The Coupling Of Passion And Erotic Lusts by Temptress
A touch of skin soft and slippery,
With the hint of hint of sweat.
We fought our resistance beneath the cool sheets,
As the wind flowed from the window above us.
Eyes met briefly and begged for the chance,
To abandon all of our uncertainties.
You began your work on my lips,
Probing gently as if drawing sex,
From a deep well of longing and need.
Then heated tongues met in the midst,
Of hot and quickening breath.
And greedily we drank the wine of our lusts.
Then intoxicated with those spirits,
Our clothes found resting place on the floor.
Piece by piece,
Until there were no hiding places,
For the two glistening and wanting bodies.
Hunger revealed in this hot moment.
Then skin meshed with skin,
As the floor became the stage.
You moved atop of me easily,
And lowered yourself gently.
Kissing me as I was filled with you.
As a gasp broke the kiss,
Your hands stroked the stray strands,
Away from my forehead, then became entangled.
Our slow rhythm gave way,
To urgent and demanding thrusts of passion,
As I arched my body for your comfort,
And you threw me into ecstasy,
With the strength of your blows.
You left me screaming and soaked,
In oblivion again and again,
As you growled my name from the back of your throat,
And our bodies both demanded more,
Each giving to the other,
High on the fluids of foreign substance.
I grasped, then released you,
Grasped then released you,
In effort to relieve you of your control.
The taste of your skin between my lips,
Was like no other.
To hear your cry of mercy,
When my teeth met your warm skin,
Was more breathtaking than you knew.
Yet I still released the control to you.
As you wound your hands in my hair,
And pulled until the flesh on my neck was taut,
You moved with one final and breaking blow,
Forcing our way to the peaks of bliss,
Leaving our screams to echo on like battle cries.
I welcomed the weight of you to crush me,
As you collapsed on top of me,
Still hot and burning,
And I glowing like an ember,
Casting a welcome light,
Should you seek my gifts again.
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This poem is meant to show how great a hot and sizzling lovemaking session can be. It attempts to show a bit of the harsh and lustful side and the loving and sensuous side of the act at the same time.

It is purposely lacking certain subtleties to gain the effect of a heaving chest and the rhythm is written to that of energetic lovemaking.


comments
bubble I can see and feel our time - d
bubble Wow, its a very graphic poem, its exactly what i experienced, i hope to read more of your poems, your very talented - Layne
bubble this is a really good poem its very graphic and i like it a lot. - MANDY
bubble sheer brilliance. well done. great poem - Alva
bubble Wish i could write like this, its stunning - Clare-Jesse
bubble I loved the poem. With my husband half way across the world at the moment it was a nice treat for him. It will give him sweet dreams of me. Thanks - Wendy
bubble this is my favorite poem so far! - Monica
bubble this is A very intimate and wonderfully descriptful poem about love and lust that i really enjoyed and would like to vote this into the favorites category. Much respect and props to the author, keep doing your thing. - Marquita
bubble A poem that has the ability and the descriptiveness to allows one to recapture a moment in their own lives! The poets imagery is indescribable. - Siobhan
bubble Left me Speechless. Absolutly wonderful. - christina
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bubble AT FIRST WHILE READING THE EXPLANATION OF YOUR POEM, I THOUGHT NO WAY I FEEL LIKE READING THIS. TOO GRAPHIC. BUT AFTER DOING SO ANYWAY I FOUND YOUR POEM IN VERY GOOD TASTE, IN SUCH AN ELEGANT WAY. - MARIAH
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bubble i really loved your poem - Kimberly
bubble I have a new love in my life and I will read this to him in bed before or first time together. It's very illustrative of what I want to happen when me make love for the first time. I give it 5 stars ***** - N
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bubble you really pulled out all the stops with this one. the realest poem about love & lust. forget the sugar coating this is raw. this poem is truley incrediable, i give mad props for this one. beautiful. well done. - jenna
bubble I loved it, absolutely loved it! keep up the good work - Courtney
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bubble WOW! I was actually there. - Shaya
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bubble man i felt that poem like it was me and my spouse making sweet love but hey that was real deep - diamond
bubble Simply put, I love this poem. I wish that I could write poetry that creates such a passionate statement. Well done. - jennifer
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bubble I loved this poem! Other than saying that I am truly speechless and i usually never shut up! - Liz
bubble Awesome, blew my mind away, im sure my Girlfriend will love it as well. Keep up the good work and Enlightening others with your talent. - Chris
