What It Is You Do To Me by Bobby Lincoln
There you sit
smiling
And it's you I watch
wanting
But you don't even know
What it is you do to me
So I keep on watching
and wanting
as I bleed

Every time I look at you
Every time I talk to you
Every time I smell you
My heart continues
melting
And I am forever
dreaming

Whenever you pass me by
Whenever you catch my eye
I feel like I want to cry
Because of what it is you do to me

Your eyes
gleaming
And your lips
pleading
And your hands
exploring
While my heart remains
bleeding

Every time you look at me
I wonder what it is you see
Every time you talk to me
And I hear that beautiful voice
My knees get weak
My stomach flutters
My chest collapses
My neck hairs tingle
And I stop breathing
Just in that moment in time
When you do what it is you do to me

As I sit here
yearning
I imagine you
sleeping
And I want to hold you endlessly
Forever in my arms for eternity
I'll continue
dreaming
As long as you are
living
breathing
being
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This poem was written about a guy friend of mine whom I've had a crush on for months. Every time we talk it's almost like he's taunting me, as if he knows I want him and likes knowing that I can never have him.

Lately I've tried telling myself that I'm over him, that I should move on to more realistic things. But every time I say that, I'm given another reason to rekindle my desires for him - the way he might look at me, or laugh with me, or smile at me in his peculiar way. It's eerie sometimes, and I know that it's just me seeing things I want to see. But maybe it isn't.

Whatever it is, it keeps me dreaming, and sometimes my dreams are all I've got.


comments
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bubble I like you poem its good and i just wanted to tell you that - Jasmin
bubble wonderful poetry - maggie
bubble i really did like it cuz i can relate to what im going through in life. - Lisa
bubble This poem really hit base to what i've been feeling about a special person in my life and i just had to send him a copy of your poem to let him know what it is he does to me when he is around and when he isn't around me. So I personally want to think you for writting that beautiful poem and tell you to keep on writting because that was beautiful writting. It brought a tear to my eye. - Tierra
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bubble This poem talks about everything my boyfriend does to me. - Alysia
bubble I know this may sound stupid, but that's exactly the way I feel. Thank you. - Cindy
bubble This poem moved me to tears. It reminds to so much of somthing I'm going through that it's creepy. My props to the author. - Emily
bubble I absoulty love this poem because it fit my exact situation that im in right now i support all the way bobby - Adrien
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bubble 10/10 your poem really touched me, its exactly how i feel about someone that i am trying to get over so badly. Your emotional heart brought me to tears. - Freddie
bubble You described all the feelings I feel about the one I love but can't have. It was a very good poem and I feel the same thing everyday - Tyler
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bubble I THINK THIS POEM IS GREAT BECUZ RIGHT NOW IM IN THAT KIND OF SITUATION WITH MY EX. I LOVE HIM TO DEATH BUT WE'RE NOT TOGETHER AND I MISS HIM ALOT SO ITS LIKE IM STUCK ON HIM AND WHAT HE HAS DONE TO ME. - yashica
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bubble When i read your poem i was like wow, every word that was said is how i feel for this girl i know right now, this is a poem that touched me. And as poet i rate you a 11 out of 1-10 - Jarell
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bubble this poem was so cool and it made me think of what my best friend is going through and i hope that this poem will make her feel bettter. thanks sarah p. s. How can i help her? - SARAH
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bubble i think it was a GREAT poem and i liked it so much that i printed it so all my friends can see it - Deliela
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bubble I really like this poem. The person that wrote this must have put some effort in writing this wonderful poem. The other reason i really like this poem is i am feeling this way to this person i realy like but i really dont know how to express my luv verbally to this person. So yeah this is a really good poem. you wrote a good one keep ur hard work up - Chris
bubble Sadly enough, I can relate to this poem. I have been there before, and perhaps, I am right now. - Melissa
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bubble I really love this poem! I can relate so well to it! There was a guy that was just my friend and then after waiting 2 long years were together and have been for 10 months! I love him deeply, and this poem has really touched me! I THINK YOU SHOULD WIN FIRST PRIZE - Amanda
bubble This poem is so amazing! I feel exactly the same way about this amazing girl, and i have experienced all that you wrote about and i think it is amazing and comforting that other people go through this exact thing. Thank you for writing this - Tyler
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bubble i like that so much . Is that the only poem that you have did . if you have some more can you send them to me thank you so much - Ozzetta
bubble this is a really awesome poem. i loved it. - Casey
bubble this poem is how i feel about my boyfriend. its kewl though - clarice
bubble I loved it. you captured exactly how i feel towards some close to me. and . i just love it. - Vickey
bubble hey! i just wanted to say that i am in the exact same situation (but from a girl to a guy. ) and it really spoke to me, i sent it to him so maybe he'll take a hint, all becuase of you! it was very nice, and i really liked it, thanks Megan - Megan
