Peace Of Mind by Dave
Have you had cold showers of pain
My friend, you've stood in my rain
Deathly feeling of loneliness
No need to feel shameless
I've been there before
Not wanting to feel any more
Your hearts been broken in half
Mind still living in the past
Cold dark thoughts of suicide
Why don't I do it tonight
Don't worry it will go away
Learn to love another day
Put it in the back of mind
Let it rest and you will find
Dark clouds begin to part
New love will mend the heart
Thoughts of suicide disappear
Self- esteem will reappear
One day you'll be able to say
My friend you've stood in my rain
My friend, you've stood in my rain
Deathly feeling of loneliness
No need to feel shameless
I've been there before
Not wanting to feel any more
Your hearts been broken in half
Mind still living in the past
Cold dark thoughts of suicide
Why don't I do it tonight
Don't worry it will go away
Learn to love another day
Put it in the back of mind
Let it rest and you will find
Dark clouds begin to part
New love will mend the heart
Thoughts of suicide disappear
Self- esteem will reappear
One day you'll be able to say
My friend you've stood in my rain
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I broke up with my girlfriend two months ago. She was the first person I have ever truly been in love with. It took me quite a while to finally come to peace with myself over our breakup. I wrote this after sitting down one night and thinking about life in general and why we go through the hardships that we do. I realized everybody, or almost everybody losses some one they love and you learn to live with it.
And by doing that, you are able to help some one else who is going through it because you have been there, and you understand their feelings.
And by doing that, you are able to help some one else who is going through it because you have been there, and you understand their feelings.
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this poem has really touchd me,it kinda suits my position. my girl is slowly gettin far from me. it really has boosted my morale. thnx. - wahidur |
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Thats a good poem hope it is true because that is what I feel now. - Samantha |
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Omg i love this poem so much. Im only 13 and ive thought about suicide multiple times but never have i gotten a chance to do it. ive tried and ive tried. This poem shows how good it can be to have the feeling of no suicide thoughts but also that it takes alot of risks! - Freak With A Guitar |
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i know how u fel and i love comeing to this web site because i write teen poetry - vanessa |
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I'd just like to say i think your poem was really beautiful:) and i like the hope your sending out to everyone. if only everyones dark clouds could part, wouldnt that be nice? - BrokenAngel |
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Thats how I feel right now and it is very hard not to give up and I am trying but that poem gives me new hope for tommorow thanxs! Jessica Hughes - jessica |
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Let me just say that when I read your poem, I saw my ex-boyfriend in you. I saw the same voice and spirit, but he's simply not as strong. I've kept in contact with him for a few months now, and a few times, I had reason to fear that my complete absence could cost him his life. I recently left your poem out where he could see it. Thank you, thank you so much. You finally reached him. - Beautiful Dreamer |
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this poem was really touching. i liked it alot. - Jenn |
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This poem is awesome and i'm glad you came to terms wit that breakup. Remeber everything happens for a reason - Kayte |
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Read this with tears in my eyes. beautiful Dave - Freaky |
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i know everyone has already said it, but this poem is fantastic. thank you - Jamie |
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hey that poem was really good. i dont know why but it really touched me. your a great writer! - lisa |
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i give it a perfect 10. i love your poem! - Leighanne |
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i give it a perfect i love your poem! - Leighanne |
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Aww. this poem was really sweet and so true. I'll be your new love sweetheart. - Randi |
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i've been through depression and i know what it is like in the struggle through and then getting back on your feet again. i just wanted to say that this poem really touched me and i thought you did an amazing job of capturing the emotions in your words. - steff |
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wow this was deep i mean i write myself and still none of mine were ever this deep and well writen best to you and your writing - krissy |
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I really like the poem because It reminds me of my friends that used to talk to me when I am down and they moved away and my life changed so much with their help. - Amanda |
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well i'm standing in the rain but maybe soon ill be out of it - dave |
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It's such an awesome poem. It reminds me of how my life used to be. ~Lavina - Lavina |