bubble This poem really had a lot of feeling in it. I have felt this kind of passion before and understands what Temptress is expressing. - Cookie
bubble Loved it this poem was wonderful. Keep up thegreat writing. :) - shy
bubble I needed to take a very deep breath after reading this beautiful poem ,u did a great job picking the right words to describe passion and love in a very romantic actual way. Keep up the good work (ur partner must be a very lucky one :)) - Reem
bubble I give 100% vote to this poem as it brings up the feeling of my young days when I use to love this way. - Chandan
bubble My boyfriend and I LOVED IT! It was very EXPRESSIVE! We give four thumbs up! - Dee
bubble Thank you. This poem hit the spot. - Debra
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bubble This poem tells of a beautiful experience in a beautiful way. You painted a wonderful picture with your words. - Chanel
bubble I loved, no, adored your poem. it is very romantic. I am in love(actually in "like" with this guy in my orchestra class, and I think I'll give it to him for a Valentines Day gift. Thanx for the "present"!:-) - Lilo
bubble I literally got lost in this poem with the visuals playing in my mind. WELL DONE! - Betty
bubble WOW! - jennifer
bubble This poem moved me on the inside awakining the volcano. - Salaam
bubble Man this poem is very good. On a scale from 1-10 i give it a 10. This poem deep and it is wonderful - Sandra
bubble That was a wonderful poem and I understand where your comming from. You are really talented and I think that your poem was wonderful! - Aida
bubble We've all had an experience like this I think. And if you haven't. one day you will and life will take on a whole new understanding for you. This piece is so raw. its absolutely exquisite. - Blexierose
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bubble BEAUTIFUL! I LOVED IT! Reminds me of my boyfriend and I. - Jess
bubble you know. . . this is one of my favorites from you. . . surprised that I've never voted for it. . . beautiful . . . and erotic. . . - John
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bubble wow. completely amazing. shows how truly vunerable we are when we let go and submit to the passion of love. - Alison
bubble WOW!This poem was so detailed, with the perfect wording. I couldn't take my eyes off of it. So beautiful. - Stormy
bubble When I read it all I could think about is my boyfriend, and how your words reminded me so much of us together. You have a wonderful gift! - Lisa
bubble i love this poem, its filled with raw emotions. You can feel the sweat and can feel the passion in the air. It just great, there is no words to say how this poem touched me and every one else i showed it to; it's just great! - shrineof
bubble WOW. That was outragues. The most erotic poem i have ever read. you have got it going on, keep up the good poems WOW. - amanda
bubble wow. - zenty
bubble THIS POEMS DESCRIBES IT SO WONDERFULLY THAT AS YOU READ IT YOU FEEL LIKE YOU ARE EXPERAINCING IT WORD FOR WORD. PERFECT! - AMANDA
bubble yow are blessed - eilee
bubble THIS ROCKED MY WORLD! I FOUND MYSELF AND MY LOVER IN THIS POEM! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! - Angel
bubble So beautiful. I can relate to poem. Reading your poem was like watching a video in my mind. - Kathy
bubble last night i my boyfriend and i made love for the first time and i cant tell you how very much that described the feelings that errupted within me. i am one for writing long poems but your style of writing is a lot more intense than any of the ones that i have written. keep it up i look foreword to seeing as much of your work on here. - michelle
bubble wonderful poem. describes the exact moments of when i make love to my boyfriend - Paola
bubble That is exactly what it is all about. - Andriette
bubble i liked this poem it really got to my heart keep up the good work. - trish
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bubble there is so much raw emotion in this poem it made my mouth water! i loved it! - esperanza
bubble this poem made me daydream about when i first got with alfredo. he excited my every needs and would not miss one spot or inch of my body. this poem i give a 10! i think it tickled me just by reading this poem. - janice
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bubble yummy! very interesting; now if you'll excuse me. - Dai-dai
bubble i felt everything this auther was saying as she was saying it . great poem! - Vikki
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bubble That poem is so seductive. I really like that. - Sheena
bubble sexy and sweet - Pamela
bubble This poem was written so very well it's amazing! It was very heartfelt and detailed. I love it! - Tammi
bubble wow. - clair
bubble i really liked how u put feeling into this i really really liked it thanks for sharing it!. - marie
bubble Awesome! I felt like I was there. - Aimee
bubble This could not be more in tune with sex than it is. The poet is very deep. - Isaiah
bubble I have never read anything like that . it described my hubby and me to a T. wonderful work! - C.J.
