Can We Still Be Friends? by Kathleen Sheppard
I was cold and hurting
lost out in the night
wandering and searching
for heaven's light
I saw the night sky clearing
when you spread your rainbow wings
But little did I know
what joy you would bring
From that moment on
a friendship did start
you kissed away my tears
and sheltered my heart
I bless the day God
sent him from above
But then I grew fearful
for I had fallen in love
I told you this feeling
and what did you say?
You said you liked our friendship
and that's how it would stay
I cried for a friendship I thought I lost
But then felt your warm, gentle hand
You then whispered in my ear
that by my side you'll forever stand
lost out in the night
wandering and searching
for heaven's light
I saw the night sky clearing
when you spread your rainbow wings
But little did I know
what joy you would bring
From that moment on
a friendship did start
you kissed away my tears
and sheltered my heart
I bless the day God
sent him from above
But then I grew fearful
for I had fallen in love
I told you this feeling
and what did you say?
You said you liked our friendship
and that's how it would stay
I cried for a friendship I thought I lost
But then felt your warm, gentle hand
You then whispered in my ear
that by my side you'll forever stand
This poem is a question that is often asked when you fall in love with a friend. Will they still be there for you?
| #1 vote - mika | |
| I loved it! It was beautiful - marissa | |
| I like this poem because I can relate to it. I just wish that our friendship had ended like yours did. With my luck over half of my friends wouldn't talk to me and after he broke up with me he told me he loved me and I couldnt take him back. It was the hardest thing I could turn down, so be happy with what you have. And dont take it for granid. For then it will be gone. - Aubrey | |
| i love this poem that i read it touched me because i just asked a guy out and no he never talks to me! - kaitlyn | |
| this is very god????? - britt | |
| i love this peom!Its very inspiring and makes a tingle come to my heart!It reminds me if someone i once knew. - Whitney | |
| good poem - tiffany | |
| This is a really good poem. i like it alot! its super fantastic!hope you keep writting - holly | |
| This was a good poem. But I dont think i could relate, my best friend is a girl! LOL - q | |
| I loved That poem cause its excactly how im feeling right now. - Nancy | |
| i really liked this poem i dont know why i just reallly like it it touched me coz i just had a big fight - Kira | |
| i liked this poem alot because i have once fallen in love with one of my best friends - Allie | |
| i really loved the poem it was very touching. i like it cause i can relate to it. keep writing more poems i want to read more. - Arleene | |
| i liked this poem becasue it is really describing on what i am going through now. i like my best friend. he is all i want but i cant have. ya know what i mean. this poem really helped. I LOVED IT! - Jessica | |
| i like tis one. kudo's - TASHA | |
| i really liked it for i did send it to my one and only true love but still we are together and your poem got us ther thanx - nell | |
| Wow that's soo true ! i've been there before and it isn't fun im sorry you had to go thrue that . - Rachael | |
| I liked the poem alot I know of a friend that went through that and it really did hurt to leave him but still it's better 2 be friends instead of later breaking up and being enemies and losing that love in b/t. - Kayla | |
| i enjoyed reading this poem i thought it was brilliant as it explains whatys happened to me in the passed and now i can send this to someone i tjhik this person should win a gift or money for this! all the best - hannah jane | |
| heyy i loved ur poem. it's very nicee. it really touched me and im happy for u that u r fdz w/ him. in my case i told the guy how i felt and he didnt say anythin to me for a while and then he just brought this other grl on my face and i found out tht they started goin out. but its all good i mean never expected anythin anyway but still im mad at him for some reason. i wanna be friends again the way we were b4 but i dont think thats ever gonna happenn - chiku | |
| I loved the poem. It was so heartfelt, it really touched me. - Kristy | |
| I really like this poem because is is filled with words that give a strong feeling - vivian | |
| this poem was excellent i loved. Was so sweet. Congratulation. - Rosabel | |
| i like this poem because it describes a time when i fell in love with my best boy mate iv didnt get with him because our friendship was too precious too lose and now i am glad that we didnt go into a relationship because it would have ruined wat we already had and that would destroy me so great work - kaylea | |
| i like yo poem it was sweet ans nice it made me feel good and remember wheni was in love sincerly tarra - tara | |
| This was so good it made me cry! Thankyou! - Sarah | |
| man u just don't know how much u touch me . thank u for that - lashawnder | |
| thats exactly how i felt with one of my friends. - megan | |
| i liked it because the same thing justed happend to me and a friends - jazmine | |
| dis is a very special poem it has alot of meaning to it your a great writer keep up the good work - jessica | |
| I loved this poem because it reminds me of a friend that I wanted to keep by myside. It's a well done poem. Keep it up! - Lois | |
| this is the cutest poem ever i love it it is so awesome - whitney | |
| oh my gosh i loved your poem. i almost teared because it was like what i went going through. i fell in love with my best friend but he had a girlfriend who was one of my good friends. but later as the months grew i found out that he knew i liked him. i cried and then felt uncomftrable around him but he hugged me and told me he would always be my best friend no matter what happened but he then moved - jeanne | |
| i thought this poem was great - TERESA | |
| I think this is a real popem from the heart that almost everyone can relate to at least once in their life. - Valerie | |
| i love your poems. i wish i could meet you b/c you know alot about what i try to say to my ex. love yur poems keep writing them. ! - tiffany | |
| I loved it! - Lakeysha | |
