Down Again by Jenna
I've been pushed down so many times
I feel this time will be the last
as I lay here fading
my thoughts are invaded by memories of my past
I feel the pressures of shame and rejection building
as I lay here on the floor
I have no strength to get up
I'm not worth it any more
I feel this time will be the last
as I lay here fading
my thoughts are invaded by memories of my past
I feel the pressures of shame and rejection building
as I lay here on the floor
I have no strength to get up
I'm not worth it any more
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This is a poem about being taken advantage of. I am always there for people, but they never seem to have time for me.
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I really love poems that express the anger, hate, hurt, and rage in peoples lives they sometimes relate to what i'm going threw. By the way this poem is really really go! Sencerily, Tiffany D. Chandler - Tiffany |
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I love this poem. I relate to it so much. - kalista |
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Wow that is how i feel i know what its like and its okay - Nicole |
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i loved it because i think it relates 2 some ppl i kno - Rayel |
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that was beautiful - chynna |
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This poem reminded me of my son I lost in Oct 2005. He sufford so much I was blind to as bad he was hurting. - mary |
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This poem really touched me I feel the same way the one person that I really care about dosn't and it hurts me so I hurt my self - Malikah |
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i really love reading poems. specially ones i relate to. that poem was spot on. good job, keep writting more - kristen |
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Jenna i don't know why you felt this way. i hope you felt i was there. i miss you and i wish things were different - Lisa...your sister |
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I feel your despair. I know it hurts - Delta |
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I know and understand this. I am there. - Katy |
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short. simple. sadly true. - Understand Pain |
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HeY yOuR pOeM. i CaN fEeL wHaT yOuR gOiNg ThUr CuZ i Go. ThUr ThAt EvErY dAy. FeElInG lIkE wHy Am I AlIvE i JuSt GeT uSeD. AnD lIkE nO bOdiEs ReAlLy CaRe fOr Me Or EvEn LoVe Me ThEy JuSt EnD uP bReAkInG mY hEaRt Or It FeElS lIkE tHeY eXpEcT yOu To Do EvErY tHiNg - BaBy |
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Funny, how poems potray other people and how they feel. This is exactly how i feel all day everyday, dont know why it wont go away, dont know when it will go away. We think that only if our questions are answered everything will drift away. Most try, but ive tried and it doesnt help me just to forget everything cause then it just comes back ten times worse. This poem touched me, its in the eyes of a young girl who is suffering. - Iolanda |
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its so sad but hang in there. We all get rejected all the time with out nowing it. - Justine |
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i love it. its like me i dont wanne get up anymore im kinda sick of life. - glenn |
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this poem? i can also relate to. i feel like this all the time. i just can't seem to forget. the memory is still clear. everyone hates me. - kasumi |
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your poem seems to be exactly what happened to me last nigth. kinda creepy :S lol but it was nice :) *thumbs up* ALex - Alexandra |
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life is like a game,there are times of GLORY and triumph,but most are sadness and failure,so play your game right and tough cuz when you fall theres no turning back. Life is not matter of destiny,but its a matter of choice. jhake41 - jake |
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i loved it, thats exactly how i feel right now. my girlfriend just broke up with me and i can not take anymore - brandon |
