Everything by Marie Lavigne
The day we met
I had the oddest feeling
I didn't know what it was
So I just brushed it off
After a while I found myself waiting
Waiting for that phone call every day
The one I always got from you
Every night I went to bed happy
Happy that I had talked to you
Every morning I would wakeup
And think of you
The day you asked me out
I was on cloud nine
I couldn't stop thinking of you
The time we spent together
I was always so happy
Then one day
It was gone
Everything
The hand holding
The cuddling
The drives
The times we spent
looking into each other's eyes
The long good- byes
Everything
Just vanished
Everything
except one thing
The one thing that can't be taken from me
That's my love for you
It's here from now
And forever
I had the oddest feeling
I didn't know what it was
So I just brushed it off
After a while I found myself waiting
Waiting for that phone call every day
The one I always got from you
Every night I went to bed happy
Happy that I had talked to you
Every morning I would wakeup
And think of you
The day you asked me out
I was on cloud nine
I couldn't stop thinking of you
The time we spent together
I was always so happy
Then one day
It was gone
Everything
The hand holding
The cuddling
The drives
The times we spent
looking into each other's eyes
The long good- byes
Everything
Just vanished
Everything
except one thing
The one thing that can't be taken from me
That's my love for you
It's here from now
And forever
I wrote this poem after my boyfriend and I broke up. I still really care about him!
| i vote fore this poem because it touched me and i really like this poem. - raylynn | |
| i'm going through a problem with the boy i love and that poem is exactly how i felt. THANK YOU! - mary | |
| this really discribes my friend and her boyfriend if they ever break up. i personally liked this. if this ever happened to me, i dont know what i would do. - Catherine | |
| Ilove This Poem Good Job - Purshondranekeia | |
| wow that was great this poem reminds me of me and my ex boyfreind we were together 4 about a yr then we broke up n its been 7 months that weve been broken up n i still really love him and want him bak i tried everything but the distance kept us from having a secong change congrats u touched my heart - stacey | |
| OMG! I just went through tha same thing with my boyfriend and it hurts soo bad. He broke up wit me out of tha blue and wut realli got me was that i was at his house earlier that day and i realli couldn't believe it i cried for like a week straight. this peom is awesome and it realli touched me - Brittany | |
| OH MY GOD GIRL! I totally feel you. I know how hard it is to let something go that you thought was really great. The guy on the other hand didn't. I went through this problem just about 2months ago. My ex and I dated for 3 1/2 years. It was a big bummer when we broke up. Im only 14 so I know there are other oppurtunities but I miss that one oppurtunity. I thought he loved me. I sure did love him. But in the end things can work out, Im dating his brother. Me and his brother are doing good but I can not bare to look at him! LOVE SUCKS! - Jessica | |
| Wow! That really touched me that same thing is going through me right now! - Alyssa | |
| thats the same way i feel about my ex bf. i loved him and he broke my heart. i still think about him all the time. your poem relly touched me. thank you. - Tiffany | |
| it's not a bad poem. its kinda good really. keep it up! - Nick | |
| I had a boyfriend named Rudy and we've been on and off for about 2 months now. and a lot of people think that i can't possibly be in love with him because i'm only 13 but i think that it's really love 'cause i've never felt this way before! but keep up the good work your a great poet! I look up to you! - Lizzie | |
| Whoaa! Such a wonderful poem. Very simple one but full of meanings. I wonder how she can thinked of this poem. Keep up gal! - Shera | |
| i think the poem was great it gave me hpoe to know that even if a guy dumps me and takes everything he cant take my love for him - amanda | |
| i really like this poem because it reminds me of my boyfriend an i, but we are still together. - sherelle | |
| i think ur poem is simply AMAZIN. i have gone thru da same. we sail on da same boat. one more thin there r many ohter fish in da sea. U ROCK GIRL N NO GUY IS WORTH SO MUCH - gitika | |
| I LOVE,LOVE THIS Pome. its GREAT - megan | |
| this poem made me cry - amanda | |
| very nice poem - alexandra | |
| your poem is very deep it got to my soul. u did a super fantastic job on writing it. i simply LOVED it. Write some more and i got a poem that will give u some copetition but i dont kno how to get it on this site. but back to you keep up the good work it was excallent - Crystal | |