| wow, this poem really touched me, I have a friend that I got kinda really close to but then I started getting scared that I was falling in love with him and well. I was, and I did, and this peom seemed like it was written right out of me, Im in love with a friend that doesn't love me back, well not like that at least, so this peom almost made me cry when I read it - Kara | |
| I love this poem. and it really touched me in so many ways! Not only in emotional but also personal! You are talented; keep up the great work! - Marlena | |
| hey this poem is really good. it reminds me of all the times i've had with all my friends. well keep up the good work. much luv. =) - Jessica | |
| WELL IT IS SO TRUE I AM GOING THROUGH THE SAME THING AND IT STINKS - CHASITY | |
| This poem inspires me to be bold with my feelings. Let's me know that I can express myself and hope for more, yet all at the same time not be afraid of losing my best friend. - Brooke | |
| i love this poem. i read this poem 2 my boyfriend and it bought us back together. - Ja'Taisha | |
| I thought this was a great poem. My judgement might be a little clouded though,becuase I'm going through the same thing. It still is sweet though. - Debbie | |
| i think that this is a good poem b/c it tells u about when people lost there friends over fights,boyfriends,and really stupid things so i really do love this poem. - rebecca | |
| This poem really touched me in ways unspeakable. As of right now, i'n in this same perdicament. This was truly a good poem! You go girl! - Nicole | |
| that was very pretty - marchella | |
| I think this peam has honisty and hurt at the same time but in the end comfort for you know he will always be there for you. - rebecca | |
| i rall y lke this poem because its touchable i read the first line and it made me want to read more and more - hanan | |
| I think its a great poem - Anabel | |
| This poem says EXACTLY what I'm afraid of is going to happen if I reveil my true feelings for my best friend. It is an AWESOME poem with true feeling. A+++ - Dawn | |
| i really like this poem it erminds me of my bestfriend on the other country - karen | |
| When I read this poem for the first time it touched my heart so deeply because I have fallen in love with a friend and I am so scared I MIGHT LOSE HER! Thank you for the most beautiful poem Best regards, Carel - Carel | |
| its a nice poem. - Jonry- Jong | |
| hey this poem was so beautiful i loved every word of it. - alessandra | |
| i like this 1 because i have a crush on a boy who is my friend but he belongs 2 other and i belong 2 another 2. my bf loves me lots 2 i loves him lots 2. but my homeboy is sometimes on my mind 2. i guess i should justlove my bf and keep him!but, thankz 4 writing or typing suh a COOL peom!well, LATER! - niki | |
| that was a nice poem i liked that and i say that you are a good writer and you sould keep it up. - kia | |
| excellent. you will get all those you want. Because your heart is very very clear closed to her. All the best - conty_2712 | |
| This is real good. and that something that I am feeling right now. Any one at this point can relate to this poem some time or an another. - shantal | |
| IT'S FREAKIN BAD DUDE IT REMINDS ME OF ME AND SOME GUY - VICKY | |
| Your poem is awsome it explains alot baout how you feel - Erika | |
| I LOVINT THIS IS TAUOCH MY HERAT I LOVE THIS POEM I DALECAT TO MY BF - SIDRA | |
| I believe that this is a poem for me to my friend Chris because he likes me but i just don't want to mess up our friendship so this is why i love your poem. - Michelle | |
| I really like your poem and i understand ehere you are coming from. Long as you keep on writing i will keep on reading. - Tierra | |
| WoW, you did inoutsinding job - courtney | |
| This poem is so sweet!I love it. It sounded like a fairy tail! - carmen | |
| hey there girl, this poem is really good you should keep up the good work and if you really did write this you should start a poem book! - emily | |
| yes - akaisha | |
| i like this because it makes me feel good. - naruemon | |
| this is a very good poem. I love it. Good job and keep writing dont let nothing stop you. That was a really good poem. - elizabeth | |
| very good really like it - chris | |
| tht poem is 1 of the best poems ive heard. it makes me think of my ex when she told me she wanted 2 be just friends is painfull but still a very good poem. - robert | |
| I can relate in many ways - Sheresa | |
| i love that poem! Keep writng you are really good!i can relate - haley | |
| I liked this poem because it's something that i could relate to when a guy told me what the poem said. - Leslie | |
| i love this poem it reminded me of 1 of my gay exs so yeah i wont menchane any names - rebeka | |
| i think that this was one of the most heart felt poems i have read in a long time. it was short byt very deep. this touched my heart because ths happened to me very recently. it was beautiful, kathleen. you have potential. keep writting. 10 out of 10 - toni | |
| Because this happened to me and I am so so so so in love with amazing guy and he is only suppose to be my friend but he's commited to some else. - Kimberly | |
| This is a perfect example of my ex and I. I made the mistake of falling in love with him. We shared one night and it felt so weird afterwards. i sent him this poem and we are now like brother and sister. Thank you. Amandine - Amandine | |
| hey i really like your poem i have a few of my own i love to write about all sorts of things but mostly love very good job on the poem keep writing your very good at it - Jasmine | |
| this poem is such a great poem! - martha | |
| Wow! i love your poem the main reason is because it has happened to me and it took me a long time to get it over with and for u to put it all in words exactly like i felt well thats really awesome so continue writing because your really good at it - Brianna | |
| It was great - Sacha | |
| I like your poem. - Shery | |
| Wow ! Totally a poem written straight from the heart. This poem has a resolution in it to a question the author was seeking and also the person that she described in it was honest with her and didn't end their relationship because of the way she revealed her feelings to him. I have to admit he was very nice to do that beacause some other people in similar situations wouldn't have the guts to do it like he did! Keep up the good writing and good luck. - Evelyn | |
