What Should I Do? by Diane Peterson
What should I do,
When I love two?
When I am with one, for the other I long,
I can't find a place for my heart to belong.
You promised that you would always stay,
But now you have gone away.
Your love to me was as clear as a bell,
You promised that I'd always be your Angel.
We used to love each other so very much,
but you were blinded by another girl's touch.
But now I have found someone new,
And he loves me like you used to do.
And now you say I am right for you,
but with only half my heart do I love you.
Now I must choose between both of you,
I am so confused, I don't know what to do.
What should I do,
When I love two?
When I love two?
When I am with one, for the other I long,
I can't find a place for my heart to belong.
You promised that you would always stay,
But now you have gone away.
Your love to me was as clear as a bell,
You promised that I'd always be your Angel.
We used to love each other so very much,
but you were blinded by another girl's touch.
But now I have found someone new,
And he loves me like you used to do.
And now you say I am right for you,
but with only half my heart do I love you.
Now I must choose between both of you,
I am so confused, I don't know what to do.
What should I do,
When I love two?
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I wrote this poem when I thought I was in love with two guys, and I didn't know which one to choose. But now both of them are gone, and I still care deeply about them.
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this poem touch me by my heart - Latasha |
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your poem i sso amazing i write poetry to but i dont post it on the internet i think you should keep on writing you will grt noticed by some one someday who will love your work heaven - heaven |
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I SO RELATE TO THIS POEM ESPECALLY HERE LATELY CHOOSING BETWEEN MY EX AND ANOTHER GUY I REALLY LIKE. BUT WHEN U GOT ON THAT IS ASKING U TO MARRY HIM BUT U KNOW YALL ARE TOO YOUNG ITS HARD TO CHOOSE LOL - Niki |
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Wow your poem is amazing it says everything that i am feeling right now - Jodi |
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this was a great poem i love it. it kinda reminds me and my past experiences i might be a teen but i did love somone and still do love them they are very speacial to me and this poem reminded me of him and another guy that i liked at the same time. but my love for one guy overpowered my crush for the other - sarah |
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I CAN RELATE SO BAD I FELLL THE SAME EXCAT WAY ABOUT THIS ONE GUY BUT ME N MUH BOYFRIEND HAVE BEEN TIGETHER FOR 1 YEAR BUT HE TREATS ME HORROBLE N I FINALLY FOUND SOME1 WHO LUVS ME N WANTS ME SO BAD BUT I AM SO CONFUSED - jessica |
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it was great i loved it i could feel the amotion through your words and how it hurt u cuz u didn't kno who to pick cuz u were in love with two guys. - arabella |
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I love this poem. But i guess it's really just cause I feel this way. - erica |
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this poem fits me perfect - mandy |
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I liked this poem it was very touching. - Brittany |
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i love this poem beacause im going through the same thing expect im going with one and i love another. and i don't know what to do - Lisa |
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i really really liked this poem i can truly relate and i am going through the same exact thing ! THANX 4 THE INSPIRATION - Stormy |
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UMM. THE WORDS THAT ARE SPOKEN ABOUT UR POEM ARE "OH MY GOD". MY WORDS ARE NOT EXPRESSED LIKE THAT. YOU POEM HAS TOUCHED ME AND OTHERS. YOU SHOULD BE PROUND. THE FIRST COOUPLE LINES RELATE TO ME, BUT THE POEM STARTS TO CONFUSED ME, WHEN YOU ARE TALKIN ABOUT THIS LOVE. YOU EXPRESSED URSELF WITH INDIVIDUAL POWER, AND I GIVE YOU 2 THUMBS UP. KALI - kali |
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it poem was AMAZING! I LOVED IT - stephanie |
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that poem is true life FLAT - Cheli |
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i would just llike to say that this poem is so true when it comes down to it you really just dont know what to do. Its hard to decide - silla |
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I think your poem clearly states how most teenage girls feel in the opint and time in their life. You cleverly illustrate how the boy feels two. I would rate this poem a 8 out of 10. - Nicole |
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the poem is realistic and i am amaze on how the author expresses the "thing". - Sheena |
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Greatttttttttttt. - emily |
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Girl i am going through the same thing with these two boys and it's hard because i still have feelings for one but i long to be with the other. Good poem! i really enjoyed it! - Devona |
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I think your poem is really cute because im going through the same thing right now but not with two guys but with three. Me and my ex bf broke up when he moved to florida for a job over the summer but i love him with all my heart than his best friend witch is my best friend now told me how he felt aboutme and everything else than i broke his heart andstarted dating someone else. Im so confused that all i want to do is sit around and cry because im only 17 years old and dont know what to do, but i enjoyed your poem. - Melinda |
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This is the same for me i lv this poem soph and zoe im sowi i cant b bth urs - Stuart |
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I luvd this poem. I had the same problem b4. U took the words right out of my mouth. AWESOME! - Mashelle |
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that poem really toch me because bi felt like that once - michael |
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i like that poem i feel the same way and i need to no what to do mabe u can write antoter one help me out - holly |
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this was a very sweet poem, it showed alot of emotin . I can really relate to what she is going through! - britani |
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It's very touching. - Jessica |
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i loved ur poem. it really got me thinking about things. it really realtes 2 the one im in love with. hes confused between two. =/. well just keep up the good work! - kaitlyn |
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Hey i wounld like to remend you on this poem. I actually feel that poem to the bottom of my heart. This peom has expressed my infuation about one of my mates. I love one and the other one is almost there. Thanks! -Tameka - tameka |
