Me, Not Her by Jennifer Souza
I'm not sure if you know or not
But I really do love you a lot.
You still hold a special place in my heart
And you did, right from the start.
But when she came along and took your breath away,
I was devastated and didn't know what to say.
I spend my nights crying, time after time,
I spent my days lying, saying I was fine.
Little did you know, my heart was crushed inside,
And on that day, a little of me died.
But with her, you look so in love
'Cause you are an angel from above.
I now have to teach my heart to move on,
For, you are now forever gone.
But about one thing I am unsure:
Why it can't be me, and not her.
But I really do love you a lot.
You still hold a special place in my heart
And you did, right from the start.
But when she came along and took your breath away,
I was devastated and didn't know what to say.
I spend my nights crying, time after time,
I spent my days lying, saying I was fine.
Little did you know, my heart was crushed inside,
And on that day, a little of me died.
But with her, you look so in love
'Cause you are an angel from above.
I now have to teach my heart to move on,
For, you are now forever gone.
But about one thing I am unsure:
Why it can't be me, and not her.
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Love at first site is one thing - but being in love with someone who already has a girlfriend? This poem, my first one, is about my experience with this specific type of love-triangle. You can never ease the pain of being in love with someone who does not love you back. I, unfortunately, learned the hard way.
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I loved your poem because my boyfriend and i of 3 years just broke up because he was eyeing another girl. i told him i couldn't get hurt even more then i already was/am. and i do cry myself to sleep every night - Dancer101 |
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I LIKE UR POEM A LOT BC THAT IS WHAT I WHENT TRUE I LIKED A GUY A LOT BUT THEN SOME GIRL CAME ALONG THE ONLY THING THAT IS NOT THE SAME IS THAT HE GOT PLAYED BY THAT OTHER GUIRL SO I QUESS HE GOT PAY BACK - STYVALIS |
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I thought you poem was beautiful, so many people good threw this situation everyday - elizabeth |
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i really like dis poem coz it says just wot i feel bout me ex johnny n his gal friend well done its really gd x - nicole |
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omg i love this poem. probably b/c it happened to me and im still having feelings about it all. but yea this poem made my day! - madie |
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i feel you girl on that one cause my life was just the same exactly the same i feel in love with some one who was taking and that sucks but i learned to move on after 10 months. - brittany |
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wow! i give this a 100 too! this is just like what happened to me before i gave love a second chance and found who im with now! - sam |
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This is a really great poem, it really touches me cuz i feel the exact same thing. ! great poem ;) - mary |
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i like this poem for the fact that this happend to me ut i am now ack with him it hurt me so much of what he did thats why i love this poem - savannah |
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I think this is a really nice poem! it touched my heart! i kno how she feels! xxx - Amy |
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I TOTALLY LOVED YOUR POEM. IT IS SO TRUR IT SEAMS LIKE ALL I EVER DO IS FALL IN LOVE WITH SOMEONE WHO IS IN LOVE WITH SOME ONE ELSE AND THIS POEM TOOK THE WORDS RIGHT OUT OF MY MOUTH. - Colin |
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the last part was hot - geraldine |
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This poem was so good. i loved it. i think that alot of young girls can relate to this poem, thinking that they are not worth anything and that their just invisible. but were not. Its a really good poem i loved it. - Flormaria |
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dear jen, i read this poem about a year ago. and every day when i see him with her the same words go through my head "why isnt it me and not her" - Linda |
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Girl I just love ur poem I really can relate to it my boyfriend was my first love and we have been threw so much more than u can ever imagine its been hell and sometimes i feel as if i'm really losing him but if so i will just have to accept it and move on n-e wayz keep up da good work and neva give up - babygirl17 |
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This poem is very simalar to my life. - Kalise |
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I like this poem. It's so sad, but it seems to convey some hope at the end, because life always moves on regardless. - Kirsty |
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Wow, this really reminds me of my ex! And even tho he was completely wrong for me, and we never really should have gotten together, I still loved him, and he might have been one of the biggest mistakes of my life, but it still hurt and I still wanted him back. Your poem really really touched that in me. it is a really good peice of work! - anna |
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I LOVE THIS POEM! I am going through the same thing and it is hard. It makes me happy to know that I'm not alone. - Chasity |
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THis was a really sweet and true poem; I loved it alot and was well written - Katie |
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Real good. know just how you feel - melissa |
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I think this was a great poem it made me feel like I could understand it. I t relates to me its like I know how that person feels! Its nice to know that its ok to feel that way! - Hannah |
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This was a wonderful poem. I totally relate- entirely. Thank you for your wonderful writing. - Mary |
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This poem was so true I have felt this way about my last boyfriend and this poem reminds me of me. - Kianna |
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YEAH WELL I WUS READIN POEMS SO I CUD SEND ONE TO MA BABY ND I READ THIS ONE ND I ALMOST CRIED U NO IM VEWWY EMOTIONAL ND THEN U NO WUT IT SAYS JUS GOT INTO MA HEAD U NO IS KOO. SO YEAH THAS IT. BUT IS THE BEST POEM IVE READ SO FAR. - LIZ |
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omggggggg how good can dese poems get mann aaawwwwwwww bareee sweeettt i swerr - blerina |
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hey you did a really great job with this ppoem. im feeling it - juliett |
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this peom is great i love it's deep thought and touches my heart. - Res |
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OMG! i rely luv yer poem! most poems r lame but this 1 rely sands out:) its completly tru cus im always falin in luv n rite about tht time sum chick tht looks liek a supermodel cums n totaly ruins my life. for about a month n e way!lol - Em |
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I think that is the best poem ive ever read in my life. Im in that exact situation right now. You have in a way inspiered me to write poem myself! from Sarah 14, Scotland - Sarah |
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THIS HAS JUST HAPPENED TO ME OMG! - NICOLA |
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wow this is really i wat im feeling right now. like i fell for this guy but then my "best friend" is going out with him but as bad as it souds i still care and still wish to be with him. is it that crazy? - heather |
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GREAT,FANTASTIC,BRILLIANT,SUBERB ,OUTSTANDING my opinion is that you should turn this into a song or flim and i would definatly make a killing because this is how most girls feel when they like someone they can,t forget about. - Steph |
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I like this poem! I really reminds me of one of my guy "friends" I had & we both loved each other very much, until he wrote me a letter one day telling me to forget about him. Now I see him with this other girl everyday. I try not to let it bother me but sometimes it really tears me up inside to know that they probably like each other and all. - bree |
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Don't worry cuz. They say u don't relize what u got till it's gone. Sooner or later he is going to want u back because he is going to relize that u r the best thing that he's got and you r worth more than all the money inthe world,that's only if u were doin right and didn't cheat while ya'll were together. Thank about the hurtful stuff u've done to him - Tashawnna |
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i really liked this poem because it was jus how i felt. - JoANNA |
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i think your poem was so good it made me think about alot of things goin on now w/ me but your poem help me out thank u - brit |
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wow this is a great poem i like a guy a lot but once i found out he liked and was going out with someone else my heart broke so this poem is bassically what happend to me i luv it a lot! - cassi |
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this poem is one of the greatest poem ive read i can relate to this poem im goin threw the same thing as u was when u wrote this everytime i read this poem i hope for a chance with the guy im in love with but until then i read this poem and know im not the only one feelin the way i do - stephanie |
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Hi my name is Meredith i loved your poem and i know excatly how u feel. I'm going threw it right now with this guy i care about so much and i want to be with him more then anything but he has a girlfriend. He did like me at one point and i didn't realize it and i just let him slip away. We are still friends but deep down i wanna be so much more. Even though im only 16 i honestly think i love him. Well i really loved your poem bc i could totally relate to it i hope u keep writing in the future and never give up on love and if u love some1 then don't let them get away hold them tight for ever and always!. Much love Meredith - Meredith |
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hye this poem is really good. i no wat ur feeling and it suxz - santanna |
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I think anybody that been heartbrokend before can relate to this poem, as I were reading this poem I can feel the passsion, and the pain that the author was going throung at that time. - Vanny |
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I love this poem because I too have felt exactly the same way about a guy. This poem really moved me! I loved it! - Nikki |
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I really liked this poem because I can relate to it in more ways than one! Love hurts a lot, no matter how old you are. - Erin |
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I Am Really Feeling That Poem, Because I Am Going Through Something Like That Know, And I Can Truly Say It Hurts, But You Know In Your Heart He Still Feeling Something For You And He Is Going To Miss All The Good Times Ya'll Did Have, But It Ain't Nothing Like Having A Close Friend Turn Into Your BoyFriend, Know I Get The Movie Brown Suger, But Keep It Up Cause This Is Something You Will Always Remember! - Mo'nay |
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i liked this poem because it remindes me of me and my boi friend he wants me now and i have a boi friend so i am happy about that but it is good to know that some one out there went through the same thing that i went through - Doneshia |
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this is one of the best poems i've ever read and i write poetry so yea urs are the bomb grl! - sarah |
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This was so amazing!. i went through that last year with a guy that i reallllllyyyy liked! I messed up and didn't take my chance with him and he moved on to another girl he's been dating for almost a year. but i don't think i ever will be able to completely forget. even though a piece of your heart will always be with him. remember, this guy obviously wasn't right for you , but there are plenty other fish in the sea. the right guy will eventually come along! xoxo. don't stop writing! - sHaNNoN |
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oh my god i feel really teary eyed now but it was great. - Maggie |
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I really liked this poem because this happend to me! It hurts but you do have to move on! But sometimes i can still feel the aches in my heart because he is not with me. - Claudia |
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I couldn't believe it when I first read this poem because it was exactly how I felt. - Sarah |
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I think this poem is so true. This poem reminds me of myself bcuz i did love someone and he left me for another person but he never knew how i felt - anonymous |
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This poem is great i went throught the same problem see i like this boy but he went and got himself another girlfriend when he introduced me to her i chouldnt speak he even flirted with me al lil and i went home and cryed so thanks for writing this it great. - Jessica |
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hiya, oh my gosh u dnt know how true this is, there was once this boy, who i loved with all my heart, and i would think of no-one else, we would talk for ages on chatrooms and we would get along so well, and i have to admitt we both flirted alot, which would also give me fake hope because i found out that he had a girlfriend. I cried day and night i dont think you can imagine what it was like, to love someone for two whole years and wonder why he wouldnt go out with me but by his flirting he was obviously interested. But now six years later he is not my only love, but my true love, although we talk on occasions, in the street passing by, and we both know there is something there still. You have mastered the art of putting your feelings into one poem, which i think was truly amasing x x x x - Rachel |
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ur poem is also another 1 that sort of describes my relationship with this boy. - hot |
