Big Mistake by Klynn
Of all the mistakes I've ever made,
falling in love with you, makes the grade.
Months of fighting for what I thought was mine.
When you could really care less,
and hurting me was just fine.
When reality hit, and the tears finally fell.
You Shrugged your shoulders,
hung up, and said "Oh well! "
You might have won this battle
of breaking my heart.
But your day will come
when all you have is lost, and fallen apart.
Though I'm not the type to cheer pain on,
When it comes your way.
I'll be the first to say,
"He got what he deserves, the low- life con!"
Well good- bye for now is the last I'll say.
And I can't wait for your sad, hurtful, and lonely day!
falling in love with you, makes the grade.
Months of fighting for what I thought was mine.
When you could really care less,
and hurting me was just fine.
When reality hit, and the tears finally fell.
You Shrugged your shoulders,
hung up, and said "Oh well! "
You might have won this battle
of breaking my heart.
But your day will come
when all you have is lost, and fallen apart.
Though I'm not the type to cheer pain on,
When it comes your way.
I'll be the first to say,
"He got what he deserves, the low- life con!"
Well good- bye for now is the last I'll say.
And I can't wait for your sad, hurtful, and lonely day!
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First let me say that I am not a frequent poem writer, but with all the pain and violence (domestic especially) going on these days, I searched my notebook of miscellaneous "stuff" thinking it would be a great idea to share with others a bit of my past. You might say it's a poem of abuse, and let me add that I still say; "I would rather be hit because a bruise disappears, but the emotional, verbal, and psychological abuse stays with you forever!"
I wrote this approximately 5 years ago, after a year long relationship that was based on lies and deception and a little illusion. And before that, I was involved for 3 years in a relationship of abusive hell. This poem was written when I couldn't take anymore.
On a happier note, I am now living in paradise, and found a love most only dream about!
I wrote this approximately 5 years ago, after a year long relationship that was based on lies and deception and a little illusion. And before that, I was involved for 3 years in a relationship of abusive hell. This poem was written when I couldn't take anymore.
On a happier note, I am now living in paradise, and found a love most only dream about!
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Well it wasa a wondeful poem! - rosa |
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Omg i really love this poem! i know where you are coming from with this! i just got out of a relshonship like this! you did really great work! KEEP IT UP! - Toni |
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You went really deep in expressing how your previous boyfriend treated you. It sounded sad to hear that he didn't care when you were in pain but I'm glad you're okay now. I'm happy you finally found a person that treats you better. Surely it's not easy to forget broken relationships and how love can be painful but with the aid of time, everything can change. - Carolina |
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I can really relate to this poem. This poem is great! - Charley Jo |
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I really liked your poem! - Diana |
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this poem describes me complety very gud - jess |
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Put it down as i wrote it i would hate to see this get taken off. people need to read this. its very true. and i love this poem. this one describes my life better than i could even. - JC |
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because i went through something similar - Kristie |
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This poem spoke to me. I may be a guy and your poem is about some guy that hurt you, but I can relate by changing the he to a she. Hey guys, feel just as much as girls do, but anyways I enjoyed reading your poem. - Quang |
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well am overwelmed by this poem. am so proud of the author, its like he/she was reading my mind to know wats going on. to me you write this poem just for me and it reminds me of a similar situation that i was in when i found out that i was pregnant. thanks for letting me know that i'm not a lone. - karlene |
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this poem rock aye - Cherie |
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my eyes are still sore frm cryin, i wish i could submit my poem. was in an out of abusive relationship for 26 yrs chucked him out 2 mths ago. - debbie |
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that poem is so much like my ex its unbelieveable omgosh - zoe |
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This was a great poem but it also happens to guys too. - Jeff |
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I loved it - Victoria |
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i know how you felt - Ashley |
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This was a good poem! I can really relate to it! - Taylor |
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I love this poem. - Shan |
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The poem describes just how i feel. I LOVE IT! - Jocelyn |
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how did u come up wit this poem. well anyways it was reely touchy and i jus got out of a relationship like dat. well hope u email me. - Evelyse |
