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What Do They Know by Tima Chavis

I face the world with a smile, no one knows what is hid inside.
They see only happiness, they cant see the tears I've cried.
When I am alone I hurt, because here I do it well.
In front of all the watchful eyes my heaven turns to hell.
The judge and jury awaits me, everyone has a say.
In a life that hangs suspended for yet another day.
Who are they to judge if what I have done is right or wrong?
In the end I gave him up, but inside still sing his song.
I don't know how to find the strength I thought I had.
If only I could play tough it wouldn't be so bad.
They say that life goes on and someday I'll smile again.
But, how do they know my pain without being where I've been?
I've traveled so far from home, and can't find my way back.
Somewhere along the way I must have jumped the track.
I saw him just today and his smile is still the same.
He looked at me so sweetly, but never spoke my name.
I wonder if he remembers me, It hasn't been that long.
He may have forgotten me, but I still sing his song.


Rating: N/A

This poem is about someone that has loved another person, even though it was wrong in the eyes of society. She has done what she thought she must, even though it caused her great heartache in the end. And after all is done and said, she still loves this man.

Just trying to get past this moment, and understand all of it a little better.

	hey there! i love it love it love it! i hate how people are always telling me just to get over it and move on, but how can they say that if they dont know how it feels! well i love your poem! Awesome job! keep writting! - Love
	i really like the poem. why? b'coz i can relate myself to the who wrote it. its just that we went at the same situation. - maisie
	It's a very nice poem - juana
	I loved this poem! I understand how it feels to hide behind a mask and then wanting to cry as soon as i'm alone, - samantha
	that was a great poem i really enjoy reading it he has a great mind in i feel that she or he thinks alot about this world and things around it - latonya
	I AM IN DRAMA AND WE HAVE TO PICK A POEM TO RED TO THE WHOLE CLASS ADN I PICK THIS ONE. BECAUSE IT REMINDS ME OF A PERSON THAT I USE TO KNOW. SO I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS POEM SO MUCH. GOOD JOB. - Mata
	Can I ask you why society found it wrong to be dating him? I am wondering because I had an amazing relationship with someone who I was in love with and "society" in its own corrupt way tore us apart! Can I hear your story? - Epiphany
	nice, thanks! - diwata
	So Similar am I. It has been 8 months and I still have not forgotten. Love this one! Thank You! - Dani
	Hey I really like your poem it's sweet - artencia
	THis poem is sooo amazing i gave it ten stars cus it reminded me of everything xx - Hannah
	This poem really touched my heart. I just broke up with my boyfriend for similar reasons. and as much as people tell me i did the right thing, i dont think I'll ever know. - Mariel
	It really touched me I love how it ryhmes and then it still makes since it is very good - Jessica
	I really liked your poem. it explains exactly how i have been feeling for the past months. - Luz
	really lovley words it meant alot to me - bernadette
	Oh, my goodness! I really felt touched by your poem. I just went through the same thing with this guy and trust me what you have writen has nailed the point. Please write more! - Sherry
	yea your right no one can judge u. i love ur poem i tried of the world judgeing people cuz there lezbians or gay there humans - sheree
	I can fully understand the pain that involes a break-up like this. I am going through it right now. I love this man and he loves me but at this point in time we are not healthy for each other and we know it and so does everyone around us. - Joanne
	i thought ur poem was well written with ur emotions drug inside as well. it probably touched me so much because im in the same postion right now and i can relate to it - kimberly
	this is also a cool one to hear. this reminded me about my bestfriends boyfriend troubles. she likes it as well! - Alexis
	it's certainly great! it knocks down my sanity thinking about my (recent) lost relationship. two thunmbs up. you made me Think moreover. God Bless! - eiyah
	This is the most amazing touching poem i have ever read. Thank you so much. - Lindsey