bubble good poem - fran
bubble THE BEST POEM I'VE EVER READ - AMY
bubble it reminds me of me - ashlee
bubble I love this poem 2 death. No lie i Think this is the best poem on this site 4 real. i love the way it is written. its my fav in the world - Joy
bubble this poem is so good. keep up the good work! - Bridget
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bubble I thought this poem was good cause it was romantic and very good sounds like the author has someone special in mind and don't stop writing - Ana
bubble This poem hit me str8 in the heart. They know EXACTLY how being in love w/ someone you haven't told feels. Do yo' thang! - Jessica
bubble It was buityful it realy toched me. thanks. - shane
bubble i thought this poem was really good. who ever wrote it has talent, thats for sure. - marielle
bubble I loved this poem cuz it expresses the way alot of us feel when we see that special someone. Well done and it rhymes. - Jackie
bubble this poem is so how i feel about my boyfriend and its every word - niki
bubble im in love with this guy name jay this peom really did touch me - tara
bubble I LOVED THIS POEM - Mario
bubble This si a very, very good poem Bobby. I have had similar experiences. Your poem made me think. Maffe me think about why we love. Why loving hurts so much and tha fact that hurting is love. Thank you. - Niggi
bubble i loved this poem, it put me in tears . it reminds me of myself, i feel in love with this guy and i had liked him for six months and i didnt have the guts to talk to him and this inspired me to talk to him and to tell him and i did . it is so fantastic! PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING! - Danielle
bubble this poem made me realise how much i love my boyfreind so i sent it to him and he started crying we dont get to see much of each other but when we do out time togther is very special Bobby you did a good job there fanxs to you our relationship has grown together - hayley
bubble Wow! This is beautiful . This is how i feel when i am around my boyfriend. - autumn
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bubble Dude this poem is awosme. i just want to say i felt the same way at a time i had idea wat to do. thnx for writng this dude PROPS! - Jake
bubble I wanted to vote for this because I get the same feelings all the time for one and only one girl. - Timothy
bubble Yes, I do love this poem because I have been in the same way. Me and this like boy each other but we are scared to tell another. he watches me I watches him. The only thing is that he have a girl friend - Cent
bubble MAN I LOVE THAT POEM! THAT IS SUCH A REALLY REALLY GOOD POEM! THE PERSON WHO WROTE THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POET! I LOVE HOW IT TELLS HOW YOU FEEL ABOUT THAT PERSON! I CAN TOTALLY RELATE TO THIS POEM! - Kari
bubble wow this pome was more than good all the rigth words were used you could feel the feelings in it and it really grabs me because i've been thorough what the pome talks about-thanks for the great reading - liz
bubble that was amazing it really touched my heart. congrates - kendall
bubble that is such a great poem you did a great job it is so true in so many different ways - kailey
bubble I love this poem. It relates to how i feel about a certain guy i know, and how i feel about him. - Emma
bubble I really love this poem it reminds me and the guy i really like it is like and him. Great poem - Kelsey
bubble i do really like this poem - ana
bubble I love this poem dearly already. I can relate to it in so many ways. That's the same feeling I get when I look into my boyfriend's eyes and always end up with the same question:"what is it you do to me" because I always find myself in a "sticky" situation - Antonya
bubble I really liked this poem because it describes perfectly what I feel for this guy. I just decided to look up poems and I came across this one, when I started to read it tears came to my eyes because of how exact it is. It's a GREAT POEM! - Megan
bubble It reminds me about how i am feeling about my best friend who is a guy. - Amanda
bubble This poem was sent to me by my girlfriend. I know she sent it from her heart, and it's great knowing that. I really liked the poem. - Cody
bubble I THINK THIS POEM IS SO GREAT I HOPE YOU GET SOMETHING FOR IT. I WAS JUST PASSING THROUGH AND JUST WANTED TO READ AND GUESS WHAT I SEEN. BEST OF LUCK! ROWENA - Rowena
bubble i love it I feel that way baout somebody right now. i mean everything u said jst hit it 4 real. it was beautifully written - Joy
bubble this poem is definately the best poem i've read! it describes exactly how i feel about my crush. - Bean
bubble I really love this poem. I t reminds me of my feelings for my ex with whom I am talking ot again. We are thinking about dating. Thanks! It is truly amazing! - Malinda
bubble i liked it couse it was nice and it rememeber me of things that have been going on in my life - cristal
bubble I don't read poems like this alot, it's just great. - Brian
bubble it really touched me i understand how u feel i have the same feeling 2! - maria
bubble Hey will i think this was a great poem i can really relate to it because i am going through the same thing with my guy best friend. - pamela
bubble this was a really good poem that i can relate to from a certain point of my life inthe past. - Eva
bubble I absolutly adore this poem it is so honest and beautiful and it truley paints the picture of a teenage boy hoplessly in love with a girl. Adorable. - Amanda
bubble I loved this poem poem because it really relates with my life right now and it describes everything i feel for the person I like and this is a great oppurtunity for me to think of what I doing because if that person doesn't like me back then what's the use . - guadalupe
