I Do Say by Deeplyfelt
What can I say when I think about you?
I fear you yet I care so much of you that
you are all I want to be with.
I wish, I do say, that I do desire
every moment of your attention.
I do wish that you could see into my eyes as
I see into yours.
Every slight glance to every long gaze;
I want to be known, for myself, and to be
wanted, just to feel the sensation.
The sensation of knowing, within one's self,
that you are a part of this wonderful thing called life.
To be given the right to live life with another
can only give one a doorway to happiness.
To experience love and loss, the way life is meant to be.
One can't love without being lost
and can't loose without once being loved.
I do say, what harm can be done in being lost?
If all it takes is having to be lost here and feel
loved then in the end it is well worth it.
I fear you yet I care so much of you that
you are all I want to be with.
I wish, I do say, that I do desire
every moment of your attention.
I do wish that you could see into my eyes as
I see into yours.
Every slight glance to every long gaze;
I want to be known, for myself, and to be
wanted, just to feel the sensation.
The sensation of knowing, within one's self,
that you are a part of this wonderful thing called life.
To be given the right to live life with another
can only give one a doorway to happiness.
To experience love and loss, the way life is meant to be.
One can't love without being lost
and can't loose without once being loved.
I do say, what harm can be done in being lost?
If all it takes is having to be lost here and feel
loved then in the end it is well worth it.
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This is poem is about my love yes but what makes it so unique is that I have had such bad times with others in the past until he came along and showed me who I really was on the inside. He showed me that I deserved to be loved and I should love myself before anything I set out to do. He let me see by his devotion to me and me alone that there is a true guy out there for me that won't think of me as a trophy but think of me for my mind, my heart and who I am deep down inside.
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Nice poem =) Really reminds me of me and my boyfriend- just seems so much more easier for you to put it into words then myself =P xxx - Fran |
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Dude,I really loved that poem. It reminds me of a girl that I truly adored. You should keep writing. - Wolfang |
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This is a great poem. - Michelle |
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That is such a beautiful poem. I loved it and so did my boyfriend! - Tayler |
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Your poem was awesome you did a wonderful job writting it. Please continue writting because you have such a great talent:) - Jessica |
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whoever you are deeplyfelt, you have a great talent and i can relate with what you are saying. always keep in touch with your emotions and you'll always have great poems like this - vivian |
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I LOVED IT OMG ITS THE BESTEST - Meagen |
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I really like this poem. You are very talented i would love to beable to write poems like this one. - KAYLA |
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"One can not love with out being lost and can't loose with out once being loved," When you said that in your poem, it was awesome! That is a great philosophy keep on writing poems I am sure you will go far! - erica |
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I like the poem because it says things that are very true and very related to me. - Sihle |
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Awesome, truly awesome. - Fenimore |
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this poem is wonderful it relates well with the way i'm sure my ex-girlfriend is feeling - Chance |