	I am not a girl, but this is a really good poem. It it the best one I have heard in a really long time, because it relates to me and my ex. We were together for 18 months. No-one really wanted us together, but when does it matter what everybody else thinks. As long as two people care for each other that deeply, they should try and make it work. I broke it off with her and would do almost anything to have her back in my arms. I am 4 years older than her, but I loved her with every bit of my heart. - daniel
	I absolutely loved this poem. it touched me in so many ways. it is a sunject everybody has is or will feel in their life and it really lets you know that you are not the only feeling heartbroken. i cant say that so many poems or song lyrics or anything touches my heart very easily but this most definetly does. it brought tears to my eyes and i love the way it is written. and the person that wrote this poem is extremely talented and i hope they continue to write such beautiful poetry. - Stefani
	This poem really hit home for me,i just broke up with my boyfriend of 2 years because my family got to me so bad,but we promised to get back together when im 18,but this poem is so great it made me cry keep up the good work Honey! - Renea
	i love this poem. it reminds me of the girl i lost and how everyone thinks its no big deal. she was my everything. i want to thank you for finding the right words and writing them so now not only do you help me but you help other people who are at a loss of words thank you - jesse
	That's how I feel and I love this poem so much! Thank you for sharing it! ^_^ - Emotional
	This poem really touches me because i understand the emotion put into it . I give this poem a 10 meaning great! - LaSharia
	excellent,made me cry,love it. - stasia
	you cant help who you love. love is like a book you can't judge it by it cover. i love your poem. it reminds me of someone im very close with. no one wanted to see me and him together but we wouldn't let them stop us their all use to it now. - brooke
	i love this poem! you did a great job and i can relate to what your saying. keep up the good work! - brittany
	this poem was very appropriate for a very hurting heart - emma
	that last bit. about 'I saw him today' or something like that. god, I went through that on friday. It really got me. Really, what do people know about how you feel? Let it out! Admit to being hurt. thats what I'm learning to do. Show the world, and tell them to shut it! Cry if you want. Its how you feel, no one should ever be made to feel ashamed of how they feel. - ashley
	This poem is "OutStanding" If you were in a relationship or had to give up a child or a pet it hits you right in the heart. - shelia
	Very nice, it touched me. I'm going through that right now. hard to accept but hey, keep up the good work! You have talent I don't have. - kent
	i love this poem. i can relate o so well. - tess
	4 the brokenheart's club - stefany
	This poem is good, specially today. I'm 18 and was dating someone younger. He was 15. His dad (his guardian) was the one who got us together. We had to decide to call it quits because 1) distance and 2) Too many people looked down on it right now. When they dropped me off at my house and he told me bye I wanted to cry so hard, but I had the best time in my life with him. Age really don't matter to a point. - Nicole
	this poem is so SAD but at the same time it nice it vErY GoOd! - johana
	I love this peom because what you have written is what I feel and go through - Sam
	This poem was GREAT! It sounded alot like my situation. - Toni
	Wow i really like that poem, it made me remember of my ex boyfriend that i broke up with thinking i was strong, and i realized i was wrong. I miss him so much he would play his guitar for me and i miss that your poem helped me feel not alone. thank you stranger. - keegan
	I wish I can express such feelings in a well-written poetry. Lost love's spark remains poiling in broken hearts accross the years, hoping that someday some deserving one can lite it up again. A very heart-touching poem. - simsim
	i love it sooooooooooooooooo much, its the best one ive read! - teresa
	This touched me because I went through the same thing. This was written in a manner that was so easy to identify with. When love is gone it doesn't mean it stops. When you love another you wnat to talk about it even when you shouldn't, because when it doesn't work people do just as this poem describes. LOVED IT! - Brenda C.