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bubble YOUR POEM WAS BEAUTIFUL. IT MADE ME CRY BECAUSE I UNDERSTAND EXACTLY HOW IT FEELS TO WANT SOMEONE SO MUCH. THANK YOU. - CECILIA
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bubble this poem hits the spot because i have been going after a girl for quite a while and this poem describes the way i feel everytime i see her thanks - aldo
bubble That was real cuz I konw how that feel - Shanika
bubble wow. that poem was great keep it up. i feel the exact same way. and he just seems to not understand me at all. i just sit there in amazement and watch him as he talks to me as if he cant tell how i feel. i hope the best for you in your writing. its awesome so keep it up! - casey
bubble Wow. it's like you read what I was thinking! I've liked one of my best guy friends for 3 years now but I haven't had the guts to tell him. I think your poem inspired me to do so. Thanks! - Rachel
bubble Your poem was exactly how i feel right now. You did a great job! - Ashley
bubble I love your poem. That's exactlly how I feel about my friend but I don't have the nerve to tell him. - Erica
bubble i love ur poem it reminds me alot about this boy that i liked for a 1 and a half and i still like him from this day. - jody
bubble that is very beautiful it touched my heart in every way i know how it feels and you described every inch of my emotions thanx alot - marcy
bubble DANG! That poem is AWESOME, I was thinking to myself, WHOA because you put the exact words into my mouth, that's unbelievable how great you describe that feeling, I LOVE IT! - Kiersten
bubble That poem is well written and full of emotion. It also totally reminds me of my feelings for this girl at my school, who i love, but dont want to. - Joshua
bubble I really love this poem. I gave it to my boyfriend because it was so good. - kayla
bubble This poem is one of the best poems i have ever read i love it! - Kristin
bubble This poem is great and I can relate so much to it. Nice way to express your true feelings. - Kakela
bubble I enjoyed your poem becuase I now what it feel likes to be there. A guy in my life is playing me too. Thank you for writting this poem it helped me get over him. - Holly
bubble Your poem made me think of a guy i wanna be with and that i care about very much. its very good i like it alot - Suga Babi
bubble This is an amazing poem! I LOVE it! - Meghan
bubble this is an amazing poem i love it there is this guy that i feel the same way about - Rebecca
bubble This is a really good poem! - brandi
bubble Oh My God I cannot describe how much this poem relates to what I feel every day when I go to school. Ive been dating this guy for a few months but its quite casual but I'm completely in love with him. In lessons I just sit and stare at him and imagine him sleeping, it sounds wierd but at least now I know that someone else feels that way about somebody too - well done. - Jenny
bubble i really like this poem, i wish it was here when i felt like this about my best friend a few years ago!lol! i did get over it though, i found a guy i really love an me an my best friend now laugh about how we used to feel about eachother, cuz i jus found out that he had tha same feelings for me! - babygurl
bubble I like this poem alot! that is how i'm feelin right now about my x boy friend! We just broke up, he says he wants to be friends for a while then get back togethetr!I still love him and hope we are together thats the problem! - Megan
bubble caught the essence of what a person feels when falling in love and fearing what it might bring. wonderful poem. - AJ
bubble NICE POEM - Alisha
bubble This poem is 100% the best poem that I've ever seen. It describes how my girlfriend and I care about each other. This poem should be rated number one for how nice and true it is. - Kevin
bubble This poem PERFECTLY describes what I'm feeling right now about my crush. I know what's it's like to try to get over someone only to have those feelings rekindled again. But I absolutely loved this poem! I can really get a sense of how you feel about this person. Keep writing! :) - Tiffany
bubble when i read this it gave me butterflies in my stomach because its so for real! i loved it! - Bethany
bubble This poem reminds me of me when me and my boyfriend i still love broke up and how i still feel for him! I Love it a lot keep up the good work! - ashley
bubble I think this poem is very inspirational and it reminds me of the kinda of relationship I have with the guy I like, his name is antony. haha. Well baybee if you see diz, I love you! Hehe. it was quite good, it kinda inspired me to tell him how I really feel about him and the I love him, hehe. well, I wrote him a letter and now I know how he will know on Monday when I give him the letter along with his birthday present. Hehe. ! - Belinda
bubble wow. i hun i totally know how u feel. its like my words spoken by some1 else. great job on the poem. - Shannon
bubble Wow, thank you for that cooly cool cool of a cool poem! I feel the same way about a girl and just thanks for expressing it through your poem! - Justin
bubble Great poem. It makes me think of that someone and all the things you said. - Aaron
bubble Your poem reminds me of the painful yearning you feel for someone who doesn't ache for you in return. - Caitlin
bubble this is such a good poem, its exactly how i felt about a great friend of mine, i still love him but not like i did, kisses - louise
bubble i am in a situation right now. where they guy that i like is a friend. and i want to tell him so badly what he does to me. your poem was awesome and it tells everything that i am feeling right now! - Sarah
bubble i loved this poem!. it reminded me of my life, i love a teacher, and what u wrote is exactly what its like for me! - natasha