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I loved this poem. It touched me and brought me to realize that it is time to let him go even if i do not want to. I also realize that she won and for two months i have been battling a battle already lost. - christian |
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i'm so touch about this poem. it's very nice so true. it is like what happen to me im so hurt. and when i read this poem its really a captivating one. - Jasmine |
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I simply LOVE it! - Stefan |
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Oh my God! When i read this poem i just broke down and cryed, Me, Not Her is one of the most touching and inspiration poems that i have ever read. i realate to this poem so much and i just want to say thank-you. - Nia |
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I LUV DIS POEM AYE IT REALLI REMINDS ME OF ME N MY EX AND HOW HE DUMPED ME AND DEN DA NEXT DEY I SAW HIM AT DA MALL WIF HIS NEW GIRLFREND,BUT DA FING I DUNT GET BOUT HIM WAS HOW HE FINKS DAT SHE LUKS LYK ME SO IM FINKING Y R U GOING OUT WIF SUM1 THAT LUKS LYK ME WEN U CAN JUST HAV ME! BUT YEH ANYWAYZ UR POEM IS REALLI GUD I LUV IT! - TiA |
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Wow, i have never seen such a great feeling for somebody in my life. Disapoinment may pierce your heart, but life should gone on. the person you love the most is always difficyul to forget him. Need a great courage to be able to bear and see you love go far from you and going with somebody else. it makes you feel that he ahs never loved you. - Rukma |
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OMG I LOVE YOUR POEM CUZ IT REMINDS ME OF MY LIFE. HOW IM IN LOVE WITH A MAN HOWS IN LOVE WITH SOMEONE ELSE SHES SO PRETTY AND NICE IT KILLS ME. - Ashly |
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OMG y is ever poem i read making me cry and say omg man this was so sad and good omg i'm crying again lol i loved it write and keep writing it'll make u feel better - sayo |
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nice poem he will soon realize that he lost the only good thing in his life which is u! - maria |
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Damn chica i really knoe what u feel! The guy i liked traded me for this other gurl! I knoe gurlz say that why didnt he loved you,love hurts, but you just gotta move on, there is plenty of guys in this world! - Lizzy |
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I REALLY LUV UR POEM IT MADE ME CRY BECAUSE I BEEN THROUGH THAT SITUTION. - ANNA |
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Oh, yes. I am exactly in the same situation now. I love a girl, I would sacrifice myself for her, all that matters to me is her happiness. But she has someone else. I want to move on, but I cannot. I've been trying to forget her for 1 year, but still this love haunts me and tortures my soul. I am helpless. - Jozef |
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I really like the poem cos it is definitely similar with what i am experiencing right now. The person i love has a girlfriend and I know that he can't love me back. It hurts so bad that you can't get the love u can get frm someone just because he is already committed. - jeanette |
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hey jennifer,its me tasha im from guam and i read your poem and its so beatiful. i just wanted to ask why did you come up with that poem?but anyways girl i always ask that same question why not me but her you know. what shes has and i dont have right. but im gonna give that poem to my one and only love. well girl thats i have to say. "hafa adai" always, natasha nicole sablan - natasha |
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i no how she felt i am in exactly the same position! - becca |
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I really love your poem, it reminds me of my guy friend that I've fallen for, however I now know he likes my friend. - Heather |
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this poem rocks - marie |
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girl thaat is hard, i knew how u felt but i am happy w/ sum 1 new! - zenith |
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I Love this poem it is so much like my problem right now. Well Awsome Poem! Brooke - Brooke |
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This poem really touched me becuz I'm goin thru the same thing. I love this guy but he's fallin for sumone else and he still calls to talk but only about the other girl and the only thing i think of his why her and not me! GREAT POEM! - Nicholle |
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hiya, this poem is just amazing! this brought a tear 2 my eye because i am going through this right now with some lad i have been seeing an he has got a g. f bt i really love him bt he thinks i dnt and i'm jus saying it :( keep writing xxx - alex |
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you are talented, its this one boy (my first love) that got a girl and i still love him a lot. but you can't change the way he feels, so you just gotta move on. keep up the good work. - Jatoria |
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This poem touched me so much because it reminds me of what I think of a guy! - Ashley |
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I like this poem because it ment for me cause i'm going on with the same thing right now and a lot of suff is going on with it and i'm this geting hurt in the makeing of it but i keep thinking he will be with me and not her but i known it's not true but i keep on holding on to something thats not there but i will get over it some day i hope. - alexis |
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I love this poem. I can really relate to it. The same thing happen to me. I really liked this guy but he had a girlfriend. I was crushed. I love this poem! - Kelly |
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I just want to chose this one because i wanted to show it to my friends of what my boyfriend has done to me but this is a great poem - Seffany |
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hey, what's up? me nothing just got done reading your poem, i know how you feel because my ex-boyfriend did that to me too. he was with a gay girl. and now that day it still sucks that he did that to me. but i guess your heart has to move on. well guess got to go later keeep your head up. - Denise |
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this poem was interesting to me, b/c it realated to me! and im sure probably some other girls as well! - jessie |
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the same thing has happened to me a few times - meghan |
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I love this poem! it is exacly how i feel! - Melany |
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Hey, i read this e-mail and i know how you must be feeling. i feel exactley the same right now and it hurts sooooo much! great poem! - Steph |
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omg it is like i wrote it, i use to be in that situation, i also had to teach my heart to recover the hard way. - kayla |
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This poem really touched me because I realise that this sort of thing happened to me aswell and probably happens to many others. - Louise |
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i give this a 10, i love this poem its exactly wat i feel right now, gurl dats deep - kita |
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oh god this had me crying cause it made me thinkof my ex bf boh and his new gf amber. man i miss him - Shady |
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the title of the poem really goes with what you wrote i can relate to this i like it alot - kay |
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hey this is an awesome poem! it really touched me and reminded me of my friend who is in love with an older guy. i now can feel her pain and how hard it must be for her to go on every day like that. well keep up the GREAT work. ciao - Stephii |
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this poem is great and wonderfull i really enjoyed reading it. but this poem is so true cause it happened to me but thanks for letting me read it sincerly mary roman - mary |
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love the poemm. saddly its so truee lol. o well. guess ill get over it. newaiz. LOVE the POEM. =] - anonymus |
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i like it alot. it happened to me also so dont feel to bad your not the only one! good poem - melissa |
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This poem is the poem i been wating for its perfect. i had a similar problem like this. Now i know theirs someone out their who when through this - Michelle |
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um. i want to cry, beacuse this poem relates to me. my boyfriend broke up with me for some girl, and he looks so happy. happier than when he was with me. it saddens me caz i wonder what des she have i dont. i wanted us to be "us" now theh are an "us". - kali |
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I love your poem, i feel the same way. it shows emotion so well. - Sarah |
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This poem is so real. I am experiencing this situation now. I am in love with tis guy but he has a girlfriend. I really don't know what to do about the whole situation. The poem is completely perfect. - Tamarra |
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that is a really good poem, i know how that feels for i was in that situation once but now i have that guy and things couldnt be better. I really loved how you expressed it, i dont think most anybody couldve done a better job! - brandy |
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girl that poem is crazy, its everything im looken for, i needed it so bad im really not good at poetry. props to you and your skills. - jackie |
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man. that hecka touched. i love yo poem sooo much cause man, its like talkin of wat happened to me. (im a guy though. ) man, i love this poem. keep it up! - Geo |
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diz poem is exactli my feelings right now. gd job. u captured the feelings correctli and im reali touched by it. - Sharon |
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I think you did a really nice job writing these just remember that thers always somebody better - Merce |
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it really touched me. Thats what happen with me. I was in luv with my ex but then my brothers ex had to come on my way. He decided to go with her and now that shes with her , he forgot all abou me. He doesnt even talk to me or look at me. But when i started oging out with this other guy. He doesnt want to c me going out with him. But he never thought that it hurt me everytime i c him with her. And now im the one that doesnt look at him or even try to talk to him. I learn how to go on and to liv the past and never remember what happen. - jessica |
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I loved this poem, just b/c i feel it spoke to me. It said every single thing that I am feeling right now, and i find it to be a very beautiful, very interesting poem :D - Stephanie |
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i KNOW WHAT YOU ARE SAYING. I cry over a guy I loved and it has been almost three years - Alessandra |
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I am so in love with this poem because the same thing happened to me. The poem touched my heart it made me think that I need to move on. Wonderful poem Jennifer! - Yvonne |
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If was tha Best! - Brittany |
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I absolutely lOvE this poem! This poemmakes me think of my first love. I loved him so much it hurt, then he fell for HER! Craig, if ur reading this, then know that ur SA still thinks of u everyday. - Someone |
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I really liked this poem because i feel like i have been in the same situation recently and it still does hurt, so it helps a little to know that other people have gone through that too. - Jessa |
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This poem said every bit of how i felt it touched me so much. I showed it to my so called boyfriend and he was touched, thanks to that poem we are going on 3 wonderful months together. Thank You! - Jessikah |
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wow! dang thats how i feel all the time but i could never get it out on paper! Keep righting! - cali |
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omg i absolutly love this poem. It's so real to me because I'm going through this exact kind of thing right now. It really hits home with how i feel. - mary |
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This is exaclty what I was thinking about one of my best friend i like! He said he liked me then he turened around and asked another gurl out. It made me really mad. Worst part is that the gurl he asked out is one of my best friends. This Sucks! - Stephanie |
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I lovve this poem it touched me cause i am going through the exact same thing! - Kaitlyn |
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This poem is lovely. I went through this and i remember the nights i stayed up crying. this poem is awesome! - Krystal |
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hey this is lisa i really like you poem i like a lot it was sweet i hope you can holla back k bye bye - lisa |
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I really liked this poem alot and it touched me and it made me think of all the times when I wanted it to be me and not her. - myrteila |
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I really enjoyed this poem. I was married and I am going through a divorce well after i left my husband i got back with an ex boyfriend of which i dated for almost 3 years. His name was nathan. Right before christmas he broke up with me and told me that he just wanted to be single. Well i now know that he has a girlfriend and every night i lay in bed and cry , myself to sleep because i know that he is the one that i was meant to be with. And i will love no other like him. - kellie |
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i love yo poem becaues i'm going through the same thing thats why i'm crying now - jaleisa |
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I loved this, it touched me. - Erica |
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I cried when I read this. I am going through the same thing right now. I can't just forget about this guy though, he is my best friend and he is perfect for me. His name is Russell! - Emma |
