Always by Richard LeGault
I wish you were here
I wish you were close
and those are the times that I'm wishing the most.
I gave you that ring you wear on your hand
and like time in an hour glass, you slip away like sand.
I want you so bad to hold, and to touch
and that is because I love you so much.
And I want you to know whatever you do
I will always be here
and I will always love you.
I wish you were close
and those are the times that I'm wishing the most.
I gave you that ring you wear on your hand
and like time in an hour glass, you slip away like sand.
I want you so bad to hold, and to touch
and that is because I love you so much.
And I want you to know whatever you do
I will always be here
and I will always love you.
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I am 16 years old and this poem is about my first True Love. It's about how I don't want to let go of what we once had. But how gradually I must come to terms with it slipping away.
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this is how i feel when me and my fiancee broke up, and it's even been over 3 months, i haven't found anyone yet and i don't think i ever will. but i'm only 15 and and he's 18 but still i was in-love with him no matter what any-one said. god, he hurt. - Heather |
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awwww thats so sweet - blondiesmj92 |
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I think that is so cute. - melanie |
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this poem was very nice. i write poetry myself but i can`t ever get around to posting it. it was a very short n sweet - Kelly |
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wowwww your poem is amaizing. you have expire me into writing. you will see me 1 day standing right next to you and say this person expire me in writing thank you. - Elvis |
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This is the sweetest poem ever i like it alot i am 17 years old and i know how this is - Farron |
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i love this poem and i think evryone that reads it will to. i loved it didnt you - jesse |
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I THIMK THIS IS A VERY GREAT POEM! KEEP IT UP! HOLLA! - Tequila |
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This was a very good poem I liked it keep writting that was good. - Melanie |
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It was a very sweet poem and the guy i like dedicates it to me - Ceci |
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that was so sweet and you should do more - cheri |
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This is a great poem and I love it! Your an awesome writter and you have alot of potenchill good luck and keep up the awesome poems hopefuly some day I will be as good as you! - Jamie |
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I Think your poem is one of the best I've heard and I've heard alot of poems cause I write them but I tink you should write alot more - Nicholas |
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwsome poem - Sally |
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i love the poem very nice. - tiffany |
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This is one of the most beautiful poems that I HAVE EVER READ! I love it. This is how I use to feel but now I feel really diffirent. You remind me of what I use to feel like. But I love the way you think. Happy newyears! - Maya |
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omg dis is such a gd poem it touches ma heart wow - hester |
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wow this is a really good poem. i really really like this poem a lot. you should keep writting poems because you are good at writting them that i can see of so far but yeah this is a really good poem. From Crista - Crista |
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i love this poem and this writer is very good i gave him a 10 - heaven |
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This poem reminds me of my first love as well it also brings me to tears it was beafitful - Christina |
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I loved this poem! I gave it to my girlfriend! Keep writin Richard. I'm sorry about your girl. I hope you find another one whom you love and someone who won over your heart not once before but many times more. Thanks - Thomas |
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That poemm is cute. - Tashawnna |
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dude i went through the same crap and me trying to hold on to that person ended me up in jail and rehab it will get better it's ok to have those feelings i still cry everyday one day you will find your solace peace - keith |
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this poem really spoke out , & it said some of what i think . i seriously give it 100 % of my vote as the best poem ! - eva |
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i thought the poem was good!i know how it feels to let go of your first love because i had to do that once too and it wasnt too long ago. but i thought reading your poem was really good. keep up the good work - leslie |
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TRUE LOVE . STICK TOGETHER AND HAVE FUN - amelia |
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The poem was good and i could really relate to it. It really touched me. - Kristen |
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it was a very cute poem. it reminds me of a person i love. - jenny |
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hey i think that this poem was a good poem i sended it to my cousin tiffany and to her boyfriend johny ray and i think that they look a good couple and that i thought that this would be the poem just for them thank you for everything - Tosha |
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itz iz a very good poem! i love it when guyz write poems! my boyfriend writes poems sorta! - Mony |
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It was good. It had a lot of heart in it. - Emily |
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YOUR A GREAT POET!I GIVE YOU A 1000! - Mandi |
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thats a really good poem! - kimmy |
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pretty touchy, i guess. About true love poems~ I like it. - aka |
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I think your poem was grate because I want to write my boyfriend a poem like that - Tiffany |
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whats goin on, im 16 and my girlfriend is 14 and as of today wever been goin out a year and just about a week ago we almsot broke up and she didnt realize that it hurts so bad just to have that thought but reading your poem made me realize that im not the only one in this world with fealings like that so i thank u for that. keep up the good work man you got a talent - ian |
