Judgement Day by Tommy Q
Death and destruction now covet the land
Satan has appeared who has taken a stand
Leaders are falling from both near and far
With many great losses from nuclear war
Crops are failing - famine is on rise
Satan is leading and telling more lies
All from the start hes been setting the stage
As panic grows widespread from evil and rage
Oceans that boil the earth is on fire
So many are dying from what Satan conspires
Quakes, winds, blizzards, and rains
So much is now gone with many lives claimed
Red turns the moon and black turns the sun
Rocks fall to earth with no where to run
Bodies lie rotting, all taken by plague
And those once with so much, today they all beg
Computers are crashing Wall Street is no more
Things will not be as they once were before
There will be no escape there is no where to hide
Causing numbers to rise from mass suicide
The dead have now risen, those Satan enlists
To continue a war where so little exists
But a star will appear for the birth of a child
Who will send the wicked and Satan back into exile
Such praise will be given his glorious birth
By those who remain the meek of the earth
He will teach us to love and remove all the hate
And the world will be humbled but have a fresh slate
All souls will be judged and none will be missed
The evil will perish but the good will find bliss
The faithful of earth will continue to stay
To bring glory and honor all in the Lords way
All this that I write it has been foretold
It was so long ago upon pages of old
As a choir of Angels now sing a new song
Well discover the Bible had been right all along
Satan has appeared who has taken a stand
Leaders are falling from both near and far
With many great losses from nuclear war
Crops are failing - famine is on rise
Satan is leading and telling more lies
All from the start hes been setting the stage
As panic grows widespread from evil and rage
Oceans that boil the earth is on fire
So many are dying from what Satan conspires
Quakes, winds, blizzards, and rains
So much is now gone with many lives claimed
Red turns the moon and black turns the sun
Rocks fall to earth with no where to run
Bodies lie rotting, all taken by plague
And those once with so much, today they all beg
Computers are crashing Wall Street is no more
Things will not be as they once were before
There will be no escape there is no where to hide
Causing numbers to rise from mass suicide
The dead have now risen, those Satan enlists
To continue a war where so little exists
But a star will appear for the birth of a child
Who will send the wicked and Satan back into exile
Such praise will be given his glorious birth
By those who remain the meek of the earth
He will teach us to love and remove all the hate
And the world will be humbled but have a fresh slate
All souls will be judged and none will be missed
The evil will perish but the good will find bliss
The faithful of earth will continue to stay
To bring glory and honor all in the Lords way
All this that I write it has been foretold
It was so long ago upon pages of old
As a choir of Angels now sing a new song
Well discover the Bible had been right all along
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I wrote the following poem which was my depiction of what may occur on mankind's final days upon earth. Although in the beginning it does not appear that God is prevalent - the later part does show where I believe he will play his greatest role.
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I absolutly love this poem its so truthfull and meaningfull. Great job Tommy - God Bless - jessica |
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Hallelujah - Samantha |
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I love your poems they really get you to think of what is to come and i send it to all my friends bacause all should know of the coming of our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ keep writting and may God Bless you - Samantha |
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What a great poem. My granddaugter has chosen this as the poem to use for the annual speech contest at her Christian school. What a really power message. Thank you. - Elana |
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good job! i especially liked the last part - matt |
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that is so true, look at what this world is coming to. - Debbie |
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Hey Tommy you have wrote a wounderfull poem. It almost made me cry! It is a shame that we have let most of these things happed to what god has gave he life for. Most people live a day at a time, are afrad of the future and for you to think of what will most likly happen makes it easier for you to look God in the eyes and tell him that you love him, and that he was the one that died for our sins - Summer |
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Awesome poem. It beautifully decribes the end times. The first time I read it, I immediately printed it. Great job! - Taylor |
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Hey Judgment Day is a really great poem i really enjoyed reading it! - Ahlexses |
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I really loved this poem. Not only was it good, but what it foretells comes right out of the bible! Keep up the good work. I hope that with your poems nonbelievers can turn to Christ. Keep spreading the word, it is our duty until we depart!Great job once again. - Evelyn |
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I didn't get a chance to read all the poems, but this one i got a chance toand i liked it !. so here are my comments:: We are all lead my a defferent inspiration to do things. I really like this poem beause i thought it unigue. I just wanted to encourage you so to continue because it looks to have been an inspirantion and alot of thought. ^_^ - jimmy |
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THIS POEM IS SO AMAZING AND SO TRUE AT THE SAME TIME. GOD HAS GIVEN YOU THE TALENT TO WRITE TO TAKE THIS AS AN HONOR AND HELP OTHERS KNOW ABOUT GOD AND JUDGEMENT DAY GOD BLESS AMANDA - Amanda |
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The poem was very good. It made me feel very much better. God loves us and he loves you too. May God blees you! - Mary |
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YOUR POEM WAS EXCELLANT I ENJOYED IT. - daphnie |
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It is beautiful, touched my trying soul with its rhythm. - Alisha |
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Amen! - Bonnie |
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This is a really good poem. In my opinion I would say this poem assures proplr that God reigns supreme and no matter what is happening in the world, good will always conquer evil in the end - Lisa |
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your poem is so good it is more than good it is great you have really touch me - Chloe |
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I also write poetry and have so many poems I have written hopeing to have a book published in Gods perfect timing. Your poem is a great poem one I think everyone shoul read. Keep writing poem they may help someone to come to know the Lord before it's to late. - Rhonda Jane |
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Beautiful poem :) - David |