bubble Great passion that no other poem can beat. - Shane
bubble awesome poem! - tony
bubble that was a beautiful poem it really made u feel as though u were there - bubby
bubble This was so sexual it made me weak in the knees. - Cher
bubble GIRL, thats what i call a good poem or good love making - Ash
bubble best in the bunch - April
bubble Amazing. Out of all the poems I have read on this site, I could 'feel' this one the most. - Robyn
bubble that poem was really good it went with me really well - ayana
bubble Wow! that was great exspecialy the details (like it was real). The whole poem was outstanding up the good work. - June
bubble Breathtaking you have just decribed the encounter I have experienced, Thank you for putting it into words, this author is truley talented - Coll
bubble It is beautiful!Those are the only words that comes to my mind! - Monia
bubble this poem left me speechless, you did an OUTSTANDING job - Keri
bubble Great job! AWESOME - Terri
bubble The Coupling of Passion And Erotic Lusts has such a strong feeling by the meaning of the words used. Every line made me want to keep reading on. - Eric
bubble Wooooeeeee. That was very HOT. Ide die for a night just like that. - JGurl
bubble This poem is very beautiful i cant describe it, it leaves me speechless - APRIL
bubble It was moving. What else is there to say? - Angel
bubble Thanks for sharing. Well expressed. When others can place themselves within your work and identify. you establish yourself as an artist. - r
bubble Great poem. It reminded me of me and my bf the first time we made passionate love. It was beautiful. - Joy
bubble This work takes you on an exploration of all the human senses. It describes the kind of gratification that leaves two lovers weeping. Beautiful piece! - Char
bubble That was amazing! I was so intrigued by that passion. My goodness! What love making! That was just great. I am almost speechless. - Kris
bubble WOW That was the most sensual poem I have ever read excellent work ! - Lvgrl
bubble This poem is da bomb. that explains the exact feeings and moments of a heated and passionate love making - Alyss
bubble It was awesome. The escriptions put pictures in my head that i can't get rid. Amazing is a good would. - Jessi
bubble Had to get my wife to help me finish this one - Dana
bubble I loved it and feel that this poem has the full feeling to it. - j
bubble That poem is Good! - Honey
bubble WOW! What more can i say? This poem is fantastic. Keep up the good work! - Faye
bubble This totally describes love and the passion that comes with it. I so feel this when I'm with my soul mate! Thanks for putting it into words! - Dawn
bubble FANTASTIC! THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST POEMS I HAVE READ. SUPERB WORK. KEEP IT UP! - shri
bubble Ohhhhhh myyyy that was HOT! - Tina
bubble I am having difficulty catching my breath. You are the Mistress of Passion. - Alendryal
bubble OH MY GOD I FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS POEM. I READ IT TWICE JUST BECAUSE IT GRABBED ME SO MUCH. PLEASE LET THIS PERSON KNOW THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL POEM AND I REALLY DO UNDERSTAND EVERY MOMENT. WOW. - DARLEEN
bubble Awesome poem! BRB need a cigarette..lol - Mary
bubble VERY CREATIVE WRITING WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THAT - SUANNE
bubble GREAT! - rider
bubble Excellent poem, i really loved it, thanks for sharing it! - Elaine
bubble this poem was perfect to describe to my future husband what i want it to be like the first time we do! - shelly
bubble A great piece of work,i loved it and i'm sure that whoever reads it feels the same way.Keep up the good work! - Constantina
bubble I LOVED THE POEM. IT DESCRIBES ALL OF MY FEELINGS FOR THE PERSON I CARE ABOUT. - MEGAN
bubble That was a great poem..as i read along the lines..more and more i could see me and my boyfriend..that truly sums up the greatness of love making.keep the good poems flowing - Brandy
bubble I haven't read a good poem like this one in a very long time and I use to write my own and nothing I ever did can compare to the passion and energy that was put into this poem! Thank you! - crystaltears
bubble This poem was awesome - chris
bubble This was an amazing piece of art. I enjoyed it deeply. Thank you for sharing it with all of us! - Misty
bubble wow! as i was reading i immediatley imagined my partner as one of the subjects .like nothing i have read before. FABULOUS! - mel