bubble I love your poem and it reminds me of how I feel everyday about this certain someone! I'd give it a 110! - Nicole
bubble I thought this poem was the best I would love tp hear some more thanks - Beth
bubble it is a great poem it totally describes what i feel about this girl in my school - Nick
bubble Your poem clearly describes in detail a love that is kept hidden from a person. I really like it because in my life it happens most of the time. - Denise
bubble i thought your poem was great i couldn't beleive how it could have discribe on how i felt before. It's just perfect - Rachel
bubble i love your poem. it reminded me of how i felt about my current g/f there is jsut something about her that i cant explain that has me lost in her eye's thank you for the memory. I would also like to turn your poem into a song - prince
bubble I want to thank you for writing this poem. My best friend is feeling the exact same feelings as you are and she had never really known how to express them. This poem really helped her! Great poem! - Amy
bubble I THINK THIS WAS A REALLY GREAT POEM AND IT TOUCH ME IN SO MANY WAYS U WILL NEVER KNOW. MY BOYFRIEND SENT THIS TO ME AND IT MADE MY DAY BETTER THANKS FOR WRITHINGA WONDERFUL PEOM. - REGINA
bubble I think this is so beautiful. I 100% identifies with myself. I've been in the exact situation and it almost makes me cry when I read it. Thanks - Jill
bubble THank you from the bottom of my heart for writng this poem. I feel the same way write now. I like this guy so much but I feel like hes playing with me. Sometimes he tells me things that make it seem like he likes me but then he acts so strange the next time we talk. I don`t know what in the world to do anymore. But it feels nice to know that i`am not the only one. Thanx again. - shawnee
bubble I love the poem. It's probably the best I've heard. I can relate so much to it. - Corey
bubble This poem really touches me. I know how it feels to love someone hopelessly but you cant have them. Please continue your wonderful work, you are a very talented poet. I admire the way you can just make words flow like that, i wish i had the same talent as you. - sw33tvi3tangel
bubble I love this poem! I can perfectly relate to your situation! You have inspired me to write more about it. ) - chantel
bubble your pome was reale goood i like it it made me cry i just want to tell you to keep the writting up - Ashley
bubble i love it. it made me think - shalia
bubble this was a great poem. means alot to me and how i feel about a guy - slugger
bubble it is a tru feeling of how i feel about a boy - slugger
bubble your poem was great the words were way good and i could really relate to them. instead with a girl u know. anyways i liked it a lot props to you keep writing you have a special talent - John
bubble your poem was really great and it really got to me. I can relate completely to the poem, except with they way a girl makes me feel. Good job - Garrett
bubble Wow i never thought how i felt could be put into words. But you did it wonderfully. I know how you feel because this very moment i feel the same way. Hang in their, and hopefully things will get better for us all. - Shelby
bubble OMG! it was great very moving i feel the same way about this boy! I loved the poem! Keep writing - Gracie
bubble I really love this pe4m i think this dude knows what to say! - Krystal
bubble GURL U JUST DON'T KNO HOW MUCH I AGREE WIT WHAT U ARE SAYIN! IT'S SO TRUE. IT'S LIKE U CAME IN MY MIND AND MADE IT INTO WORDS!THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT INSPIRING POEM! I WILL NEVER FORGET YOU AS LONG AS I LIVE! THANK YOU AGAIN ~PEACE, HOLLA, AND MUCH LUV! 1 - SHANTE
bubble This is a Really Good poem. I have felt the same way about someone, but i finally got to open up and express it to him. I have also written poems like this. but again yours is nice too. hopefully you will soon have the opportunity to let him know how you feel if you choose to do so. - Kay
bubble omg, this is excatly what happened to me awhile, i lost the guy i liked, to my best friend. we lost out friendship over it, but about 5 months later we shared something i think is the most specail night in my life. they are still together, but no matter what happens, that one i love, and no i cant have, is always the most specail in my heart! thanks for this awesome peom, i wish u all the luck! - Mel
bubble oh my god! wot a beaytiful poem. I luv it sooooo much. Bobby u r realy talented! well dun! - Soph
bubble Its a really great poem for anyone goin through that and im sure it would help them! - Christina
bubble i love ur poem i can really relate to it - Crystal
bubble wow. that is a REALLY good poem. it describes EXACTLY how i feel - Andrew
bubble i like this boy and i feel the smae way about him i cant beleave how u pin pointed it out just like me - karen
bubble i really, really enjoyed your poem! it is so good! it was also very, very touching 2 me. i can totally relate 2 this poem. i know it can be hard and rough, but u just have 2 keep goin no matter how hard it is. though it is really hard when u like some1 so much and they dont even know. just hang in there! - clink_gurl
bubble this poem is amazing! it says so many things at once. - LINdsay
bubble This is a great poem, i felt this way with my first true love after i saw her always with this guy it killed me to even look at her. This poems describes alot of feelings KEEP up the GREAT work. - Sana
bubble Every time I read this poem it makes me think of how i feel when I see this one guy. This is a very good poem. - Court
bubble i feel exactly the same! i could never express my feelings like the way you did! hope to read more of your poems. Godspeed!:) - Min
bubble it is a good pome and tell what you fill and what you want not to fill - becca