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i love this poem i had a crush 2 and hes inlove with some one els - Jessica |
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This is what I felt like when i happened to me. - Sage |
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i love this poem it made me cry a lot! it really does hurt to see the love of ur life with someone else but u try to get use to it and say ur ok because u want him to be happy even if hes not with u. i just wish i had another chance. - nemo |
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i thought this poem was awesome, becuz i can relate to it and those feeling so much. - kathy |
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i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this poem. well i think that this was a really good poem, i think that i can relate to this. i know this boy who i am still in luv with he is in luv with some other trick. well at least he thinks he is but the luv will always be there. - tia |
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this poem to me really tuched me in a way that was so deep i love poems and everything but has a special place in my heart i loved it. - aisha |
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GOOD FIRST POEM. I LOVE IT. - DANIKKA |
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I loved this poem its how i feel about my ex boyfriend now that he is with my bestfriend. - Britnee |
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this poem is so great. i love it it is so perfect for me and my man u r my hero. lysfm. bye - Danielle |
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This is exactly what happened to me last year. I remember it all like it was yesterday - Danielle |
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I like this poem even thou i don't know how love is relly like. But it reminds me of my homegurl monica cause thats how she fells about her ex boyfriend the love of her life. - Janet |
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I really did like that one cause before I use to think about if my boyfriend whould leave me how would i act and what will I do now i know that I have to let my heart know thanks I know its going to be hard cause i knew him for 9 years and been talking for a year and one month and thanks again. - La'Candice |
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My ex broke up with me because he was in love with someone else and i felt the same exact way, and i still and prob always will have feelings for him. thanks for writing that! - Jamie |
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I would just like to say that I really love this poem and I cry everytime I read it! I am so glad this poem was brought to my attention cause I just absolutely love it! - Tanisha |
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i loved your poem. its so true. i seem to fall in love with some one, he always seems to love some one else. so i know how you feel . just keep up the good work it hurts but some day it will feel better. - some one |
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i luv this poem. i went trew that chp in my life not so long ago, but actualy my ex cheated on his girl for me when i found out i broke up w/ him, he now has a baby & hits his girl. At first i would give anything to be her but now i'm confused & i'm having 2nd thoughts. I still luv him tho - Maria |
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I love your poem ,so touching and understanding . Me t 13 I would know for sure. !Excellent - aundrea |
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I enjoyed the poem and I really connected with it alot. I hope you keep giving me something good to read and look forward to seeing my poems on here real soon. ~~~MUCH LUV~~~ - Jay Jay |
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i like this poem mainly because people go through it that waht she say'in. people ask that to theirself all the time. - Candace |
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Thank you so much for writing this poem and showing it to the world this dicribes me so perfect! I only wish he knew how I felt, I just don't know if I should tell him. He was always the one brightening my days but now that he has a new girlfriend my days are growing darker! Anyways thank you so much for writing this poem! It's great - losing my way |
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This is the best poem I think I have ever read. I am going through exactly what the poem is talking about right now and this helps me to know that I am not the only one with this problem. - Jessica |
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I realy like your poem it was a great one just how im feeling right now about the man i love. - Dreamer |
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Your peoem mirrors almost the exact same situation in my life. Your poem is a comfort and I really enjoyed reading it. I can really emphasise with it. - Heather |
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This really toched me because this is happening to me and a friend right now and the gye didn't like me but he likes her! And it's a very good poem! - Allison |
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i really do like this poem because it fits me and my sitution right now, but i really do like poem. and thanks for writing it. now i have a lot to think about. - VaShira |
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hey this is a good poem. It fits my relationship well except i am still with my man although i think he sometimes wants to be wit her. But he says its only me and he dont want to be with her so i dont know if its true or if its just talk to keep me near. and he always tells me he loves me so i guess thats why i am still there - saysha |
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Hey my name is sable and i love your poem it really reminds me of how i felt when my ex boyfriend zane broke up with me i lovbed him more than anything he was everything in this world to me and theres nothing i wouldnt do for him but then one day he said we were thruogh and i didnt understand why. but let me tell you something you will get over him well you will move on shall i say i have been without zane since aguste and i still think about him every day or night but i have a new boyfriend and he makes all the painful memeories go away as if they were never there - sable |
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I know how this person feels. I think this poem rocks! - sara |
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This poem is exactly what i need right now cause I'm going through the same thing. kinda. This guy is "supposedly" in love and was before he met me but still wants to be with me till shes ready for him, and my heart is broke. so ya thanxs - No |
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I really like that poem. It really touched me, because that exactly how I feel about this boy. I want him but he has a gurl and he doesnt know how I feel about him. Your poem let me know that I am not the only person who feel that way. - Tenisha |
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I really like this poem. It's bittersweet. I've definately been where you've been. Hang in there! He'll always be your friend. don't let go of that. The one I loved but couldn't have for myself is now my best friend. - Dannielle |
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Your poem I absoulutely Loved. It's so touching. This was the right time to read your poem cause this is what I'm going through right now. I love all poems ,But this Poem is my absoulute favorite poem. I've never heard a better poem than this in my life. YOUR A GREAT POET. I wish I was as good as you. - Shelby |
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This poem really touched my heart, and I can relate 100%. Thank you. - Tore |
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i'm finding sumting to send that guy. this is it! i like it! it really applies to me. i almost cried. i'll write your name so that he'll know it's not me who made it, but that's what i really feel. - Faye |
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Hey, your poem is really good. There is actually a guy in grade that I've liked for 2 years, but he always dates other girls and looks so happy with them. I wonder why cant it be me. It was very touching rate: 10 Best one - yeraldine |
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Hey, your poem is really good. There is actually a guy in grade that I've liked for 2 years, but he always dates other girls and looks so happy with them. I wonder why cant it be me. It was very touching rate: 10 Best one - yeraldine |
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What I am going through now relates to everything that is said in this poem. Althoug the way it is put in this poem describes it better. not to mention this is an excellent poem! - tanya |
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WOW! that's so true. I can relate to what your saying. This was a awesome poem. I hope you'll keep writing poems I'll love to hear them. - Christine |
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This poem reminds me of when my best friend cheated with my boyfriend i was so upset and this poem. made me feel good thank u alot - red |
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I really liked this poem because it is really true because thats how heaps of people feel - Anonymous |
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Just liked your poem keep up your writing - iliana |
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This poem teeachs a good listen and thanks for the information. - Jordan |
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Jennifer Souza, I just wanted to say that this is a poem for those no gooded men who think that they are a player or pimp, and I feel that this beautiful poem came right from your heart maybe because you have experienced this or something. - Shanah |
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HEY WATA NICE POEM IT MADE ME CRY IT MADE ME THINK BOUT THIS BOY I LIKE AND HOW HE IS GOING OUT WIT THIS OTHER GURL THANKS 4 SHARING UR POEM GURL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK K UR THE BEST LATER G2G TCCIC WELL BYE SARA - SARA |
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i like this poem but it's like the oppsite way of her poem it's me that look so in love not him but i still understands where she come from because i would be very upset if he had somebody esle. - jasmine |
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Hey Jennifer. All I wanted to say was that your poem has touched me in a lot of ways. I can really relate to this poem because I have been in the same situation, except the guy was my ex boyfriend of 5 years. I was so in love with him, and when he cheated on me with her I was so devasted. This poem, I guess, has strengthened me in a way, and I am glad Im not the only girl out there with this problem and a broken heart. Keep writing poems, you are very talented. Kimie. - Daria |
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I like this poem because it compares so well to my life right now. - Amanda |
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I've Felt this way before, but fortunately i got the man! AWESOME POEM! - Drey |
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I really liked this Poem. It Remind's me of this time when I met this really Awsome Boy, But when my sister came into the Picture, He wanted Her not Me. So this Poem relate's to that. Anyway's, Keep up the good work. *Smile* - Amy |
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i really like dis poem, itz really sad and touches ur heart, itz a great poem i love it, itz fab ! - Kayley |
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HI this is a reallt touching poem and its just wat im goin through i feel really up set cos i want er nt just as a friend - Stuart |
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i love your poem!it reminds me of my friend Jesus. - Angelica |
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HOW WONDERFUL IT IS TO READ MY FEELINGS THROUGH SOMEONE ELSES WORDS, (THAT"S HOT). - EBONY |
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you know i understand i had to learn the hard way to. and it suck i am glad that you put it in words that way people learn from our mistakes. thanks that was a good one - lisa |
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Hey, oh my gosh i love the poem. that is exactly how i feel about a guy, im still SOO! in love with him, i try so hard to move on but everytime i see him i just want to die. WOW I LOVE THE POEM - Whitney |
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your poem is very tounching and I feel the same. I'm kind of going through something like that too! - Sandra |
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i liked and cuz it says exactly wats happenin to me. - stephanie |
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!wow! that is really nice. This guy left her gurl for me and then he did the same with me. so it's true that whatever goes around comes around. this poem really touched me. - alondra |
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you are not alone, i know exactly how u feel, i was so in love with this guy for almost a year and he was in love with someone else. it tore me apart and i was always so sad, he meant everything to me. listen, dont give up, i fought for that guys heart and he is now my boyfriend, weve been together for 6months and i love in alot. i have never fought so hard for someone as i did for him, dont give up! - Lauren |
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This poem is so good because the author wrote it with her heart like in every word she knew the pain this person felt very good - Ana |
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I really liked this poem simply because i am going through the same thing right now. Only he had been with her and me at the same time and by the time i found out of her i had already fallen for him. I still love him and always will. He is still with the other girl and i have yet to figure out why "It cant be me, not her". - Rachel |
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it look lie it really comes with great feelings it seems so real not like other poems its great i loved it u put a;lot of feelin into it - Lizeth |
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I have so much incommon with this poem. I felt the same way with my first love or serious boyfriend. It's like you put my thoughts into word or in this case poetry for me. - Christina |
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the poem was really great - Ashley |