| hey, its weird to write this cuz i never have talked to u - but ur poem is really nice - i like it alot cuz i went thru the same thing and sometime i wish i did to make it better in the past but sometimes im glad its over too well i goodluck to u and keep writing - Gurp | |
| I really liked this poem because I can relate to it. It is a really great poem. - Erica | |
| This poem is very good. I enjoyed reading it and i think it would be neat if you wrote some more. You are a very good writing. - Lindsey | |
| wow your poem made me cry. it reminded me of the excact thing that i'm going through. it's really a great poem - Kayla | |
| this is a really great peom it will stick to me forever. - sarah | |
| This poem is exactly how I am feeling right now after breaking up with a guy after 19 months. This is truly a deep and emotional poem. Thanks I thought I was alone on that road. - Nicole | |
| That was amazing, I keep reading your poem and cant stop! I really relate to ur poem becuz 3 years ago, I was goin out with my now ex and I did all that was in your poem !bUt i had to ask him out 3 months after we broke up and he said no! But now I'm dating his brother! But my ex was the best ever! - Cookie | |
| aww! Wow thats such a great poem. even though i usually don't favor poems that dont relte to me like this one i LOVE it! its just something about it that made it so sweet and special. great job! keep up the good work! - Lena | |
| this poem has really touched me. i really relate to it b/c im goin through the exact same thing! - Brandi | |
| I really liked ur poem. Its exactly how i feel about my xfiance. We were together a lil over 2 yrs n then brokeup. Its almost a yr n i still miss him like crazy. I tried everything to get him back but now i am dating his cousin. Keep up the great work - Samantha | |
| that was gud! - katlyn | |
| That was an awesome poem! i totally can relate and im using it in this scrapbook i made of me and him( we are still really close and almost together) It fits perfectly on the second page! By the way. i suggest making a scrapbook to anyone who relates to his poem! It helps . with pics and notes and movie tickets and love qoutes and poems like this! Great job on the poem! - molly | |
| wow, this poem doesn't just relate to me, but my best friend. Thanks for this poem. - Amber | |
| you peom was amazing! - A | |
| I feel you GIRL! - Viviana | |
| your peom explained exactly how i felt with my baby but im luckily still with him and i will always love him. - vanessa | |
| omg i love this poem. it reminds me of my ex and me . i miss him soo much 2 years of an awesome relationship that i wouldnt take back EVER just gone and its soo hard to think about it . i can relate to that poem soo well becuz i would wait for him to call everynite and i would alwayz be soo happy wen my caller id showed up with his last name! im still in love with the kid and i alwayz will be . but that was a great poem i cant stop readin it ! thanks so much. i loved it! - Trish | |
| that was so beautiful. it reminds me of everytime ive been in love and how i felt. it was great - Rosie | |
| Hey your poem was reall really good Once again the poem was really good keep on writing your poems maybe some day u will be reall good and go to callage for writeing poems and maybe also poetry - Heather | |
| OMG I THOUGHT THIS POEM WAS AMAZING. SOMETHING LIKE THIS JUST HAPPENED TO ME. - KAYLA | |
| I feel the same way about my first love we were so happy together. Then my parents made us break up and were not allowed to see each other I still Love him and I always will. But we both have moved on. No matter what happens. He will always have a place in my heart. Your poem was great and it really touched me. - ashley | |
| wow!. this poem is really good!. it reminds me of my x-bf. whom now my friend. I still love him but he doesnt know it!. - J | |
| This is an exelent poem i love it it explains alot to me ! My boy friend dumped me and i will always love him he was my frist love! - Daniell | |
| i like this poem it reminds me of my best guy freind dustin and i liked him when i met him and i still do but i dont want to hurt our friendship by dating him - katie | |
| i like this poem - chris | |
| I LOVED your poem. I can relate to that poem 100%. Just recently too! I think you are a VERY good writer. Keep Writing. - blagh | |
| I can relate soo much to this poem! My boyfriend broke up with me after 2 months because i went away for the summer and it was "hard. " But i still love him soo much. - Jenna | |
