Difference by princess_belle
There is a part of me
That feels I am different from everyone else.
Something that I can't quite see,
Something that I can't quite feel,
Something so unreal.
But this 'thing' is always there,
This 'thing' with others, I will never share.
So I push it to the back of my mind,
All the thoughts of boys and clothes
And make-up, it is hiding behind.
Sometimes, when I have almost forgotten,
It comes back with such ferocity,
Angry and unforgiving.
I feel so lost and sad,
Whatever caused this feeling
Must have been so horrible and bad.
A lost memory or something else,
I'll never know,
Whatever it is,
I know for sure,
I can never let this feeling show.
That feels I am different from everyone else.
Something that I can't quite see,
Something that I can't quite feel,
Something so unreal.
But this 'thing' is always there,
This 'thing' with others, I will never share.
So I push it to the back of my mind,
All the thoughts of boys and clothes
And make-up, it is hiding behind.
Sometimes, when I have almost forgotten,
It comes back with such ferocity,
Angry and unforgiving.
I feel so lost and sad,
Whatever caused this feeling
Must have been so horrible and bad.
A lost memory or something else,
I'll never know,
Whatever it is,
I know for sure,
I can never let this feeling show.
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Rating: A |
I wrote this poem when I was going through a really bad patch in life. I thought that no one ever understood me and that I was totally different to everyone else. It's not a very long poem, but it's all my feelings in words.
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u must fell let down i no how u fell i have been through thing like bullying and i cant cpe with every day life but i supose i have to get on wiv lif - danielle |
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I really liked the poem, it's something any teen can understand. I think every teen goes feeling alone in some way and the poem really justified that. - Brandi |
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this poem i can realate to about my life and how im feeling right now - kayla |
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i think your poem is really good. i wrote a poem like that. well i just wanted too let you know i like your poem Cassie - cassie |
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I really liked this poem. There have been times in my life where i felt exactly the same way and it's nice to know i'm not alone. - Jenna |
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I loved it. The emotion is great, and it's rather truthful. I felt like I connected with the poem when I read it, and could relate to it about some aspects of my life. Job well done! Cheers, - Mickey P. s Please write more poetry in the future, you have great style. - Mickey |
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it was like u were talking about my life. - dixie |
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Hey. Great poem. I can totally relate. - Josie |
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this poem is amazing! - ashley |
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I think that this poem is great because teens go through alot of differences and that makes this poem easy for teens to relate to so, princess I think you did a really good job! Keep up the good work. - Amy |
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I loved this poem. I love poems that people write about them selfes in stead of just making them up just about any thing. But I love reading poems about other peoples life. - Danielle |
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great job! - katie |
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This is a realy good poem, i to have had bad stages in my life. im nearli 17 and things just dont seem to be getting better. - stacey |
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wow last night i felt this way i love this poem i have wroten it down its exactly like me i never knew there were other people hu felt like this i know now im not the only 1 gud work :) - shereese |
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i can relate to this poem because i feel like i'm hiding sometimes too. - Amanda |
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Love your poem. You express yourself - Jasmine |
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it sums up how i'm feeling right now. i think its amazing. - evie |
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This poem says a lot. When I read this poem it makes me think of myself. People should look much deeper within themselfs when they read this poem. - Angela |
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i love it u should keep writing! - shawna |
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your poetry is lovely you express the way you feel and you also show great effort in your writing - Abbriyanna |