	This poem is GREAT! I am the one going through the break-up of my daughter and her boyfriend. It hurts me the most than it does her. I do not know, I guess everything goes haywire when you are the Mom! Great poem! - Diana
	This poem has reli touched my heart as it depicts how I am feeling now. I am being pressured to break up with the guy whom I love so much bcoz I am afraid its against my conservative family background. Its reli sad. But I am leaving it to God,if he is reli my meant for me, I dun think anything will stand in between us. Love is the greatest strength ever. Even if I have to break up with him sumday, I'll love this guy till my last breath since he lives in my heart - kaaveryputhra
	This poem made my day! me and my bf were over as of today! and this really got to me! guess what that meanss hehe ITS AMAZINGGG everything that was sad in this poem was like how i felt. almost like it was there for me yaknow! XOXOXOXO - Brittany
	I love this poem I wish I had wrote it first. I also write poetry so keep up the good work. I can tell u write from your heart and its hard to find true poets. I write about experiances and what I have been through. All I have to say is keep it up. - Patrice
	wow. this poem left me crying. i loved it. it tells exactly how i feel! now i know that i'm not the only one that feels that way. i love it. an it give it major props! - Elissa
	mann i'm really feelin the words in this poem. keep doing what ur doing cause ur doing it well! - christina
	THAT POEM TOUCH ME IN SO MANY WAYS THAT A POEM HAVE NEVER HAD TOUCH ME BEFORE - CANDACE
	I absolutely loved this poem! I feel I can relate to it, it has meaning behind it and as I read this poem I seen so much more between the lines. - SAbrina
	I absolutely loved this poem, it really touched me. It was if the poet was speaking my words and feeling my feelings. - kate
	You have touched the feeling that is in someones heart that has just lost the person that made them find thier way. - Daisy
	hEy! thAt wAs OnE greAt pOem! i wiSh i cAn mAkE OnE likE dAt!,, Oh, hEy,, cAn i pOst thiS On my blOg? AS my fAvOritE pOem? hEy,, U'll mAkE A gOod pOet! - hannah
	THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL IT MADE ME CRY KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK - rea
	The words in this poem are so real to my life at present. Being Judged by people who haven't taken the time to know me and causing such pain between me and me partner until such time we have had to part. - Jeannie
	i usually hate poems becuase they r 2 hard to understand but i had an english project and i read a poem and i chosed urs and later i couldn't stop reading over and over becuase a person like me who never read poems before just found out that the poems can really change my ability to think so i just wanna say thanks for teaching me a great lesson - peter
	hey this poem is tha best one ive read this just said all mah emotions this peom is tha best muh luh libby - Libby
	Excellent. It hits all the righ emotions. You inspire me! - evita
	i really loved your poem. Since I can relate to it, it thouched my heart. - rosa
	I give this poem 10 stars This is how i feel right now. Thanks i needed to cry i read it alot and touched my heart deeply - Dawn
	i have been so hurt in love and that describes it. he left for someone else. that is so well-written. its extravagant - lenna
	I really connected with this poem because I've been down this road many times before and felt this way. - ashley
	wow. it's like you wrote that straight from my heart. i gave him up for reasons he'll never understand and to this day i regret it with everything i am. Just wow i love this poem - Trixie
	Life is very difficult, but you should be positive. - Ofelya
	this is a wonderful poem. i know at least four of my friends that this poem applies to. including me. thank you for this little gift. i'll share your work with them. they'll like it as much as me. - Lac ey
	SOMETIMES PLAIN ENGLISH DOES THE TRICK - Stephanie
	I liked it! I feel the same way. - julio
	I have know a few, and have been there too! - Ruby
	when i read this i wanted to cry because i feel exactly the same way. It's like you wrote my feeling down. - Bree
	This poem was so great! I really liked it! It made me cry! I can relate to it so much, all my friends and whoever else said the same kinds of things to me! But it still hurts me as bad as it did when he did that to me. I just want him to want me so bad! - Brittany
	this poem touched home I couldn't have done it better myself. Like it was written for me! - ursula
