Losing Yet Again by Katie
Love in my life is like sand,
I give it care and attention,
Then a strong gust of wind sifts it through my hand,
I lose yet again
I give it care and attention,
Then a strong gust of wind sifts it through my hand,
I lose yet again
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Love in my life is like wind, it blows my heart and soul around. You win some and you lose some. I wrote this poem when I was only 16, after I broke up with my first true love - who I will always love in my own funny way.
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This is so me. So much like what I'm feeling right now. Sometimes, I think of why it's too hard for me to find the love of my life, why do I always have to end up broken-hearted. why do I have to endure this pain. - azu |
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I loved your poem it was very good it I go through the same thing getting and losing everytime - Kesha E. |
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as confusing as the poem is , i understand it & love it ! - Missy |
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although it is very short,but it has deep meanings. i can feel it quite well - lubna |
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. I'm sorry - talia |
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OH IM LOVING THIS POEM. THIS REMINDS ME OF MY RELATIONSHIPS. - Jessica |
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so short but yet the poem is very true. - janelle |
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Wow. Amazing. I love it. It's perfect. I can invision it and it is so true. - requel |
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The story of my life! - THELICIA |
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i think this is an awesome poem. its so short yet its screaming out many different words. GREAT JOB on expressing your feelings through yet so little words. i think its very touching and its worth a thousand meanings. its wonderful - Jordann |
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this was a wonderful poem. it describes just how i feel. at my graduation i saw a guy that i havent seen in 5 years and yet, i talked to him for about 10 minutes and then he left again. i long to see him again, i cant get him off my mind and this poem says it all, once i love a guy, he's gone in a split second. - lauren |
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nice poem. one of the best 4 me - jc |
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i really like this pome it is so me. - kelly |
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even though it was short it was very very meangingful, at least to me. great job! - schy |
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I like it. It is right to the point! - Kristen |
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Exactly my feelings right now. - Prakruti |
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i thought the poem was very good, it tells all lot about how love relly is,all though it was short i enjoyed it very muck and i will share it with my friends. - CECILIA |
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i love it it shourt and to the point iv been there a lot - sillysilla |
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I thought this poem was awesome! It's short but each word is so deatiled it's like it has 1000 words! And i can definatly can see where you are coming from with the whole sand thing :) - Lydz |
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Awsome analegy with the sand. Cuz really, thats how it felt like. She was there, so perfect then all of a sudden lost and i could never bring it back. - DJ |