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omg i think this poem is so gr8. u really have some talent for poetry. i like it a lot. write more - vivian |
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I like this poem because it kind of riminds me of myself because i do have that problem - Cathy |
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I love your poem. I really can relate to your poem because I been through the exact situaton. - Nicole |
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I REALLY THOUGHT THIS POEM MADE SENSE. AND I FEEL LIKE IT HAS A CONNECTION WITH ME. I HAVE FELT LIKE THAT BEFORE. SO IT WAS A TOUGH EXPERIENCE. BUT I MANAGED TO BE FRIENDS WITH THE TWO GUYS. KEEP IT UP - Leila |
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i read that poem and ii think its great :D very true, take care X x X - jessie |
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This poem was great. I feel the exact same way in this poem. Maybe you could write another telling how you chose between the two to help me out. - Shay |
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I love that poem! It is so me! - Bethany |
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Oh my gosh this poem is awesome i am relating to it so much these days and i am so glad to know that i am not the only one going through this GREAT JOB! - megan |
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Oh my God i know just how you feel! Right now my heart is in complete confusion and my mind can't make its self up. The poem spoke the truth about how I felt and now i know for sure I'm not alone. - Daisy |
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I'm going to give u adviced for where ur heart goes don't go for the one u really don't love. u have a potential to be a great poem writer. - annya |
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I think this poem is so good, i mean you said how i was feeling at a time. - Tatiana |
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I LIKE THAT - MISSY |
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I can relate to this poem, I think we have all felt this way before and you expressed it just right! - jessica |
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you have potential to be a good writer - kortney |
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This poem is really good, I feel the way this poem is expressed. - Catherine |
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i feel that way two what should i do thank you for your peom i really like it. - leslie |
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Great poem! This is kinda like that quote, "Torn between two. who do u choose? the one you love or the one that loves you?" anywayz great poem - Linda |
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you are really great! - jacquiline |
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i have the same exact problem. it hurts soo bad, but you get used to it. now i dont feel like im the only one in the world that has problems. - Debi |
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The poem is very lovely, it is so romantic - shane |
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This poem was good because i was like that so many times but i finlly found the guy of my dreams! - Misty |
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yes ur words i words is true, i know that cause i love two - ronge |
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Fantastic poem! I can really relate b/c i am in a similar situation at this very moment. Keep up the good work. - Mary |
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That is a very good poem. I was in that situation about a 2 months ago. I found the one i wanted to be with and we have been together for 2 months. but i have lost touch with the other guy so i guess the saying is true love suxs - Leann |
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That was a great poem. I remember feeling like that. I wish I would have seen this poem sooner. All that I can tell you is that it will all work out. Everything happens for a reason. You may not understand how or why right now, but you will soon understand. Thank you for sharing this poem, and I hope you figure out this confusing situation. - Jessi |
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i think your poem is really good. it is something many girls can relate to.i look foward to reading more of ur poems - Vanessa |
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When I read this poem a i was like oh my God! someone else knows the exact way i used to feel, but now I know which one to truly be with. - Shatae |
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I like your poem it sort of explains what im goin through now.I liked you poem! - Tiffany |
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I had the same problem i was so confused on who i wanted that before i knew it they were both gone and i still wish i had them both at times i wish i just had one of them but then i care about both of them . - tabatha |
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i mean how could she? she juss made me realize exactly how i felt..and i all i did was read this EYE OPEN'N poem? well i need to read, so thanx! - kat |
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I liked it it meant something i've been in that situration and i learn't not to fall in love - sheena |
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Hey girl that was a awesome poem you wrote I fit the exact situation and I have no clue what to do. but by all meanings I know it will all work out than-x - carmella |
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i thirt the poem was very powerful some people dont think teen love is true but ist as true and poweful as any thing in the world! - kimberly |
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I like this poem. I remember feeling this confused... and for the same reasons. - annette |
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i love your poem its great i tend to feel like that some times. you really capture the aspect of your poem and good on to you its great. - nicole |
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Hey i really liked that poem! Did this really happen to you? Well, just wanted to say how cool that poem was! Later - Mylene |
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Currently being in the same situation myself, I can really relate to this poem. I like the fact that the author used her words in such a way that makes her readers feel where she is coming from. It's not to often that I can find a poem that describes exactly how I feel, but this one hit the nail right on the head. To the author I would say thank you for sharing your work with others, it's good to know that I'm not alone, and I hope that everything works out for you as well. - L |
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this poem really shocked me because it mirrored the exact same situation that i was in not so long ago. - BECKY |
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THAT IS SO TRUE I'VE BEEN THROW REALY I THINK EVERYONE GOSE THROW THE SAME THINK AND I GIVE YOU CRIDIT FOR SPEAKING THE TRUTH , - LISETTE |