	I really love this poem. This poem hit me straight in the heart, because im going through that now, no one likes my boyfriend and people judge me every single day so yeah. I really love this poem! - Michelle
	I love this poem. I feel like I'm going through the same feelings right now. - Amanda
	its beautifull. n painfull like a reality . - nissa
	Your poem was great! It really touch me and gave me a sense of comfort. I apprieciate you writing this. - monika
	All I have to said is that this poems is VERY VERY, VERY , VERY GOOOOOOOOOOD. - jose
	Your poem was really good. I am a dedicated writer, and it really touched me. You write just as I do. Your very right the world judges alot of people, without knowing them. - Cassie
	This is a great poem. I think you were speaking from my heart. Nine years ago I fell in love with someone my parents didn't like. They kept us apart. After all these years, a husband, and two wonderful kids, I'm still in love with him. I think of him and what could have been every day. I've read this poem over and over, and I cry every time. Keep up the good work. - Janice
	i love this poem it reminds me of my situation now and i can really relate and all i can say to Tima is that u didn't write for me but i still wanna say is thanx for writing this for me i think u may have just save my life - myesha
	I voted for this peom because it touched me more than you could ever know. I have gone through the same situation, and for me to see that poem. Wow. I have never read such a peom that grabs at you. This amazing. You are a true artist. When I say that I mean you use life as your paintbrush and then take that to create a masterpiece! Keep writing always! - Amber
	amazing. truly amazing how you can look into my soul and put it on paper. thank you for saying what i am to afriad to say. - Aigner
	i have written a poem just like that saying how felt inside. that was an amazing poem and i just want you to know i am in the same situation and and i know how you feel! - Alicia
	This peom actually touched me because is true what she said who are the to judge if they dont feel the pain that she does. I let someone go becuase everyone was telling me that he wasn't worth my time and till this day i think about him every night so I can relate some what to what she wrote. - Lisandra
	sob. that was a really, REALLY great poem. tears were falling from my eyes when i first read it coz i can totally relate to what the poem is implying. i "found" the poem the day my heart was "broken". and in a way the poem helped me. it said the things i wanted to say. i jst want to say thanks. cause in a way it has helped me cope with the situation. - mimi
	it was wounderful! i loved it! i felt like that. i still do. i know how u feel, i thought i was the only one. but i guess im wrong. u have a real tallent! share it! - krystal
	This is awesome. I mean when you read it you can feel the wasy she felt. That is exactly what poetry should be. - brittney
	I think this poem is great, it says what I feel but can not say. So thank you for speaking my thoughts. - Kendra
	i loved this poem so much. it just relates to my love. and how i've lost him and yet yearn for him. i'm really glad i found this poem, it helps me alot. [[my broken heart]] - gou
	This is a cute poem, and it's very touching! - lana
	I could relate to this poem in so many ways i can't say how many but i want u to know that u are really creative! - Tierra
	i really like this poem because it talks about how love can be tricky at the end of a relationship and people think that if two days pass they think your over them but they don't really know how you feel - jennifer
	i luv ur peom its all so tru it actually left me cryin. I feel the same way right know - lizbeth
	I was feeling the same way tonite,I write poems that deal with feelings and real life. I loved it! - Roxie
	i think i can really relate to your poem because i had this feeling before i felt like this about some one. well yeah keep up the good thoughts your poems are touching. - Shay
	this peom made me think of allot of things it broght memories and it made me cry one of the things it made me think was why didn't i ever write somthing like that cause i love to write poems it is one thing that makes me get away cause i don't do it for thr fam and i don't do it for the money but it was a great peom - farrah
	I would vote this as the best damn poem I have ever heard. It totally relates (kinda) to my sinking soul. - Jen
	This poem was really good, I was able to relate to this poem and I want to let you know that your not the only one that has gone throgh alot in life. - Maria