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i loved your poem because time to time i feel the same and i just wanted to say that it touched my heart i hope that it touches others the same from brittany - brittany |
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Jen i have to say that poem really touched me i know how you feel i knew this guy fpr 2 years and i have secretly liked him all that time and when i finally told him how i felt he brike my heart in half for this girl thats two years younger than him i must have cryed all that day i will never forget that! im also a poem writer to! Keep up those awsome poems girl! - Abby |
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This was a really great poem i really liked it io will now and forever consider this poem a favorite! - Lisa |
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This poem is great. It hit everything I was feeling right on the head. All these emotions came running through after I read it. I felt like I wasn't the only one goning through this. This poem means everything to me. - Sascha |
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love it! this is ow i fell now that my ex went to my sister and he left me for herand now neither 1 know how i fell cuz they are both so deep in love - alicia |
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this poem has touched my heart and soul without a doubt, not only because it has so much meaning and so much feeling but i can relate to this 100% because the one that i love left me in such a desserted point in my life where i was seriously thinking of commiting suicide and when i saw him with another girl that i could tell he loved just by looking in his eyes , it tore me up inside and i couldnt take it. every night i would pray to God to let him know that i loved him with all of my heart and soul and i would ask him why it was her instead of me when i could do so much for him. but now im finally starting to move on and ive got a hold on somebody who loves me the same exact way i loved him and now im starting to fall head over heals for him but i will always remember and love him because nothing can replace the way i loved my first love. your poem inspired me in many ways . its very beautiful and you are a very thoughtful creative inspiring person . your poem was incredibly awsome. - Tessla |
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this poem touched me because it relates 2 me. - laura |
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wow that was amazing i can relate soo much 2 that! - alexandra |
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That was great, I just went through the exact same thing. - Allison |
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I LOVE THIS POEM. IT REALLY RELATES TO ME AND I MEAN THAT FOREAL. A BOY WHO I FELLED FOR, SOON FELLED FOR ME ALSO WHILE HE WAS GOIN WIT HIS BI-SEXUAL GURLFRIEND BUT RIGHT WHEN IT WAS GETTIN GOOD YOU KNOW WHAT HAPPENED AND THAT QUESTION SOON CAME INTO THE PICTURE. BUT YOU KNOW WHAT I NOW RELIZE IT IS HER AND NOT ME BCUZ THE BOYS THAT CHOOSE OTHER ONES OVER OURSEVLES IT IS BECUZ WE ARE TOO GOOD FOR THEM AND THEY DON'T KNOW HOW TO TREAT A GURL LIKE US SO THEY SOON SETTLE FOR LESS! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK :D - Lil |
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that was a sweet poem. i know how it feels. i have been there done that - nessa |
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This poem is touching because i know how the author feels deep inside i've gone through a situation like this before and i want to say this poem is great - karina |
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OMG I LOVE THIS POEM. I know how u feel, this happened to me when i first fell in love. I hope u get him back and that other girl. - Maria |
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hey that was nice and the same same thing thing is going on with me and i mean the same thing every thing that saidwas all 4 me but yall that was nice right some more please! - ashey |
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awesome poem. helped the person that liked me get through to me ;) - Kyle |
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OMG I'M CRYING RIGHT NOW!I'M GOIN THROUGH THE SAME THING. except see the guy i'm "inlove" with i THINK loves me back and I KNOW for a fact that the girl he's with right now aint gonna last. see i have a feeling deep inside of me that the lover in my life WILL BE MINE so i shall cry no more, i SHALL CARRY ON and just wait for him to move on! - Stephanie |
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That poem fits me perfectly because i also had to learn the hard way that it really sucks to fall in love with person especially when they have a girlfriend. I fell in love with this kid from the start and then they got a girlfriend. I had never really felt that way about someone before and now that the other girl came in the picture its been really hard to move on; believe me i've tried and it sucks because it's the hardest thing to move on. It's been really long now and I still can't move on even though i want to so bad because it really hurts! - Kristin |
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omg. i loved your poem. i know exacly how you feel. i really like this guy named angelo. he is soo hott. when ever he breaks up with someone,he always gets a new girl friend. but the new girl friend is never me. he always hugs her and kisses her in front of me and it gets me rly mad. but i don't tell him. he says that we are just friends. but i wish we were more. - shana |
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oh my gosh!i love this poem i think it is so adorable. I Know just what you mena. My and my boyfriend have been going out for over a yr and a half but at first he broke up with me b/c someone else stole his breathe away and it tore me up inside. The best thing you can do is TRY to forget about him and not push him int wanting to be with you. things happen for a reson and if you two were meant to be then you will be. Keep up the TERRIFIC writing you do. I LOVE the poem - Alysia |
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i think this poem is great! i am really touched by this poem. i think u did a really great job. i hope u write more poems about this subject! good job! this poem got me interested in writing poems myself. i wrote my first poem when i was in the first grade! it got put into the school paper. jaime and i are in the sixth grade. goodbye! hope u write more poems! - Jaime |
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Hey . I loved ur Poem ! I can relate to everything u said . it reminds me about my Ex whom is also the father to my son who has recently passed away. Keep up the good work i loved . - chantelle |
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I Love this poem because its something I can totally relate too, and because when she writes I can really tell she feels what shes writing. She has great talent and will definetly go far. - Jeanette |
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i luv ur poem. i can totally relate 2 it w/my now-ex-bf. i waz hiz 2nd luv and he decided 2 leave me tha weekend afta Valentine's weekend. He said he wanted 2 go back to hiz 1st luv (which waz hiz ex-gf). That completely crushed me and also left me wondering why he did that if he knew how much I luved him. So plz keep writing more gr8 poemz cuz u'r really 1 person I can relate w/. - Angelica |
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I love the poem because it tells exactly what happened to me. - liesje |
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I loved this poem it reminded me so much of my ex boyfriend. - Jerica |
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dis poem is so true, it has so much truth and feeling innit, actually it touched me so much coz at dis moment in tyme thts how i feel thnx 4 writin dis u have helped my heart safe xx - Kayley |
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A wonderful poem. I've had a very close experience. I hope this poems helped your heart go on. - Jennifer |
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hey jennifer s. i loved ur poem and i can REALLY relate 2 it right now. it really sucks 2 know the guy i love is more into the other girl than me. i loved ur poem so much!. its on my profile(aim)haha. keep up the good work,its so touching. great job gurl =) - kaitlyn |
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Wow. yo, I am really truely touched! I am also a poet and from one poet to another that was awesome! Keep up the good work and dont let these teenage years get to you. "The one" is out there somewhere! And there's also more fish in the sea! :-D - Christine |
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This poem I can relate to when the love of my life left me I was also very crushed but in my story thing were different he came back to after he knew leaving me for her was a big mistake. We are now more in love than ever. You will be fine girl keep your head up. Jasmine - Jasmine |
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I love your poem i seriously no what you are talking about i love Patrick and hes not with me hes with her and its been almost a month and i still cant get over her i still love him so awesome poem its a 10 thanx for writeing it - Kelsey |
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i really do like this poem. i can relate. - Joy |
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I loved your poem I am really going thru that right now with this one guy and i am really really hurt. Good Job! - Karina |
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this poem is just for me and my friend Nathan he started dating a girl named mary and it broke my heart. Kim - Kimberly |
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this poem touched me so much in so many ways i love it and its so true - christine |
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heyyy! luv tha poem! been there actually this year, but tha guy i like played his gf for me! wha can i say?. lol he does luv me!. haha. long storie why he won't dump his gf for me! - Nikki |
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i like this poem it touched me because i went through the same thing and it really dose hurt when the person you love falls for someone else and its like they forget about you man i really like this poem - Pauline |
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I really loved your poem because I can relate to it with my 1st love. - Naketta |
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I absolutly loved this poem. I was in the same situation not to long ago and I asked myself also why her and not me. - Emma |
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this poem was great i really feel the same way you do because i have a friend that takes all the guys i like and one i even loved but this poem was awesome and i loved it! - Manda |
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I just love your poem. It realy speaks to me. I just lost my guy to another girl and I know how bad it feels. Keep up the good work. Someday you'll find someone for you. - luna |
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gurl . i feel yous ! i haf been in da same position as you . and sometimes i would ask mahself da same question . i love your poem so badly . so meaningful ! - someone |
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I think this is probably the best poem I have ever read. It completely makes sense. I have practically been going through what it says in the poem, but I never really knew how to explain it. I would recommend this poem any day to be in a book. - Jesus |
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i love this poem beacause right now my ex girlfriend says she loves me but also likes another girl name Eileen. I feel bad cause i still love her with all my heart and i want her to know that. i guess you can say that poem i can relate to it in a way. - Darlene |
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I think your poem is so sweet and I know that feeling to for I've been in the same place and still am! - Julie |
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I really like your poem, I too experienced a similiar situation like that and it's nice to know I'm not alone. - Jessica |
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tHAT WAS TIGHT - Shanika |
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great poem i loved it! - baby |
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I find this poem, describing my situatuon clearly. I printed out this poem, and have it in my folder. and everyone who sees it, knows why i hve it there. Excellent poem Jennifer Souza. - Pricilla |
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I like your poem alot because it speaks the truth. So keep doing what you do. - jaida |
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it was touching and sad and something i can relate to beacuse it happend 2 me 2 - karyssia |
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I loved this poem cuz it described how i feel about this boy and hehas another girl so it touched me a lot. - Becca |
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This reminds me of the problems im having with my friend/more then friend person. I just found out he had a girlfriend as he was talking to me. What hurts more is he didn't ell me he's cousin didn't kniw about us and told me he was at his girlfriends. :'( - KAshia |
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i love this poem very very very much. - nurrin |
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This poem is great. I definately can relate to this one. I have been in this place once before,and gotten my heart broken by the only boy that I have ever loved. Gurl you are good. Keep it up. - Tweety |
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Luved it! keep it up - Silver tears |
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This is a great poem. - Maria |
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ur poem is bootyful. ur soooooooooo unique on ur poems!:-) - gloria |
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I love this Poem. It made me cry. !. LoL IT has so much in common for what I feel about this guy right now because he likes me but he likes the other girl to and it hurts really bad. !. Keep writing I love it - Meagen |
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This poem is so nice, keep up the good work. It had described me and my ex but I move on now he saying why it wasn't me and no him, but he the one messed up. - Babiface |
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This poem is very beautiful and I think all of us can relate to it at one point. - Cupid's |
