Addictions by Suroor
Watch the smoke
As it flies.
try to think,
What's wise.
Feeling high
In deep blue sky
Higher you fly
Harder you fall.
Addictions aplenty
Way before twenty,
Makes life painful,
Makes life empty.
Kick away the need,
To be kicked away in space,
There is nothingness there,
It's not a good place.
It's not a good place.
As it flies.
try to think,
What's wise.
Feeling high
In deep blue sky
Higher you fly
Harder you fall.
Addictions aplenty
Way before twenty,
Makes life painful,
Makes life empty.
Kick away the need,
To be kicked away in space,
There is nothingness there,
It's not a good place.
It's not a good place.
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Every other person falls prey to addictions in life. The basic realization of life and its beauty gradually disappears with addictions. Understanding oneself and putting away addictions are a key for a beautiful life. Especially when addictions come in young teenage, its a pathetic plight for the age and the development into the old years. A strong need for awareness, is a small solution to the problem of smoking, drugs, and alcohol.
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I think it was well done. maby some more pain shown. - acid |
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BASIC AND TO THE POINT, WE ALL HAVE THEM - JON |
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Amazing poem. You say alot with just enough words - alison |
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this is good, but addictions come in many more forms than drugs. i have one, but will not reaveal it. - necrobuddha |
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Damn! Been there. Your poem sure puts it straight! Thanks for the reminder. - Allison |
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i relate to this poem a lot. i think it's very truthful. - melody |
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this poem is very easy to relate to and it reminds me of myself about 2 years ago. - mar-bear |
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this is a great poems for all teens. CONGRATULATIONS SUROOR!!!!!! - SASHA |
