Forbidden by Todd Fulton
Forbidden pleasures
Who makes the rules
Unfound treasures
And beautiful jewels
Can that line be crossed
What could we truly be
And at what cost
Do you see what I see
I know there is more there
Waiting to be found
Can you feel how much I care
I feel like I'm being drowned
If you knew the amount of desire
That I feel for you
My burning fire
That wants one to become two
Forbidden pleasures
Who makes the rules
Unfound treasures
And beautiful jewels
Who makes the rules
Unfound treasures
And beautiful jewels
Can that line be crossed
What could we truly be
And at what cost
Do you see what I see
I know there is more there
Waiting to be found
Can you feel how much I care
I feel like I'm being drowned
If you knew the amount of desire
That I feel for you
My burning fire
That wants one to become two
Forbidden pleasures
Who makes the rules
Unfound treasures
And beautiful jewels
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This is my first attempt at writing in 7 years. A very special girl, Tiffany, gave me this gift back. She is a friend (or is she more) and it is the typical situation of crossing that line, and who is hurt in the process. No one has ever invoked such emotion in me before and I just had to release through writing.
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This has got to be an all time classic! Tod is very creative, gifted and he narrowed the point dow to a tee! - tekilia |
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beautiful beautiful poem. it touched my heart. - kate |
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I just want to be one to say that this poem is truly a work of art. It has touched my heart very deeply and made me realize the forbidden love that I have for someone. Now I have enough encouragement and strength to let them know just how I feel. Thank you. - Michelle |
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This poem evokes the beautiful feelings that are released when one cannot freely express ones true emotions. - Sulema |
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Very interesting poem although it lacks why the situation is actually forbidden. Is either party married?If not,it is hard to fully grasp as such to why this is "forbidden" so to speak. I have been on a hunt for poems for actually a gf of mine and do enjoy this site but have a feeling,I won't be finding just your everyday "you are special because" types,lol. - Just |
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A great poem it really touched me - nicole |
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I know how you feel i had the same thing happened to me! i like my best friend he was the 2 person i met and we've been friends since then and last year i had feelings for him and i ask him if he would go out with him he said no and it almost costed are friendship! - Deneda |
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i like that poem i is so sweat. i would give it to some one i like its so sweat - nikki |
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Amazing! I wish the Todd A. Fulton that I knew so many years ago had written me a poem such as this. I loved him more than the heaven above and the earth beneath my feet. his love was like the air that I breathed. And he left me. And i still have that cross you gave me - Angela |
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Wonderful poem - Ericka |
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This was an excellent poem! It said exactly what i needed to say! Thank you! - Sabri |
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I love this poem ! it's exactly how I feel. scared! - Cam |
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i thought it was a realy meaningfull poem i enjoyed reading it again - bethy |
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WOW. Thank you to the writter. As critical as I am this poem touched me all over. WOW - Lance |
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This is awesome! It has a lot to do with what i feel right now towards a really good friend. Keep up the good work. - Sammi |
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hey i enjoyed your poem it was sweet i understand how you felt when you knew you had crosssed that line because not long ago i crossed it myself - alexa |
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i loved this poem. this author is so talented. it really relates to a situation that i am in. - amber |
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I thought it was an amazing, well writen poem. Keep up writing - Amy |
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todd you said it all for me thank's. sent it to a friend now maybe she will understand me a little better.hope to see more of your work in future.GOOD LUCK - dusty |
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You have put into words what most of us could only think. Great Job.*****stars - Amanda |
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good work!it's a beautiful piece!i love it.. - KhairY |
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i thought the poem was really good it all just goes to together and it means alot - michelle |
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I can place both of my feet in your shoes, and walk a parallel road to yours. It is" Super kala fraga listic exp iala docious " ! - Tigermouse |
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Your words are absolutly luscious to the soul ! You are very good. - ellechar |
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this poem was definetly what i was looking for to tell a friend in so many ways. Todd, this was really go!***** stars - kiki |
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'Hidden treasures' and 'beautiful jewels'--good choice of words! And who is it that makes the rules? Go and find that woman. Take a chance, but don't hold me to it. Good work. - Donnatella |
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I LOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE THIS POEM THANKS FOR SHARING IT. - Angel |
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this is a great poem.i love it..dont stop writing - Mandi |
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This poem is awesome, I sent it to a friend and she loved it to. - floyd |
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Excellent poem about real life relationships - floyd |
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I think that it is wonderful that someone can have such a strong emotional contact with you that it makes you want to write again. I myself just started back writing after 10 years due to emotions that have came forth that I have not felt in a very long time. I hope that this person knows how special they are to you, for it would be a shame if they did not, since your poem was very beautiful. - Brandi |
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This poem just gave me the biggest lump in my throat! I couldn't have said what I have felt better! Thank you for sharing this with me! - Tracy |
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wow! im a picky poem reader.but this one really caught my eye. GREAT POEM..thats two thumbs up from me - Em |
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A Very Good Poem. - Gayatri |
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Todd, thank you for the words that say so much. The rules that bind how we live are a reflection of our choices are they not? If we could only go back and change our minds - Liz |
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It was really good and the author should really keep it up - candycaneman |
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Beautiful poem. Poems like this one are the ones that give the courage to speak up. - Suelie |
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that is a awsome poem! it's exactly the words i need. too send to someone. :) - tammy |
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This is beautiful. - Sarah |
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I can relate to this. The poets feeling were pure, and well written. Nice piece. - Regained |
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it's just lovely poem - ravi |
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it was ok i heared better!!! love Crying Angel - Crying |
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WOW...love this poem - deb |
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Todd, This poem really touched me at heart....I have been writing for some time now and I am so happy that you've found your talent once again..if you need to write me a poem! - Megan |
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loved this one alot, deep and yet calm and simple like,love - chris |
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WOW! - Anthony |
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I like the descriptive first four lines. The nexus of Forbidden pleasures and ...beautiful jewels spoke to me. That beginning awoke in me morories from the past. - Phil |
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This is a wonderful peom. I can relate to it, beacause I amm going through something like this for a person that is frobidden. It connectedr to me and made me realize that I am not the only person going through this. - Candy |
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this poem is truely beautiful - billy |