| I very good. I like it very much. - Long | |
| This poem was really sweet and it can be touching to those who can relate to it. (Like me!) - Shanay | |
| I really liked this poem. It reminds me of what I have been through with a dear friend of mine. Through it all, our friendship becomes stronger and I am trully blessed to have hm in my life. - Shannon | |
| Hey, katy. if this you go to cadets, then i think i know you. but even if this isnt or is you, the poem is beautiful. I felt that way b4 but he wasnt as caring as the one you described. Lucky you. Well done and keep it up. - Sara | |
| i loved that poem it was so nice and touching i all most cried it was beautful i hope that who ever wrote thst keeps wrighting - mercedes | |
| i liked this poem because thats exactly what happen to me when i saw thisd poem made me cry - dennis | |
| I found this poem and I dont think I could have found a better one to express how I feel about my bestfriend. He is one of the most important people in my life. I really do thank God for sending him my way, because I dont know how I would make it through life sometimes if it weren't for him. I care about him more than I have ever cared about any other guy. He is definately one in a million. I think this was an amazing poem, and your a great writer. keep it up. If you read this Jeremiah. I really do truely love you with all of my heart, and thanks for always being there for me, your my angel sent from above. Love ya, Carissa - Carissa | |
| I love this poem so much! It reminds me of when I said I love you to my ex. But that is in the past. Just wanted to let you know you have talent! - Angel | |
| This was a very close to home and beautiful poem. thanks for posting it for us all to read! -Amy - amy | |
| I think this is a great poem. I believe everyone in thier life time falls in love with there best friend and nothing is ever said. That is a mistake, you should let them know how you feel, cause chances are he\she feels the same. - Gaby | |
| this is a good poem to read that we could enjoy. - adriana | |
| THIS WAS A NICE POEM THAT DEMONSTRATED A CURRENT SITUATION I'M GOING THROUGH. - MONIQUE | |
| it are good - Julia | |
| I love this poem and every1 who wrote a comment I know how u all feel! My best m8 liked me 4 aba a yr and i neva had feelings 4 im until the other week and last nite i told him that i liked him and he sed he still liked me so we r gettin 2geva! - Sammie | |
| this is a wonderful poem i write poems to but i don't get on this kind of stuff and let my poems out write back - Rachel | |
| This poem is sweet kind and thoughtful! - marlene | |
| This poem really touched me, and i realized that life is basically love that changes who we are. i really loved this poem, and so did my boyfriend. - ROSE | |
| This poem touched me, I feel the same way about my best friend. - J | |
| this is a very good poem I rate it a 10 - Crista | |
| i thought this was quite nice. Good Job. - Delisha | |
| THis is a great poem! I really liked it. It reminds me of my friend. Him and I have been best friends for sometime and I havent told him yet how I feel because there is a problem with the fact that I like him. He has a girlfrined thats a jerk to him, but he doesnt relize it. I just liked this poem because its how some friends are and its true. - Kylee | |
| WHEN I FIRST SAW THIS POEM I FLIPPED BECAUSE IT REMINDS ME OF MYSELF. I LIKED THIS GUY AND I TOLD HIM BUT HE SAID HE WAS IN A RELATIONSHIP. and now we hardly talk. - JAZMINE | |
| i love this peoms that is what i like - Vanessa | |
| That was an awesome poem. that really relates to me and one of my bests friends. in elem. school we were like brother and sister and then in middle school i started to like him in 9th grade me told me that we would aloways be best friends and that hurt me cuase i liked him soo much. i thought i loved him and then in collage he told me that he loves me to and now we are married with 5 kids. So u never know even if he says you should just be friends DO NOT give up hope. JeSsica - Jessica | |
| I like this poem alot cause i actually got to go out with that good guy friend and it didnt end up to well we still have our friendship ( or just pieces of it) - jessica | |
| I love this poem I think when you work this is gave you a since of relief and I enjoy it and I cna fully relate to this - Myesha | |
| i really liked your poem because it reminded me about me. but it was a fantastic poem keep up with the great work! - Jessica | |
| I LOVED you poem. I really did. its like me now. =) well keep up. i would like to read more poems by you. =) - Jessie | |
| i really love this poem it reminds me of a past friend - Alisha | |
| I really liked this poem,Its so sweet. but atleast he/she is still your friend and in your life! - Katie | |
| Nice poem! It's so touching, it almost brought tears into my eyes :). keep it up. - Angela | |
| THIS IS A GREAT PEOM BECAUSE THIS IS HOW I FELT ABOUT THIS BOY I REALLY LIKED HIM AND HE ONLY LIKED ME AS A FRIEND BUT THEN WE SOON GOT INTO THIS HUGE FIGHT ABOUT IT ALL AND THEN WE BECAME FRIENDS AGIAN BUT THEN HE GOES OUT WITH ONE OF MY BEST FRIENDS AND SHE KNOWS I LOVE HIM BUT THEN I HAD TO LET IT GO AND FORGET ABOUT IT BECAUSE THEY DESERVE EACH OTHER AND I DIDNT WANT TO RURION THAT - Amanda | |
| Awesome! This is poetry! - Brittany | |
| this is a very sweet poem. i rate you a 9 out of 10 - Jessica | |
| It was a great poem 2 read n i could read it over n over again and i think that is a very special poem 2 read 2 a friend that u really really like that has been a great friend 2 you ! - kara | |
| i really liked the poem,it toched my heart cause everything it say's is how i felt and i had feel in love with my best friend and he said he would never be able to be with me cause our friendship was to much for us to mess it up. - maria | |
| i just love d way it wrote. - karen | |
| I really loved this poem because it touched me in many ways. I was going through the same thing and I was just really excited reading my same exact thoughts in a poem form. Thank you Kathleen Sheppard for this extrrodinary poem. I love your work and keep doing what your doing. YOU ROCK! - Christine | |
