Passion's Flames by Jeffrey Carter
A touch, soft and tender.
A whisper, full of desire
A gasp of sweet surrender
As passion fuels the fire
No words spoken between them
No promises to be kept
No lies being told tonight
No looking back - no regrets
Longing to hold each other
Such precious little time
Both vowed to another
Being lonely their only crime
Tomorrow bringing sorrow
A brief moment of shame
With the memory of this one night
A release from passion's flames
A whisper, full of desire
A gasp of sweet surrender
As passion fuels the fire
No words spoken between them
No promises to be kept
No lies being told tonight
No looking back - no regrets
Longing to hold each other
Such precious little time
Both vowed to another
Being lonely their only crime
Tomorrow bringing sorrow
A brief moment of shame
With the memory of this one night
A release from passion's flames
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Rating: A |
This poem is about a night of passion between two people who just happen to be married, but not to each other. They are both in relationships that leaves them feeling that something is missing. More specifically, it describes the heat of the moment and then the guilt left behind.
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that is beautiful and captures what so many people experiance. when reading it i felt like it was talking about my personal situation. please keep up the wonderfull writing . - jennifer |
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i liked it! makes me wish i were closer to my girlfriend and not so far away - eddie |
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i loved it, it showed how i feel about my girlfriend. - luke |
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How true that poem is. You speak directly from the heart. - Jeanie |
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Great Poem. read it to a friend over the phone and believe she melted. nice way to end an evening with a long distance relationship! - Jeff |
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this poem made me feel good in side i had to get off of work early today so keep up the good work god bless - marco |
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Very sad and romantic and almost like a Harlequin Romance book cover. - Pam |
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one night stand? This poem is nice. Things like this really happens and the emotions in the poem is extremely realistic. I like this! - Lovely |
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this is good - Tynisa |
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keep on the good work! - halley |
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It's very touching, because that my husband and I. Passion is key in a very good relationship. - Shalonda |
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it was straight to the point. I loved it thats what a great poet does get straight to the point. - michelle |
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the poem is very beautiful and love. i like it big time. that i sent it to all my friends - denis |
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This was a great poem. Probably something felt by the writer. for sure something I have felt before. Good job! - Amelindra |
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This poem hit me rigth in my heart and it decribes me and my girlfriend and it made me cry - Bob |
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I found this poem so touching and honest. It didnt just catch the feelings of passions but it caught the feelings that followed. - Shaya |
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This poem is really realyy good and shares a good feeling of the way love works and breeaks and that's really important so i thank you for writing it , it shared a feeling with me! - Shardy |
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I love your poem you wrote, it is very touching someone heart, I'm one of them. Thank you for sharing this to us. - Angel |
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i think that this poem is really great and that it express a lot of love - jennifer |
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the poem travel you to the heat of the moment. very good - sabel |
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from a one to ten i give you a 45! I dig your serious passion! - baby |
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It was great! - kristi |
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I JUST WANTED TO SAY THAT POEM WAS REAL COO I LOVE HOW IT RELATED TO A SITUATION THAT IM IN WRITE KNOW BUT FOR THE MOST PART I LOVED IT - ISAIAH |
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i loved this poem. it's so true and to the point. great job - maria |
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I couldn't have said it better. This poem touches the heart of many people I am sure. Sometimes loneliness does something to a person. A night of passion is what alot of us need and could use. - joann |
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I can totally relate to this. twas beautiful. - Dee |
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THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM, BEEN THERE. I CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM ALOT AND I MUST SAY NO REGRETS. - AILEEN |
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it's great! - Ashley |
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THIS IS A VERY NIC AND SWEET POEM. IF I RECEIVED THIS POEM I PROBABLY WOULD AHVE CRIED MY EYES OUT. I ENCOURAGE YOU TO KEP WRITING AND KEEP YOUR THOUGHTS FLOWING BECAUSE YOU WILL MAKE ANOTHER PERSONS BAD COME BECOME A GOOD DAY AS YOU MADE MINE. THANK YOU AND MAY GOD BLESS YOU ON YOUR JOURNEY - KAMEESH |
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Your poem is excellent. Yes, I do know how it feels. Please continue writing for those who can't speak for themselves in the situation like that can read your poem to feel that they are understood. Thanks - Andie |