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Hey. This is an Awesome! I am 14 and I just got done dating an 16 turning 17 year old and he told me he loved me and that he was different from other guys and we told each other we would be together forever. And just one day he had his little sister (also 14) call me and tell me "it's over" and it broke my heart. I can relate to this poem. Its very touching! Thank you - Brittany |
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It's a great poems! I really like it - Nindy |
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I just wanted to say that i really like the poem! I like it very much! Not only that, i feel the same way about my man! It just gets right down to it! - Kim |
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i feel to your poem. ive been threw it. i liked it alot. - kyle |
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i really loved it cause i was in the same situation - sita |
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great poem fantastic! - shayla |
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i loved reading that poem so much it reminds me of my gf down in dunedin who i miss so much - alex |
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This poem was sweet and it touched me only because it is from a guya dn when i was 16 i got a ring from a Guy. My first love and we slipped away like sand aswell. - Melissa |
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i loved the poem it made me think of my first love - sarah |
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this poem was really good because you can really understand and feel what he is feeling. It was great - Shara |
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i realy enjoy this poem because it has meaningful words that i want share with someone. - azumath |
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I'm going through the same thing! I love your poem! - Karin |
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I know exactly how you feel, it made me sad inside to think of how you can still love someone for maybe your whole life and they will never know any different. This is a great poem! - Bubzarina |
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awwwwwwwwww. thats so sweet! ~mary~ - mary |
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i really like this pome. it;s remind me of me and somebody. - liydia |
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I was wondering how did you come up with this poem! This is the most beautiful poem i have ever heard. I just thank you for putting this poem on here for everyone to read and hope that every one else will say the same thing I've just said. Yours truely; Summer Alana Delorme - summer |
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very good poem. loved it! - Griselda |
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That is a good poem It relly relates to what im going through and i fell in love with this girl and we were ingadged and she just left me for another guy it relly takes my emotions away - Dana |
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cool poem i love it cause i`m a bisexual so keep doing what u do k. - leandria |
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This is so true. This explains how i feel about my first true love. Even tho i am young i can understand what love really is. and this is it. perfect! please write more and send them. they are great. Richard, you should really publish hun its great - Mari |
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that was the most incredabul thing i have read. it makes me not want to give up - della |
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This poem reminds me of how I feel about my boyfriend and father of my baby. The only differance is that we are still together. But I do wish you good luck on the rest of life. Ihope everthing works out for you. Well I really like your poem. I really enjoyed reading it. - Rebecca |
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all i can say is that i love it - ben |
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I'm out of town and I'm really missin my boyfriend. But when I read this poem it made me think of him and smile. THANX! - sheena |
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I really liked your poem it was shorter than all the others but it was my favorite! i think it was great just thought you might like to know - Jessica |
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simple but so much meaning and truth behing it. i loved it and i wish i could write stuff like this. it's so perfect and it means alot 2 me cuz that the same situation im in rite now. - Cory |
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I LOVE IT! - Alessandra |
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If wuz so wonderfull ,it wuz so wonderful its better than wonderful! - Brittany |
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i like it is cute and i'm sure alot of people can relate to it. - ashley |
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i really loved it bcuz that is how i still feel about the guy i was dating - tavoskaia |
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I thought it was great and i no how yo feel and just readiing that brings back out times. - marisa |
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I liked this poem alot - Kyle |
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its a rally nice poem - candy |
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I loved The poem. I am 15 and a half and I feel that way about my first love. I gave him a ring and he promised to always wear it. and i will always love him like i did the moment we had our first kiss. - Shasta |
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this the poem that fits how i feel so much - raven |
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i love ur poems, and they are so cute. do more as much as u can :P - layla |
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i very much relate to this poem and think it is real touching. - MARIA |
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i liked this poem becuase i can understand it it also relates to me and many other people and the way they feel - paxon |
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this is soooo cute like im really loving this poem - tiara |
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that is very nice pomes - stephanie |
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I was really touched when I read this poem, it remindes me of a relationship that just recently ended. This poem rocks! - Marissa |