| this poem said excatly what i am feelin - Tracy | |
| I can so totally understand you. i have a friend and at first thats all i wanted to be, friends. but then i wanted more and i asked him if he thought if i was waisting my time liking him and he said yes and that broke my heart but we are better friends then ever now but deep down inside i wish we were more. - jazmin | |
| this poem is amazing! it is so touching, and would give ANY girl including me, the courage to talk to a guy about how they feel, and they could use your exact words to explain how they feel, no matter what. this poem could speak for anyone. Awesome job, and i hope to see more from you extremely soon! Love: Melissa~*~ - Melissa | |
| this peom is like the best! - kate | |
| I liked this poem because the same thing happened to me whe ni had a friend i loved to hang out with and i started to fall in love with him so i asked him out and i told him that i REALLY liked him but he said he likes our friendship better because if we went out and we broke up it would just hurt to much and we wouldnt be friends any more. i give you a 10. - Erica | |
| thast sounds like me and this kid! - heidi | |
| its a really good poem dont stop writting ~Briana~ with love - Briana | |
| This poem ROCKS! I love this poem! :) I hope my enemies would be my frends! nyway. keep rockin! LOVING IT! - Kookai | |
| i feel this poem has really touched me and i really love it. thats what my best guy friend said to me and maybe someday it might be more. you are an inspiration. - rachel | |
| I love your poems! - Rowan | |
| Your poem was really nice and inspiring. Gave me hope, answer and inspiration on how to ask my friend the big question. Thanks and keep up the good work. - Lydia | |
| I think that your poem was great! It really touched me I loved it! - melinda | |
| It. was so. beautiful. It moved me so much, it was just beautiful. If you ever read this, thank you so much for writing it, and I pray that things have, or will, work out for you. - John | |
| I love your poem. I liked it because it reminded me of how I felt around my best friend. That's why I like your poem. - Alyssa | |
| I like your poem because I was going through the same thing that that person was going through! - Samantha | |
| This poem is great! It explains exactly what i am going through right now with one of my best friends. We have been friends for years and he doesnt wanna start a relationship because he is scared we will ruin the friendship. Thanks so much for writing this. - Patricia | |
| This one is very pretty. - Lecie | |
| This poem really touched my heart. It touched my heart because sometimes when I become friends with someone I start to fall in love with them. I really like this poem. - Courtney | |
| This one very good, it touch my heart alot. very nice - Dux | |
| This poem sound alot like me, I'm in love with a friend, and he told me it's best for us to stay friends than to be together and let something bad come between our friendship. - Kim | |
| WOW! this is great poem, i really like it because it completley relates to how im feeling right now. I asked my bestfriend out and they told me they didnt want to hurt our friendship and then i thought things would be wierd because i did that but things only got better. =] I came on here looking for a poem that describes how i feel. I definitley found it and its only the second one ive read! - Jessica | |
| The poem could have been written for me - Louis | |
| This is the perfect poem for what i am going through right now with a dear friend of mine. i love him so much but he doesnt feel the same way but he reassured me that he would always be there for me and i just wanted you(the writer of this poem) that i love your poem. Thankyou for sharing it with others. - Monya | |
| i liked this poem because it reminded me of the moment i talked to my best friend about my feelings for him - Lorena | |
| This is a excellent poem, it shows emotion, drama and love i hope this poem does very well! - Taylor | |
| i love this poem! It brought tears to my eyes. probably cuz it happened to me. - Emma | |
| i loved the poem. it really touched me because i just went through that. well actually i am going through that right now. i told my best friend i liked him and now you made me think that maybe he will still be there for me. it was a great poem. - Kristi | |
| This poem was awesome i can relate to it in so many ways awesome job! - Crystal | |
| I am a man. I am finding myself in exactly the same situation described in the poem when my friendship with a woman turned to love. - bhushan | |
| How romantcI give it a ranking of being the highest 10 - Luis | |
| About the poem "Can We Still Be Friends?" I absolutely LOVED it! It was something that had happened to me a while back, and when I read this poem, I was like," Wow!This is exactly what happened!" Well, I just want to say,. THIS POEM ROCKS! - vanessa | |
| i liked this poem because my dauter was fighting with her bestfriend /crush and it helped her a lot so thanks 2 whoever wrote this it was great - nany | |
| I think this peom is very good. I really like it. - Shanti | |
| I LOVED this poem. It is soooooo beautiful. It reminds me of my ex. We are apart for about 2 months now. This poem really touched my heart. Keep going. You are GREAT! - KT | |
| Your poem was great. It really got to me. - Marlene | |
| This poems reminds of what i have done. I dated someone that I was really good friends nad now we are not freinds at all. - Nicole | |
| it is a very good poem,practical and relevent! - phindile | |
| I absolutely loved your poem. I read it once and began to cry. It fits what I am going though in my personal life to a tee. Continue the great work. You truly have a gift from God - Carli | |
| oh my god! i tried to run from my love for a guy. my old boyfriend. and i must not have run fast enough cuz it only got stronger but by then i had already lost him to letters of lies. now i feel horrible cuz i no longer have him. as mine. and i think i should show im this poem. thank you so much for writing it! - Leigh | |
| good job - jazmine | |