bubble Wow! took me there! I was inside the moment and could picture every act. - Dain
bubble This poem was soo good, "You hit the nail on the head" I don't believe that anyone could have done a better job.Thank you for writing this poem , I needed it to express my feeling's for very special person. - Barbara
bubble its explosive,I read over and over,I cant wait to be with ma gurl over the vac. - mezu
bubble Extremely sensual,outstanding! - Lacey
bubble This poem is so erotic - I sent it to my love immediately. Please write some more - your writing is so beautiful. - Mandi
bubble WOW, That's all I really can say is WOW. You described a night I had had with my fiancee just perfectly WOW! - Lindsey
bubble WHEN MY FRIEND BLKBEAR SENT ME THIS POEM I WAS SPELL BOUND. FOND MEMORIES OF OUR TIMES TOGETHER CAME RUSHING BACK IN VIVID MEMORIES. THE EROTIC NATURE AND FREEDOM EXPRESSED HERE IS A GIFT THAT THE BLKBEAR GAVE TO ME. OUTSTANDING! - CJ
bubble I loved this poem..It sucked you in so much that you could not stop reading it. I credit the authors way of depicting one of lives most passionate moments and making it feel real..I pictured the whole thing in my mind as I read the words. - Purple_Butterfly
bubble i can only say that i hope we all experience something close to this at one time in our lives! amazing! - Michele
bubble This poem was written so that the reader could envision it. It was like reading a novel filled with lust. So much, that you don't want to put it down. This poem gets my most honored approval. - Deshannon
bubble ok..it hard to tell wether your writing from experience or if your writing about your desires...dont get me wrong it was well written - Heather
bubble Oh I loved that poem. My husband is out to sea for three weeks I sent it to him and he loved it. Thanks for writing it. That was a great poem. Keep up the great work your doing! - Sandra
bubble Loved it, with my hubby away at the moment this poem evoked such lovely memories of our times shared together - Gill
bubble it was the bomb it was as if i wa in the sceen of the poem.very good! - Rachel
bubble I really liked your poem. It was very sensual and written with so much love and feeling. - Carmen
bubble AWESOME!! This poem is so deep and filled with emotion. I felt as if I was experiencing each word with my love interest. - Pepper
bubble It is very good. It lets you know every feeling and desire without even saying it. - Angel
bubble Beautiful, well done. I could feel all the emotion, loved it. Keep it coming - Jodi
bubble Oh My!! This poem lets you feel the passion and heat of two people in Love and/or Lust! Beautifully written, you want to read it again and again. Well done! - Winston
bubble This Poem was great it was detailed so greatly. - Velta
bubble Great Poem! REally erotic - Joi
bubble Excellent, would be better if it could be printed. - Leo
bubble Oh! This poem made me get so hot and steamy! I love it!1 - Jasmyn425
bubble The person who wrote this poem ,will live and love life to its fullest,they deserve alot of credit for their passion. - Bobbie
bubble I really enjoyed your peom, I hope this will help my crush understand some things. Thankyou so much for sharing - Melissa
bubble I plan to read this poem to my fiance before going to sleep tonight. I'm sure it will incite some very energetic passion. - Gabrielle
bubble WOW..that was amazing.I could feel the anticipation, the urge, the excitement, the heat, the passion and desire..its really breath holding. - FARHAN
bubble I think this poem was the best that I ever read in my life. It describes how an organasm feels. - Shasta
bubble WOW! - Patrice
bubble Great! - Julia
bubble I LOVE THIS POEM.WORDS CAN'T DESCIBE IT.IT HAD ME IN A DAZE. - ANTWANETTE
bubble UMMM BREATHLESS. STIRS MEMORIES OF 1ST ENCOUNTERS - SAINT
bubble Your a very talented poet Temptress I loved the poem. - Mia
bubble This takes love poetry to a different level. It truelly takes you away to that level. Very erotic, but classy. - Kimberly
bubble My god, its as if you were there, at the moment of pure ecstacy! Your words describe the act of love to truthfully and beautifully it overwhelmed me. You are an amazing writer, I hope to see more from you. - Cheryl
bubble WOW! I could picture it! - Jessica
bubble I loved this poem,my fiance sent it to me one night and i thought of him and are nights together.. wow! - Tara
bubble I liked this poem so much that I am going to read it to my girlfriend before I propose to her. It definately has passion to it. - Brandon