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awsome poem! i know the way it feels to love some one and slowly watch wat u had slip away! - skye |
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wow. that was amazing! there's really nothing more i can say. it was awesome! Janie - Janie |
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the poem is very beatiful and it inspires me to also write a poem about my first love! - kriselda mae |
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This poem reminds of sometihng I am going through now. Its great how you expressed and your not the only one - Sharae |
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I THINK THIS PEOM IS 110% BRILLIANT. THE AUTHOR IS REALLY GOOD. - DANIELLE |
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A very inspiring poem, I really enjoyed reading it, it is hard to admit you love someone. - Ruth |
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i loved your poem it is like my relationship keep doing what your doing. - sarah |
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This poem is so cute. I like this poem alot. I like it so much I'm going to send this to my boyfriend(lol). - Greeneyes |
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that poem touched my heart because i am in love with someome all so dear and i will always love them till the day that i die. - lauren |
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Thats a realy good poem not much guys will tell the way they feel in a poem but thats cool you did your ovbiosly different then other guys. good job i give it a ten! - Dreamer |
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On a scale from 1 to 10, i give it a ten. This is a very romantic poem and I like it a lot. - Shanice |
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i thought that was a great poem i have a first love and he is still around i dont c him much but i know how you feel i miss him to. great poem - TYMBER |
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hey i am 14 years lod and i loved your poem my boyfriend is also 16 and has bought me a ring we arent engaged or anything like that but he got me a really nice ring fir my b_day he also has bought me 1 for christmas your poem has ley me know that maybe he really dos love me he yells me that he dos all the time and i want nothing more than for that to be true but but who knows that could be a lie and all my hopes and dreams could come true i wish someday tro marrie him . i hope that you and your lady friend came work things out you sound like you care about her very mu=ch i know that if someone wrote that for me i would love them loke i diont knbowe what but good luck i hope you get her back. - sable |
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wow your poem is wonderful ive never been so touched by a poem. - Haley |
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I know how this person feels. I think that this poem rocks! - sara |
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the reason why i like this poem, is because it was vey moving, i love the part when you said: I gave you that ring you wear on your hand and like time in an hour glass, you slip away like sand Good job, i hope i can hear more poems from you! - red |
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i like it and it makes me feel what I am going through right now and it is really hard to cop with thanks alot. it is a great poem! - Elisha |
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I really liked this poem it reminds me of my first love - Victoria |
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I CRIED WHEN I READ THIS POEM. I KNOW EXACTLY HOW THIS PERSON FEELZ AND AM GOING THROUGH IT RIGHT NOW. I RATE IT A 10. - ARIANNA |
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i voted 4 dis cos it gets straight 2 da point! - Emma-Louise |
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this is a great poem and this touched my heart because this happend to me once and it just felt nice to have someone by your side who will always love you - angelica |
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WOW. I know how that feels to have your heart ripped out. You do everything but they just shrug it off and act like they don't care about you or anything. Your poem meant a lot to me. Keep writing. - crissy |
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This is a really god poem, because I can relate to it. rating: 10 good - yeraldine |
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I loved your poem. keep writting more - red |
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I really like this poem it hit right on the spot and i read it at just the right time me and my Girlfriend Nathina are going through a hard time and so it fit perfect about the way i feel - Josh |
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i love it, it is a short poem yet it means so much, in so little amount of words. Bravo make more like it and send them to me. - kevin |
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Very good And it said alot in so very words great job - nicole |
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I enjoyed reading this poem - Racharr |
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I can really relate to this because I was in the same boat! - Hannah |
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This poem is coming from tha heart and its really good and just keep up tha good work. - Terrika |
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Hey I loved this poem. Can you send me so to my e-mail like a daily newsletter of poems b/c you write good and touching poems! - Rashida |
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i think that was a nice poem - Ciara |
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Your poem was really good, just thoght Id let you know. Well goo luck with the rest of them in the future. Ink - Tina |
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it's cool. i was just talking with my beloved one that is far from me and saying i wanted he was here with me,and i just opened the poem and read it. cool how thing can happen. - alexandra |
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I absolutly loved this poem. It almost one of the sweetest things i have ever read. It's kind of funny because when i read this poem it made me think of my boyfriend Greg. I hope one day you fond that true love that you are really looking for. - Breana |
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OMGosh this poem rox it almost made me cry! keep writing boy dam son you have so real talent! i gunna print this - sammi |
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I think this poem is very nice - Aubrie |
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i love it - Emily |