| i think is a very good poem because i'am going through something very similar to the poem i have a friend and it's like he's the same way about our friendship so i think it is a very good poem. - jasmne | |
| i really liked this poem because right now i'm really good friends with my boyfriends cousin and before i got back with my boyfriend i told his cousin that i liked him and he said he'd rather just be friends - Brianna | |
| its really superb reflectin my luv for my friend. excellent work. - rani | |
| Very nice poem and yes sometimes friendship is to valuable to lose. With that said however the strength of a relationship is friendship. - Scottq | |
| I realy liked your poem because I was in the same situction and I still am. I am not in love with him I just wanted to be friend's he tought I had a crush on him so he just acted like I was not even there. I wanted to cry so much because I know our friendship has came to an end. I only love him as a friend but no more than that. Keep writing your poems they are very, very good. - Amy | |
| This poem was very true to the heart. It describes what every persom goes through at least once in their life. I'm going through it myself. Well, actually I am in love with one of my friends, but I don't think he knows it and probably thinks of me as just a friend, but who know. But anyways, once again, wonderful and true to the heart. Keep writing! - LadyLove | |
| OMG i loved this poem! It said exactly how ive been feeling the past few days. I got 2 no this guy really well and i enjoyed talking to him and i felt like he was feeling the same way i was. and then 2 nights ago he said he liked our friendship the way it was. i thought my heart would break and i guessed he would never talk 2 me again but he got online he started talkin 2 me and hes been talking. i dont no whether 2 feel happy or sad cause friends with benefits is prolly all were ever gonna b:( - Jessica | |
| I love this poem, I thought it reminded me of me. Because I actually told a friend that I had falling in love with them and they said that our friendship was to much to lose. - Keisha | |
| i realy realy liked ur poem when i read it, it reminded me about myself. - jennifer | |
| I LIKEED YOUR POEM ALOT AND IT REALLY TOUCHED ME. JUST KEEP WRITING AND INSPIRING OTHER POEPLE BECAUSE YOU DO HAVE PEOPLE LOOKING UP TO YOU. - Shavon | |
| I just really liked the poem . - Jai | |
| i'm voting on this poem because it really did touch me i like it a lot it reminds me of my ex-boyfriend who is now my boyfriend and i sent him one of the other poems telling him how i felt and how much i wanted him back now i'm loooking for poems for school and this is the one P. S i give this poem a scale from 1 through 10 and i give it a 10 great job on this poem - monica | |
| this poem is definately how i feel about my best guy friend! this really is a great poem! keep up the touching poems! - ambyr | |
| I just love this poem don't have much to say but i like it. - Erica | |
| i thought this poem was good i mean its true what it says - crystal | |
| I really liked this poem. Because i was in this situation once. But i was the one who said"lets just be friends". and now i think i made a BIG mistake. Because i dont think he even considers me as one of his friends. but it was my fault . cause i had him and let him slip right through my hands - Tosha | |
| God this poem expresses how im feelin at this minute it really hurts but aleast he will always be there by my side for life and thats better than nothin. - claire | |
| This poem is so true - Amy | |
| This was a really inspiring piece. I could really relate to this poem, because i to once fell in love with a friend and it turned out he just wanted to be friends. - Kuulei | |
| The underlying emotion of the speaker of the poem can be felt through the words - Tiffani | |
| the poem is good cause it really struck me. but can i ask the author. ? is it really possible for you to be friends with the friend you loved but rejected you only for the sake of your friendship??? cause thats the question that is still conquering my mind. i really feel bad. cause im willing to sacrifice all just for her to love me. and that stupid friendship is the cause for her not to love me - sam | |
| I liked this poem very much thankyou. - Mandy | |
| amazing! i hope he will change his mind eventually. my friend did and weve been together for 15 months - lakeisha | |
| I loved the poem it was great;) - Auhnett | |
| This is a poem that I can relate to! I love it i'm gonna show all my friends - fiona | |
| GOOD - stacie | |
| Awesome Poem - Jessica | |
| This poem is exactly how i feel about a guy i know and love - Sofie | |
| This poem ROCKS! Its all true. - Pepper | |
| The poem is brilliant it reminds my of my best boy m8 who used to fancy me but i didnt feel t he same way i relise now im in love with him but scared to tell him incase i ruin the best friendship ever created! - Becca | |
| Hey! Thats a really good poem! I mean that sincerely. :) God gave you a gift so keep using it. :) - Matt | |
| The poem was really good i loved! - katie | |
| this is a great poem - Danielle | |
| I just wanted to let you know that I really liked this poem alot. It really hits home. I hope you keep writing poems like this or others. - Heather | |
| I really loved this poem. im going through the same thing with one of my really close guy friends! we've fallen for eachother before n never did anything about it bc of our friendship. but he didnt knwo how much i liked him! i feel in luv with him when i first met him a year ago but didnt say anyhting bc he was going out with my bestfriend! but i luv the Poem its great writing! - Amanda | |
| this poems is really true is how i feel inside my heart for my friend guy. he knows who he is - Ashely | |
| I am sad to say that I have fallen in love with a friend and our friendship came to an end. But this poems has let me see thatlife can turn out right for some people and not others but good things do happen. I am truly happy for you and your friend. - Kyle | |
| I really liked the poem It really touched my heart because I been friends with a boy for a long time and I don't know how to tell him my true feelings about him if I tell him he will probly say he juat wants to be friends - Yvette | |
