My Heaven by Kamma Roberts
I look deep in your eyes.
I see there what I feel inside.
We share something between us,
Neither one of us can hide.
I feel your lips touch mine,
I loose all my control,
All it took was a look and a kiss,
To know you were part of my soul.
I see your hands on my skin,
I want and need you to do more,
The passionate look you give me,
Tells me heaven is in store.
I feel your need against my thigh,
I know you will fulfill every wish,.
We were made to fit together,
And all it took was a look and a kiss.
I look deep in your eyes,
And I see heaven there inside,
You make me feel so beautiful,
What I feel for you I cannot hide.
I see there what I feel inside.
We share something between us,
Neither one of us can hide.
I feel your lips touch mine,
I loose all my control,
All it took was a look and a kiss,
To know you were part of my soul.
I see your hands on my skin,
I want and need you to do more,
The passionate look you give me,
Tells me heaven is in store.
I feel your need against my thigh,
I know you will fulfill every wish,.
We were made to fit together,
And all it took was a look and a kiss.
I look deep in your eyes,
And I see heaven there inside,
You make me feel so beautiful,
What I feel for you I cannot hide.
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This was written for man that has shown me how to receive and share, not just give. I can only try to describe how he makes me feel, I hope someone else can relate to this poem, everyone should be this close to heaven just once.
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Wow, what an amazing poem, it certainly was very moving. Thank you - Lesley |
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Amazing. Truly amazing. Some one who can say what i am sure a lot of people feel. - Shawna |
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My sailor is defiently "my heaven"! Beautiful work! - Heather |
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I REALLY ENJOYED READING YOUR POEM IT REALLY TOUCHED ME. AND I CAN ABSOULUTELY RELATE BECAUSE ALL IT TAKES IS FOR MY BOYFRIEND TO LOOK AT ME AND I GO CRAZY. - APRIL |
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ABSOLUTELY INTOXICATING! I sent this to my boyfriend because it said everything that I wanted to say to him. Thankyou! - Frances |
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oh man. i like this. keep it real. - candy |
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I LOVE IT! It explains exactly how I feel for my husband! U r a TRUE poet! - Amy |
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this poem is the best one i have ever read it take the words right out of my mouth GREAT JOB! - CRYSTAL |
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i loved it ! - kayley |
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it was so nice coz it is like me an this boy so thank you so much for that - taryn |
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i think that this poem is awsome you done really good on it - keandra |
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This is a awesome poem. It captures exactly what I feel for my love. Thanks for the great writing. - Dawn |
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I loved it - Ashley |
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Took the words right out of my mouth. Great Job! - Tee |
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ilike it it was good i hope u make some n=more oems about love - yvonne |
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I thought this was awesome. Nice very nice. - erica |
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This poem tells everything that i see in my boyfriend you are a good poem writer - Megan |
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This poem says all i wanted to say to my boyfriend. The way you put it was just so wonderful. You're a great poet. - Sara |
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Wow, that was Amazing. I never thought there was anyone out there who felt the way I did. I am glad to know that there are others who feel the amazing love that I feel. - lisa |
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this poem touched my heart because everything i says is true to me the person that i am go out with is my heaven i can not live without him and if one day he leaves me it will fell like hell!so this has all the vote from me! - Silvia |
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Very good! - Andrea |
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outstanding poem. it describes every thing so well and it is also words i have been looking for to tell my boyfriend. you did and awsome job on that poem keep up the good work. - cassie |
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A very beautiful poem. I really enjoyed this piece. - H |
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i loved the poem it realy discribes how the poet feels. - jennifer |
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This poem was awsome, I have been married to my husband for 3 years, been together for 9 years. When i read this it brought me back to the first day i saw him, and the first day we made love. all i have to say is thank you and WOW. - amanda |
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I really love this poem, it is like how i feel about a certain guy in my life. Awsome Work - Tracey |
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How powerful, it most ceretainly brought tears to my eyes and overwhelmed my heart with those most wonderful words. I most ceretainly can relate have been there plenty of times in my life. Thank You for such powerful words so deeply exspressed. - Willette |
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I think that this poem is exactly how I feel about my fiance of 5 yrs! Thank you for writting with your heart. Weird that someone you don't even know can help you explain your love for someone! Thank you - Heaven Marie |
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THAT WAS A GOOD POEM. I GAVE MY BOYFRIEND THAT POEM AND HE HAS IT ON HIS WALL. HE REALLY LOVES IT. EVERY TIME HE LOOKS AT IT HE LOOKS AT ME AND HE COMES TO ME AND GIVES ME A BIG KISS. - AMANDA |
