Better Untouched by Chole
I look at him,
And a smile grows in my face.
Just to remember the times,
When he could've been mine.
As he gives me a hug,
While he puts his arms around me.
I remember what I would've gave
To only have a chance with him.
But now I see him,
In a different light.
Yes, he still means the world to me,
But now its a different way.
His friendship means a lot to me,
Although we never had much anything else.
Now I see why God doesn't answer all prayers,
Because some things are left better untouched.
And a smile grows in my face.
Just to remember the times,
When he could've been mine.
As he gives me a hug,
While he puts his arms around me.
I remember what I would've gave
To only have a chance with him.
But now I see him,
In a different light.
Yes, he still means the world to me,
But now its a different way.
His friendship means a lot to me,
Although we never had much anything else.
Now I see why God doesn't answer all prayers,
Because some things are left better untouched.
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This poem is for one of my good friends. I love him to death and wanted more from our friendship, but he would not see to that. I haven't seen him in a couple of months, than just this month, I ran into him at a carnival. As he gave me a hug, I looked back on the good times we shared, and this is what I got.
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I really like this. it's summed up in a few lines what I've been feeling for months now. - Natasha |
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I just love it. Thank you for putting all my feelings into words! - charlize |
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your poem is very nice it touch me in a way that poetry never did. so there's my little comment so keep up the good work! - miriah |
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thank you i can really relate to your poem it reminds me of this girl i really like but are probably better off friends so we last longer - ramon |
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I love the poem because i have the same problem i had a best friend and i loved hhim lotz he was that special person for me and he will always will be thanks for this poems now i know i am not the only one passing thru this that there is hope that i day i will see him just as my best friend - Marlen |
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Thank you for that poem. you are not alone. - tg |
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hi. i like the poem very much. i have a friend whom i really learned to love. he's so ideal for me. if ever i hve the cgnce to choose for someone i can b with for the rest of my life, it would definitely him. , but as what u'v written there are things that better untouched. he told me that he value our friendship so much and he wont allow anythng to break it. i thnk he's afraid of losing each other. again, as u'v written, there are things that better left untouched. - liza mae |
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i can really realate to this poem. because until me and a friend almost started to date i didnt relize how much i could be risking. - chelsae |
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this is beautiful writting keep it up! this is exactly what is happening to me except i still love him but i noe that he wouldnt do me any good! - ms.riddler |
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This is a best poem. i liked very much. from Bangalore India - santhosh |
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This poem hit me so hard becuase it described everything I had been through with two guys that are now just like big brothers to me. Thank you for writing this - Emily |
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This is an amazingly mind-blowing piece of work. very true too. - beyonce |
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It's a wonderful poem that describes my situation at this very moment! - Melinda |
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Just like the author of this poem i have fallen for my best friend, i know i will never have the courage to tell him what i feel but no matter what we will always be friends. Sometimes when you look at someone you realize just how much they mean to you, but you also realize that friends are friends and nothing else. - Mary Jane |
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okay. wow i loved this poem it is exactly what i was going through. it took me such a long time to realize how when you think it would just be so right for these two people to be together, and it would be so awewsome if he or she were yours. and when you look at him or her you used to get jealous. but over time those feelings fade, and what is left is a bond so deep that you are so happy in the end that god did leave it untouched! thank you so much for writing such a fantastic poem - erika |
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I really love this poems. It expresses exactly how I feel right now! It's like it took the words right out of my thoughts. - Keisha |
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10 - Rachel |
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Some prayers are not meant to be answered. I have been in that position twice in my life. One time I really wished it wouldnt have been. This time,I couldnt have been happier. I have found the love of my life! Thank You, a lot of people neededit. - Michelle |
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Well this poem reminds me of a friend who i loved more than a friend he always had a smile on his face and gave me his loving everyday hugs. Well i live in Corcoran,Ca. He lives in Coalinga and i met him before i moved here. - Monic |
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its a beautiful poem. i can feel it as i am right in it. sometimes something such as crossing the border between friendship and love should be left untouched. love it. - Bea |
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hey, great job. this poem really makes me thing about a friend that i just had. - yesenia |
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THAT WAS SO TRUE. I AM REALLY HAPPY THAT GOD DOESN'T ANSWER ALL PRAYERS - Tasha |
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This poem is really nice and true too. I really love it. - Eliza |
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This poem hit so close to home, i really really like the poem for the simple fact that i love/like my friend and he knows but its like thing can come from it at this time and the poem really made me think about it more and i true see that things are better left untouched. - Deszerrie'ja |
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this is a great poem. I love it very much because i can i love a guy who is my friend, but i can't love him as a boyfriend because he a true friend and hat happen if we broke up. What will happen next??? - Lyla |
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that was a god poem and i hope you get better not saying its not good. Hope you have more to come. - Natalie |
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This poem is one i can relate to alot. I once fell for my friend and i prayed to god we could be more then just friends but as time past i realized it would be better if we were just friends. I didn't have a way to put how i fell in words, but now i found a way. through this poem! - Kuulei |
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Very deep poem dat a lot of ppl inc me hav gone thru. Keep up the gud wrk :) - Sum1 |
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THis poem is super - vERRI |
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this poem was absolutly untouched i have read anything moe beautiful it makes me think alot of the old days with all of my friends. - brittany |