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great poem. i like it alot. you have something good keep it up. i cant wait to hear something eles - lisa |
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a poem i feel many can relate too! love it! - Monica |
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Your poem is so cool and it came to a point that my boyfriend did gave me a ring. I liked his sulf that he gave me it was so cool what we have. Thank you By:Sara - sara |
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i liked this poem because it brings back alot of momorizes of me and my ex - Hilary |
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I understand how you feel. Poems that we can identify with always strike a strong chord in the soul. - Jared |
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your poem was great and i think it is awesome when guys can express themselfs like this! GINA! - GINA |
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i love this poem cuz it reminds me about my true love and i am still hurtin over today. so thinx 4 writin it - alicia |
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This was a really good poem,I liked it. - May-gen |
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this poem is soooooooo be-utifull i luv it wow so great! - alexandra |
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I loved this poem it is so romantic,and i dont know how you people come up with this stuff, please share how you do it. - David |
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that is a really sweet poem. whoever you are with is a lucky person - nessa |
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it was a very sweet poem that many can relate to, keep it up! - britani |
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I just thought that this poem is soo sweet and that i hope that you and this girl are still together - Maria |
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That is a wonderful poem and like i can say for everyone else you never get over your first love nobody does! I really love this poem. - Ione |
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omg. ! this touched me so much and this is so sweet! i really liked this poem =) - melissa |
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This poem is very well emotionally written. i love that about a poem. it makes me think about my ex. and I. i feel this poem alot. - Michelle |
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this poem iz sooo good. keep writing cuz u really do that well. I can COMPLETELY relate to this beautiful poetry. keep u'r head up and don't worry about that gurl. there's many more who will realize what you are worth and how much you can offer them. - Angelica |
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nice i realy likd this poem good job - angelica |
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this showed me alot of stuff. like if your special sombody gave u a ring u should wear it and be excited for that somday u are getin married! - heidi |
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awww. that is sooo sweet. aww jeez i'm gonna cry. i liked your poem - monique |
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I love that - Trisha |
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this poem touched me. it is exactly how i feel about me ex - Cassy |
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i loved the poem - Krystal |
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Wow. i wish i could write like this, the poem touched me and made me want to go and tell my lost love how i feel. very inspiring. - cassie |
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that poem was sooooo cute. You r a good writer. i really like that - Joy |
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It touched my heart so much, u should become a poet. Again, that poem was touching. - Chris |
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omg i love you poem! it is so good! i wish that i could write poems like that! - Ashly |
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beautiful iloved it it was awesome - Casey |
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THIS POEM IS REALLY SWEET AND I NEVER KNEW THAT A GUY COULD BE SO SWEET ABOUT BREAKING UP. I HOPE THAT YOU FIND SOMEONE OUT THERE FOR YOU THAT IS RIGHT AND WILL MAKE YOU HAPPY AS YOU WILL THEM. GOOD LUCK! :) - TISHA |
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I think your poem was cool - denise |
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i think it was pretty good! whoever u wrote that peom about must feel really sorry that they left you *i will always love you and i am sorry i left* - hgfd |
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this was a great poem, I really love it, it really brings out what i truly feel - jon |
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i love it i think that is a perfect poem to give to your old guy that you moved away from and i really hope you write so much more cuz i really liked this one so much that im ganna print it out Write more plz! - ceclia |
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oh my god that was sooooooo sweet im sure she must have been an idiot to slip away. :( dont worry if your as sweet as you seem in your poem im sure youll find another love soon enough - chrissy |
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this poem is soooo sweet it makes me want to cry. it makes me think about how love is! - KC |
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really love it. - Jaslyn |
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this poem was so good i wanted to cry, i can tell you that you are my favorite poet now! xxxx - laura |
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I love this poem!I am also 16 years old and still in love with my first "true" Love. Its hard to let go and I honestly can say that I know exactly how this person feels. - Angel |
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I really loved this poem because it reminded me of a special someone. - Maya |
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. man, touching ,completely feel it - Mike |
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I liked this one it had meaning and i think the poet that wrote this should keep it up - Krystal |
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I thought that this poem was really good it doesn't really relate what i am going threw right now but i think that is where it might be leading and that scares me. I liked this poem so much becuase it makes me realize there is nothing to be scared of just go with the flow. - hannah |
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i loved this poem! - Stephanie |