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Hey that's a good poem, I had and have the same situation , I know how that feels , keep up the good work - Roman |
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hey wussup! this is a tight poem. i write and all and i can honestly relate to this one. - Tiffany |
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This poem really lighted a spark in my heart and I still wish I can find somebody special and Im still looking. - scoobs_vera |
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when i first read this poem i discovered that it was describing egzactly what happened to me with this guy so i printed it out and sent this leter to him and about a week later he came to my house and sed he was sorry and that he realised that i was the ont that he wanted to be with,,,, so i just wanna say that without youre site and the poems i don't think i would be as happy as i am now thanks guys please keep sending me more poems. - Tracey |
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thaT's a verY niCe poem. i really loVed it! it toTally touchEd mY hearT beCause I can relate with it! i kNow juSt what you FeeL - Elaine |
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That was amazing, it's intresting how sometimes we are lost for words but somebody somewhere can say it for us. I really can relate to this, my first love just dumped me for a friend. Although I'm glad for him I just wish things could be different. Two thumbs up girl. This made me feel so much better. - Jessica |
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hey gurl ! Great poem! i felt the same way about that when that had happent to me ! no one deserves someone that would do such a stupid thing like that ! - Shelby |
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Great Poem i loved it! its how i feel about my ex boyfriend see im in love with him but he cheated on me he said he loved me but i dont understand how he could i broke up with him recently and already he is completly into another girl my best friend! im glad someone else feels like i do - Ally |
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that was cute - pat |
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omg ur poem was great! i like this guy alot and he is goin otu wit a model. he doesn;t no that i like him, and if he did b4 he went out wit the model im sure we wuld b together now. - annie |
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this poem totally describes how i felt when me and my boyfriends split up. But now he's back so its all good. but this poem i guess lets me know im not the only one out there that wishes i was that other girl. keep writing your really talented! - brittany |
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I REALLY LOVE YOUR POEM KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. - jacqueline |
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I loved it. It touched my heart in so many ways. I cried. Well done! - John |
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i really love your poem it realtes so much on what am going thru right now. its really sad i couldn't help it and my eyes got really watery. awesome poem! - cindy |
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i love it! it reminds me of something i went through! - Amanda |
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i really liked this poem because i can really realte to it, i basically happened to me. - Yatosha |
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i love this poem so much it describes everything im feeling. me and this guy were soo close but then all of a sudden he has moved on and im left behind. i just LOVE it - nikki |
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I think that this is one of the best poems on this site. It really does speak to me, or for me. It took the words right out of my mouth. Keep up the good work! - Mindi |
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I love your poem. Ive liked it ever since the first day i read it. I have it in my room on my wall. I can relate to it so much and i just wanted to say you did a very good job on this poem I LOVE IT! - Amanda |
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A great poem! - Ashley |
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Hey. I reall like this poem. I wish I owuld have found it sooner. When I was in this shape but o well i love the poem - kasey |
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i just wanted to say i love ur poem it is exactly how i feel - JoJo |
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i love this poem! My friend feels the same way with this guy Brandon - Rebecca |
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Hey i was tryin to find a poem all day that would fit me . and i found this one and i love it. i was just wit the boy i love with all my heart. and it kills me that i have done everything for him. and he loves my best friend . thanx u made a great poem - Stacey |
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this poem really made me cry! and im not lying! it brought back a lot of memories and the good thing about that was that i only remembered the good ones. i really love this poem! - marianna |
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perfect - shanika |
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I think this poem can describe many girls because i know a few girls who can relate especially me. thank you for writing such a terrific poem. - Kimberly |
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Awwww that was soo sweet, unfortunately i'm in that situation now and i'm sorry you went through it too. It's tough - jess |
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i really love ur poem but it really scares me how i can really truly relate to every part. but yea i really like it keep up the great work - keke |
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That is just beautiful. seriously. You got talent for writing that. And it makes me feel like i'm right there and i see it and feel it all. i had tears. But really i've been there. kinda still am. except i'm with a guy. but yet i KNOW he still has feelings for another girl. so i guess its kinda opposite. But great job! - maria |
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only one word:WOW I mean WOW this poem is so good I really truly loved it!It really touched me. You are good my dear! - Josée |
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This was awsome I so know how you feel. - Stephanie |
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this poem is the koolest. its real and meaningfull! - rachel |
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Hey, this is a very good poem. is exactly how i feel, n made me very sad. keep it up. kunju i will always love u - nisha |
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i loved this poem. i went through the same thing and it happened recently too. the first day of my junior year is the day that i found out that the guy that i liked, who also claimed to have liked me had a girlfriend. it was hard to deal with because i felt so used and disgusted with myself, but you know what i realized? I realized that it wasn't my fault. Thanks for the poem its a great help. - lauren |
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HeY dIs pOeM Is dIsCrBiN WaT Im gOiN ThRoUgH rItE NoW. Me aNd mAi eX JoNnY AnD HiS NeW GuRlFrIeNd. dIs pOeM Is sOo GoOd. U ShOuLd kEeP wRiTiN mOrE - Jeanie |
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I understand what your saying completely. Wonderful peom. It expresses deep emotion, that I could not come to deal with for awhile. You find someone, whether it be today or tomorrow. Love takes time. Keep writing. Good Job. - Desiree |
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i think that was really great i can so relate to it i have a son and he left for another gurl - daniella |
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that poem is the best! no other poem that i've read can really explain what i'm feeling right now. Thank you Jennifer, it's really nice to know that someone else is feeling the same way I am. - cathy |
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HEY GIRL! I LOVE YOUR POETRY! DON'T WORRY YOUR NOT THE ONLY ONE THAT FEELS THAT WAY. I LOST "HIM" NOT TO LONG AGO AND I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT TO DO - Brittany |
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This poem reminded me of my ex and how i still like him alot,but he has a girlfriend now, hes happy, but i just wish it was me he was happy with instead of HER. it made me cry - Corina |
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GREAT POEM! I love the way you put your words. - Justin |
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. Keep up the good work. - Ka'Liyah |
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I love your poem. I am 15 I have had a lot of experiences just like this one. I also write pomes,but I don't think they are good enough to put on the internet. - Hayley |
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I loved it! I was searching the site trying to find one that described what i was going through right now and i found it. i have loved this guy for a long time and we "talked" for a while and then when my best friend met him he totally tossed me to the side! Thank you so much for creating this poem, now i know i'm not alone. - Steph |
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hey! I was tryin' to find a poem that described mah feelings for him(my x) and I found yours and I can relate,its exactly how I feel,gurl ur poem is wonderfull - linda |
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OMG! that was really one of the best poems i have ever read! you are very talented! - Jimmye |
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i love this poem. its exactly how i felt about this boy who wanted me as a friend but wanted my friend instead and really hurt me b/c i thought. i still think he is everything there is for me! so thank u for this beautiful peom. its exactly how i feel! - mary |
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i think this poem was excellent. It brought tears to my eyes because i have been through this. lots of thoughts in this poem - kerri |
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hi i just read your pome and i really do love it i can really relate to it i went through the same thing i just want to say it really did touch me deep in my heart! - ciera |
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hey gurl, i feel the same way and he is goin out with my BEST FRIEND! URG it makes me mad! - jordan |
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I love this poem! I never find poems that describe me but this one fits like a missing puzzle piece. That is soo awesome! - Maria |
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Wow thiz poem iz da bizomb - John |
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Hey. i LUV ur poem. itz sooo good n tha emotion is ryte there! i can completely relate to it! - Lacey |
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Exactly how I feel right now. Awesome poem. Glad theres people out there I can relate to on this topic! - Kristin |
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I LOVE YOUR POEM MY BOYFRIEND BROKE UP WITH ME AND THE NEXT DAY WENT OUT WITH MY BEST FRIEND AND ME AND MY EX WENT OUT FOR 1 1/2 YEAR THANKS I LOVE YOUR POEM IT IS GONNA HELP ME SO MUCH - Elise |
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i like your poem it was great because i went throught the same thing for about two years! but its okay because sooner or later we will all find that one that makes you feel the exact way did and better! :) - lina |
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I LOVED THE POEM I FELT THE SAME WAY WITH MY BOYFRIEND AND I STILL FEEL THAT WAY. - Davenie |
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this is a great poem, by far the best i have ever read! i found out today that my EX bf was with another girl why we were together. Then i asked him who he cared for more and he said, her. so i let them be together. As long as hes happy. But I still wonder why her, and not me? - Amber |
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This is a very touching poem. I know exactly how you feel. - Jamie |
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I LOV DIS PEOM ISH JUSS WAH HAPPEN TO ME WIT MEH BACKSTABBIN BEST FWEND. I LUB DIS POEM! - GHETTOV |
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this had happened to me too i was wid this guy for awhile then he went out one night and stayed at this girls house once i heard about that i knew it was over yet for some reason even know he hurt me i still want him back. somethings are just not ment to be. jennifer its a fantastic poem you said wat all of us were thinking. - Libby |
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Apart of me died too I was inlove with a boy named Chris for 3 years This year I had a chance to go with him cause he didn't have a girl,but this new girl came and she took his breath away. He really liked her better than me. - Janaya |
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girl, that poem hit the spot my my boyfriend left me for my so call best friend and i felt so hurt but that poem did the trick. - jessica |
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This poem was very good because the exactsame thing happend to me with my crush. - leslie |
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Well I have to say from one Jennifer from another, that thats a beautiful poem. It totally reminds me about me and some guy I like. You're so lucky to be gifted with poetry. - Jennifer |
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awwww! that describes the same feelings i have for this guy. i fell in love with him and told him how i felt, and even though he ACTED like he liked me and was nice and all, he wouldnt ask me out. since then, hes had 3 GFs, and none of them were me. and its sad that i still LOVE him after 3 years, and i CANT get over him :(. you did a good job on your poem :). keep up the good work! - Andrea |
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I love your poem and every thing that you wrote i have felt it. - lyslie |
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I really loved you poem. Iv had this happen to me and I can totally relate. God gave you a gift, so dont ever let it go. - Matt |
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wow. i really like dis poem. it really expresses how much i have feelings for this guy. hehe. butta yeah. good job! - jOaNnE |
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WOW! thats All I can say about this poem. The words are written so beautifully and the feeling of the poem is there. I must say this poem is one of those greats that I have read. this relates to me very much and to the situation in which I am in. I will always wonder that same question. but only time will tell. Once again,great poem and hope to read more like this! - Linda |