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i love your poem it was so true its like everythings not how it seems so true keep right on writing your great. - Tasha |
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I like this one too. - John |
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I loved this poem. It was beautiful and makes you really feel what the writer is feeling. This poem is perfection. - Jessica |
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That was easy flowing words of passion. I can relate. Great poem! - Cassandra |
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i really like this poem it has a lot of feeling to it - erica |
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I really love how you have captured the feelings of these 2 people in the suttle way that you have. - Gary |
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this is great and there is more behind the story than what most people can realize. - melissa |
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You poem was completely awesome. Keep writing - Katie |
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I like it. - eric |
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I loved this poem even though i never had a boyfriend and since i was married at such a young age. This poem really inspirred me and now that i think bout it, it's kinda a poem bout be and my hubbie. I'm 19, got married 1 year ago. - Arika |
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very nice - Clire |
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that poem was off the chain i loved it - Ronda |
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I love it - Gloria |
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I could relate to this poem, I Know the passion and guilt. It really hit home. I thought it was well written, I out of a possible 5 star rating I give it a 4. 5 - Tammy |
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beautiful poem. simply beautiful - sweet |
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The poem brungs memories of a situation that happened to me. very poignant! - David |
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good. - Brandy |
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this is great! it's exactly what i want and feel - grace |
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I loved it - clari |
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that was great poem very nice - keia |
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i really like your poem i can feel it. ( - kelly |
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I LOVED THE POEM THE MOMENT I READ IT; AND THE MORE I READ IT THE MORE IT BECAME A PART OF ME. IT IS VERY FITTING WITH A PICTURE OF A RED PASSIONFLOWER - SANDY |
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This poems is great. It acutally shows me how the poet feels and shows me the picture of what happen. I am a poet myself and I don't think that I have seen such a poem. - Angel |
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I've recently found my one true love. We live a hundred miles apart and so we are together far too seldom. There's a passionate fire that burns between us which is rarely quenched. I love this poem. Well done. :D - Eliot |
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a very good poem 10/10 ! - tanee |
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All I can say about this poem is OOH WEE! It is a winner - Gail |
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I like passion's flames, it makes the reader feel a connection with the author. A lot of people have experienced flings and I think that the poem describes the emotion from the male's point of view so women will understand - cindy |
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Bravo. That is an amazing poem. Keep it up. That really hit me deep. - Gage |
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I love this poem! - ely |
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i cant belive it someone knows how i feel!this is happening to me now,i love it love it love it ! - toni |
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This poem has touched my heart! its so beautiful and almost mad me cry. It's one of the best poem's I have ever read! Ilove this poem and it should get an award (I personally think) I am glad I found it! - Tina |
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This poem was very deep and touching. I am still caught up in it. - JBra |
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Loved it. I was touched by the sincerity of this poem. This happens all to often in life. However, to have the eloquence to describe it makes it better. - Adia |
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it was good i loved it - vic |
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I think that this poem, Was very good, clever. - Autumn |
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i think this is a very passionet poem and romantic too! - liz |
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IT WAS REALLY GOOD - ALLIS |
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This is a very juicy poem I liked it alot it is about a real situation that many of us face every day but dont know how to express it - CHARLENE |
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This is really a beautiful poem. Although this hasn't happened to all of us it has happened to some. It leaves a lot for the imagination which can be a good thing. Because this situation in itself is pure torture. - Lisa |
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this is such an awsome poem. it has such passion in so few words - susie |
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I love your poem. It is every well written and so realistic to me. - auburnrebel |
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Haunts the soul.. beautiful.. - Alendryal |
