Meadow Again by Daniel James Burt
Moon hangs, almost full
pieces of cloud scatter,
glide in soft, summer breeze.
We lay in our meadow
listening to the sound of night
her head nestled on my arm.
Night air made for kissing
dances upon our skin
chilling wherever is damp.
She stirs, quietly calls,
my name hangs on summer eve
floats about our meadow.
She sighs, moves closer
snuggling in, once again
her breath stirs, awakens.
Hands join in gentle caress
exploration shared and renewed
oh, so smooth and lovely.
We turn, lips meeting
slow, softly, delicate
building quickly to demand.
Crying out, beginning and end
collapsing, breathing ragged
moon hangs, slightly fuller.
pieces of cloud scatter,
glide in soft, summer breeze.
We lay in our meadow
listening to the sound of night
her head nestled on my arm.
Night air made for kissing
dances upon our skin
chilling wherever is damp.
She stirs, quietly calls,
my name hangs on summer eve
floats about our meadow.
She sighs, moves closer
snuggling in, once again
her breath stirs, awakens.
Hands join in gentle caress
exploration shared and renewed
oh, so smooth and lovely.
We turn, lips meeting
slow, softly, delicate
building quickly to demand.
Crying out, beginning and end
collapsing, breathing ragged
moon hangs, slightly fuller.
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Wanting to capture the essence of a time of passion in an open meadow. And the continuing nature of love, the progression of feelings as well as the building of relationship. The nature of time counted as moon travel.
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beautifully subtle, soulful - orianwyn |
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Touched my heart, my soul. and the heart and soul of my love as well. - Couga |
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What can I say other then it is a truly sublime piece of work. You have encapsulated the feeling brilliantly. - Zaber |
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"Night air made for kissin' dances upon our skin" That is incredible! This is really a wonderful poem. - Susan |
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Just so beautiful! - Carli |
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That was so sweet. OMG! I never knew a guy could express so many feelings. - Rocio |
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It is nice to see that atleast one man out there is not afraid to say what he feels. This is a type of guy I would love to get to know! He has real talent! - Ashley |
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I have always wanted to lay outside during the summer with my boyfriend and just relax and i never found a poem that suited that need thank jyou so much and i just sent it to him - Michelle |
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i have a boy friend, and we broke up, got back together, borke up and got backk together, and the whole time, this was what we needed to stay together, i love him, and he loves me just a bit more - alex |
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Beautiful. It's really great. You are so talented! - Santa |
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A sweet poem, that heats the soul. Goes slowly and tastefully. I really liked it. - Jamie |
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i give this poem a 10 out of a possible 10.excellent wording.nice work daniel. - chuck |
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I wish I could find a man who wasn't afraid of his feelings and could express himself so freely. The poem was suttle yet expressive, romantic not lustful. Thumbs up for a 21st Century Man! - Aine |
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That's very deep, and the moon sounded very romantic! - Cavallo |
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You did a wonderful job think the poem is excellent - Robert |
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this was absolutely breath taking - Keeta |
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very moving poem, I was never into poetry until I came upon your site. - Mac |
