Juliet's First Love by Linze
Everything was perfect
Like a relationship should be
Time spent together
Honesty trust till
Eternity
I never knew how much one day could mean to me
I guess I was blind
Not willing to see
My love of my life had to leave
Face to Face he slowly, patiently
Explained everything to me
Full of pain, shock
Not wanting him to leave
Was the hardest part that I did not want to believe
Silence, grieving
My heart could not take
I wanted to fall in a deep sleep and never awake
For the last time I look deep in his big blue eyes
And all I could see
Was a heart broken lover
Because of me
My Romeo has gone
But maybe he will return
To behold me his Juliet
Without saying one word
I need to move on
That is what I tried to remind myself
But it's hard for I could never love
anyone else.
Like a relationship should be
Time spent together
Honesty trust till
Eternity
I never knew how much one day could mean to me
I guess I was blind
Not willing to see
My love of my life had to leave
Face to Face he slowly, patiently
Explained everything to me
Full of pain, shock
Not wanting him to leave
Was the hardest part that I did not want to believe
Silence, grieving
My heart could not take
I wanted to fall in a deep sleep and never awake
For the last time I look deep in his big blue eyes
And all I could see
Was a heart broken lover
Because of me
My Romeo has gone
But maybe he will return
To behold me his Juliet
Without saying one word
I need to move on
That is what I tried to remind myself
But it's hard for I could never love
anyone else.
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I wrote this poem to a guy that I was in love with and he had to move out of state. I will never forget him.
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this is a good poem. great job - raihana |
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this poem reminds me of the boy i was in love with that had to move away. he even had blue eyes. i loved him so much and i was so sad when he moved. it was a great poem - Crista |
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All I can really say is that I cryed when I read your poem. It is so amazing how somebody could have so much passion and Love for another person, and the way you brought your feelings into words. it is such a beautiful thing. Great Job! - Jacqy |
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Hi my name is Brittany Im 15 I know Im young but Im in love. In love with the guy who left me to go into the navy. Now hes in Washington and is not coming home for 4 years. - Brittany |
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This was one of the best powms I have ever read and it was very touching - Keenan |
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I loved this poem, it reminded me of my x-boy friend,and what I had to go throw and thill do go throw. - Kim |
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i love this poem it touched me so so ill leave in such a way ill just say keep writing poems till the end - stephanie |
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* i know how u feel in a sense, my boyfriend of over a year might be moving miles and miles away from me, its not for certain yet but i dont see how i could go on, ive never found ne one like him, hes everything to me, i know its hard for you, and ur poem was really good. - Lauren |
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this was a really great poem that has happened to me before it was either he moved away or i moved away it was great - Patience |
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I know how you feel. My feeling might be a little different though because im the one who has to move. i feel guilty because i know he really likes me and i really like him. Ihope 1 day i will move back so we can be together and i really hope he feels the same way then about me. - Jackie |
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hey omg its so weird but thursday was my boyfriends lasy day of school cause he is moving to new york so i had to break up with him but thsi poem is exactly hwo i feel - Desiree |
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this is an awesome poem, im in this situtation right now. - monica |
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I can relate to this poem. I think its amazing - jessie |
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When I read the poem I cried at the end. The man I love now is going through a very rough time while im away at school he doesn't want me to come back untill im done. He tell's me that he cant be with me for much longer cause he thinks that he isn't worth anything and will ruin my life if I return to him. He says that I could do so much better but to me he is the best and your poem really explains the way I feel right now and I am hoping he will not leave but he just might. - Tashina |
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omg this poem made me cry lol - Alyssa |
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I loved your poem it really touched my heart greatly. I almost cried remembering my love who went away. I love it! - Maria |
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i have been though the same thing my first love moved out of state and we broke up but now hes back and we are talking again i say if its ment to be then it will come back some day keep up the good poems - Tiffany |
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oh my gosh! i know how you feel! i live in texas and my boyfriend who i luv more than i can say, is about to be moving to colorado! if you knew us, you'd see how hard it's gonna be for us to part. i dont want this time to come, but now it's good to know that im not alone on this - Brittany |
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Wow after reading that poem and all the responses I don't feel so alone any more. I had to give up my first love b/c he moved and he hasn't kept in touch. Not to mention the story of Roneo and Juliet is my favorite in the world. It really did touch my heart and made me remember him. - Angela |
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Hey girl, i love it! Your a great writer and also it sounds what happend to me. He asked me to go get married and i said yes and then he had to leave. but i know he will come back. but if your peom is true just remember that prince charming will come back again some day!love ya - Megan |