	OMG, this poem is AMAZING! I am only 14 but when i was 13 i read this poem and it really helped me, i felt like i was the only one that was going through something like this, society can be a pain in the butt, but we have to deal with it, even if we love the person unconditionaly, it doesnt matter what color,shape or size, we dont choose who we love, ive had to learn just to trust in god to get me though this, even when you think its impossible to move on, and you may never stop loving that person, but some things we have no control over. - Megan
	This was a beautiful poem that really touched me to my heart. It represents how my life is right at this moment. - Jenny
	i liked this poem because everything it has to say i'm going throught with my boyfriend hes in come now for nine months andseven day and after months of takind care of him i finlly left my family always told me i was to young - kera
	this poem is great. it's almost like every word is exactly how i feel right now and it left me crying. no one knows pain like this unless you've gone through it and i'm glad you wrote this poem so now i don't feel so alone. - tierney
	This poem touched me a lot. I have gone through the same things in my life that are in this poems and it helps to know someone else has too. Yet i am only 13 I know how it feels to want someone so bad and not be able to have them. I know what it feels like when all your friends are made at you for something that they know nothing about. This poem helps me understand that. This poem is awesome and has helped me get through bad times. - Melissa
	omg. that poem was so good that touched me and i feel you bout what your talkin bout! that was a hot poem keep up the good work i dedicate that to my ex everything about it reminds me of him. - nikki
	this is a really good poem. It really touched me. - Toya
	This poem reminds me of me and how i feel about a man that tore me to pieces and i gave up my whole social life for him. After i lost him, I lost alot more. - Kayleigh
	wowwwwww. awesoem. just plain awesomeeeeeeeeeee. nice work girl niceeeee work. - moe
	i think this poem was very good it made me realize wat i've gone thro and i kno how she feels and its good to write and to get out wat u feel in such a way that expresses your self truthfully - jess
	This is really nice. tradition has really changed a lot of things in my country and has killed a lot of real love. welldone - faith
	I love this poem it touched me in so many ways that I almost cried all I can say is keepin comin! - Tierra
	i think this poem is really good - christine
	I can relate to this poem, that is something that I am feeling now. Well said! - Tammi
	This is a fantastic poem, i know how that feels - kay
	This poem is hella breathe taking. This is what i'm going threw and now i lost everyone. this is the best poem on this site besides greatly missed. - Tara
	I truely loved this poem. I have felt like this for such a long time. Good job. - Michelle
	this is overall a great poem. i can relate to it very well. the discriptions are insightful. good job - JAVIE
	That was a really great poem. It almost made me cry cuz it sounded so much like how i feel. Thanks for kinda helpin me relize how i feel. :] - summer
	This poem is exactly what I am going thru. I too have a forbidden love that is splitting at the seams because everyone else is tearing us apart. - Monica
	That was a great poem. I wish I could express my feelings like that, in writing. Touchy. - sparkle
	this poem was so good i even cried a little, i couldnt find words to describe this. the only words i could think of where, oh my god. - niki
	I thought the poem was great, I really understood it. I guess because I've been there. good job - Kristy
	This is a real good poem i touch my heart. - nicey
	This poem relates to me so much right now. It speaks to me and i can feel their pain. Love is one of the greatest gifts however when spoiled can be life's greatest pain. This poem epresses that very well. Thank you writer for writing something that in my own time of heartbreak i can relate to. - leah
	I love this, so very true! Touching. - Danielle
	I think the poem is straight. I like it and i hope you continue doing what you doing I have much love for ya! - Tierra
	I really like the way you wrote this poem. It really touches my heart and when i read this poem, i felt exactly what u wrote. I'm having da same situation as well. * still singing his song even tho he had forgotten * i love this phrase. Keep up good work! - XaraSven
	OMG I LOVED UR POEM! I know, I know. everyone says that. but I truly can relate to it. you write very beautifully. so dont quit! - Jess
	wow. that was beautiful. - Steph