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it is a beutiful and touching poem - ana |
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yo? I really loved ya poem! I lost my boyfriend cuz he likes my best friend. Now their in a fight and he falling for me again! - Lucy |
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WOW! This poem was very in depth and realistic and a lot of people can and have related to it, and I just think that it has a wonderful meaning and the words mean so much , I can relate to it also as many have said, this is an awesome poem and I can't wait to read more of your work , keep 'em comein girl! - Mandie |
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i loved your poem because that happened 2 me b4 and its really waz beautiful - Jennifer |
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This is the most best poems in the world because I felt the same way when a boy went out with my friend and he never liked me even though I liked him for 2 years and I just love this poem - Jackie - Lyn |
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This is very good and explains how I used to feel until I over came it! - Kayla |
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Hey, whats up? ok, well i don't usually go to websites and look at poems, but i had an assignment for class about poems, so i was searching for some. i came across yours, and it made me smile, because i went through, and still going through, what u talked about. i realllyyyyyyyyyyyy loved ur poem! - Lindsay |
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i really like that poem,i felled the sameway before. - crystal |
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This is a really good poem. I know what you mean. I like this guy thats my friend and he likes me back but he likes my other friend too. but they have certain complications. and after all we went through. he still chose her. This poem really expresses what I'm feeling. Keep writing =) - Maggie |
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HEY GIRL! GEE I REALLY ENJOYED THIS POEM. I ACTUALLY ALMOST CRIED! I CAN RELATE TO THIS A LOT. KEEP DOING YOUR THANG GIRL! - natalie |
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Gee, i really liked your poem a lot! It almost made me cry cause of how much it relates to me. keep writing poems girl! - natalie |
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This is a great poem. i can relate to this more than anything i've read. my ex'boyfriend has a new g/f and i loved him and he loved me and now he cares nothing about my feelings for him b/c he says it's my fault we never got back together b/c i broke up with him for the stupidest reason and now whenever i see him and her together it tears me apart more than i ever thought it might! i loved the poem! - Ashley |
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if this doesnt just say it all. im goin through the same thing, and its hell, it makes u fell like your not good enough. thanx so much for writin this and lettin me kno that i aint alone with this. and ill keep hangin on and maybe hell see what he does to me. this is really good! - tasha |
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this is an awesome poem, it touched my heart because i feel your pain, in ways you cannot imagine. you are a talented writer. well done. - beth |
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HEY OMG I LOVE THAT POEM SOOOO MUCH THANKS FOR SUMMITING THAT IT'S REALLLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYYYY GOOOOODDDDD - brittany |
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I really related to that poem and I just wanted you to know that and I hope you write more poems that touchs people because that really inspired me alot. Keep it up! - Kia |
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hey this poems is so great i really love this boy and he has a girlfriend now and i always say IF I CAN BE ANYONE IN THE WORLD ID BE HIS GIRLFRIEND keep writting poems i loved this one! - Angie |
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i really liked ur poem jen - tiffany |
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hey hun! i know who you feel i feel the same way and i still can't get over it. but try to get over it maybe you can forget him. - alma |
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Hey WAz up! I TRULY UNDERSTAND YOU AND I LOVE YOU'R POEM!LOVE IT LOVE IT!THANKS FOR MAKING ME SMILE! - erika jazmin |
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I LOVE THIS POEM! It reminded me of so much of an experience had with a person I am in love with so much. He was in love with someone else. Now I realize that why want something that I know that i can't have and never will. I still love him with all my heart but I taught myself to move on with my life and find someone that does want me. - jessica |
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Hey, I feel like your poem describes my life. I 2 am fellin' in luv w/a guy who has a girlfriend. But. they seem so perfect together, and hes cheating on her with me. I don't wanna ruin it. but I feel like I can't take him out of my life when I care for him so much. He says he cares about me. - Diane |
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IT'S REALLY NICE. - Sandy |
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This is a really good poem,i am going through the same thing. this poem made me think of the proble. Love me - Lucy |
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This is a real good poem. It realates to me and my friend. sometimes i really do wonder y it couldn't be me then the girl he's with - Marie |
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OMG i can totally relate to this poem. it explainz exactly how i feel. i wuz talkin to this guy for like the whole summer n then outta nowhere he goes off n starts goin w/ some other gurl. n i liked him fur 2 years. n they've now been dating for like 4 months n it juss hurtz cuz he knew how i felt. - Ashli |
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I love this poem it describes exactly what I feel. I like this guy, but I have a feeling he likes his ex still, and his ex still likes him and she told him. But he is with someone right now but I don't think he likes her. And I already told him I liked him. And she knows I like him, and I know she likes him, but we are still friends! But I feel exactly what the poem expresses. - Rocio |
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I READ YOUR PEOM A YEAR AGO AND SINCE THEN i HAVE TOLD SO MANY PEOPLE ABOUT IT AND i HAVE SAVED IT PRINTED IT AND LAMANATEDIT. i T IS ONE OF THE BEST POEMS THAT I HAVE EVER READ AND I THINK YOU ARE A GREAT POET. I CAN COMPLETELY RELATE TO THIS AND COMPARE IT TO ALL OF THE GUYS THAT I HAVE EVER LIKED OR WANTED YET COULD NEVER GET BECAUSE THERE WAS ALWAYS ANOTHER GIRL IN THE WAY. =( - LYSA |
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HI, WELL I THINK YOUR POEM IS GREAT , I UNDERSTAND HOW YOUR FEELING, BECAUSE UNFORTUNATELLY IM GOING THROUGH YHE SAME THING RIGHT NOW BUT IF YOU REALLY LOVE HIM GO FOR IT AND FIGHT FOR HIM MAYBE YOU TWO ARE JUST MENT TO BE TOGHETHER SOMEDAY SOMEHOW. - Esmeralda |
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yo thiz poem iz madd good i love it and i knoe excally wha itz bout cause i waz goin thorough tha same thing! holla ma dont stop writtin - Angel |
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WOW! that was great! it went so well with me and my exboyfriend. keep em' commin gurl! - Heidi |
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I know how you feel. I also fell inlove with my boyfriend we were together for 7 months but this other girl took his breath way he so inlove with her but I ask why cant it be me and not her like you asked. that was a great poem you wrote - Rosie |
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This poem is so great i know alot of people say that but i mean it! I can relate to this poem a whole lot it's just for me. Hope you write more of the same thing. - Angie |
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greaT! - juSs |
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This poem made me cry because it is soo sad. It made me think of this kid that I had a major crush on. He didn't know and then he found out but didn't quite like me and that was fine because I knew he was single and as long as I couldn't have him I figured no one else should either. Then I saw him with this other girland it just broke my heart to see him like that when i read the poem i was like that is just like me about crying and lying but then i figured that it was best because if he is happy so am I but I sure do miss him soo much - Kelly |
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hey hunz. its a great poem i mean everyone comes face wit things like dat once in der life its a way that life is saying " everyone needs to learn to get over heartache and pain " kez den ull never kno wat love relli is. yea well great poem hun keep it up :) - LoSt |
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This was the best poem that I have ever heard. It mad me think of my boyfriend and I! He likes another girl but says he loves me I was so confused till I read ur poem, so I would like to say Thank You! - Crist |
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Gosh :-( this poem really tuched my heart! It's a great one! I'm sorry you had to be the one who got hurt! - N |
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It made me go back to last year when the same thing happend to me! I still love him. I always wonder what she had that i didn't! It was a great poem! - Erin |
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wen i read this i had tears in my eyes! i think most girls my age can relate to this one! its a very moving poem. well done! and hang in there! - kate |
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Jennifer, I so am in that postion and just hearing that poem makes me know that someone can be in the same lace at me like at the same time. Thank You so much! - Jamie |
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this is a great poem, it expresses great feelings, and shows that you did love him. it also reminds me of my relationship with my ex boyfriend. its a great poem, good job! - ash |
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i can like totaly relate to that the same is happening to me and it really not nice. dont feel bad. - gee |
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I think it's a great song. I have just printed it now. I realy like it - belma |
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I really like your poem because it explains how I really feel about one of my ex-boyfriends after he broke up with me for some hootchie named Natilly and I loved him very very much! - till |
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hey. i totally know how u feel. i'm going through it rite now but the thing is i know the guy doesn't like me so i never have a chance wit him again. so yeah i'm goin to stop i'm cry now cya - Val |
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i started crying when i read. the guy that i like just told me that i lost my chance and that he likes this other girl now haha so its her not me nice poem. - kari |
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I LOVED THE POEM - POOH |
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oh honey! u pry hear this a lot but i know how u feel! i was lucky and got my guy in the end. i hope and pray that u do too! lots of love and good luck - chris |
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This poem reflects exactly what I'm feeling. I've liked the same guy for about 3 years and just last year, I worked up the courage to tell him, but before I did, I found out that he was already in love with someone else. It was tough continuing to be his friend and pretending to only love him as that and to be happy for him and his new-found love. I've eventually gotten over it, not entirely, but the same question lingers in my mind. why did he only see her, and not me? - June |
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Girl that poem is good! im going though somethin close to that rite now. I like a guy but I have a boyfriend, and The guy told me yesterday that he just got a girlfriend. I felt my heart brake as i told him i wasnt sad. i've writtin a few about the triangle but i dont no if i could ever post them. - Jesse |
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I love this poem it so reflects me. Dont worry hon ur not the only one feeling like that i understand the pain ur going through. - geral |
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This poem remined me of when i liked this guy and he knew it and then he told me that he was in love with a girl that he had been friends with. it really hurt. i still cry when i think about it. - Jill |
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Ths poem really touched me, It's a question nearly everyone asks themselves at soome stage in their lives; why them and not me. - Matt |
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this poem sounds like me from friday night, he went to a dance with me, just as friends, but he flirted really bad, then he asked out my friend. I didnt know what to do. i still love him and i have his neckless and every time i c it, i have to cry - Nitz |
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I love this poem I feel the same way about this boy name kevin and he really broke my heart but that was ok good luck to you! - kayla |
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Could you have explained those feelings any better? I think not, great poem it really says a lot of what I'm going through. Keep writing! - Corky |
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Hi this poem was so great i did like this poem - Gisse |
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Your poem ROCKS. it reminds me of when my EX told me he found someone better and I still wish he was holding me not her. SO thanks you let me know that i am not the only having tis for a problem. - Shar |
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I love that poem because the same situation is going on with me and my ex-boyfriend. But he still has to choose between us wich I find pathetic! - Ashley |
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i really like your poem. becuz i was in the same situation i dont no he had a g/f and it was on my cuz's wedding and he touched my face and we both looked in eachother's eye's and we were smiling i know it sounds a bit chessy,but i love him i dont no if he know's it but i've wrote 10 songs bout him. but i never told him about it cuz i dont no how he well react? - Lacie |