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Outstanding! - Mona |
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I loved it. I am in a relationship right now and everything you wrote applies. He is my heaven. thank you for putting into words. - Elizabeth |
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Beautiful! You just described what I have been trying to find the words for. Thank you for sharing! - michelle |
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I THINK THIS POEM SAYS IT ALL FOR PEOPLE WHO HAS TOOK IN TRUE LOVE. - LORI |
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This poem describes exactly how my boyfriend/future husband makes me feel inside and out. This is a wonderful, perfect poem that you have written. I will keep a look out for your name in the future, if I need a love/romance poem again - Jewels |
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this poem really touched me, it put into words how I feel about the one that I love. I write poetry to, you are my new inspiration! - Lisa |
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this poem is very sweet i love it this is the 1st poem I've ever like on this web site - Danyell |
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this poem is beautiful it captured my heart i sent it to my boyfriend and he seemed to fall for me more knowing id sent such a poem that bonded us together thanks for this wonderful artwork in words - sarah |
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LOVE IT! love it love it love it. - ZeZe |
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I just read your poem My Heaven. Since i can't write poems I used this poem and sent it to my girlfriend who i really love b/c the words you used describe everything i feel for her. She will be very happy. She just got out of a hospital. So thx for the poem. - Lucas |
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I Love this poem. My boyfriend is in the army and Im teying to find the perfect poem to send him. This is the one. Thank you! - Lisa |
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I have one word to say "Beautiful" - maria |
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This is so beautiful! I sent it to my husband today. It's the best poem I've read! - Stacy |
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Perfect! - Patti |
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Awesome. Describe what I feel for the man of my life. And the day we met. - dee |
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I love this poem. Anyone who read this poem wolud tell you the same. - migue |
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this is so beautiful. i have found love with a friend of 15 yrs and this is how i feel . WOW! - toni |
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great poem! - bill |
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I LOVED it! Totally captures what I have been feeling with my lover! Thank you. - Jenna |
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I love this peom. It express how I feel about my man. Thank you for writing it and share with me. - Sandy |
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I loved the poem it was truly remarkable. My boyfriend loves poems but I am not a very good writer. - Sarah |
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OH MY GOODNESS. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED YOUR POEM. SO MUCH OF IT DESCIRBES FEELINGS THAT I HAVE. I SHIVERED WITH EVERY LINE THAT I READ. IT IS WONDERFUL - JENN |
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The best word that I can think of to describe this great poem is "WOW"! Loved it! - Michelle |
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This poem is beautiful. It reminds me of the very first time i saw my boyfriend, it really only take one look and one kiss. The poet really knows what she's talking about. - Stacey |
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This is exactly how I feel about my husband. I couldn't of said it better. You are great! - Darla |
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Awesome (simply put) - BoNNo |
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When I read this poem, I immediately knew that it was meant for me and the love of my life. Being myself a poet, I can feel the passion that the writer has and I can truly relate. Love is a beautiful thing and this poem expresses the beautiful thing that is love - Nesha |
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I REALLY LOVE YOUR POEM IT WAS BEAUTIFUL - SWEET |
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One word : Beautiful! - Hal |
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this was the best poem i have read in a long time. i can't even put words in my mouth to describe how good it was.. it is actually how i feel about my boyfriend. - Erin |
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I REALLY LOVED THIS POEM. IT SUMMED EVERY THING I FEEL, I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT TO HER. THANKS. - MICHAEL |
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i love this poem it reminds me of me and my boyfriend i love it so much - wardenwa |
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This is so true I can't believe i read this! It is great. It relates to me so much. I just got backk from seeing this guy and I feel this way right now. I was with him for 2 years and it was over. Maybe it will happen again.. - Barbara |
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IT'S A REALLY GREAT POEM - JANET |
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Lovely poem, just the words I wanted to say to my new friend - Barbara |
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I LOVED this poem it actually took a look and a kiss for me and my fiance to realize that we were the one for each other :) - Princesa |
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It reminded me of my relationship. It's a great poem - kandisweet |
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it was hot - mymy |