	This poem bought tears to my eyes because it hit me so close to home it has been 3 months since my fiance and I broke it off and this poem made me remember the good times we shared and last night I did see him and he didn't speak my name what an eery thought. really enjoyed it! - Shelia
	no words can express how this poem effected me, it's my life in a poem, thank you. - Cassie
	I cried like hell going over this poem. It relates so well with my life and my feelings. Justwhen I thot i was losing grip on my life, I met this person thru chat and we became very close. In fact we fell in love with each other, in spite of the fact that he is only half my age. Nothing seemed to matter to him or me ,for we were both so happy with each other. This world will only blame me,but like the poet says who r they to judge me?Is loving a person such a great sin?Now I see he is trying to move away from me. (maybe he has realised he is making a mistake). He has a full life ahead of him and I should not try to tie him down. I love him too much for that. So,let him be free and like in the poem"I will still sing his song. " This is a great piece of work. Keep it up! - Shobha
	All I want to say is I loved this poem. I think I can identify to it. - WilliaDean
	i really loved this poem it reminded me of someone - dalilah
	WOW . this poem says so much about what has went on in my life . married involved with a single man and I let him go cuz I listened to what ppl said . I cry silent tears and put on a happy face ready to hit the road running . KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK - T
	This poem is facinateing, and I vote through and through for it, I too feel the pain - kim
	I liked it very much - Mary
	I THINK THIS WAS A VERY UNIQUE POEM. IT REALLY TOUCHES ME BECAUSE I'M GOING THROUGH THE SAME THING. GREAT WRITTER! - Kimberly
	This was a great poem. It really touched me. - rich
	I really like your poem,cause it is true what u say - Yaned
	All I can say is that I haven't forgotten her either. The songs we shared and the love we had will never be replaced without her. Beautiful yet sad thoughts went through my head when I read this poem. Always thinking of her. - Brian
	I just wanted to let you know that your poem was TITE! I can strongly relate to this poem, I wasn't only once upon in this position but I was scared. . . - Jay
	AMAZING POEM. awesome choice of words. - Shashi
	i can really relate to this poem my respect to the author . its always nicer to feel the message behind the words . keep flowin at it. your doin great - tima
	I really like this poem - Angela
	this rocks it would be even better put to music - lacey
	I JUST WANTED TO DROP IN A FEW LINES TO SAY WHAT AN AWSOME POEM YOU HAVE WROTE. I CAN RELATE TO IT SO SO MUCH. I COPIED THIS POEM DOWN AND HAVE IT ON MY WALL NEXT TO OUR PICTURE. THANKS FOR SUBBMITTING SOMETHING THAT EXPLAINS WHERE IM COMMING FROM TOO! - Stephanie
	I smile alot and many said that it's the best feature in me. But they don't know my deep sorrows within me. Maybe the poet who wrote this poem knows. Maybe she went through the same ordeal as i did - Shaba
	This poem was so. sad. It reminded me so much about wats going on with meeh and mah babie. It's sad to noe that your babie you love tells someone else they love her. that's wat happened to meeh i put on a smile jus to hide the pain. but my heart aches everytime i think about it. - EiKo
	WELL i JUST TH0T i SH0ULD DR0P A LiNE N TELL Y0U H0W MUCH i WAS FEELiN Y0UR P0EM. KUZ i KN0W i'VE EXPERiENCED THAT B4. S0 YEH. i GiVE Y0U MAD PR0Pz F0R iT! KEEP WRiTiN Y0 P0EMz KUZ DiZ WUN WAS TiTE! - MiSS
	This is one of the greatest poems i have read in a while. this is like me its weird. And you knew how to put it into the right words. GOOD JOB! - Bre
	I REALLLLLLY LUVED UR POEM I LIKED IT SO MUCH THE WAY U DONT SHOW UR TEARS CUZ OF PRIDE WELL TO TELL THE TRUTH AM FACING THE SAME THING RIGHT NOW WITH MY 2 YEAR ex AND I REALLY CRIED WHEN I READ IT. GOOD LUCK AND KEEP ON - lama
	Beautiful and so true to what I'm going through, although I haven't let him go yet, the "world" is hoping I will - S
	I loved your poem! - Mari
	I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the last line of the poem. I recently ended a relationship and I still sing her song, and wonder if she sings mine. She looks the same but has moved on. Thanks for the insite. - K
	This poem has made me feel like that i am not the only one who feels like that. I really like how the poem puts that society cant accept her feelings. I just got out of a relationship like this one. - Kay