| i like this poem because i have fell in love with my best freind but i was scared if we had broke up would we still be freinds and he said no matter what i will always be there for you. - Rakeya | |
| Kathleen. your poem reminds me of one of my love that i had. it's very alike. sometimes reminding it makes me sad,but wow. love is a "gift" from above. every single love is precious whatever the result is. thank's for your poem, i feel peace now - Johan | |
| I think it is a good poem - Vilma | |
| hey well i loved the poem i can relate to it very well because i am in love with ,my best friend who is a guy and he is the best thing that has ever happened to me and could ever happen to me and i justr thought it was so good that i just had to make a comment well it was really good and good luck with your love searching. - susie | |
| You're poem was amazing. I have felt this way before and you're poem really inspires me to wirte poems just like the one you did. Keep up the good work! - BaBy | |
| ~*!* this poem reminds me of my Friend Brandon and I *!*~ - Jennifer | |
| i really love this peice because it reminded me of a situation i had in my life. - Zaneta | |
| it is so sweet it reminded that of me and my friend a. j and we are still best friends - jessica | |
| Outstanding and amazing poem, really touches my heart deeply, it makes me cry. because this happen to me and my boyfriend, we simply breakoff just like that, our friendship lasted for 4 months, and now no news from him, no emails from him, no sweet calls from him and i am, seriously, miss him alot. i just wish he's reading this right now, hurt in silence. - Ema | |
| i really love this poem. A guy that i had been friends with and had fallen in love with just told me that he only wanted to be friends and it hurt me alot but by reading your poem it made me feel a whole lot better. Now i know that he'll always be with me were ever i go even if we aren't dating. Thanks for writting such a wonderful poem! - Donna | |
| i loved you poem it was wonderful i think who ever said it was stupid would be stupid because this poem is wonderful - abby | |
| CUTE! THAT WAS A REALLY CUTE POEM - jessica | |
| it was great peoms - veronica | |
| this poem is awsome. I cryed when i read it just resently. I told my long lost friend how i really felt about him, I haven't heard from him since and i miss him dearly. It had been 17years since we talk and in one moment Iscrewed it all up by telling him i had loved him all these years. great poem - Ann | |
| This poem is just wonderful. I have a friend, whom I carelessly have developed feelings for. I let her know about it, but she just said that she didn't want to risk our friendship, she couldn't jepardize any of her friendships. That weekend she went out with one of our good friends. I wish to send her this poem, I hope it may work, if not, I thank you for sharing this with me anyway. - Chris | |
| I have had this same problem, i now wish i had said nothing. - john | |
| Really nice and sweet poem - Tenisha | |
| Absolutly Beautiful. That is all I can say. - Ryan | |
| Wow. this poem is awesome! i can relate to it so well. I have been falling in love wiht this really awesome guy for 3 years now. And he has never given me a sign of liking me. while i suffer listening to him rant and rave about his new girlfriends. its just not there - Stacy | |
| i think this poems is really good - Kristy | |
| i love it, i love it, i love it. its so amazingly perfect. - shyam | |
| It's simply beautiful. I was really surprised, I was just browsing to find a poem to send to my best friend, who I have fallen in love with, even though I knew what he has to offer me was only friendship. The poem consists of every characteristic I find in him, and sort of the words he speak. I think our relationship is a live example for this beautiful poem. - Mahes | |
| I really liked your Poem it was great. keep up the good work. - Sarah | |
| Hmm. well its very emotional and painfull poem i ever have read. i miss u my best friend and my 1st love. its true friendship often ends at love but love at friendship never. just hope might be she again come to my life as a friend like she was. thinking on the past finding mistakes all are the way of life. anyways its 100% true all that has written in this poem. all credit goes to author, - Umer | |
| that is just what i just went though. i liked this guy but he did not like me the way i liked him. - Me | |
| I really love this poem it really touched my heart when I read it and it reminds me of something that has happened to me before I used to really like this kid and everyone told me that he liked me and then when my friend asked him if he liked me and he came up to me and said i only like you as a friend and it really hurt me when he said that to me but i realized that sometimes friendship is better then love and sometimes you can ruin a friendship if you try to turn it into love - Tay | |
| I went through this once before and then i just did it again. when i saw this poem it said everything that i felt and i'm glad that i found it cause it helped me exspress my feelings to him! - Janie | |
| I really liked your peom it really relates to me and my friend I am gonna remember this poem alot cuz its so touching and it makes me feel better since my friend and I arent really friends anymore she changed well thanx for wrighting that great poem - laure | |
| Kathleen, I just love all of your poems. Keep it up ! - Erlin | |
| Girl, ur poem off da heezey! - Kriz | |
| i thought this poem was very good i loved it very much - britt | |
| now thats a true friend. who will stay there and won't let anything get in the way. - brand | |
| I read the poem and I thought its pretty tight because I guess a lot of people including me can relate to this poem. yes, at first both of you meet, then you become friends and unexpectingly you fall in love with your friend, and it does hurt but you should also think that if both of you love eachother so much as friends then both of you must have some time for eachother to talk it over and come to an agreement that best fits both of your happines, TRUST ME even though you don't know me because I whent through this with a really special guy, Omar, and to this day we're still cool with eachother I mean he has his girlfriend and I have my boyfriend. This is why I like your poem and took some time to wright this to evcourage people to not only read this but to think it through a little too. - Celi | |
