Our Night by Gord Merritt
Taking your hand
Fingers to my lips
I want to love every inch of you
Taste every part of your body
As if I can drink your loves blood
Through your very pores
I want to get lost in your eyes
Consumed by your kiss
Set my body on fire
Quench the fire in my blood
With sweet caresses
Touch my soul with your passion
Lay down beside me
Feel my body crying for you
Let's get lost in each other
Touching, exploring, tasting
We will exceed passion, go beyond bliss
For this is our night
Want me, like no other
Need you, like the air that I breathe
Together, one mind, one soul
Fused in the heat of passionate love
Existing in this moment
Forever
Fingers to my lips
I want to love every inch of you
Taste every part of your body
As if I can drink your loves blood
Through your very pores
I want to get lost in your eyes
Consumed by your kiss
Set my body on fire
Quench the fire in my blood
With sweet caresses
Touch my soul with your passion
Lay down beside me
Feel my body crying for you
Let's get lost in each other
Touching, exploring, tasting
We will exceed passion, go beyond bliss
For this is our night
Want me, like no other
Need you, like the air that I breathe
Together, one mind, one soul
Fused in the heat of passionate love
Existing in this moment
Forever
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I am a very passionate person, passionate about life and especially of love. I carry my passion deep within, and I am inspired by simple things. Romance is a lost art and although I have no one in my life to share my passion with, I still dream of what passion was will be again.
I am an incurable romantic, originally from Canada and now working in the south of Texas. My poetry is the outlet for my passionate nature, my lust for love and life runs deep. My nature does not go well with the loneliness of a new country, but I have my poetry for comfort, and my dreams for inspiration.
I am an incurable romantic, originally from Canada and now working in the south of Texas. My poetry is the outlet for my passionate nature, my lust for love and life runs deep. My nature does not go well with the loneliness of a new country, but I have my poetry for comfort, and my dreams for inspiration.
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I LOVED THE POEM! It says aloud what my heart says every time my husband and I are "together". It's nice to see a poet who can put words together, make sense, and relate to their readers. Thank you,again! - sheena |
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gosh. I can relate. I do understand you. I never read something that touched my heart so very much. you brought tears from my eyes. I am talking about your profile. I too am a poet and have a passion for writing and am an incurable romantic. congratulations. you did make my day! - adriana |
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I think that it is a very good poem and I like the words you used. Keep on doing what your doing. - Veronica |
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i loved it. it is a very good loving poem. i am going to sent it to my fiance. - Katie |
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i thought the poem was very moving and the words were lovely. hope to see more by this poet. - lynn |
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This poem truly moved me and took me to a place that only I can go with the one I love. It is one of the most passionate poems I have ever read. My hat off to the author of this beautiful work of art. - Debbie |
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Perfect rate 10 - Nia |
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WOW IT REAL VERY GOOD POEM OF LOVE THAT I LIKE ONE BEST EVER I SEE AND HEARD NOVEL OF POEM - Fonda |
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the poem was very touching - chezzzz |
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Your poem is absolutely beautiful. I hope you don't mind, I printed it so I can read it over and over. - Terri |
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I was never able to put into words how much I want and need my love Mike, your words are exactly how my heart feels - Maggie |
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ABSOLUTELY, POSITIVELY BEAUTIFUL! i'D LIKE TO SEE MORE POEMS BY YOU! - cheryl |
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This poem was done with ease and truth. With a true love that can't be found in material items or by what other people want you to believe. This poem is wonderful in every aspect brought in to it. I might be getting back with an ex that still loves me that I still love. Sent her this poem and hope that it helps. You are a brilliant poet in my opinion and I hope that you find your special one soon. Good Luck. - Michael |
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You should not be single, the inspiration you gave me in that poem, will go with me forever. I would long to have that poem played out on me by a man. - Shena |
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hehe, that was such a good poem. where did you get the inspiration from. - Emily |
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This poem expresses every thought I have for the one special person I hold dearly to my heart - Misty |
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hollaaaa this poem is flavor nice nice - dira |
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I love your poem. It said alot. And to me that is what it should do. thanks you - dee |
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very good, i can see that you have a great capacity for love and the ability to express it. - flame |
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I love this poem there is someone in my life i love but cant have and the poem say everything i want to say to him if i could - sarah-jane |
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Hello! Your poem is very beautiful.. I also have noone to share the very special moments with, but STILL continue to dream of that one moment when it will all come true. - olivia |
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So very beautiful! - Tina |
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What can I say It's hard to let some one now how you feel. - Jason |
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This poem was very heart warming. It's one of a kind - jose |
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If only there were more poets that had the sensual expression of pure desire, like you. - Chelle |
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i love your poem!!!! - alica |
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This poem made me remember my first time with the man i still want and love so i sent it to him .. I really think it hits home with all romantics. - Sandy |
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I felt it was a great description of how each of us, with words unsaid, feel and like to feel in that wonderful moment with the one you care about. - Chrissy |
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WOW, that was a wonderful poem. It doesn't get any better when trying to put thoughts to words. - Nisha |
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i'm feeling the poem. that was nice. make me want to go and do something to my man, if you know what i mean! nah but for-real i give you mad ups on your poem. i hope you take it far! - one |
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This is the passion I always wanted and I hope to find someday. - Diana |
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This is just the best poem I have ever read,its very breathtaking. - crystal |
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Fantastic! - Sheila |
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This described my passion for another so deeply. - Kate |
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I LOVED READING THIS POEM..IT PUT ME RIGHT IN MY HUSBANDS ARMS...IT IS SUCH BEAUTIFUL WORDS...THANK YOU FOR THE POEM THAT I ENJOYED SO MUCH - KATHRYN |
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when i read ur poem i loved it it was real nice I wish i had the talent to write poems like that to my girl. well it was real nice - Jonathan |
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that was beautiful! - nm |
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This is hot, too! - Karina |
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This one really touched me! Love it! - Patricia |
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i found this site clearly by accident, but i am so glad i did. the poem was absolutely beautiful and made me think of what it is going to be like for me and my online boyfriend. we are trying very hard to meet. he is only 2.5 hours away, but it seems like a whole continent. i sent him this poem, i really hope he enjoys it as much as i did. thank you. - leona |
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Good poem hope you will write more. - Lee |
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The poem out of the 7 titles took my breathe away it truly shows your passion for love and the one that you love. And it also shows the true relationshiop and in full detail the extent of making love to the person you're in love with. though you feel and get a glipse of what the poem is saying you can't help but relate to every single line in the poem. Good job and keep up the work - TaCaria |
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i really liked your poem as u i write from thought from experience and existance. - cynthia |
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Exactly what I feel towards my lover. - Brenda |
