1000 Times For 1 by Dave
If I have kissed you once,
I have kissed you 1000 times.
Each morning as I arise.
Each night as I drift to sleep.
Each hour of every day.
Each moment before it goes away.
The kisses shared between you and I,
Have many times reached the sky.
As your lips part and anxiousness increases,
Your heart pounds and breathing ceases.
My lips leap to yours hungry for the taste.
Sweetness drips from you to me
As desire grows, my heart races.
Inches apart seem as miles waiting.
The miles increase as space shortens.
Time appears to stand still.
So close yet so far.
When? Now, please now?
Once more, 1001.
Make it 2, so many more.
Caressing ever caressing those
Tender lips, each time as the first.
If I have kissed you 1000 times,
I would give them all away
To make the dream a reality,
And kiss you once.
I have kissed you 1000 times.
Each morning as I arise.
Each night as I drift to sleep.
Each hour of every day.
Each moment before it goes away.
The kisses shared between you and I,
Have many times reached the sky.
As your lips part and anxiousness increases,
Your heart pounds and breathing ceases.
My lips leap to yours hungry for the taste.
Sweetness drips from you to me
As desire grows, my heart races.
Inches apart seem as miles waiting.
The miles increase as space shortens.
Time appears to stand still.
So close yet so far.
When? Now, please now?
Once more, 1001.
Make it 2, so many more.
Caressing ever caressing those
Tender lips, each time as the first.
If I have kissed you 1000 times,
I would give them all away
To make the dream a reality,
And kiss you once.
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This is a friendship turned to passion. Yet a passion that must remain unspent. For the two can never be one. Life and circumstance forbid the expression of the love and deep appreciation that each share for the other. A dream? Yes. A desire? Without a doubt!
A kiss sent, yet forever undelivered. Yet happy, oh so happy.
A kiss sent, yet forever undelivered. Yet happy, oh so happy.
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The simplicity and directness of the poem has a lasting effect. I extremely liked it during my first reading. Continue your work and goodluck. Ciao. - Chian |
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i love this poem. waaaaaaaa - james |
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it makes my imagination colorful. - jergsh |
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this poem touched me in every way. i can truly relate to the feelings expressed through this piece, as i am going through the same thing right now with someone. - shonica |
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this is a really good poem. keep up the good work. - shelly |
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this poem is SO fantastic - kukubird |
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it keeps love & friendship alive - anson |
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This is such a lovely poem. It just says everything i have ever wanted to say to jeremy. i mean everything i have never been able to tell him was just email to him through this poem. it really uped my spirit. - Jill |
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this poem is kinda twisted but its kool and i really enjoy the poem and dave you really have a talent for writting and you should look in to that. - Deszerrie'ja |
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This poem is so true in so many ways! - Katie |
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I really enjoyed this thanx! - Chris |
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Dave, I know the feeling all too well. What you are saying in your poem is beautiful to me. I too have dreamt of my love and would give all of my dreams away for just one moment with him. - Erica |
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This is a lovely poem. I,ve sent it to the one I love ,all i ever wanted to say was so beautifully mentioned in this poem. Sometimes we are not able to describe our true feelings as we don't hv the words to express our feelings,thru this poem I've expressed my feelings to my love. - aveesha |
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This poem expresses so closely what I'm currently feeling for a gentleman I've met a few months ago! Anticipation and yearning to feel the tendery of his kiss all rolled up into great desire and an impossible dream--yet to come true. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for your eloquent expession of a deep desire to kiss someone so prized in a very sweet way:) - Judy |
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Thank you Dave for such beautiful words that helped me to express what I wanted so wanted to share with my Long Distant Lover and could never seem to put it into words. Your words flow with grace and beauty. Thanks again. - tjl |
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Man this is a touching poem it is straight from your heart I can tell. I love the ending when you say it was just a dream. You really got me into the poem. - Gatita |
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this poem is nice, i hope you get that kiss. good luck in every thing that you do. i am writing poetry myself. keep on writing good one's. - MDU |
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Thats a beautiful poem, good job ^-^ - Anita |
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this is good. keep it up - Elliott |
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this poem rocks - chels |
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I thought your poem and the use of words were absolutely beautiful - Vie |
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This is a great poem. I have sent it to many of my friends and they all loved it as much as I did. You are a great poet. I wish that someday I will be able to write a poem that touches someone as much as your poem touched my heart - Chris |
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Dave, You are a very talented poet.your loved one must be very special. I hope she enjoyed your poem and I hope you write more. - Adri |
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This poem is amazing! i sent it to my girlfriend,everything in the poem is exactly how i feel, well done for writing it! - Rich |
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YOUR POEM IS REALLY, REALLY GOOD. YOU SEEM TO WRITE REALLY NICELEY. GOOD JOB - CRYSTAL |
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I think this poem is very sweet. I wish I could do this to someone i really have a crush on.everything in this poem describes what every person does or want to do with thier perfect match know i do! - Brittany |
