Gift Of The Seagull by Munda
A lonely seagull flies the winds
Majestic... soaring...gliding wings
A single screech sounds from the sky
Come fly with me... come here and fly
My spirit floats to be a part
I feel the beating of its heart
My soul, one with this bird of sea
Now knows the meaning to fly free
I feel the winds caress my soul
And soar the streams without a goal
My being trembles of delight
A treasure I received tonight
The seagull's flight of soaring high
The gift of what it means to fly
Majestic... soaring...gliding wings
A single screech sounds from the sky
Come fly with me... come here and fly
My spirit floats to be a part
I feel the beating of its heart
My soul, one with this bird of sea
Now knows the meaning to fly free
I feel the winds caress my soul
And soar the streams without a goal
My being trembles of delight
A treasure I received tonight
The seagull's flight of soaring high
The gift of what it means to fly
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I live in the city and there always seems to be "noise." At times when my spirit needs a break and my eye catches a lonely seagull, my inner being reaches out to find silence and peace. What a gift to receive.
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i'd vote your peom a 9. 5 outa 9. 5. i liked your poem in the way that you put your whole poem as a metaphor about how you want peace and quiet and just yo be calm like a seagull is just flying and not caring. your brillant. - kayla |
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This poe really means alot. My father went into acute renal failure and died twice, he is doing better but still in I. C. U. right now, and this poem really makes me feel better. I am an only child and my Father is not married and I have three children and a husband and I have been about on my death bed to. It's good to read something loke this during your hard times, Anyway Great Poem! - Ashley |
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This poem touches me because the book Jonathon Livingston Seagull touched my heart at avery profound time in my life. - T.J. |
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I just like it so much - Richard |
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This was an amazing poem, one that personally touched me. - Christina |
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i liked you poem. I liked the style in the past i wrote something with the same thuoght but you put it better than me. - Greydon |
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I loved it. It brought up so many inspirational thoughts. Keep up the work. - Heather |
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this is one of those rare poems that speak to ones soul. I like it for its simple beauty, sincerity and the sense of freedom and space that it evokes in me. - saby |
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I really like this poem because it just. reaches out to me. Even though a seagull is usually just a dull bird, that you see almost everywhere, something that always blends in, Munda has made it into a really amazing thing. - Jemmy |
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What I liked about your work is the realness of it. Keep up the good work I look forward to reading more of your poems. - Angela |
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I really liked it because of the rhythm of the words were just like the rhythm of the sea banging on rocks when the tide comes in. It was a very emotional poem which a person can read over and over again and not be sick of. - Eseta |
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This was a really inspirationalpoem and it touched me - Kimberley |
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this poem is very touchig since my boyfriend died ad me, nicole blackwood has no life but i have no frineds either. i like someone named marco but that crazy girl katie has got him - nicole |
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This poem really moved ,me touching me in my soul deeply painting a very vivid picture in my mind like a feeling of flying. I loved it - Robert |
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i love it really! - jessa mae |
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the poem is absolutley wonderful!it brought tears to my eyes, right now im going through a very tough time in my life and your poem made me realize that you can find peace in the simple joys of life. THANKS. - kayla |
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Very sound poem with great imagery - it just grabs at the beauty of life. - Karim |
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WOW! It takes me back to the times I spent camping in high school. Thanks, I needed that. - brent |
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This poem really did make my day. It's nice to read something that makes you smile. - Heather |
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I thought this was a wonderful poem evoking both the smell and freedom of the sea and a feeling of the freedom of the spirit. - isabel |