bubble this poem is one of my many favorites on this web site. It made me almost cry and I can relate to it . It really made me think about the relationships I have now. It was really touching. - lysa
bubble I love your poem it explains everything. Thank you so much for writeing that you have helpe me alot - Kelly
bubble This poem touchs my heart every time I read it. It's a beautiful work of art and should touch every ones heart who has ever experienced what you went through I have loved this girl for 2 years and I lost her to my friend but I relized that if I loved her as much as I said then I should get her back and I proposed to her and we are getting married on sEPTEMBER 21, 2004! Much love for all who read this poem find that person and don't let get away from you! - Eric
bubble This poem was a two thumbs up! It so described the sitiation Im in, sitting there, loving someone when they dont seem to notice, even after you've told them (thats my case) - Jerem
bubble dude that is the best poem i have heard in along time - Doug
bubble WOW!THAT WAS THE MOST TOUCHING AND HEART FELT POEM THAT I'VE READ SO FAR. I'M GOING TO PRINT IT OUT AND PUT IT ON MY WALL. CONTINUE DOIND WHAT YOU'RE DOING BELIEVE ME YOU WILL GO FAR! - nisha
bubble This poem totally says everything I am feeling at the moment, and it is really sad, I have been talking to this guy on the internet for some time then we started talking on the telephone, he was everything I had ever dreamed of, without seeing his face I knew in my heart he was the one, we finally met and yes he was all that I had hoped him to be and much more, the problem is I am still uncertain of how he fels about me, as the days go by I try to tell myself he will call but he has not - camile
bubble This WAS THE BEST POEM I HAVE READ IN A LONG TIME! I READ IT TO MY DUDE AND HE STARTED CYRING! YOU MAKE SOME LIKE THIS AND YOU COULD BECOME A GOOD POET! - ash
bubble My girlfriends loved this poem, it has helped me a lot. - Chad
bubble Dude i love that poem! i was wounderin if i could use it in a song for out band? i love it man! - Josh
bubble Well. this is deffinatly one of the best poems i*ve eva herd cuz i can relate to it. it*s so perfect 4 my ex-boyfriend that i STILL love to death. i just wish he cared about me the way i care about him - Kate
bubble I love this poemmm i could totally relate to it im goin through the same exact thing. and ur right about dreaming its all u got sometimes and without them its lonely - meg
bubble I think that this poem was great, wonderful usage of words! keep it goin'! - Deshanna
bubble Wow, what a wonderful poem! Its the kind you read and think, well, I guess it makes since. But then you get in deeper and you realize how beautiful and amazing the topic is. I can relate to this so easily! A lot of people must say that, but its the total truth. I feel in love with my best friend, and I could not have him. But now we are closer than friends. The poem is amazing! - Jenna
bubble This poem is great I love it! it explains that feeling you feel when your loving someone soooo bad and you just dont know what it is that keep you with him. I t explains the feeling of tue love! This poem is great! - Amber
bubble Oh my god this poem fits the way I feel about a guy so much. I really liked your poem. - Shyel
bubble I've been reading a lot of poems lately trying to find the right one to describe feelings I have for this guy I like. After about five months of reading I finally found one. This poem is amazing! It describes every feeling I have in the perfect words. It's beautiful. I absolutely adore it. - Marie
bubble I think that this is a wonderful piece. Great job. It is so true, many times over. - Tiffany
bubble wow, that is totally amazing. I read it over the phone to a guy i liked, and he was really touched by it and i just said "that's what i feel, think about it" and now he really likes me as well! - Holly
bubble I love this poem! It touched my heart as i read it. It explains my life very clear! - Kim
bubble Ryan this is what i think of you! - mel
bubble this is a great poem really touching :) GOOD STUFF! - Kayte
bubble wow. That was really beautiful. It sounds like that guy is really missing out. I am sorry you have to feel that way and not be able to share your love with him. - Meli
bubble I love your Poem! - Katie
bubble This poem is so true. Some boyz jus dont understand whut they be doin but some of them do. but until i get whut i want i will goin at it i want give up! - Shata
bubble I think that boby's poem is beatfull. The poem expresses falling in love to the fullest. This poem remindes me of my 3 year ex crush and currrent boyfriend. The poem was nice it expressed such deep feeling that could only could be expressed by a exact viarty of carefully picked words. The poem is wondrfull and i hope to see many more like it. - Meeka
bubble Your poem is so good. YOur story is just like mine except me i'm in love with a girl. and i'm girl. Neway, you got a lot of talent! - sara
bubble You did a really great job. You are very talented. This poem really hit home. - Danie
bubble I really loved your poem in fact is one of the best ones i've ever read. When i read it it reminded me of my self and my crush. right now im going to the same stuff that you are andi think that you're absolutely right sometimes all we have are dreams. :D - Karem
bubble This was a real work of art. A+ work! Continue to write these out - James
bubble I LOVED THIS POEM. IM IN LOVE WITH A BOY, AND HE JUST MAKES ME SEE A WHOLE OTHER SIDE OF LIFE. hE MAKES ME HAPPY WHEN I AM SAD AND MAKES MY DAYS SUNNY WHEN THEY ARE CLOUDY. THIS POEM TELLS ALOT. I LOVE IT. HOPE TO READ MORE JUST LIKE IT. - Angel
bubble I loved this poem it was really good and for me its so true how I feel about my best friend the guy in my life that makes me whole. But I can never get the chance to tell him that cause I love him so much that I don't want to lose him. - Love
