This was a really great poem. I could see myselj laying there with my perfect love! Good job! - Rockman |
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This song was very touching, indeed. Simple, yet very complex. - elizabeth |
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I really liked this poem. It's very romantic, I enjoyed reading it. - rolandia |
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Oh WOW! I really liked this poem. Its probably one of the best i've ever read. This poem describes me and my b/f so much and the stars and everything cuz we really love looking at them together. And right now we're in a point in our relationship that we have distance and it really sucks,but i love him so much. Well thanks for writing this poem i really needed to read to it, - Tiffany |
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beautiful. what can i say? - juliet |
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That was really good. Keep it up. God gave you a great gift. - Leslie |
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That was a very romantic poem. I enjoyed it alot.. thanks for sharing - ceri |
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this is a sweet poem - ashlie |
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I think it is the best romantic poem i have ever head.The passion described is exactly what i want to express to my sweetheart.I salute you the poet of this poem. - sid |
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HEY! I LOVE THIS POEM! THE SECOND TIME I READ IT, I STARTED TO CRY. IT IS SO SWEET AND TRUE. IT HELPED ME IN MY RELATIONSHIP. THANKS SO MUCH :-) - Ashley |
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I really loved your poem. It reminded me about me and my boyfriend. - Jessica |
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woow extra ordinary! - suubun |
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I thought this was a very sweet poem and I think I'm going to give it to my boyfriend because it expresses a lot of feelings about someone you love deeply. I'm sure a lot of other people feel the same. Great job.Keep writing. I'd love to read more of your poems in the future. - Jacki |
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I love it! I tink that it express every feeling I have for my love.. - Molly |
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I just wanna say that this poem really touched my heart. While I read it , its seemed like I was really there. It brought warmth to my heart. I LOVE IT! Please write more. They are worth reading. - Amy |
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GREAT PEOM< I SENT IT TO MY GIRLFRIEND TO WHOM I FEEL THIS WAY ABOUT - MAtt |
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I thought it was great. To me it expressed what the author was feeling,and it's great feeling love at least once in your life. because so few get to. Thank you - Melissa |
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a very nice poem to send u're sweetheart - alon |
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I thought your poem was beautiful! It reminded me of someone I care about very much. There isn't that many poems that I actually like and I like yours. - jani |
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great poem! I'll give you all the credit in the world! thanks yari - yari |
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I love how you wrote this poem! I love it, You have done a really good job! - Stef |
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I love this poem (Hand In Hand) so much it is so increadible! It touches me so soft inside. I have heard great poems but this one is something diffrent. I think it is something more special, and whom who wrote this you have beatiful TALENT keep it going. - Monica |
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When I read this poem, I was brought to tears. You know,,when you are really, true in love, you have found your soulmate, words flow like an endless river, calm, beautiful and serene. Thank you for that moment. - In |
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I love this poem because it is something that i could relate to and it is the way most of us feel when we are withthat special person. - MIRZA |
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I am a very sentimental person. I think this poem is beautiful. You have done a wonderful job. You have said so much in one poem.God Bless - Angela |
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I LOVE THE POEM. IT MADE ME THINK OF THE TIMES ME AND MY BOYFRIEND USED TO LAY UNDERNEATH THE STARS AND TAKE LONG WALKS TOGETHER UNTIL HE MOVED AWAY. I MISS HIM SO MUCH. THAT POEM REMINDED ME OF HIM. ~LOVE MISTY~ - Misty |
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I totally understand how you feel. Last night i was alone under a full moon with my boyfriend and everything just clicked. thanx for sharing your talent - DeeplyPassionate |
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this poem is really cute - Tammy |
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NICE POEM - princess |
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I thought it was a very sweet poem. Great job. - Shannon |
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This a great poem. I loved reading it. - Heather |
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That was a very sweet poem that I am sending to my boyfriend! - Tiffany |
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I loved this poem so much. There is a guy i like at the moment and these are the things that i want to do. i loved it so much. I dont know what ur real name is but Shoebowl i really think u are a great poet. keep up the good work. - Laura |
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this is an excelent poem you should be proud. i only wish i could express my self like you. - chanel |
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hello ur poem sound very romantic peace n quiet it sound good keep up with the poems hope u rite more i really likes poems bye hopw all the best 4 u!!!!!! - Annie |
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that was a nice poem. - romeo |
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This poem is very sweet and innocent,like your first love. - tammy |
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i really like this poem it really touched me - kristy |
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this was the best i have ever heard it fits me and my sweet girlfriend just right - steven |
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i really love this poem.its very sweet and passionate.one of my favorites. - Jezebel |
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beautiful poem,words are right,it just a great poem,but how do i send this card to someone special - amy |
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Soft and sweet, Very nice. - Kent |
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This was a good poem. I might have just read it at the right time but it hit me in the right place. - Romell |