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awwwwwww povrecito(poor baby) it's ok your poem is beutiful and your a sweet person. i can tell - victoria |
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i loved this poem i'm only thirten and i had my first love at 12 great poem it really expresses your feeling's about you first love - miranda |
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I THINK THAT WAS VERY NICE - SHAWANDA |
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When i read this it made me cry:') it it so sweet if i had a Bf who wrote peoms like this i would never slip away! - Chelsea |
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ok i thought that was a really heart felt peom, keep writting u got a talent:) - aimo |
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it was really good please keep writting and im sure iam speaking for alot of people out there! I REALLY DO LOVE IT - marcy |
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That poem reminds me so much about someone i know but i have tried writing about it but could never express my feelings as much as i wanted too. I am very jelous of you that u did that but that is a well written poem! - Kelsy |
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I loved this poem! It reminded me of my x-boyfriend. - Tabitha |
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I really liked this poem when i red it it touched my heart i can really realte to it. keep up the great work! - Monica |
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This poem was great. i felt like i found my true love to until she left me. your poem really lightened my spirits. - rich |
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I like this poem alot. I can really relate to it. As I read "Always" all I could think about is how much I love the guy I'm with. THis poem really puts a smile on my face. - Jenn |
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THIS POEM IS VERY NICE IT REALLY EXPRESSES THE WAY I BEEN FEELING FOR A WHILE ALREADY AND BECAUSE I LOST MY LOVE AND THIS POEM WAS WHAT HELPED ME OUT - VERONICA |
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Your poem is really great. You did excellent and you put it out there so well. You know what you want to say and its great to see that. - Courtney |
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i really like ur poem it just toaches my heart! i lovew writeing poems to and you have really inspired em to write more! - kindrah |
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I love your poem. I too am 16, and a week ago, my now, obviously ex-boyfreind, broke up with me. I totally relate to everything you say in ure poem. I still love him very dearly, n probably will always love him, so to me ure poem is deeply touching, and so nice to read. - Amy |
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your poem was so great and it totally touched me. it wasn't very long, but it still gave you the idea. it totally reminds me of what i'm going through right now. eventhough im 14 i still feel the way you do. - Rosie |
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I loved your poem, i bet alot of us grils can relate it i know i can. :D - Alice |
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your poem is beautiful, i can deffinitly relate - anna |
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I love your peom. I am too 16. I was onced love this guy but I knew I had to let him go even though I didn't want to. Your poem is beautiful. You truely are blessed. - Desiree |
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Your poem reminds me of me. Good good job! - Justin |
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This is a really good poem. - kelli |
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Richard this is such a romantic poem! I love it. What girl wouldn't want to close to you if you feel like this? this is the best poem i have read today. - amanda |
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god thid poem is so awesome i mean it explains my feelings right ow for this guy who is alos my frst - ana |
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OMG your poem is totally what i am going through i love it - ashley |
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it was great. it expressed what i was feeling at the moment. keep on writing! - K |
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i really like your pome i think i can really relate to it. it touched me alot - mckki |
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I loved your poem and i can really relate to that. but who cant right? - Sasha |
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sweet :D - ashley |
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i really liked your poem it touched my heart - Chanel |
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your poem is short but filled with wonderful words. very nicely done. - PA |
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that wuz a very good poem,i write poems 2 - amalia |
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awwwwwwww!your poem is so sweet!i really like it!i member about my first true love too!i thought it was really cute and i know that it came from your heart!' - Patricia |
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wow you really did explain what love is all about ! - Kathryn |
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This was such a good poem! - Jenna |
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That poem is so sweet! Its good 2! u should think about becoming a professional poet. Ive never heard a poem that good! Godd luck on your next! - Rebekah |
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I would ust like to say how touching you poem was. I feel like you speak for all of us when you write of your first true love. Thank you for sharing with us your beautiful words. Keep it coming - Kelli |
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I LOVE YOUR POEM! - Claire |
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I fell the same way about me first love - kerprenia |
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Awesome poem. I love it! - Ana |
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your poem was really nice keep on writing keep your head up - ashley |
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hi great peom - Meghann |
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I would like to say that I needed to hear some of these peoms. I am maube having my mans kid and these peoms helped me relize that he does love me and i need to see that. THANKS - Meghann |
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thats a great poem! - Heather |
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I think ur portry is great and I hope that u keep writtiy theses lovley love pomes which enspire a lot of people to give love a chance - kym |
