Way by Phillip Landrey
Daylight breaks through equal bliss,
All the reruns consume our history.
Falling from grace,
I hope youll come sit by me.
All I wish is your hand,
Its the entrance to your soul.
Each dream I had about you,
Got lost or thrown away;
I cant wait forever,
Cant you kiss me now?
All the poems I wrote,
Died and burned away.
You took another man,
After stealing my heart;
It cracked in two,
One for hate the other for you.
Didnt I wait long enough?
Leaving it for the perfect time.
I cant look at you now,
Wont you turn away?
Its lonely where I am now,
But I cant turn away.
I think about you all the time,
Wont you come listen to me?
Maybe one day Ill get your kiss,
So Ill feel your lips,
I wont let the moment pass me by,
Please stay as the star in my sky;
Each day is lost without you.
Maybe one day itll turn out my way!
All the reruns consume our history.
Falling from grace,
I hope youll come sit by me.
All I wish is your hand,
Its the entrance to your soul.
Each dream I had about you,
Got lost or thrown away;
I cant wait forever,
Cant you kiss me now?
All the poems I wrote,
Died and burned away.
You took another man,
After stealing my heart;
It cracked in two,
One for hate the other for you.
Didnt I wait long enough?
Leaving it for the perfect time.
I cant look at you now,
Wont you turn away?
Its lonely where I am now,
But I cant turn away.
I think about you all the time,
Wont you come listen to me?
Maybe one day Ill get your kiss,
So Ill feel your lips,
I wont let the moment pass me by,
Please stay as the star in my sky;
Each day is lost without you.
Maybe one day itll turn out my way!
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I'm 17 and I live in Wales, and currently I'm sitting my exams. The poem is about a crush I had on a girl that turned into love, and how I dreamt of perfect time with her.
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Phillip, this poem was beautiful. Love is one of the hardest emotions to express because the feelings run so deep and sincere. It's incredibly hard to love someone when in fact they don't love you. However, you posess a great talent and you will find someone perfect for you. - Jacqi |
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Nice work man. I got some advice for you. Lifes too short, don't wait anymore. Start doing what you want to do, not what you should do. I hope my girl Jovanna understand what I'm thinking, good luck. - Danny |
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hey man GREAT work, i can relate this poem right now. i finally got with the girl i have loved for so long, we were together for most of the night until she walked off at the end, i went to see what the problem was and. she said she liked my bro. this has really touched me, keep up the good work. - Trun |
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NIIIIIIIIIIIICE REALLY NICE I LOVED IT'S REALLY GOOD WORK. KEEP UPTHE GREAT WRITING - ESMER |
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your poem is pretty good, much betta than other ones i've read, it also made me think of my girlfriend too! - maty |
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i really liked your poem! - Asha |
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this poem lets out a mouthful. This is how i feel about my -x gurlfriend, ur poems are awesome there is so much feeling to it keep up the good work! - Nick |
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Phillip. i can't believe your poem isn't at the top of this page. all of these poems are great and come frum the heart. but urs was so 4 real. i luv hearing such words frum a male, since many of them are not passionate. - ilk |
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I can't possibly know what you feel or felt when writting this poem, not entirely anyway. What I do know is how I reacted to it. I see myself in what I have come to know as love and its a love I will never (and have never) experienced with a girl. I love your poem because many girls post poems about a love they are in, but for me this is a love that can never be, like mine. I really relate to this and I hope your love is completed by the girl you speak of. Love should be an experience felt by all. One day (hopefully) we can all feel it and appreciate it. Anyway thanks! - Rich |
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This is a great poem i can totall relate to this, keep up the great work! ;) - Camila |
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I know exactly how it feels i am going through the same thing right now. It is hard but i am not going to give up, because i believe love is forever and she will always have a piece of my heart. - Ryan |
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Look man.. I know how you feel. I flirt with this girl at my school a lot. Them my attraction to her was likin her. Then it became love. I find out she likes my best friend and someone else. This broke my heart. Your poem has helped me, thank you very much. - Tim |
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This poem is outstanding. Its heart warming, soul melting, eye watering, etc. It has all the qualities for an awesome poem. This, I know for myself, expresses feelings and things that seem to happen to all us teens. I think you have an amazing talent and should keep up the outstanding work. - Lauren |
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you have real talent man that is a really good poem and all i can say is hold on to your love for that girl - Lawrence |
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bloody marvellous mate! I only wish I had the talent you hold for poetry myself. Keep it up. - Trav |
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Hey man! Thats an awsome poem, and i can really relate to it. Keep up the good work - Stryfe |
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I can relate so very well to this literary work of art.As a 16 year old girl, I too have gone through this same expereince. You have captured the love and pain you feel at the same time. Wonderful! - Alecia |
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i loved the poem she's stupied for not loveing u back. u have mad talent u will be ok - nessa |
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Good stuff! - SugarBaby |
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Great one!! - jeni |
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good - poh |
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Phillip if you read this you have written the most heart-melting eye-watering poem I have ever read. You have a beautiful talent and i would love to see more of your work on here - Crystal |
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VERY GOOD I LOVED IT!!!! - CICLALY |