| i know how you feel if this really happend to you. cause this really hapend to me with my bestfriend but i know longer have him as a bestfriend. - carmen | |
| This is a poem that i can relate to i think that this is a very nice piece of work - ali | |
| beautifully put. - Rich | |
| aww. dis is such a nice poem. i hope my homiez will be as sweet as the one in ur poem. i hope u keep writin these beautiful poems. nice work - aNgeL | |
| I've only just come netpoets for the first time, some of the poems are clearly emotional but this one is full of sincer emotion and will written well done - adam | |
| I just love this poem! I almost wanted to recite it to my friend. but I changed my mind as I didn't know what would he think! This is such a beautiful poem that I have fallen in love with it. - steff | |
| all then word in the poem it remind me off alot of things - ronal | |
| Hey darling! The poem- fascinating! I absolutely loved it. I have fallen for my best friend. He knows it becuz I cant keep anything from him. He's my world! He said just friends for now, but we fight a lot more then we used to. This poem was inspiring and my thoughts went straight to my love! Thanx bunches 4 writing this, I write poems but i cant share them becuz im too afraid people will laugh. I give you 110%! u deserve a standing ovation or something :) - Kerry | |
| i read your poem and i realized the same thing happened to me. I met this really nice guy and we went out for 4 months but the time came when he had to break up with me. I was heart broken thought i never could live again. He told me we would only just be friends. But deep down in my lonely heart i still truely loved him. - jennifer | |
| diz really touched meeh..diz happened to meeh in real life but to my situation when she found out how i felt for him everything just change nice poem.. - Lhea | |
| This is an excellent poem.it totally speaks my mind if all the "her"s change into "him"s 'cause i am a guy who did fall in love with my best friend and i don't know what to do now - Kwokster | |
| i think that this poem is really good it reminded me of me and my friend - ash | |
| hi kathleen! i can relate to the poem Can We Still Be Friends? i hope you'll send more poems! good luck and god bless you! - mhon | |
| I thought that the poem she wrote was very touching.I have gone through so much pain in love,and reading her poem really helps.She did a very good job,it must of been hard to explaine the way she felt. It had so much expression in it about love. - Mandy | |
| i think this poem is really good it touched my heart it really inspires me it almost brung me to tears i liked it so much i just wanted u to know this is an awseome poe! - Chasity | |
| It was like a play-view of my life. Or it was like myself saying that since I really was feeling that but I could not express it. I liked it a lot. - Sarah | |
| Great! it's the perfact words and way to say them. Thank you! - Dillon | |
| This pome is so up moving i was truely touched. It remind's me of my first love it's very comforting to actually find a pome that would signfiy one's frist love? - jesstyne | |
| I really like this poem because in life there is something like this that is true. When you are close, close friends with a guy and when u do everything and anything with him u fall in Love. I really like your poem and its 100%. - Staceymaree | |
| nice work. beautiful relationship and a valued friendship - jazmine | |
| this poem is SOO inspiring. its 100% true about wats going on in my life.. i really love this guy..who's my bestest bestest friend..and i told him that.and he said i only love you as a friend..i'm soo soo sad..and i can't believe that this poem is connecting with ME. am i supposed to be sad or happy??? i REALLY love him.just wished he'd realize that..and love me more than a friend! - christelle | |
| This poem is very sweet. Thanks. - Donnatella | |
| gurl! i luved your poem! this has happened 2 soo many people. i cannot ever relate to poetry , but this one i can . well i dont want 2 waste your time , but id just like to tell u to keep it goin' - trina | |
| i like this poem because i kind of went threw this but instead he also filt the same way and things hapened that i can not take back and wich i could. - marie | |
| This poem is really very touchy and close to reality. Whenever we try to cross the line between friendship and love, either we succeed or come across the same type of feelings. - Vishal | |
| this poem really gets the point accross through a woman's eyes,when they are fed that really cheesy line from a really gutless man "oh,i just wanna be friends" it's better by far if u just tell the truth! - charlie | |
| Really nice poem, I was really touched by it since it is exactly the thing I'm going trough right now. I can totally relate to the comment of Slinky who states almost the same situation which I am in. In love with best (female) friend, told her about it, she doesn't feel the same about me, This poem at least gave me some strength to continue to TRY to stay with her solely as a friend, although this is very hard. But as some else's (very good) comment was: "sometimes true friendship is letting go of someone" or something like that.cheers! - Joker75 | |
| THIS POEM WAS REAAAALLLY CUTE. I FEEL SO SORRY FOR THE AUTHOR ALTHOUGH ITS REALLY SWEET WHAT YOUR FRIEND SAID TO YOU GIRL. ITS WRITTEN REAL GOOD TOO. ALL I CAN SAY IS SWEET SWEET SWEET. :-) - NADINE | |
| This is so recognisable. I couldn't help crying when I read it. It's beautiful. - summy | |
| I luv this poem. It really decribes this relationship with a guy friend of mine! i just absoultuly love it! - Veronica | |
| wow! dis poem is great. i reali liked it. no! actuali, I LUV IT!:) - katie | |
| iii., just love your poem. it is very touching,and, that is so nice, so please write more poems - priscilla | |
| I had this kind of experience before.. It took me a while to get over him. I still love him.. and he is still my best friend.. Thanks to God - Hasz | |