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This is great! I dont wirte poetry myself but enjoy analising it. Keep it up because writing pieces like that at your age is extremely promising. - Rob325114 |
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I loved your poem. You can tell it truly came from the heart. Good luck wit your writing. - robbie |
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I love your poem. - celina |
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I loved the poem. it is cute! Thats what i think about my one true love also. - Cole |
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Wow that poem is great keep on writting! - Lys |
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Hey I love your poem it you can tell it came strait from your heart. - S.a.m |
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I love your pome is is very touching to me. - nikki |
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I fell in love with your poem because I felt exactly like you when I went through my first love. - Sarah |
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Man, that poem kicked. I loved it. Short but sweet. - Teddy |
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Very good keep it up. - Craig |
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Hey, My name is Shannon. Every-one calls my Shorty. It is good to know that some-one that is 16 to writes the same kind of poems I do. I think that this is a good poem. You can make it. Don't give up. - Short |
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i think the poem was very sweet. i hope u write more poems like that - janet |
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That was very cute it reminds me of my boyfriend and I. - Esthe |
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i love it , it remind me of my frist love and the pain he give me when we broke up , it took me 2 years to overcome the pain, it really something gd work carry on. - siti |
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this. was. an. amazing. poem. it related exactly to what im goig through right now. thank you sooo much - kari |
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There is something very important that I would like to say about this poem. I am the girl that Richard wrote this poem for. I can honestly say that in a way I almost feel like this poem brought us together in a way. All of the comments of everyone really made me realize what I had with him and perhaps what i've lost. We were both 16 at the time. I am now 19. and I can honestly say the words are true, the love was true because Rich- I am still in love with you. - Leann |
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HEY WELL I JESS WANTED TO SAY I THOUGHT THIS POEM WAS THE REAL AND THIS THE SAME WAY I FELL BOUT MY EX BOYFRIEND AND WILL NEVER STOP LOVING HIM ! - Heath |
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this peom is great. i love it. it made me think of a boy i once had and had to say goodbye - meg |
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this poem is great but not many people can say that they long for someone to hold and if they could then a lot of it is also just because they want to. seldomly people especially teens like me find that one true love and they want it to never end. when this happens you want to be with that person more than anyone in this whole world, sometimes you even think of them as some sort of god/goddess. take my case i am deeply in love with this one person and i would give my life to see her just for one second and then i would have seen the most beautiful thing in this whole universe. it doesn't really matter how people think of what you and that other person share but how you feel about that person and you should express it to her/him just to let them know how you feel. - Nate |
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"When you love someone" was the best poem i have ever heard it made me think about hw i feel about my first love. it's kinda freaky the way it is though!how a poem can say so much. it speaks a lot louder than words! - Holly |
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OMG! THIS POEM JUST TOOK ALL THE WORS OUT OF MY MOUTH!THE POEM IS ABOUT EXACTLY HOW I FEEL ABOUT THIS GUY BUT I DONT KNOW I FHHE LIKES ME I GET MIXED SIGNALS - love |
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wow. i really like ur poem it touched me deeply. boy u got skills! keep it up. - gabby |
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This is a great poem. I've been looking for something just like this to send to my boyfriend for his birthday, so I can show him exactly how much he means to me! - Liz |
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This poem was so good i almost started to cry my heart sunk in like water going inside the sink. - Nikki |
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This poem ROCKZ! - quita |
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this peom rockz i always like peoms that rhyme its cool as! - kris |
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it's great - wisam |
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i liked your pome - sebas |
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I like your poem it really touched me. - Angie |
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If I were that girl I would never let you go you are such a sweetheart and i hope you get what you want! - Haley |
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Great poem. I am 18 years old and I had my first true love when I was 16. I am still trying to get over her and I am doing so, slowly. I still love her with all my heart and this poem describes that. Thank you for putting into words what I could not. - Jake |
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This is such and amazing poem and very touching I love this poem because is really beautiful - Ana |
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It is a very touching I really liked it. Can't wait to see more. - Leo |
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THAT WA VERY GOOD AND I FEEL TOUCHED WELL G2G JUST THOUGHT I WOULD TELL YOU THA I LIKED IT - angela |
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I loved this poem it is very well written and i loved it! - Nikki |
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It shows how short a relationship can be but it's a cute poem! - Dee |
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this is a sweet poem hopefully you wouldn't mind meeh usin' this 4 muh project tyvm - lilbluthong |
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Nice 1 Mate, This Poem says Just how i am Felling. Good 1. :o) - Dan |