	AWEEEEEEEESOME. poem. it Hits the heart. ! N u know Y ? . Only 'cause it's pure emotions in the form of words. (: The heart is a crazy organ. n no matter how much u try n use ur head. there somethin inside that hurts. always ! gOOd Poem (: take care. - Bunny
	Now that was a good one . I know a good poem when I read one because I write them myself and this one here was the bomb! - Shoni
	I experienced this very situation back in December and nobody understands your hurt and love for that special someone. Thanks for reading my heart! - Tokie
	the feelings were so real and the fighting (or that was) for her love was evident. i have also been in such a relationship. and yes its true, no one really knows except YOU. - Monet
	the best poem i've read all year - melis
	A very good reflection of unspoken words, really appreciable! - Rafia
	This poem has touch me in some many ways, I just can't explain it! My ex-girlfriend broke up about a year now but, I find out that: I know what love is and I know what love is not! When I had a year ago, That Was LOVE! Thank YOU! - Kevon
	I know exactly how this person feels, I was in love with a guy 6 yrs older than me - Jessica
	this poem is very very good when i read it,it brought tears to my eyes because I thought about my ex it fit so well with how i feel! - jen
	this poem expressed only a portion of what i feel. but the way you were able to say it was pin point. i cant be with my one true love because of society. his parents think that i am too young and my friends and family think he isnt good enough. but what are we to do?. it is impossible to go behind there backs. but knowing that someone else feels the same pain and helplesness as i is close to comforting. - ashlee
	Your poem was really nice and sad but also sweet. - deann
	I thought this poem was very very good. IT reminded me how I felt when my Ex-boyfriend dumped me. This poem made me feel the way I use to feel. That was a hard job to do too. I think that this poem was wonderful. - Amanda
	I love your poem when I read that it put in mind of a boy I once new GREAT POEM! - Neva
	YoU'rE pOeM rEaLlY tOuChEd Me. I hAvE tO lEt SoMeBoDy Go. He JuSt DoEsN't UnDeRsTaNd ThAt I cAn'T lIvE wItHoUt HiM. tHaNk YoU fOr ThE cLeAr ViSiOn. - Jaime
	ur poem is beautiful. i love it, thx - Allison
	i really loved this peom , it made me think about a guy i was had over heals with and i broke it off and i didn't relize how much he meant and then it was to late to do anything he found someone else - chris
	I LOVED THE POEM SO MUCH ITS JUST SOUNDS LIKE MY LIFE WELL WHAT I'M SAYING IS I LOVED IT - gina
	i know the feeling because i've been there.. - Alona
	This poem touched me deeply. I have let go of someone I love very much and I know the pain. - Cheryl
	it was a sweet poem.. - darcy
	I loved your poem! I know were your coming from with this poem, thats why i like it so much! - Erin
	I have never had someone express the entire thoughts that I was feeling..being accepted in a different kind of society is hard..and then when it ends up in heartache it's even more difficult.. I feel for you..and thanks for this lovely poem! - Nicole
	wow, that poem just gave me the chills. I can feel what you are writing by the way you wrote the words. Amazing. - Ashley
	This poem really express my deepest feeling I have for someone this is a nice piece of work keep writing - ceya_boo
	Very touching poem. Wonderful to know other people are gonna love a certain someone forever. - Danielle
	Tima this was the essence of beauty. Never put that pen down, you have much in store for yourself and your wonderful talent :) - Kathleen
	This is a great poem, tearjerker, nice job! - brad
	I am torn between to men,and this poem gave me something to think about. Thanks for opening my eyes. - Kaylee
	I know how this hurts... my woman is under the same pressure. We have broken up, gotten back, broken up, gotten back, and are almost breaking up again because of them... I know how this hurts :( - Leo
	I didn't think it was possible to describe how I felt in such words. You wrote exactly what I was feeling inside. Why is society so judgemental? Why can't you love who you love without being judged? Everyday I have to wear my smile with tears running inside and I am glad to see you too staying strong. - Christina
	Your poem hit me in so many ways. It is so frustrating listening to people tell you, you'll get over it soon enough, not knowing what you have been through and how you feel. No one will know until there in your shoes, and your poem really expresses that. - Stacy
	I loved this poem it reminds me of me and my ex but it was only my mom who didn't approve and till this day he is still in my heart Very well written - Kim