bubble This is the poem which expresses the love i have for a guy. who Ive loved ever since year seven and now im in year 10 and i still love him. everytime i see him play the guitar i just feel my heart burst with saddness and love for him. it tears me apart. - lucia
bubble That was an awsome poem! It made butterflies in my stomach! I'm going to give it to my boyfriend. It's a A+! - Cris
bubble i really like this poem it reminds me of this boy in my school named Buck he's really cute but that's not why i like him he's smart,nice funny. but i mean he looks at me constitly and i do wonder what he thinks of me im like head over hill for this guy !This poem is the BOMB!lol - Lacie
bubble Oh my! That was the poem that explained the exact feelings i have for this guy. I dont know how he feels but i will soon find out. - Court
bubble this poem is exactly what goes through my mind when i see him i seem to analyize everything he does wether its intentional or not. i wish so badly he could see my point of view like this so he could understand what he puts me through. thank you i thought i was alone. - patri
bubble I really like your poem, i understand what your gong though i am in that situation right now. - KK
bubble Hey i will like to know what it is about my grul friend what it is that she did to me - rober
bubble I loved that poem what you do to me by Bobby Lincoln. It related most to my life now and I loved it. - R
bubble Your poetry was wonderful. you capture what i think every girl feels when her crush/boyfriend passes her by or when she looks at them i know thats what i feel anyway. thanks for the inspiration. I hope you get your man because i got mine so It's not impossible. Keep trying girl! - Jenny
bubble I love this poem it is probably one of the best I have read in a long time! - Brina
bubble Fantastic poem says alot means alot makes you feel alot - Dale
bubble I can't believe that someone other than myself is in the exact same prediciment. I have been in love with someone for the past 7 months and I feel the same way. Thank you for writing this poem, It has helped me realize that loving someone dosen't have to be the end of the worls after all. - Kelli
bubble This poem really got to me, It is exactly how I feel for the girl I love very much, Kirsty. Well Done, deserves a lot of credit. - Oli
bubble Hey, I really loved your poem because I feel exactly the same way. I know hear alot about this but it's really nice that someone is not too different from me. - Mel
bubble this poem relates to me because it is exactly how i feel about my love - lorie
bubble That is so awesome! I can totally relate to what you wrote! It sounds exactly like what I went through with my best friend! Now we are toghether! So tell him! Great Writing! - Tiff
bubble GREAT POEM! - Tina
bubble I really was touched by this poem because this is how I feel about my ex-girlfriend that I still love very much. - John
bubble I totally love your poem. It made me think about this guy that i loved for so long before he realized it. I am with him now and will stay that way for a long time. (I hope) - Nikki
bubble This poem really touched me because I feel the same way about this girl who does not know I even exist, it feels like. - Darnell
bubble I love this, it makes sense, and its partly how I feel! - Jenna
bubble THIS POEM IS TITE! - YOUNGSTA
bubble best pome i readed in a long time. - Lillian
bubble This is exactly how I feel. This poem gives me chills every time I read it, it's beautiful. - Chris
bubble this is so totally what i'm going through. i feel like he knows i like him and that i just add to his ego when i'm around. i mean we're really good friends to boot but him having the knowledge that i like him i think makes him want me around more. your poem pierces me in the heart. Your poem is really awesome. - Lyl
bubble That was really good. Finally a poem that actually describes something REAL. - Lexi
bubble i loved this poem alot..it made me think of this guy im so in love with and when i talkto him he makes me wanna burst and tell him how i feel.! - tessa
bubble this was a really touching poem and i could really relate toit ALOT! I think it was great and id like to see more of them. - TeBeth
bubble i love this poem it is just exactly the way i feel about the guy i like, thanx it is truly good - chrarlize
bubble i loved ur poem. it was amazing.i have the same feelings for somone that i love and ur poem truly described them. i just wish that someone that we love would know how we feel. - Anastasia
bubble I really like this peom because it reminds me of how I feel when I seen my friend Brian. i feel as if I could just die when he dosent show to see me or if he dosent talk to me when hes around me! - Brooke
bubble oh my god! your poem seems to speak straight from my heart to the woman im in love with! very awesome poem! - Weber
bubble Hmmm. so sweet. - boycrazy
bubble This poem is the greatest cuz it is exactly how i feel about my x-gf soon to be gf I LOVE THIS POEM! - Brian
bubble hey this poem is very good i felt like this i mean the same way. but then i told the guy how i felt and now we are together b/c he felt the same way. tell this guy how you feel im serious it just might work - Loree
bubble this poem was awesome.i can relate to it so much.this is how i felt about this one guy named chris.but now we are together and i am the happiest i have ever been.i liked him and only him for 2 years before we got together - Erika
bubble hey i jus wnated to say i love ur poem..i can relate to it with the situation im in right now with a guy but he has a gf so it makes it worse! neway great poem - KaTe
bubble The intro to the poem touched me more than the poem itself. I can really relate to what shes feeling: EXACTLY - Patricia