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thats what i feel to. right now wit my girl - mike |
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I know what you mean have been in that same position too! The best thing to do is just keep everyone as a friend that way you don't have to worry about to much! BY THE WAY THAT WAS A GREAT AND TOUCHIND POEM, IWANT TO READ IT TO HIM SO THAT HE CAN FULLY UNDERSTAND ALL THE FEELINGS THAT I HOLD IN MY HEART FOR him! - Cieara |
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Wow - Sarah |
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I love your poem, it says everything that i would like to say to my boyfriend. I hope u continue to write more - Jessica |
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i love this poem! - Sweetie |
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your poem is great .! u sound like a sweetheart - Joanna |
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richard, thats an awesome poem. I really like it. you seem like a really sweet person, just by reading ur poem! - laura |
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very sweet n simple! mad props to you! =] i love the poem. - yoshi |
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love your poem. nicely written. i can relate to what you wrote about. im also 16. - princez |
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Your poem is just what I needed. I'm going through a similar thing at the moment. Your poem will help me lots. Thanks - Paul |
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this is one of the sweetest and most touching poems that i have ever read. i'm in a situation now that i can't have the one that i love SO much. i absolutally love your poem! - sheri |
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Short but very sweet! I like it alot! - Tim |
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That was sooooo good! I like how you kept it simple and to the point and it is exactly the feelings I know a lot of us teens have. It's wonderful! - Tabetha |
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hey.this poem is great. it's exactly how i feel about my true love but i didnt know how to tell him after we broke up.great job! :) - hannah |
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Oh My God! I looovvee this poem! It totally reflects my feelings, and it is so kewl that a guy can feel that way. - Angie |
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I liked your poem a lot. My first love and I broke up, but after a while we ended up back together. But when we were apart i always felt bad, so i can understand. - Jana |
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This poem is so cute it reminds me of how me and my best friend/exboyfriend's relationship is now! - Brandy |
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I read this poem and my heart melted. It described me and my boyfriend so much. - Ashton |
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that poem is the best i have heard in a long time - susan |
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Your poem caused a tear to be released on my cheek.It touched me. - Andrei |
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I just want to say this poem is so beautiful. i like it so much! - Dallas-vana |
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very nice, it will make someones day - Colby |
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I NEVER THOUGHT A GUY COULD EVER FEEL THIS WAY! This is sooo touching! Superb work! Very catchy and emotional! - yuyuka |
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i really like that poem cuz it really tell u how friendz think and wanna support eachother! - brandon |
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Richard, this is an exceptionally great poem. I think all of us teens have experienced (or soon will) the love and loss that your poem talks about. It is such a true and hard thing to deal with, but that's love. Thank you so very much for sharing your poems with us. You will touch the world with your words some day, as you have already touched my aching heart. - Natalie |
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this poem is so ture and i remember a time in my life i had someone like say that to me but now we are apart for the best but i will always love her with all my heart until i die - Jessica |
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I feel your poem was perfect. It was short, sweet and right to the point. I believe we all have felt this way at least once before. Keep at it and NEVER forget to let your girl know how you feel, to us that is the most important thing to know. Stay sweet. - Jessica |
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i love this poem because i know just how he feels im in love with a girl to but we broke up and i just want her to know that i still love her. peace - kelly |
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very very very nice - steve |
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this poem explains in detail what i have been feeling for so long! Thanks man! - illandreall |
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I loved it. It is the samething that is happening to me and my love. I hate to admit it. but i cried. - Thomas |
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i really like your poem ... i know how you feel i was once there. but you know every day you learn new stuff maybe the reason why he left or she left was because that person was not ment 4 you........ life has alot to learn and maybe someday the time will come when the person you been watting come;s along! - ESTRELLA |
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that was a very nice poem! you spoke from your heart - johanna |
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this poem was in terms: perfect. there are always words people cannot say to make them just right. well, this author has said it. our first love will not last foreve they will slip away. im going through my first heartbreak and it hurts. but in time i know it will be for the best. i love her with all my heart. but we are not what each other needs. this poem expresses many feelings in small words. - jillian |
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Really like the poem. - Doris |
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I love this poem it is short yet sweet it says SO much in so little words. and it has such a deep meaning! - Amber |
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Awww I thought that this was so sweet! Oh ur an awesome person and someone is very lucky to have you. - Candie |
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I THINK IT WAS VERY GOOD. - KAROL |
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That is such a sweet poem! I love it a lot! - Theresa |