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This is a really good poem. You are very talented! Good job! - Amanda |
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i really lov this poem it almost broke my heart,but it bought tears to my i eyes,i lve it keep up the good work, - cndy |
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wow, i can see myself as a person involved in these words, its the feeling i have towards a friend that i miss, i miss his lips and our deep convorsations..unfortunately he has just left to save our country and those lips are gone.tear..i loved it - jess |
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This poem touches on the reality of so many relationships.I give it a 9.5 on a scale of ten.keep up the good work dave.We could all be better of if we opened up like your poem - Bobby |
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the poem was great real touching - ciara |
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Very touching... soothingly yours! - Taylor |
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I've been having this same experience for all too long by now. good work. - Ted |
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Dave, I would also give the kisses in my fantasies away for that one real forbidden one that would change me forever - Liz |
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This poem made me cry. Keep up the good work Dave. - hillary |
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A poem with a lot of deep meaning to it.Gives you many wonderful & loving thoughts. Beautifully done! - RJG |
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you got great talent don't let it go to waste and keep on writing - not |
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I really loved this poem, and I know exactly how Dave feels for I feel the same way about my friend. B - B |
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this is such a beautiful piece of work.it touched my soul in such a way that sadness never has before.. - Kimberly |
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hey, dave u write extremely well, seriously it was GREAT! ok i really thought it was wonderful omg perfect u write with such desire in ur heart, keep writing & keep smilin - keisha |
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This made me feel extreme desire. What a wonderful feeling. Some intense feeling,right? - Suelie |
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I thought this was a really really cool poem. - Errica |
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Beautiful! - Jax |
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I am absolutely speechless. That poem was like whispers from the angels above. You have an absolute talent Dave and i fully admire you. Pleaz write more lovely poetry so i can get so indulged in this as i just did. You rock :) - Hayley |
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this is a wonderful poem full of power and meaning i am glade i have had the chance to read this thank you very much. - Brian |
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GREAT JOB - sal |
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what a wonderful expression in words but in fantasy...in a kiss..really held my breath there.. - evelyn |
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Chords struck, tears well, softly understanding. - Kirsten |
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I love this poem,I also wright poetry and love to read it. If I were the person that this poem had been written to I would run to favor the wrighter give him his kiss and never let him go. This is the sweetest poem I've read by a guy most of my friends wright jail poems and poems on the high even though i don't do that stuff (and wish they wouldnt, but it is their life...) I like it but this is the first poem thats accually sweet that has been written by a guy to the love of his life. - CAROL |
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I believe the truest emotions were verbalized in this poem and I think more people sholuld be this way in their daily lives. - Eric |
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I enjoyed the poem, But I thought the ending would have been a little different. - James |
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I really love your poem. I was looking something like this for my girl-friend and u made my day. - Robinson |
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True to love's nature... - adele |
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If I have kissed you once, I have kissed you 1000 times your poem is as beautiful as it'is - ravi |
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It's the perfect poem for meeh and my B-friend, Thanks! Missie - Missie |
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this poam put a smile on my face cause it reminded me of an old friend of mine. - Bobby-Joe |
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this is a very touching poem i love it - Noc |
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Great! - Peggy |
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This is a very nice poem and I will Give you and A plus and plus a 100 score. - Shaneka |
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this was Beautiful! it says everything i have ever thought about :) - kristen |
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Awesome....really stood out amoung the many. - Kim |
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Wow I really liked this poem and I have felt this feeling befor:) - platnum |
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I liked the introduction to the poem as much as I did the actual poem itself. Wow.....the story of my life - Phyllis |
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OMG! I think Dave & his best friend have the same situation, love & adoration that me & my best friend. This poem sent a chill down my spine because it, well it's me, my thoughts, my desires. Great job! And although I want just 1 kiss from mine, I'll take him in any capacity & always be grateful that we are in each others lives. - S |
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This is a great poem!! I liked it and I'm going to give it to my boyfriend in the next few days. It tells what I think. - Hillary |
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I really enjoyed this poem because i can relate to what is being expressed. i know what it's like. - Heather |