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speaks the truth. and its has a feeling to it too. to me its perfect! - najia |
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i have been in this poems place,,,,ahhhhh sweet. - anna |
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I really loved this poem, I thought that it was very romantic, and I thought Jeffrey did a great job. - Tawana |
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FOR THE PAST TWO MONTHS I'VE BEEN LOOKING FOR SOMEONE BETTER OR MORE EXPERIENCED THAN ME. cONGRADULATIONS - THOMAS |
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good job - ashley |
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I know exactly how this feels, it was written beautifully, a real good job! - Ashley |
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I have looked at alot of poems and yours and one other persons really appealed to me. - Heather |
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I loved it ! - pebbles |
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That poem was writen well. I like many can relate. I never found the right way to describe that one night. you have said it all! - Kristina |
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I really enjoyed this poem it's so true about the passion you can feel for someone other than your spouce, they only regret I have would be that I married the worng man, I should of married my lover which was my best friend also. - Dianna |
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this poem reminds me of the emotion I face during and after being with my boyfriend. i come from a very strict family and there is ALWAYS regret or there used to be alot of regret after the fact. - lene |
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I cannot believe how close this poems comes close to the feelings that I had, and still have with my very special friend no regets what so ever though. Wonderfull words. - christine |
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Your poem was excellent. Your words were perfect and simple. Your are very talented and blessed. Truly I enjoyed your poem, I wish I could find my talent. - Tymara |
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jeff, the passion you have for this person never let go if it. you are a very good at what you do. i enjoyed reading this poem. it makes me want to go home a hold the one i love very close and, never let him go. thank you. - kira |
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I think that the poem was written beautifully and I like the mesaage of the poem - bettina |
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I really love this poem and I feel like this poem tells the secret lives of a lot of people - Ashley |
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SOLID - Brittany |
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The poem was wonderful it is filled with excitment you did a wonderful Job! - Amber |
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This poem is awsome. The truth really comes out and I love you begin by saying no regrets and end with saying all regrets. Thanks so much for sharing. - Lauren |
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Jeffrey, I have to agree with Angel I am going through that and can totaly relate. Very interesting and true. - Yonnie |
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very beautiful! - Barbie |
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Excellent poem...very realistic - Lynne |
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A beautiful but sad and honest look at situations we sometimes encounter. I loved it. - Janet |
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Words to feel. Words that do not require you to think, but rather be in touch with emotion we all have either felt or will one day know. - Cassie |
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I MAY BE A LITTLE ASHAMED TO ADMIT THAT I RELATE TO THIS POEM 100%. IT IS AN EXCELLENT POEM THAT WILL TOUCH A LOT OF PEOPLE I AM SURE. KEEP WRITING - ANGEL |
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IT IS VERY INTOXICATING- I LOVE IT - YOLANDA |
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Not a bad poem at all keep writing. - Dustin |
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This poem is so true.One night of passion can end up being a life long commitment on the women's part .When now there is a child.But still no regrets - shawn |
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This poem is the bomb!!! - Tanika |
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I am 18 years old and i really enjoyed reading your poem because I can relate to it alot and I will be sure to read more of your poems. - Nicole |
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very interesting ! - Laura |
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Beutifully written. A poem that captures the emotions. - Erin |
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it was really nice it really touched me - kayleigh |
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i love this poem and it brings true meaning of how one feels during a moment everending happiness. - selena |
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Very awesome poem..... i liked it alot...keep them awesome pomes comming - Lauren |
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I realy liked this one I too love poetry. - Donna |
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I loved it, very well written and very deep. Great poem. - Michael |
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I love this poem. I can relate to it so much - Irma |
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Wonderful poem! Loved it! - ana |
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Wow! You caught the moment exactly! What a beautiful poem! - Belle |
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love it... - Alicia |
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I also write poetry and it was really nice, keep up the good work - kabiera |