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I really Loved This Poem, it was short but it said so much! - Da'sha |
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Thanks man you- you're awsome - Jackson |
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this poem inspired me to write my own and i feel the same way about my girlfriend as the the first three lines say and i would like to just say thank you - DAemon |
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awww that is so sweet - jAcLyN |
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I really loved that poem. Richard, i really know where you're coming from, keep the great poem writing up! - Ashley |
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Your poem reminds me alot of me and my ex-boyfriend. - Crystal |
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This poem is great. - Tracy |
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i can relate to most of the lines in this poem see im in love wit this girl but i live in mass and she lives in gorgia and recently ive been wanting her by my side more and more - kevin |
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this poem is so awesome after i was done reading it i fell in love with it. - julie |
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this is a very good poem and i love the way it expresses your feelings - amanda |
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It was a great poem. It is how i feel. - Heather |
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This poem landed me with this beautiful girl that i wanted to be with, so i cant thank you more for have this poem here for me and others. - John |
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This pome is very very pretty. - Linda |
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u rock dude! - Dawnavan |
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I really like this poem. I know how you feel. I'm going through that right now. - Sara |
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I love this poem.Did this really happen? If it did I'm so sorry. - monica |
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I don't really have words to express what I felt after reading this poem, but let me inform you that it is by far one of the best I have ever read. - Lennie |
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It help know exactly what i wanted to say - James |
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I love this poem i think that it's great - Marie |
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I really enjoyed your poem. I can really relate to how you feel, and encourage you to keep writing! - Sarah |
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hI I REALY LIKE THIS POEM I THINK I'LL SEND IT TO MY GIRLFRIEND THANK YOU - Dan |
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I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM I HAVE BEEN THROUGH THIS SITUATION BEFORE AND READING THIS POEM BROUGHT BACK PAST FEELINGS AND SHOWED ME HOW MUCH IHAVE GROWN - miquelyn |
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When I read this poem it touched my heart, like I can feel what your going through. I have been in a similar situation and you found the perfect words to describe it. If you have any other poems, I would like to hear them. So please email me at dolly_85@hotmail.com. Tammy - Tammy |
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it 's so lovly - bernadette |
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Love it!!! - sandy |
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this poem makes me think about me and this girl i met in gulf shores.i knew her for a week and we slipped away from each other like sand..it touched my heart.. - Jacob |
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its a good poem - Crystal |
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I Loved that poem it said sooo much! - Ginni |
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Just wonderful! I am a budding poet and like to read more and more poems. This one really appealed my heart. Just too good! -Harshad Sharma - Harshad |
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It was the truth and could tell it came from the heart. it had a really nice ring to it, when we were done reading it our hearts melted. the metephore you added made it complete. - Meghan |
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Nice poem man. - Ryan |
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I really like your poem.thanks - vangie |
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This poem is SO sad.I cried. I think she should go back to him. I know I would. - Fishy |
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I loved your poem. It really touched me. And it also made me cry. - Angel |
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i loved this poem! Its just what i needed! - Blair |
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it was a very good poem short and right to the point good poem richard - adam |
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I really liked this poem. It was sweet and it was something that I can see in real life. It was also a little sad, but aren't most all love poems. I like the writing style too. The author has talent. - Natalia |
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I think to poem is true for most teen love cases. - Nicki |
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Was sweet and very thoughtful wish all guys had your heart. - Carol |
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This is such a great poem! it's exactly what i feel about my boyfriend that i love him so much and he is my first love so i'll never forget him. no matter what. and this sums it up. - ashley |
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that was the most beautiful poem i have ever read. congratulations for writing something straight from your heart. you are to be admired - Lily |
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What he said is something i know and can relate to. - Kara |
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This is a great poem and something I can really relate to. - Susan |
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I thought that this poem was written very well and was worded beatifully!keep up the work:)! - cassy |
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Your are very sensitive and your poem rocked! All my friends though so too! - Amanda |
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yes, this was a ice poem and I have felt ths way before thans for expressing it for me. - Caleb |
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do you have a girlfriend??? nah, j/k. i love your poem!!! did you write it for anyone special? - BABY_TRANCE |