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I liked ur pome becuase when i read it i felt it and understood how the the writter was felling at the time they write the pome i once loved and lost and i still hope for one day that we could get back to gether so hopfuly this pome will help alot of people . - Renae |
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i just had to say that i loved your poem and i am sorta going through something like that. - Jacki |
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Such a nice poem. - katie |
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I really like this poem it explains the whole situation i am going through the only thing is the guy is my best friend. Thanks for writting it. - Sade |
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I really love your poem, u have wonderful talent. Your poem shows exactly how I fell about me ex-boyfriend who I absolutly love to death! - Carlz |
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i just wanna say this poem made me cry cuz im going through the same thing wit my man - anita |
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Its a great poem, it reminds me of my life, thanx - britt |
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i LOVE this poem! i can really relate to it! and i love poems that i can relate to! - Roxie |
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i loved your poem so so so much! it reminds me of my x~boyfriend. it is a really sweet poem! keep up the good work! - Tiff |
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I loved this poem sooo much because it explains exactly what I'm going through right now but this time the person that the guy i love likes it's my friend who comes right under my nose and steals every guy I've ever loved. I feel so broken down by it that I don't want to go on anymore! It was awesome! Keep writing these type of poems! - Jocey |
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I enjoyed this poem- iit's funny how girls always try to find all of the good in people- especially in the guys that we like. Like you said that he was an angel. . . to you he is the greatest because you loved him even though he didn't have the same feelings. We often believe that things like this won't happen to us with a certain guy because we have "changed" them secretly and now they are as much in love with us as we are with them- not true. It seems as though it is mostly the girls chasing after the guys and I don't think that is how it should be. - Maya |
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very touching -- relates to me - fsss |
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Hi there. I love you poem. I am in some what same situation. it just my situation I chose to let her be with him. I still love the guy soo much but I can't be with someone that also have feeling for others. I told him lie that I dun love him and that I want him out. i know it not the rite things to do but it best to move out of the way then for me to be with him and heartache will arise later on in my relationship. So the best way is to move on but it will take some time. Just be patient. - Dana |
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this was exactly what I needed to see. I knew how I was feeling but had a hard time putting it into words. thank you so much - nat |
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this makes me think of the guy that i'm with right now because he has a girlfriend in Texas but he said that he likes me but when she's in town it's the total opposite. I know how it is! - Erin |
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your poem is the best poem that i have ever heard! i'm not trying to brag about you but i DO give you praise! i can relate to any relationship right along with everyone else who is love and that perso is not them. so that made me feel better and keep doing what your doing. -) - mary |
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your poem was great!my b-friend and i have just broke up and he is dating one of my friends and i wounder why her and not me! - CASEY |
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Your poem made my cry thats exactly how i feel when i saw my crush with his new girlfriend he never gave me a chance great poem - Mandy |
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The best poem i have ever read I cried reading it - Daniel |
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hony, i know EXSACTALY how u feel.i'v been there, well im still there. i like this guy he has know idea but he likes my beast friend, and SHE dosent know it. i wish it were me he was holding right now! - christina |
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I truly understand what you are going through now because the same thing happen to me before too!Maybe someday he will come back to you.GO FOR IT if you really want him and LOVE him.I know you can! - Carrina |
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Hey Hun! I can totally relate! Im sorry this had to happen to you, and I know how you feel. your poem is awsome, and you sound like such a cool person all the guys will love you! be yourself and you will go so far, thank you so much for this poem! I really enjoyed it. :-D - Madvisa |
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This was a great poem. It describes me and my ex. even though he is with another girl, I know that he still loves me. We still fool around, and he tells me we're going to get married, but he's still with her! I don't know what to do! - Sheree |
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I loved this pome if made me think of someone. I just wished he know how much i loved him! - melissa |
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This poem is really awesome. It reminds me of what I went through with one of my guy friends who I just so happen to have a crush on. He was going out with this girl and it just broke my heart to see them together. Luckily for me, but sad for him they broke up. He still doesn't know I like him but I feel better knowing we are both single. - Lyl |
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I really like this poem cause ity relates to me cause my b/f got another girl pregnat and he is with her now adn i want him back so bad it is a really good poem - candace |
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Jennifer, Hi!My name is Staci and I totally understand your feelings bacause I am going through the same thing sweetheart! I really enjoyed the poem! - Staci |
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hey i never write comments about these poems i don't know if ur gonna read it either but im doing it anyway. ur poem had some deep feeling and i really know how u feel, its happened to me and yet i still havn't moved on. This is pretty crazy but i think if u had told him things might have been different take it from a guy we can't read minds he might have felt the same way but was waiting for u. - FrozenFlame |
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I really enjoyed this poem it reminded me of what happened 1 year ago to me. But after all the hurt and suffering he came back to me. Now all I can say is he has been faithful in every sense. We have been together 4 1/2 years and were happy still today. - Kelly |
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I really love this poems 'cause I going throw this and I just love it. - Rocio |
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I really love this poem it describes exactly how i'm felling and what i am going through right now. - Ashley |
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I love this peom! I am in the same place as the girl in this poem, but i don't love him but i really like him! - eRiKa |
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i luv that poem cuz it said a like how i felt for this one guy or how i still feel.It hepled me realize that it isn't just me who has these feelings for a guy and that i have to move on. - isha |
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man, i know sooo how you feel, ive liked this guy for almost two years, when i first fell for him, he was with this chick, when they broke up i didn't take the chance to tell him i loved him, so he moved on from her with another chick, now they rn't together, ima move on in, when i pluck up the courage - simari |
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I like your poem a lot. My friend has the same thing going on, but she just doesn't realize it that he doesn't want her anymore. I hope that she'll get over it, and I hope that you will too. - Ms.Amy |
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honey you have a talent i hope you know that. But i had the same thing happen to me when i was in high school it's the worst. Great job! - cassie |
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This poem really hit me hard. I had those same feelings after my BF broke up with me and went out with my "best friend".I really like it! Good Job! - Emily |
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I LOVED YOUR POEM AND AT 14 YR. OLD, THIS HAPPEND TO ME, ONLY THE GUY WENT FOR MY SISTER, AND IT HURTS REAL BAD! - Alisha |
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nice poem. i can relate to it! - mabel |
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i really enjoyed reading this poem, but the way i see it, the things that do not kill you will only make you stronger - amanda |
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I think this poem is great and I relate to it so much! - Kaci |
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i luv the poem, it's just one of those that touch u on the inside. - PB |
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Good poem! It really made me think. I'm in the same situation as THE OTHER girl you wrote about. It's also very hard to know you've broken a relationship, especially when you UNDERSTAND why his ex loved him so much. So I'M VERY SORRY, on behalf of his current girlfriend! LOVED your poem! :) - CaRoLinE |
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I think this explains how I feel about me and my ex's break-up. Thanks for putting it in words. - Stephanie |
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I really love your poem it tells how i feel right now you do a good job keep up the good work! - mary |
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hey this pome rocks this poem tells my ex boyfriend a lot i loved him so but then she came along and stole him from me and i still love him just as much as i did then but i know that i have to move on Thank You - AP2003 |
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When i read this poem i started to sry. because it's just what i wanted to say to the guy i'm in love with. You are a very talented author. Keep up the great poetry! - Jeannie |
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I have so been there i had a boyfriend and he cheated on 4 times yeah took him back went right to his ex - Shawna |
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i know how you fell girl im going thru the same write now i love THIS cute boy but he gose out with one of my friends but we are not friends no more - stephanie |
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this poem described my relationship exactly. thanks to the person who wrote this. - mike |
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I loved this poem! Something similiar happened to me, except he chose to be w/ my best friend after she knew i loved him so. This poem relates to me so much and I'm so thankful that someone else understands. Thank u again. - Jo |
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It reminds me of my first lvoe when my best frined started getting close to him and he chose her..This poem reminds me of the very situation - nire |
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this poem is so real it really touched my heart and made me feel releaved - Chastity |
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I LOVE YOUR POEM KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! - Mary |
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i really like your pomes something like that happend to me i wish i could write pomes like that keep writing them good work - Mary |
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I think that is such a good poem. It is just like one of my friends - Kelsey |
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I think this is a great poem.. and it reminds me of a guy I know named corey see he likes me n this gurl at the shore.. so ya lol! good luck to you - Christina |
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dont dispear there is a love somewhere you may be hurt by the love you have lost but what a bout the one you have hurt the one thet you ignored the one that loves you and thinks that he has lost your love love - rob |
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i thought this poem was great. it reminded me of when my bf left me the first time. how much i cried and felt like i was nothing. and yet i tried to denny it. and its so hard to realize how one person can hurt another bye the smallest words. good job jennifer. - ailin |
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OMG!!! I really love that poem and I can relate to it. I'm going through that problem as I type and it's hard for me to get over him. But your poem is awesome. Keep it up girl. - Cherisse |
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oh god, i'm gonna cry. - amby |
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I really love your creativity! It showes how many people feel when someone is stolen away from them (including me) Please continue to sumit your work! It's so great! - Lindsey |
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my eyes got all teary when reading this because i am so in love with someone, but he's moved on, and this poem just says everything i feel. - Melissa |
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I LOVE this poem .. it says everything i feel after losing my boyfriend and best friend of 2 years to another girl. - Desria |
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I love your poem! I've liked this guy since I could rememeber, and everyone knew that,including the girl he asked out. She told me she would never go out with him because it would hurt me,but she still said yes. I was depressed for the longest time and nobody knew how I felt, until I read this poem. It almost feels like I wrote this poem because it perfectly describes how I'm feeling.Thank you! - kazzam |
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right on the mark with how i feel--i started crying because it's so real! thanks for putting it into the words that i couldn't. - katie |