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Your poem gave me butterflies it really touched me - Melissa |
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as sson as i started reading this poem i teared up and by the end i was crying. It says everything that this one person means to me. thank you - Thompson |
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this is everything i feel when i'm with him, plus some. he makes me feel as though nothing could go wrong, he makes me feel like an angel - sara |
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This poem is sweet.... - Sweet-Roz |
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girl, i know what you are talking about. when i look into my man's eyes and feel his kiss i feel like i'm the qeen of the world. he makes me feel like an angel. he is a keeper. - kira |
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Beautifully written..describes exactly how I feel about my boyfriend. Never thought any words could possible describe that, I was wrong lol. :o) - Jamie |
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I loved your poem you said everything I wanted to say but couldn't find the words. Your poem touch a place in my soul. Very good work keep it up. - Cristy |
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I love this poem! When i read it i thought you my boyfriend. It is so sweet! - Megan |
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Man I am really feeling this poem because I am in a situation that this poem relates to I give it a 10 you have imagination, that's a plus. - Kristie |
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Ireally like this poem keep them coming - dee |
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i loved this poem. you did a great job. this is how i feel with my fiance. - ashley |
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Perfect, I loved it. This is exactly what I wanted to read! - Julie |
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I thought that this was a great poem and it describes how I feel about my loved one and I thought I would have never found something that would actually describe how I feel for him. Glad that I could read this. - Monica |
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This is a wonderful piece of writing .. - Kristi |
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I completely agree with what this poem says, I have definitely been there before :) - Heather |
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this is a very good poem'i like it - dan |
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Brilliant - Keith |
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I really can relate to this poem. It is exactly what I feel for my boyfriend. I'm going to read it to him tonie when I see him. YOU GO GIRLFRIEND! - Petra |
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I liked this peom so very much, excellent job:) - Layla |
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you did a beautiful job on that. - james |
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this poem was beautiful and anyone who s ever loved can relate to this poem - Tammy |
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i loved the poem, and the way your feelings were expressed in words - kristin |
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This poem is so sweet! I like it alot! - Lita |
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I absolutely LOVED the poem My Heaven. It totally describes how I feel for my love; only I could not put it into words. Thank you so much. - Katie |
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I really love this poem.It relates on the relationship that me and my boyfriend sharing now. This poem is wonderful! - Sheila |
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your poem was wonderful. I understood yo completely. I'm a poet myself and your work is very extrodinary. Keep on writing. - Stacy |
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that's a great poem I like they way you say all of your feelings from your heart good poem - Dustin |
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The poem flowed smoothly... and it was Lovely... - Heart_of_Jazz |
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This a poem that lovers can relate. - Amber |
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I can relate to it. I think I might send this to my boyfriend. - Marla |
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While this poem was written for and by a woman, this man thought it expressed his thinking so well that he sent it to his love. - Lawry |
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i coudn't find the words, so you did it for me! It's a beautiful poem, it really is, it discrives how you can feel about someone else, what you feel for someone else, just in the right words! thanx - Anne-Marie |
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This poem is beautiful, it says just what I feel, I'm making a collage of beautiful sayings for him for Valentine's day, and this is just what I was looking for!! - Tara |
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This was a beautiful poem. :) - Carey |
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I very much relate to this poem I have the joy of having someone who makes me feel this special in my life, just want to say that this is a beautiful poem and that its true everything you say on it ..True Love Does Exist you describe it very well. - AMV |
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This poem realy got to me it reminds me of me and my boyfriend and i love it very much. - Beth |
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Absolutely beautiful. I wish I'd written it - Molly |
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This poem I really liked because sometimes just a look and a kiss is all you need. - Johnny |
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i really enjoyed reading your poem - Sarah |
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surely I was this close to heaven once. - linamanas |
