Wet by Kate J.
Languidly parting the moist curtain.
he slides into the smooth vessel.
the color of fire pink velvet.
his large hands securely wielding the creamy white handles,
firmly manipulating them until
just a trickle of foamy liquid flows forth.
She faces him, their eyes, reflecting pools of love,
lock on each other. embracing, both, with body and soul,
they melt together in the steamy atmosphere.
memories flood as her neck arches and wet kisses cover her throat.
teasing one another in the aquamarine Caribbean ocean.
causing rough ripples to fan out across the water of a swimming pool
as
they
played.
discovering new things as a soft summer rain, like the sound of a
tinkling
xylophone, soaked them.
Aromas of citrus, colognes and faintly, the sea
drift and swirl around them.
skin drenched, rivulets of salty sweat stream between them.
sauna heat builds as temperatures rise.
flesh moves with synchronized, frantic fluidity.
a torrential river violently rushes into a cascading waterfall.
drowning in a frenzied whirlpool, gasping for air, silent screams.
then the peace of a tranquil, crystal clear lake prevails
and the relaxation of a hot spraying shower returns,
as she lovingly shampoos his hair
he slides into the smooth vessel.
the color of fire pink velvet.
his large hands securely wielding the creamy white handles,
firmly manipulating them until
just a trickle of foamy liquid flows forth.
She faces him, their eyes, reflecting pools of love,
lock on each other. embracing, both, with body and soul,
they melt together in the steamy atmosphere.
memories flood as her neck arches and wet kisses cover her throat.
teasing one another in the aquamarine Caribbean ocean.
causing rough ripples to fan out across the water of a swimming pool
as
they
played.
discovering new things as a soft summer rain, like the sound of a
tinkling
xylophone, soaked them.
Aromas of citrus, colognes and faintly, the sea
drift and swirl around them.
skin drenched, rivulets of salty sweat stream between them.
sauna heat builds as temperatures rise.
flesh moves with synchronized, frantic fluidity.
a torrential river violently rushes into a cascading waterfall.
drowning in a frenzied whirlpool, gasping for air, silent screams.
then the peace of a tranquil, crystal clear lake prevails
and the relaxation of a hot spraying shower returns,
as she lovingly shampoos his hair
This poem was written while caught in the rain, realizing just how important a part "wet" has been in my life.
| Brilliantly done! I couldn't have said it better myself! Wow, I think I need to go have a cigarette. - Michelle | |
| your poem was the bomb. The way you described this expirience is amazing. I could tell by the way you write you are very intelligent and I encourage you please write more so I can read them. holla - Britany | |
| Wow, this is awesome! - Martha | |
| Lovely - well balanced with an excellent ending! Congratulations to you Kate! - IJ | |
| This poem is great and I think that every couple that is love should read it so they will know the real meaning of love. - Sara | |
| that poem wuz off da chia-ain - Qouri | |
| That was a beautiful poem how you described everything it was very good. - Liz | |
| this poem was tyte - princess69 | |
| the words paint both image and emotion. i could feel something move inside my soul as i read this, something sensual and tantalizing. excellent poem. - Josh | |
| i like the way you described everything. It is definatly something you would give to someone you are sexualy involved and in love with. - virginia | |
| Objectively - The poem (as literature) is fantastic, impossible that anything sweeter exists. BRAVO! - Christopher | |
| WOW, this poem creates emotions and imagination as I was reading it. It's great man, I love it! - Rich | |
| what's your number? - jim | |
| A very good poem. - t | |
| nice poem - Blackbeard | |
| I Loved this Poem, It was Sexual but Beautiful and Erotic. - Demitrius | |
| Jenny, lmao! about the poem, I actually liked it, it was a bit confusing. but a great poem. - Adam | |
| Wow! That was great! - Kervis | |
| wow..i love how you made what you were saying..into something else. It was truely beautiful, and this poem puts into words how i feel when i am with "him", absolutely beautiful - sara | |
| The plot was so complete and well put together I've never read anything slightly similar - L.W | |
| what the hell is this poem about? - Jenny | |
| I love tthis poem, Kate! I love all the water... - Susan | |
| I received this poem from a friend on Valentines Day. And it described us to a tee - Simmone | |
| Wow this is a great piece of work. I really totally see everything as it happens. Wonder job. - Chad | |
| A very sensual and erotic poem. Wonderfully weaves the deep passion of a sexual act, within the surroundings of nature. - Robert | |
| This is wonderful. - Kim | |
| I love this one ! - Oma |
