A Fairytale by Millette Addison
Dreamland awaits you,
Close your eyes,
Imagine you and I,
Close as breath,
Skin upon skin,
Lips touching,
For you taste of Raspberries,
sweetly irresistible,
The fragrance of you,
Takes my breath away,
I am burning inside,
A torch of fire,
Burning fuel of passion,
For you are my desire,
My heart beats with every breath,
You are my destiny,
Your eyes evade me,
deep, dark, mysterious,
I am your slave,
Your love has captured me,
Grab my body,
Pull me close,
Show me your love,
In ways I could only dream.
Wake me I must be dreaming,
This is a fairytale.
Close your eyes,
Imagine you and I,
Close as breath,
Skin upon skin,
Lips touching,
For you taste of Raspberries,
sweetly irresistible,
The fragrance of you,
Takes my breath away,
I am burning inside,
A torch of fire,
Burning fuel of passion,
For you are my desire,
My heart beats with every breath,
You are my destiny,
Your eyes evade me,
deep, dark, mysterious,
I am your slave,
Your love has captured me,
Grab my body,
Pull me close,
Show me your love,
In ways I could only dream.
Wake me I must be dreaming,
This is a fairytale.
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I wrote this while being away from my love. I just closed my eyes and imagined us together across the miles. It seemed so real!
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A beautiful well wrote poem that captured my heart and I know it will surely capture the hearts of many others who read it. Well Done. - Amber |
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This is a good poem i really liked it it was so interesting. - Angel |
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its like your true story! - jennylyn_18 |
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I really,really love this poem. It touched my heart once I read it because it is how I feel about my husband when he is away at sea. - Roletta |
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i am away from my love currently and this poem just touched me cause it ia how i feel in my heart too thanx for sharing it with m eand the world - savannah |
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i really like this poem it was good - joy |
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i really liked your poem it came from the heart and i could feel and understand what u was saying and feeling. from brittany - brittany |
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Very Nice - Kim |
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I really liked your poem, it made me feel really sexual. - holly |
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I just want too thank you for making this poem up because after I read it I sent it too my boyfriend that I love too death! As soon as he read it. he said that he loved me so much and he was just so happy that we were together. I don't know what I would do if you didn't have these poems! I love Jakob! - Morgan |
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i do not have word s it is a bomb - isabela |
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i loved it's meaning. It's depth of passion. It's depth of love's mystery and it also inspired me. So i also wanna say thanks. it's gr8. - Hiqmat |
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My boyfriend is presently serving in Iraq and we are missing each other terrribly. Your words sum up my emotions and feelings on so many nights, thank you for sharing them with us. - Kitten |
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I had a crush on this guy for 5 years and when i sent him this poem he asked me out. This poem has made my life so much better! THANKS! - Ashley |
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IT takes my breth away - helen |
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I just finished sending ur poem to my boyfriend of 1yr,3months which tells u something. that ur poem was deeply touching. love it! - Star |
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just great thanks - Glynn |
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Oh MY! This hit me in places i never thought a poem could. How simply BEAUTIFUL! Thank you for sharing it. - Michelle |
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I love this pome because this is would I feel about my boyfriend. We been together for 1 year and 4 months and I am in love with him. - stephanie |
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i really like this poem!i would give to my boyfriend. - vannessa |
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I am from Germany. My boyfriend is in Irak. Having a hart time without him. love ur poem. - asia |
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This poem is the sweetest poem I've ever read, so sweet I'm gonna print it. - Sabrina |
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It's the bomb baby. Keep it up. - Koren |
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I really like this poem - Star |
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When I first read this poem it was the morning after my first encounter with the love of my life for the past 8 mos. And this hit every thought every core that was running through me. I love it. - Sam |
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Beautiful - Thank you - Mike |
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this poem is the cutest one for a couple! - Marie |
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I can say that you have heard this before, but this was a realy beautiful and touching poem. My dearest darling is overseas in the military. (keeping America safe and beautiful). And I know that it would be selfish to keep wishing he was here, but I will anyway. But since I can't have him home, I can just admire beautiful poetry that I can find. thank you. - Regina |
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I Thought the Poem was great and meant alot to me and i will write it in my boyfriends xmas card this year - Elaine |
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This poem reflects exactly how I feel about someone living and working far from me at the moment. - Frances |
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very passionate, lusty, and powerful poem that touches the hearts and dreams of so many. thank you! - Deborah |
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This was a very moving poem. I think you have a lot of talent. I hope you will go somewhere in your writting someday. - Melanie |
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This pome is excelent - stephanie |
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unbelivably amazing! - ROMI |
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your thoughts flowed thru my heart and touched feeling i thought were long forgotten - Jim |
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Moving! - Cam |
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Realy the Great poem, it is . - Asif |
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I think this poem is great. Your use of words was outstanding! - Tiffany |
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My lover and I have used these very words with one another when separated by distance.how beautiful to see them all put together in such a touching poem! - Kelli |
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I really loved it! - Ashley |
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i'm young(16) i found ur poem really moving, and i sent it to my boyfriend and i am hoping to one day become a famous poet someday thanks for the inspiration - Joe |
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this is a very nice poem - mary |
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Great poem. Captures the feelings of this person very well. - Lisa |
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I love this poem. one night my fiance sent it to me and i thought of him and the distance between us and cried. it touched my heart and made me feel so close to him even though he is away..:) - Tara |
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Love this poem alot! - Desiree |
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This poem describes exactly how I feel about my girl right now.I love it.It made me close my eyes and dream of her. - Clint |
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It a great poem with alot of passion and emotion - jade |
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it is very very good poem. - jamie |
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I was looking for a poem for my lover and this was perfect. Very sweet and hot. Thanks! Sandi - Sandi |
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I love this Poem,I read this poem and I thought of my Boyfiend.This i could not of found a more perfect poem.. Thank-u - holly |
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Great - Rod |
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This was a beautiful poem that expressed what I was feeling Thank you for sharing your gift. - APRIL |
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that poem i am really feeling it it reminds me of me and my boo - Valerie |
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Breath taking. - K. |
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THAT IS A VERY PASSIONATE POEM AND I HAVE READ MANY ON THE INTERNET. THANKS, I AM GOING TO USE IT. - ROEL |
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beautiful - stac |
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The poet who wrote this has been or is in love or has an idea of what it should be like they have a good grasp on life and love and must keep writing very good. - Tina |
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it sounded so romantic i just wanted to drop what i was doing and do all kinds of things to my lover. - Ronda |
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I loved your poem. I feel the same way when I'm away from my boyfriend. - Krystle |
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You break my heart if it's only a fairy tale. - David |
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it isa very good poem, it makes me mis my love! - este |
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Perfect! - Tom |
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I really enjoyed this poem the author who wrote this really show alot of passion. - Leann |
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i thought it was very true and intreging - ressa |
