You by Pam
You feel with what your fingertips
would brush, with cocked brow
ravishing over painted lips.
You feel with what your gazing eyes
would see, with stolen glances
among the starlit skies.
It was you, at every turn,
with your soft heated breath,
enflames desire in which I yearn.
It was you, beneath the night
skies, who molded flesh against
flesh, becoming my guiding light.
would brush, with cocked brow
ravishing over painted lips.
You feel with what your gazing eyes
would see, with stolen glances
among the starlit skies.
It was you, at every turn,
with your soft heated breath,
enflames desire in which I yearn.
It was you, beneath the night
skies, who molded flesh against
flesh, becoming my guiding light.
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Remembering his fingers, his eyes, his kiss - and the words flowed on paper like magic. Thus was a poem created.
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this poem is sweet i really like it - cynthia |
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Truly beautiful. - Mi |
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This poem was so touching i love it so much! Keep up the good work! - denise |
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What i think that your poem is really noce. - Rosario |
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wow i really loved this poem so much - Princess |
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this poem was a great poem i think that i should start doing poems like this actually - Tosha |
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this poem was amazing and true thanks for that my fiance loved readin that - elise |
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Lovely poem you should make a job out of it - sarah |
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This is a lovely poem. I Love the imagery in it. Its not too much but very expressive. - effervescence |
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I LOVE THIS POEM IT IS WONDERFUL - VILINDA |
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i love the intesity of the poem and how real it was. i loved it - katheryn |
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Well i think the poems are wonderful amd making sure the poems fit the computer screen is great and they mean so much and at the same time you understand exactly where they are coming from. - ayisha |
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it is very lovely - Renee |
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this poem is touching it gave me chills cus it is oh so true - key |
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this poem is so tite - chai |
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wow!amazing! - lyn |
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I simply love it! - priscilla |
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just beautiful! - Alli |
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Great Poem - Elizabeth |
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This poem is wonderful! It is by far the best poem I have read on this site that describes love and passion in aush few words. You hit it right on the stop! - Morgane |
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this is such an amazing poem, kudos to pam.. bravo! - amanda |
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lovely - joanna |
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its really cool ! - ubed |
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it is great. - Grisela |