bubble THAT WAS A VERY GOOD POEM. - CHARLES
bubble Holy cow! That was quite an arousing poem. One that I deffinently forwarded on! - Amy
bubble I loved the poem. It made me want to put out some fires of my own. - kathy
bubble This is an exceptional poem, i had thoughts of my boyfriend running through my head as i read. i would love to see more poems like this. - Jaclyn
bubble it melted me. - Pam
bubble explicit, but well put togother. It brings you to a steady ascent and then lowers the boom so to speak. Very Erotic - CJ
bubble I think this was a really sexy poem it was so tastefull. I loved it. - Jeanette
bubble Nice work takes you to thoughts of nights with your beloved all in all a nice descent yet erotic piece of poetry - ashu
bubble this is the most touching poem that ive read all of my life . its incredibley passionate - crystal
bubble very imaginative, loved the way you combined your thoughts in a flowing rythmatic way. - sarika
bubble I had to read this one over and over and over again! - Elizabeth
bubble that sounds exactly like what I wanted to do with my man last night but my dorky roomate broke my bliss. So passionate I can almost feel it. great work I love this poem. - alejandra
bubble I had yet to find such a poem to overwhelm me. That was increadible. - erica
bubble loved it - mareena
bubble I love this poem. - Dee
bubble this poem is sooo good it totally explains me and my boyfriend - Hollie
bubble I will send this poem to my lover. Thankyou for sharing. - Rich
bubble WOW - Kayla
bubble I love this poem! - Dee
bubble awesome, hot, wet - sherry
bubble Master of words, great poem. - Mijha
bubble that poem is great,keep writing from the heart - stephanie
bubble This was a wonderfully erotic poem. It expressed just how I feel when I'm with my lover. It was as if the poet reached in and read my soul. - Christi
bubble Well written. - Happy1
bubble Very, good poem I Loved it.. - Tabatha
bubble This is hot! - Karina
bubble Absolutely breathtaking - Tina
bubble This is a wonderful, powerful poem! Thank you!!!! - Teena
bubble Very nice poem. I've recently begun to write some of my own. - pat
bubble Temptress: This poem puts you there in the midst of the sensual act of lust. You can feel the rythmn, the thrusting, the seduction of the two joining. The heat of passion that stems from the bond of physical chemistry. - Sharon
bubble it was beautiful ! - milagros
bubble Perhpas a little over done..less is more in poetry. You do have some wonderful descriptions and I could "feel" the passion of the love making.... - Kathleen
bubble Great keep up the good work, hope to see more on love, romance, lust, lovemaking you name it. - Lee
bubble Wonderful....so much feeling - Annie
bubble WOW......that was amazing...I could feel the anticipation, the urge, the excitement, the heat, the wettness, the passion and desire....WOW - Italian_eyes
bubble i began reading and became totally enthralled in this poem. - gtr_slngr
bubble this was a excellent poem it send chills down my spine & reminded me of my lover.. i loved it - tara
bubble Oh my gosh, this poem was so erotic. One of the best pieces I have read in a long time. It kept me wide eyed and energetic until I finished it. Reading it gave me the same feeling of energy as I get when I am writing. I truly felt as though I was there. Great work! - cindi
bubble an erotic yet moving piece- well done! - kim
bubble Excellent well written and so very true to life ..with every word that was written in this poem i felt it as i have done exactley the same .. - Dale
bubble hot hot!!! - oviston
bubble I think the author did an awesome job defining the precise moment when two people become one. My hats off to Temptress and I hope she continues to write. This was a most enjoyable poem. Thank you for allowing me and the millions of others on the Web to read it. - Misty
bubble Your poem was very passionate. I had to pick up my lips off the floor. This should be censored. I am going home to make this same passionate and erotic lustful love to my social companion. I must say, I am inspired! - sexy
bubble Hi,Temptress. I just wanted to say that I thought this was one great poem.this is my first time on this site.your poetry stands out among the rest. - tom
bubble this peom is great. - stephanie
bubble I love it. I just sent it to my boyfriend. Keep it up. - Sarah
bubble This poem stirs an unbridled passion between two unknowing lovers - MJ