	This poem I can really relate to because my first love my not know but I still have feelings for him and he sees me every now and then but don't speak. I really love this poem keep up the good work. BY the way I had to print this poem! - Lekresha
	I LOVE THIS POEM!! it's so touching on how the person feels inside. I've been through EXACTLY what this poems says. - Thuy
	I truely know how you feel. I am going through it now. IT IS HELL. But i think if i love her so much i set her free then if she comes back to me she will not leave me again. But if she doesnt then it was not meant to be. It helps me to think that way. Just makes it easier to go day by day thinking that way. Good job. - Eddie
	i was looking for a poem . and urs had everything i was looking for so i just wanted to say i love ur work and i know just how u feel - Kris
	I just love this poem. It is so eery how the poem portrays so much of what I feel and so similar to my situation. Thank you fow writing the poem - Lyn
	Thank you so much tima. I had to give my girlfriend up recently. Love lost but not destroying A slow dull ache has enveloped me and I know what it is to see her and not be in her arms as I want to be. Thank you so much for a poem I can relate to. - Joe
	OMG!i LOVE that poem!lol - Kate
	I thought that this poem was self explanatory. I thought it was pure bueaty - Daniel
	Tima You will smile again. I can relate to your poem because I gave someone up that I loved a lot because I cared to much about what other people would think and right now tears still fall from my eyes when I think of what could have been. This may be something that haunts you for the rest of your life because his face stll haunts me. Remember it's ok to cry because tears cleanse the soul - Uncertainty
	hey this poem is soooo true..amazin how well it put together. if i were crazy i would say u read my mind! - sam
	This poem really hit home. It's great to read something so true. Thanks - tricia
	this poem is my life exactly! people need to mind their own business and let me love! - sunshine
	I have finally found a poems that says in words exactly how I feel. - Teresa
	Ohhh boy.here is a poem that touched my soul. I can sympathise with this person so well; I am going through this as well - Scarlett
	enjoyed it.=0) - liz
	I loved your poem so much! - aradhana
	i understand the feeling..it really is hard to love someone..especially, when people judge you for loving that particular person... - Tin
	This was an absolutly amazing poem! We can all feel some of this pain a truly shared experience i loved it! - Meaghan
	I love the poetry! It really reflects what I feel right now. - berna
	Some of the poems on this web page were alright.....and some were ok; but this one was SOOO good. omigosh, i loved it!!! I love poems that rhyme, and that have a deep meaning and message to them. It is SO good!!! - Chelsey
	Wow, that hit me like a thousand needles. I'm in a really hurting situation right now, and all i think of is the life that i lived to fast, and the hurtingness that is catching up to me.I really loved this poem for it meant so much. - stacie
	everyday isearch for a new poem to fullfill my lyrical desire and everyday is usually a dissapointment; except for today. i love your poem alot. thanks for making my day. -archangel - paul
	great poem i know how you feel - jamie
	I just loved this poem. It mad me cry, thinking of a lost love. - Mandy
	I really liked your poem. I'v been reading poetry on the internet all morning long and this poem is the best one yet! Do you have any more poems to share with me? - Nicole
	i really enjoyed this poem - Rosie
	i read your poem n its just GREAT and i think a person shouldnt care at all for what others think of him or his doings let him do whatever makes him feel better or what he thinks is right - Marwa
	Brilliant poem! Best ive read! Words like that are exactly what i am feeling apart from the moving away from home bit! brilliant! - Barbra
	i really enjoyed this poem i barely ever read poems b/c they hardly are ever good but i believed that your poem meant alot! it had really touched my heart! - sarah
	I think that this poem is beautifully written and I commend the author for being able to write her feelings down because I think the hardest emotion to go through is hearbreak. - Alyssa
	this poem made me cry. it brouht back the memory i try everyday to forget but i can never do and it just is such a great poem. - Brittany
	I really enjoyed your writing, I feel I understand your feelings and experiencd your heartache - Vanessa
	I loved it its so much like me - daina