Two People In One by Mic Finger
Two people in one,
one happy, one sad,
Two sides of me,
one mad and one glad.
There's only one side
I try to let show;
my feelings inside
the others don't know.
I'm two people in one,
as strange as that sounds,
the real me inside
no one has found.
one happy, one sad,
Two sides of me,
one mad and one glad.
There's only one side
I try to let show;
my feelings inside
the others don't know.
I'm two people in one,
as strange as that sounds,
the real me inside
no one has found.
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An evocation of how we often feel as though we are possessors of multiple personalities. Touches on teen angst and how difficult it is for teenagers to form a sense of a stable identity in today's fast-paced, stressful, lacking-in-morals world.
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good poem. ! hope i can write a poem like that one day - sarah |
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I loved it - Rachel |
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This poem is exactly how i feel and i luv it,i might have to copy this but i will surely give you all the credit you did ya thang keep it up! - Dynasti |
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I love this poem it relates to me in so many ways. It's true and is cool how you put it down. - BRi |
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i loved it because i feel the exact same way about myself, i'm gonna use it for poem in your pocket day! dont worry i'll tell them you wrote it - Rebecca |
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I give it a 7 out 0f 10 - Taijhe |
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I liked this poem because it makes sense. Everybody has two different people that lurk within them, but most people only meet half. The first half is coverup for how you want people to see you or understand your way of life, and the second is only shared with people special to you - Melissa |
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That just makes me feel so calm. It makes free from everything around me. - Isabella |
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this poem was very true about me. I can relate to this poem, because i feel like I'm two people in one. - Melinda |
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I really like this poem. I think the rhyming in the 1st stanza sounds a little forced but that doesn't hinder how great i think the poem is :) I can really relate to it. I recently wrote a poem about being almost two people and being all messed up and stuff, so this is why I like it. Keep writing yeah? - Lucy |
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I have just moved to a new city and im just coming out of homeschool so i can totally relate to that feeling of loneliness like no one is really trying to get to know the person inside of you. Mic Finger, writing poems is your thing! - Brianda |
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this poem really got me. Right now im going through that sorta thing in my life. It's comforting to know that there are other people in the world that are going through the same thing. thx for expressing! - emily |
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I feel like you do and its so hard. People dont know that i hurt when i smile and smile when i hurt. - koala |
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u have probably heard this a million times but that poem is great it has depth and meaning to it and i can relate to it and its just great. - Hayley |
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i liked it. a lot. the writer rocks is he or she wrote that poem. truly awesome. and i feel the same way. - hannah |
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i loved it. it was very good. it's good to know their are other people who feel the same way i do. - nikole |
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This poem did really touch me. it really got me thinking about hiding your feelings and in essence yourself from everyone you know and love - i believe that's the mark of a great poem! - Heather |
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this poem reminded me a lot about myself. It is a mellow poem on a deep topic. i liked it a lot. i found it when i was just looking around on pages and this was the first prem i found and it really helps me. it describes a lot of the feelings in a lor of people. thanks for sharing. RJ - NONE |
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wow. this poem is really good. i totally relate to how you are feeling - melissa |
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Very nice poem, I can relate to it alot. Well done. - gary |