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This is very nice. So special, and so true. - Carmen |
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great poem, keep it up, it saved me from a really bad break up. thank you so much - luis |
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This poem is so deep I love it! it kinda reminds me of a friend that I had - Gatita |
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this poem totally explain how i feel about this guy and i have never read a peom that took everthing i feel about him now and put it in such stright to the point wordings. it's a great poem! - jordan |
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it is great!it touched me because just right now i understood that i will never be with the girl i like,and probably is better for me to be like that - ioannis |
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Oh my god! that poem was so sweet! i was all like "awwwww how sweet"i feel exactly same way about this guy i know! i loved the poem! good job Chole! - Julie |
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Wow! Chole I loved that poem. It totally describes me and my friend relastionship. Better Untouched has inspired me. - Tora |
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I loved your poem. Reminds me of this guy Mitch, whose been a close friend of mine. Someday, I'll be able to look at things this way. Right now im still trying to gain some perspective to move on. I'm even thinking of sending your poem to him. thanks! - TIN2 |
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Okay just wanted to let you know that I think this is an awesome poem. My best friend and I live in seperate states and yet everytime I see him I feel something that can never be explained. Anywayz I just wanted to say that this is simply an awesome poem and I think that we all need to really pay close attention b/c our one true love may be closer than we think. - Angel |
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its great i hope u still see him and still be friends. even if u cant have him theres a reason and ur poem shows this u have inspired me . thanks - kari |
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i really like this moment. it has so many meaning, it came from the heart. - auror |
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This poem is absolutely beautiful. I've been trying to figure out a way to express my feelings toward a friend and this is perfect. When we moved to different colleges I was unsure of my feelings, but now I have realized that things could never work between us as more than friends and I will always love him more than anything in this world and would do anything for him. But I could never tell him how I felt because I was afraid of losing him, so things just have to stay untouched! Great poem. and thanks for the help! - Erin |
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Hey Chole- i love this poem it explains everything that i am goin through i am soo in love w/this guyz and i can't tell him:( - Me |
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This poem is amazing. In high school, I was head over heels with my best friend, and always wished he would see me that way too. After running into him recently, I still love him to death, but am very glad that we stayed just friends. Great poem! - Jaclyn |
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oh my god, i just realized everything that's gone on and finally what it means because of your poem. my best guy friend and i have gone through exactly what this poem describes. i love him more than life itself, and i always will. i guess what they say is probably true."it's better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all.'' great poem.i can't tell you how much it means to me to read it. keep up the great writing! - kim |
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this poem remined me of me and my friend it is so true on that i wanted so much more but i couldnt have and i always put him down its so great that other people are feeling this way too - ash |
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You describes exactly, what I feel right now. Great. - Liz |
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ilove this poem.its nice and very fascinating. - cherielou |
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I like this poem very much - Pat |
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i love your poem. you hit it right on the nail. it made me cry. there's this guy who is my best friend in the whole world. i love him so much. we're going off to college in the fall and i'm going to miss him so much. sometimes i want more with him.it's so confusing. - Joanna |
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This poem really expressed emoitons that I have been avoiding for a long time. Thank You for helping me get through such a tuff time with just a few words. Beautiful job Chole. - Amanda |
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i love this poem - Toya |
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Beautiful and inspirational words! - Elizabeth |
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When I read this poem..I knew what was really want to know. Great Poem - rana |
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This was a very touching poem. It says exactly how I feel about a friend of mine. I have feelings for him, but he's better left untouched. - Abby |
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Well you are right my dear.. some things are better be untouched.. I'm in the same situation as yours.. and we both are still great together. Good job - hasz |
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Very good! - Jim |
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very insightful and touching! - Lubasha |
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your poem was really touching i think it was absoulutely perfect - Monica |
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I like this poem so much.It remides me of the boy I had a crush and I still have a crush on. - Yvonne |
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yah, this poem helped me realize truth...and how some things are ,as chole says, better left untouched. even though we cannot or don't want to see the future, not everything is best our way; and for some reason life does turn out even better if it is untouched - Laura |
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This poem is so great!!!! - tennille |
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it was a good moive ok - april |
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very true - nicole |
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BEAUTIFUL I FEEL THAT WAY RIGHT THIS SECOND. IT HELPS TO KNOW I'M NOT ALONE! - MILLIE |
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This is a beautiful poem. I myself write poetry and I love this poem. I am going through a similar ordeal with my best friend. I now live in Kentucky and he lives in Tennessee. - Melissa |
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Very well-written poem..I can feel what you felt then.. - Luv-ing |
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GREAT POEM! - J. |
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one of the best yet, love it more please, more - jeffrey |
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Dear Chole, You must be amillion miles away, but your poem made me feel very close to you. The subject of the poem is what I`m going through now - jim |
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This poem is really the way people feel and i like it because it decribes many of my friends relationships - Renisha |
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it a really nice poems.. :)and i have kept it as one of my favourites .. - Laiim |