| this poem "everything" is such a magnificant poem. I can relate to it because when me and my boyfriend broke up I would be so happy receiving his phone calls every day and after we broke up they wouldn't come as often. I couldn't stop thinking of him and all the happy/good times we spent together and now it all just vanished if nothing was ever there but he or anything can't take the love away the one I had for him. Thanks for making me realize that no matter what no one can take my love for him away not even him. - ANGIE | |
| really the most beautifull poem i have ever read. just the way i feel rightnow, said so simply,. magnificent - M | |
| i love ur poem very much i have the same feelings in my heart to about my ex. - kim | |
| Wow. this reminds me so much ofby boyfriend and i, well besides the breaking up part. You are a very talented person. Keep loving and growing. I was looking for inspiration and hear i have found it. In your poem. Thank You. - Ashley | |
| It was super! I liked how she put her feelings into her work. - Niki | |
| THat poem was a good poem - Mary | |
| hey i really like this poem alot and i can really relate to it, i miss my ex bf too but i moved on but my feelings are still there for that wonderful 1st love i had keep writing that was a great poem - Ciera | |
| I think that this poem is so sweet. It reminds me of how my boyfriend and I first started out dating. - Michelle | |
| I really can relate so much to this poem. but my boyfriend broke up with me the day before valentines day this year. so i can relate cause i still really love him so much and it will never end cause it carried on too long. - Jackie | |
| I love this poem because i loved a boy alot he asked me out and we were a couple for a long time then it was gone but till this day i am still very in love with him forever.I just wish for the day for us to be together again. - Stephanie | |
| thanx for the poem Marie, i can really relate to it. i know exactly how you feel, i was with my boyfriend for 2 years and he seems to have forgotten all the feelings we had for one another. i cant. i love him more than life itself, i dont think ill ever get over him. maybe someday, just not any day soon. thanx again, made me realise im not the only one in the world who's hurting :) - jen | |
| I love that poem! - Mindy | |
| this poem is great!it was just like i am having now.anyway.keep on working marie.. - Trina | |
| This reminds me of my and my boyfriend when he was here but he is now in the air force! Great Poem though it was very touching! - Lucy | |
| This is the BEST poem I have read so far!! It is like the story of my whole love life!! I can really relate and I am glad to know that I am not the only person going through this kind of situation! - Natalie | |
| This I thought was a really true poem about a love that left you! You wrote this really good. I think its sweet. =) - Melissa | |
| I really liked that poem. The best line is the cloud 9 part - Mandy | |
| that poem was really good that is how i look at the day with my girlfrend but we are going out - jimmy | |
| Oh my gosh this is like one of the best poems i've ever read! It reminds me of my first love and i'll always have a special spot in my heart for him! - Kallie | |
| it is so true that pictures say a thousand words. but poems do the same. love poems come from the heart, they are what the person is feeling for the other at that point in time. i feel the pain u have and i know how u feel. u write from the heart continue to keep it real - jer | |
| this poem is awesome its the exact poem i've been searching for, for some time now.. thanks! - mike | |
| this poem was the best it describes my relationship exactly if i could only find more..... - britni | |
| this poem is really nice . i like it because i can relate . - luz | |
| HEY, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR POEM ITS THE BEST! I HOPE YOU CAN MAKE SOME MORE OF THESE KEWL POEMS FOR PEOPLE LIKE ME TO READ... I WANNA BE A POET ONE DAY I HOPE I ACHIVE MY GOAL! WELL, G2G LUV RACHEL BYE - RACHEL | |
| That was a pretty Poem and it means alot to me, in alot of differnt ways. i know how it feels to have loved and then lost it all except the pain he left you, when he left. Keep writing your poems, you have a talent! - Joanna | |
| I THINK THIS POEM IS THE BEST! - CAROL | |
| girl this poem is so bomb i know exactly how you felt when you wrote this poem - morgan | |
| so so so so so so so so goood - ALIEN | |
| I know fully what you mean by this poem. It is really powerfull, but with few words. Nice job! - Brittney |
