Sisterly Love by Ashtyn Bevins
Your ear to ear smile brought joy to us all
As my sister you knew just what to say
When I felt worthless you helped me stand tall
Now you have gone, how I hated that day
I feel my life has been torn apart
You taught me how to be strong, loving and wise
I know you live on, inside of my heart
Though everyday a part of me dies
But when I think of you it helps me go on
So I thank you for all the love you have
I still can't believe that you are now gone
When you left you were so little and brave
Not only were you my sister and friend
But you always had a hand to lend
As my sister you knew just what to say
When I felt worthless you helped me stand tall
Now you have gone, how I hated that day
I feel my life has been torn apart
You taught me how to be strong, loving and wise
I know you live on, inside of my heart
Though everyday a part of me dies
But when I think of you it helps me go on
So I thank you for all the love you have
I still can't believe that you are now gone
When you left you were so little and brave
Not only were you my sister and friend
But you always had a hand to lend
|
|
Rating: N/A |
This poem is about my love for my little sister, who died from brain cancer at the age of 10. It is about the love she shared and the love I still have for her.
 |
This poem was sooo touching and teaches us to not to take advantage cause we never would want this to happen to us. Ur poem wasss GREAT! - Terran |
|
great poem - Mel |
|
these poem is amazing! i'm so sorry about your sister. you have a talent with your peotry. - Dezi |
|
that was a very good one . thumbs up - krystal |
|
I like that poem and it really touched my heart cuz my best friends is my sisters,Cedrika,Cedrionna,and Arie they are the best friends and best sisters i can have. - Kawana |
|
it was really good when i read it tears fell down my cheeks and i really felt the thing the author wants the readers to feel. the words she used were great! i hope you had recovered! i felt the same because my sister gave that kind of love to me! - timmy |
|
this poem describes exactely how a sister should be. i never really had such a sister but now i know what to look for and how to show my own sister what a sister really is. - annacelia |
|
this is a wonderful poem. i hope everyone else likes it as much as i did! - tawanna |
|
This poem really applies to all sisters and that mekes it really special. - sad |
|
this poem is a great poem i love the way u set it help just remember to keep your head up - shanequa |
|
This has got to be the most heartwarming poem I have ever read. I myself having four sisters, I know just what joy a family can be. (Brothers are fun too!) Keep working and perhaps write another one someday? - Cliffton |
|
that poem was so touching and i think that was one of the most coolest poems i ever read - PRISCILLA |
|
this poem realy touched me becuase i know if would have ever lost my sister i would be devistated and my grandpa died from brain cancer and its not easy so i feel your pain - rachael |
|
i loved this poem it made me cry my sister get really sick we thought she was going to die but she got bitter but i keep thinking what if shed died i don't no how i'd go on but after i read your poem i no now that if she did she wouldn't have really gone because shed live on in me thank you and i'm really sorry a but your sister. - melanie |
|
your poem not only made me feel wot a sister is worth but it also touched my heart and showed me how much i love my sister at the moment my sister has anorexia and she is 43 kilos and she is 18 years old soo i thank you so much for that poem. love alwayz and forever Taylah - Taylah |
|
HEY THAT WAS SAD BUT I LIKED IT. IT WAS SO KOOL JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT I LOVE THAT POEM. - christian |
|
hey i loved that poem so much it alwayz made me cry but i am going 2 stand tall what my sister told me too do! - takesha |
|
This is a really good poem good job on it . But it touched me . i cryed reading it - Wendi |
|
GREAT POEM WOW BLEW ME AWAY - SAM |
|
awww i think dis poem is really good but very sad. Who ever wrote dis i give u madd props niice goin nd i hope for da bes of u x0x pCe - Heather |