bubble I thought the poem was great! - hannah
bubble I know exactly where you are coming from. I hate being in this position. I think this si a really good poem and you are a terrific writer. Keep up the good work. - Cynthia
bubble ya sittin on a rocket of potential - tom
bubble This is the greatest poem ever.This is exactly how i feel like everytime im around that guy,talking to him,ne thing its like hes just wanting me to know that im not the one but he wants me to continue pleading for him! - tasha
bubble That poem was beautiful! I loved it! It touched my heart and just made me think..What does people think of me?..Wonder who likes me?..Why do they like me?.etc. Not many poems makes me think, thanx alot and I love this poem So0O much! - jamie
bubble I love your poem so much! It hits so close to home for me. I know exactly how you feel! I feel taht way about this one guy I always see but, you're lucky because I have never even talked to him! (i'm too shy) I really LOVED your poem! It touched me:) - VaNeSsA
bubble This is a really beautiful poem because it is very emotional.I too understand the pain of somebody ignoring true love. Keep up the good work! - cassy
bubble I really loved your poem. It so reminded me of my botfriend,my love, that I am with right now. - lauren
bubble WOW GIRL I LOVED IT KEEP WRITING AND I WILL KEEP VOTING - Stephanie
bubble geesh! that poem it tyte i luv it - ashley
bubble Great poem, best ever. Im glad to know that people feel the same way too. thanx for making me realize reality - Jenn
bubble That was a great peom, I read this to my soon to be girlfriend and she loved it thankyou - aaron
bubble SWEET! - Eau'
bubble That is a beautiful poem. Reminds me of alot. - Adam
bubble Great poem bobby, i love it i have a girl i like and i watch her all the time and it makes me go crazy when i can't be with her or talk to her - jessica
bubble This poem is very well written. It is exactly the way I feel about my friend Justin. I'm so glad to know I'm not the only one! Thanks! - Amy
bubble Your poem was beautiful! It relates so much to how I feel about someone right now! I actually wanted to cry when I read this poem! Keep on writing poems! - Alina
bubble i just wanted to say i give you props for this poem because this is how i feel at this moment and i about to dedicate it to someone special - Roxy
bubble That was a very touching poem. I never thought i would find a poem that would explain how it is i feel for this ceartain someone. I have liked Rich for 6 years now. I love him so much, yet i dont think he will ever think the same for me, it really really hurts. Great poem! - Tiffany
bubble your poem was just.well u cant really put into words. But it hit me hard cuase i feel the same way. I miss my gurlfriend so much ill cry. She just does this thing to me and i dont know wut it is. REaLLY good poem. - Nick
bubble I was trying to find a good love poem, and then I read "What it is you do to me" and I loved it. I read that poem all the time, Ive read alot of love poems that they make you read in school by all those famous poets, but this poem blows those other poems away. - Todd
bubble this was one of the best poems ive ever read, it got so deep, that i started crying. it is exactly how i feel, every word was perfect. you are a great writer, keep it up! it felt like it touched my heart - ashley
bubble I know exactly how the author feels. I've fallen for a girl and she's a really good friend and all but whenever I'm around her, i feel like everything just slid into place. I hope the author writes more that are this true. - Herbert
bubble This poem flowed really nicely without using a ryhme scheme. I liked it very much. - misty
bubble I'm only 15 and i see much heart of what you put into this poem, i can actually feel the sensations of the thoughts , and it reminds me of the crush i had and i see it a inspiration, I tip the hat for you, on your job well done. - Matt
bubble I LOVE IT! - Claudia
bubble I thought this poem was awesome! I know exactly how you felt because I fell in love with my best friend. It's a wonderful and horrible feeling at the same time! Great poem! - Krysten
bubble This poem is amazing! I loved it! Please write more! Your an awesome artist! Keep it up! - Princess_angel
bubble omg i loved it that was like totally how i wanted to tell the guy i like that i liked him and u just took the words right outta my mouth thank u u have a special talent - Kat
bubble WOW! that poem was beautiful. it describes my feelings exactly. thanks for sharing this. it was awesome. - Brent
bubble I adored this poem. It says in words exactly how I feel. I never thought that was possible unitl now. Keep writing because you are good! - veronica
bubble This poem relates to how i feel about my boyfriend. I could never discribe the strong feelings i felt in words until i read this person. Now I know what i feel is right. Thankz - Kristi
bubble Hey~ This is such an awesome poem. I read it and it explained my exact feelings for this one guy. I sent it to him and then we got hooked up. So I can thank you and your awesome poem for my 3 month relationship. - Destiny
bubble WOW! DIS IS SO SWEET! Dis IS AWESOME. You really FEEL what you write and I also felt it. DAMN! - Aelaine
bubble The poem was great man. the content was awesome. - Simmons
bubble Wow, i nearly felt liked crying, it was beautiful. I'm in the same situation and it's hard, but this poem has inspired me to hold on a little longer! thanx - aimz
bubble Oh my god.I can feel you!I am facing this right now with a guy..It is so painful.And the worst thing is that i know i can have him but his best friend likes me so w MUSTN'T do anything caus ehe won't betary him..And i want him badly - Katerina
bubble This poem was great. There's this girl i really like and i can feel what you're sayin. - Brent