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Everything you expressed in your poem, everything you ripped from your heart and poured out was beautiful. I too have stood in your shoes, and I too prayed to God that I could get over the boy I lost. Time and Faith healed me, and it will heal anyone who has been through the dilemma you wrote about. Thank you for putting my thoughts out exactly like I knew them. - Natalie |
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I LOVED THIS POEM! - DH |
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I loved it it totallly explaned my life ,my boyfriend just left me for another girl and thats how i still fill. - melissa |
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I thought this poem was very insprational in a way cause i happen to fell the same way and in that poen u mention that u do need to move on and i agree with u we just got to live are life.Briliant poem by the way. - Jessica |
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This poem is really the truth about love and crushes. I HAD a crush on this guy, who oddly enough was one of my closest friends that i had a crush on since 6th grade and he knew it too. He recently started dating (last night) this girl and it kills me inside to think about it. - Heart_Broken |
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This poem reminds me of me and my ex-boyfriend.He broke up with me for my best friend and then got her pregnant. - JoAnn |
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I liked this poem it was very very touching and i am going through this problem right now and this poem helped me get through to who i liked - kristen |
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damn you are awesome. you just described my life. write another one. i love it. - tiffany |
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I Really like your poem because i'am in love with this boy name matthew from houstoun and he has a girlfriend and he always writes and says he loves her but i wish that he could love me not her - jessica |
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ur poem was great! i think i know how u feel! i was in something like that once! i bet whoever it was u were in love with knows ur feelings and doesn't doubt them it's not easy! but i think you'll be ok:) bein' happy cause of who i lost.jen..it's hard bein happy now im depressed alot it's turn into a 24-7 thing ! keep ur head high! - brandi |
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PERFECT! - sneezy |
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I love this poem! It is soo real! There was this girl that didn't like me for that same reason, now it helps me to understand how she felt. - Krystal |
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This poem is so true! It seriously mad me cry because i just recently went through the exact same thing with my ex boyfriend! We are getting back together now though, he broke it off with her! - Lisa |
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I loved this poem because it's put the way I feel into words . I tried to write a poem about the same experience as the girl in the poem , but I couldn't do it . I'm glad some one was able to . - Tanya |
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Hey, I love the poem and I know exactly how that feels. It sux to be in love with someone who's in love with someone else! - Erica |
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I loved your poem.it hit me hard, because im like totally in love w/ this really neat guy. but he already has a girlfreind.before he had this girlfriend though we were like "together" kinda so im just confused! it was a great poem though.thanx :) - Torrance |
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I really liked the poem. Also, i feel the same way about someone, and wrote a poem about how i feel as well, which i am going to submit just now! If you want to look at it, the title is Why her, not me? - Trisha |
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Oh my gosh. this poem so decribes me and my ex-boyfriend. he had this other g/f and it hurt so bad to see them two together. actually i can't stand it. i'm looking for a poem for english and it's about love so i hope you don't mind that i'm gonna use yours. i love it and i just wanted to tell you how good it was. - Sarah |
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wow i really liked the poem and alot of people can relate to it well i think your a great poet and i'd like to see more of your work - val |
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I love that poem! I can relate to it so much! I really was about to cry when I read it! - Jessica |
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I just really love your poem. It really describes what I am going through right now. Really, everytime I think about him I just sit there crying because he doesnt like me but I like him alot. And Im trying to convince myself thatI should like this other guy because I knwo that I'll be happy, but its not working.. thanx 4 the poem! - Swt |
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Good Poem! - Cari |
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this pome relates to when i lost my first love to another girl it's so true. - ciara |
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This poem is just like the problem she has. That is why I voted. It is soooooooo good and sooooooo real! - Amy |
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this poem is just so tru 2 life every1 has felt this at sum point in their life and i'd just like to thank jennifer for the support her poem has offered me that im not the only person feeling like this cheers! - karina |
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I just wanted to say that I thought your poem was great, keep up the good work! - Alex |
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i understand this a 100 percent this always happens to me but she thinks she has a good man let her she will find out that he will do the same to her - melody |
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great great great - shayne |
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I thought that this poem was SO amazing, I have never read anything so close to the truth of how I feel about a special someone. You have an incredible, and best wishes to you Jennifer! - Brittany |
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good i feel the same way - isabel |
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hmmm well.. i liked the poem, It was true but then again this is a poem site so it has to be good to be put on this site.. ive been thinking what i could not say but you put it in in such a way that everyday ill just read this poem and think..god my lifes screwed - Alex |
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i love this poem. i feel the same way. a guy i was with left me for my worst enemy and i feel i could die! this poem is great, keep up the good work. - whitney |
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i really understand and feel this poem because i have gone through the same stuff. i liked it so much i printed it out and put in on my bedroom wall! - nikki |
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I LOVE IT! I can really relate to your poem. This guy I was seeing had left me for some other girl. I was so sad. But we gotta move on. - Mari |
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i have had the exzact same problem withmy best guy friend but were just friends and nothing more but this poem is really inspiring - krazy |
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THIS IS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL! I REALLY LOVE THIS GUY AND HE HAS A GIRLFRIEND WHO HE WANTS TO SPEND THE REST OF HIS LIFE WITH! BUT I JUST WISH ALL THE TIME THAT IT WAS ME HE LOVED AND NOT HER! - Kallie |
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I really liked this poem, because I can relate to it. I went out with a guy for two years and we had broken up later on; Now he is with a girl who he says he has never liked anyone as much a her. - Steph |
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I love this Poem It is so Pretty! My boyfriend and I jsut broke up and it reminded me of him and her. IT is so true why cant it be me not her!. keep it up! - Marissa |
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i think your poem was great!! - Yvonne |
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it told just how i feel - Robyn |
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this poem reminds me of me and my ex-boyfriend, he broke up with me for my best friend - christine |
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this was a great poem it really touches u thanks :) - rosa |
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This poem should be voted a yellow star because it's really nice and I could relate to her and her poem Keep Up I am a poet to, Very young and the kids at school love my writing and I'm going to keep it up - Mrs.Jones |
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this poem is great - nicole |
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Wow...that was just beautiful. I was looking for a good poem, but I didn't expect to find that one. Thank you so much, Miss Souza. I have never seen a poem that described what I felt so well...thank you, again, for the wonderful poem. - Lady |
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i know what that poem's meaning. ive been there before and it sucks - dana |
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I love this poem it is exactly what happened to me. And I almost died!! Excpecially if the dumb broad was supposed to be my best friend!! - Staci |
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i voted for this poem cause its sad and this has happened to me before and it made me cry cause it reminded of when it happened to me that is why i voted for it. - heather |
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I love your poem I am a poet myself and I feel where you are coming from now I am in the situation as your poem and when I read it I felt that you knew me you knew where I was and what he did to me but yet we still don't know why it is her instead of me and I guess we will never will keep up the good work - Chiffon |
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This poem really explains the way I feel about my ex-boyfriend and his new girl. I love him with all my heart and I always ask why her not me. Good expression of feelings. I am a writer and hope to affect many people like you affected me! - LAinE-LovEr |
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Really good poem. I am passing through the same situation, and identified very much with it. - Ana |
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I love this poem. I can understand it - it is the exact situation I am going through now. - Melissa |
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I just really liked it, that would be the reason I voted for it. - Beth |
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This is a really really good poem. To tell you the truth this is exactly how i feel about me and my bf and stuff. i'm glad i can relate to someone else, keep writing you're a really good poet! - Sara |
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I feel the same way so I completely understand and I love the poem!! - Summer |
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OMG this poem totally described how I feel about this guy named Josh. We use to be so in love. But since he lived in NY and I lived down in GA. We started to grow apart. And he met this other girl. And now that he has fallen in love with her. Its tearing me apart in-side,because I love him more than anything! But I guess I will have to move on and realize that he has found some1 else! even though I still think me and him should be together! - Nikki |
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UR POEM TRULEY MOVED ME AND I CAN REALLY RELATE TO IT. - SABRINA |
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Great! Thats so how i felt once! - Natalie |
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i love this pome, because its happened to me. - Thersa |
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I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL. I'VE BEEN THERE! I STILL LOVE HIM AND MISS HIM ALSo. Even though we've been apart for almost a year. Now hes engaged. Talk about DEVISTATION! - Chastity |
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it's real good and it flows 2gether real well - babyangel |
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I'AM HAVING THE SAME TROUBLE HAS YOU WERE BUT YET I CANT FIND IT IN MY HEART TO LET HIM GO TO A PIECE OF TRASH LIKE HER - JESSICA |
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The true feelings people have arn't just lies. This poem is soo true. Showing that you can love more than once in your life, and that even if he picks another, you can too. - lynn |
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i think that this is a really good poem. it makes me think of something that happened to me once. - Kelly |
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Whoa...this is so touching..GREAT POEM!!!! - Jezebel |
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Hey Jennifer! I thought this poem was awesome! I could totally relate to it. You have a lot of talent in writing poetry and I hope you continue to write more poems! - Jessica |
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i think the poem u have wrote is completly true. iv been through the same thing over and over again.if et did happen in real life i know how u feel. hope things get better 4 u - bj |
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This poem was great and described my situation exactly! - Liz |
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I really like this poem because it expresses how I am feeling right now. I am not much of a writer but I love to read. - Ebony |
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i love your poem just for the fact that the same thing has happened to me. while i was reading it i felt like i had wrote it my self because it is the exact possition that i am in right now. well i have liked actually loved this guy now for over 3 years and i dont think he even knows i exist well i have a boyfriend right now but its just not the love that i have for this guy well hope to hear from you and good luck with your guy - amber |
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VERY SPECIAL - steph |
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this poem is so TRUE AND REAL. perfect. - krystal |
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it was great - Brooke |