| its one of the nicest poems i have eva heard, it reminds me of my past experience with people that i liked. - rohan | |
| i think this poem is brilliant it really touched my heart as i sent it to person that i loved but he said we can still be friends. - Malaak | |
| I think that the poem was really good. It actually helps you realize that just because you are friends with someone doesnt mean that you cant date them. - Arlene | |
| this is a awsome poem.i would love to read more from you . - meghan | |
| i like the poem cuz i have the same feeling ! - hunny | |
| I loved your poem! - Jaimie | |
| This was a very passionate poem. It reminds me of my ex boyfriend. It was very pretty. I loved it - Jenny | |
| This was beautifully done..I enjoyed reading your poem, I think you had a really beautiful way of expressing something which I am unable to express..:) - Jackie | |
| i think this is a beautiful poem and it is very touching. out of a 1-10 scale i rate this poem a 10 turely. - lareccia | |
| I really enjoyed your poem and look forward to reading more very soon! - Maya | |
| This poem touched me very deeply. I have experinced the feeling first hand as many do.I have fallen in love with my best friend.Even though we both know that we love each other more than friend it was never enough. Now she is gone, and I'm torn apart inside.This poem made most of the pain subside. I have given it to my friend(love) and to my suprise she wrote back to me and told me how she has felt for the time that we have know each other. Thank you very muck your poem has touched me more deeply than you'll ever know. Thank you. "Sometimes to trully show some one you love them, you have to let them go." - Lone | |
| very good - sal | |
| I really liked this poem becAUSE I can really relate to it - Desiree | |
| KATHLEEN SHEPPARD I JUSTED WANTED LET YOU KNOW YOUR LOVE POEMS ARE VERY NICE AND SWEET I AM LOOKING FOR ONE ABOUT A LITTLE BOY IF YOU COME ACROSS CAN YOU SEND IT TO ME PLEASE. THANK YOU APRIL COOK - APRIL | |
| I liked this peom it showed me how my friend stayed my friend after he was my boyfriend. - alana | |
| Ya thang was tight shawty... - Carl | |
| great great great - janice | |
| That is a great poem. It reminds me of something I went through in the past. Great Job! - David | |
| THIS POEM IS SOOOOOO SWEET AND I THINK IT'S THE BEST ON THIS WEB - Valerie | |
| its wonderfull - terence | |
| your poem was so meaningful to me..My best friend is in love with me, but it cannot be..i love another, but will always be there for him..i hope he will always be there for me because he means so much to me. - carolyn | |
| This is one of the greatest poem It desearved a top mark - Dr. | |
| :-) I love your poem, 'Can We Still Be Friends?' Just the other week i went through the same experiance, I was(still am hopefully) friends with this girl 'Sarah' she then started going out with one of my best friends, and everything was going well, between me and her and my friend and her, 9 months past and they were still going out, yet for some reason Mark(my friend) broke up his relationship, Sarah was hurt, after a couple of months past me and sarah started getting closer in the fact that we trusted each other with secrets more.. after a couple of weeks, you could say that i had fallen in love. I tried to hide it, yet when ever i wasn't with her i wanted to be with her, and when ever i was with her i didn't wantt o be with her because I couldn't stop thinking about what i felt. I told Mark, he was fine with it, and said that he understood what i felt as he had a nine month relationship with her. Yet he said i should try and forget about her. (he never told me exactly why he broke up with her) to this day he still can't stand her alot. At this point the only thing on my mind was my current situation. One day she invited me to have a friendly sleep over at her house with a couple of people. So i went along, and met her and Adam, and we talked, yet as it got further into the night, Sarah starts to get personal with Adam(intimate cuddling etc.) At this point i'm starting to feel uncomfortable, because she invited me yet they blatently want to be alone, and also for my personal reason. two or three days later i started talking to her about her relationships, she said that she couldnt get into another relationship for a while, at this point i brought adam up into the subject, yet she said that there isn't anything going on it's just the kind of relationship they have. (i still dont understand it but its their choice, maybe it's a security thing ???) at this point i'm totally confused about everything, Adam, my feelings for her, what to do. I think to myself that maybe its best that i keep my distance for a while, yet that just makes me think about it even more(this is all happening on a holiday, but not abroad, no college and no job, so theres nothing to keep my mind off of it) I decide to tell her,,,,, She took it well, and said that it was just a phase (????) Iasked her if it would affect our friendship, and she said she would think no different of me, yet i still feel slightly distant, but that might just be me ... ---------- anyway thats why i thought your poem was good, í could really relate to it.. Keep writing poems.... Slinky :-) - Slinky | |
| I loved your poem it was very insperasional.It will touch many people. - Audrey | |
| Thank you Kathleen! It helps me to find out what to do with my best friend. Since she travel to Canada (we do live in Argentina) there isn´t a single day which I don´t think of her. Thank you! - Fabian | |
| This poem was perfect for thie guy i sent it to. I told him the felling and i thought our friendship was gone - lisa | |
| i really liked this poem because it was like what i had just been going through with one of my better guy friends - Doe | |
| it was sad but very good - heather | |
| You really did that right thereand I think to was dope.That express how I really feel toward my babyfather.I still gave that to you because he willtart to understand me. - Quinsheryl | |
| I liked the poem alot. - Courtney | |
| I really loved this poem! This is how this one guy and my life was!Hope you keep writng! - Megan | |
| i said how i felt about a boy and he told me lets just be friends. - Chanel | |
| GOOD WORK - SALVATORE |