bubble This poem was really cute.Thats how im thinking or feel about - amanda
bubble that is a very good poem i realt to it alot i hope u keep on writing - jessica
bubble I love this poem! IT REALLY REMINDED ME OF ME AND MY BOYFRIEND AND HOW HE FEELS ABOUT ME! SO THANK YOU FOR WRITING SUCH A BEUTIFUL POEM. - Erica
bubble It is totally great peom. I like this peom! Well done! :O).. - Mandy
bubble I love this poem. this is what I feel for the one i'm in love with. - Kim
bubble I loved that poem because it reminded me of my ex boyfriend! Bobby Lincoln- I Love You, your my hero! - Annie
bubble Dis poem be totallee hype yoh! It expresses da way I used to feel bout dis guy i loved off foh sooo long! i'm presently involved in a relationship na, but when i read dis poem it reminded meh of how much i loved dat guy. - flip
bubble wow! this is a really good poem i love it! - lupita
bubble Whoa! This is one of the best poems that I have ever read. It totally explains how I feel about this guy. It was awesome. - Monica
bubble it's a wonderful poem! - ashley
bubble I loved your poem it touched my heart and its excectly how i feel about this guy ..i loved very much im sending it to all my friends GREAT JOB - Maja
bubble I LOVED IT. ITS HOW I FEEL FOR MY BOYFRIEND IN EVERY WAY - tara
bubble I am a poet and I think you have talent. I enjoy this peice because of its unique way of describing. Many times I have felt like this and never thought that a poet could ever express it into words. When I read your work I felt a tear roll down my cheek. Maybe my b/f will realize what I have been tring to tell him if I give him this poem. - Vicki
bubble THIS POEM IS DA BOMB, IT BRONGS BACK ALOT OF MEMORIES. BASICALLY THIS POEM IS TIGHT WORK! - LE'SHELLE
bubble AWSOME.perfect,just how i feel for hopefully my soon to be girlfriend..ashley. - k
bubble i love it! the words are so sweet and fonding! just a masterpiece! - karen
bubble wow! reading that poem was like you were reading my mind! i have definitly been in your shoes.great poem. - amanda
bubble This poem was the best love poem that i have ever read. right now this is happening to me and i don't know what to do. when i read this i felt like i was going to cry. this was the best poem and will be till i die. - Jennifer
bubble i love this poem so much because it tells my story an what i'm going through it describes me so much it's great!! - nicki
bubble I really did enjoy the poem because it just told how i felt about this one person. It really put how I felt about about this one person down on paper. - Ebonie
bubble omg,that was a kicking poem,its really sad tho, i think that was the best poem i have ever read - andrew
bubble very good poem..its exactly how i feell. - Ediana
bubble it was very touching.i sent it to the girl of my dreams.ill give it a 9.5 out of 1-10 rating. - kyle
bubble this mad me cry and think of my very sweet boyfriend!!! - melissa
bubble this is a very true and emotional poem .... if i were to rate it it would be a 10 - Attia
bubble I can identify with your poem and I actually wrote one that has strong similarities. It's a great poem! - lynn
bubble Tight. thats all im gonna say. - Sosa
bubble very very good!!!! - angela
bubble I was so shocked when I read this poem. It describes EXACTLY how I feel about this guy! The guy I REALLY like knows I like him & he flirts with me, but then he gets on these "Crazy" sprees and ingores me, flirts and kisses all these other girls while I'm around. Since he found out I like him, I guess he thinks he has me in "Check" and can go and mess with all these other girls and then come back to me later.... cause he knows I'll be there. It really hurts when he uses me as an "ego" booster! He is a really good friend and always makes me laugh, but if he only knew WHAT HE WAS DOING TO ME!!!! Thanks soooo much for writting this poem, I'm so glad there is someone out there who can relate to my "GUY" promblems. THANKS, SHELLEY NORRIS - Shelley
bubble i really,really like this and i would give it an 11 on a scale from 1 to 10 so thanks... - Steven
bubble i love that poem its just like what i feel about this guy....keep it up - Roxy
bubble I thought the poem is true in many ways, only people who have went through it can understand it, that's what I like about it. This poem just explains it all. It's really good! - Amber
bubble I loved it - brittany
bubble this poem reminds me so much about my girlfriend and i feel every word when i look at her. it is a great love poem give my complements the the author - alex
bubble your poem is bad ass. it took me back into some faded memories that i'd forgotten, but still exist.i really love the way you displayed such strong emotion.peace out. -archangel - paul
bubble WOW!!!! I love this poem!!!!!!!!! - amber
bubble perfect - poh
bubble That was a great poem. It reminded me that I'm not the only one. - Ryan
bubble THIS POEM IS AWESOME, CUZ IT REMINDS ME OF HOW I FEEL FOR MY BEST FRIEND MIKE. HOW EVERY TIME I SEE HIM I GET BUTTERFLIES IN MY TUMMY...... - Tara
bubble this poem was truly very touching and very very good.. - jenn
bubble Great poem, it really touches your heart. - Dayna
bubble this is a lovely poem. bravo! - dusty
bubble I love this poem. this has been the best just far. Keep up the good work Bobby! - Tamesha
bubble this was really good! - meg
bubble This poem says everything about how i feel about this guys that goes to my school. I only wish i had the guts to send it to him. - Mona
bubble I can relate. Very moving for me. - Parn
bubble I really like this poem. I'm 12 years old and I know what this situation is like. Believe me! And I'm also into poetry, and I, uh, I guess I really wanna write a good poem.a really good poem.like this one. - Unwanted
bubble this poem is so good. oh my gosh, this person is so talented. i hope to hear more poems from you soon! - Amanda