Beyond Comprehension by Lauren Montelbano
No one hears me, understands me
I speak in silence
hoping that someone will see my words, my message
hoping to find love, it has arrived so divine
I wish for a stronger, better life
filled with everlasting touch
I dream the future, but hold the past
My body is brimmed with so many confusions
Am I really here experiencing fullness?
I must be, the pain is so real
the hurt I feel could never be imagined
but I will pull through into greatness
and destroy whatever faces into me
As I struggle I will fight until the end
Whenever it may come
I speak in silence
hoping that someone will see my words, my message
hoping to find love, it has arrived so divine
I wish for a stronger, better life
filled with everlasting touch
I dream the future, but hold the past
My body is brimmed with so many confusions
Am I really here experiencing fullness?
I must be, the pain is so real
the hurt I feel could never be imagined
but I will pull through into greatness
and destroy whatever faces into me
As I struggle I will fight until the end
Whenever it may come
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I was very depressed when I wrote this poem. I had found the love of my life, but I felt as if everything else was being sucked out of me. My life, as well as my soul, were completely empty. Although my life and all of my feelings were torn and blackened, there was one hope left.
That hope was love. My heart was full, but lay dormant and I was determined to pull through. Thank you Adam for helping turn my soul free.
That hope was love. My heart was full, but lay dormant and I was determined to pull through. Thank you Adam for helping turn my soul free.
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this is a great poem. most of all i like, no love the ending. you send a great message that even through the hardest times you should never stop fighting. your poem is a real eye open-er. - Rachel |
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It really touched me from deep within my soul. It is sad, but true i feel like that right now even as i type this to you. Thank you for letting me know i am not alone. Peace and may GOD bless you in everything you do. - Laquawnda |
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your poem describes everything so precisely, i felt like you said all the things i would say but never came out of my mouth. its a great poem, i love it. thank you for writing it. - cindy |
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I related to this poem very much and it was written very well. - andres |
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I think this poem is very touching,and is so true. it really gives you something to think about. Nice Going Pinky TL - Sandi |
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when you commented on your poem, you said what i feel. please, how did you get through it? my fiance is the only thing keeping me here. i can't hardly even write my poems anymore. i just feel so empty. your poem was inspiring. i hope that i can find it inside myself to pull throug this time of despair and come back into the light of love. thank you for giving me hope. - Meghan |
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this poem was amazing and i can totally realate it must have been made by a genuis cuz the choice of vocabulary made the poems that much better. - katie |
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i loved the poem i can relate to it sometimes - Alyssa |
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I like it very much :) - Anastasia |
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i lvoe this poem so much it relates to when i found out my b/f the first guy i ever fell in love with cheated on me. this is exactly how i felt and still do. - Angelica |
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this poem was the best. it touched me in everyway and understand it completly. u konw exactly how i am feeling, thank you so much, keep up the good work! - Andie |
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i love this poem i can really realate to it im only 13 but i fully understand what u mean keep writing - Ashley |
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This poem is just too beautful for words! - Joan |
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That was so touch poem, with my tears in my eyes. thanks a lot, May You be bless always! - Ameera |
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This poem feaking is great and its the best ever i think that you freeking write more and then send them to me and then ill publish them and ill make you famous - Egunine |
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This poem is good i think that it shows how my friend lauren is feeling what can i do to help her send me some stuff to help her and then ill contact you back thanks for the help - Ulises |
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I'm going through a hard time in my life right know and i felt as if everything i have been feeling is all in this poem. - Lauren |
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Your poem sounds exactly like something I would write. I really really enjoyed it. It seems as though no one really understand me, and who I am, so I think we can relate. I think I know somewhat of what you're going through. and you just may know what I am going through as well. You write so beautifully. I hope to be able to read more of your poetry. We just have to have hope. I feel less alone now, thank you so very much. - Tammy |
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This made me cry. it fit perfectly to what i feel, im only 14 it will always stick to my mind. it was very touching. - Skyler |
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i really like this poem. i can relate to it soo much. thank you for writing it :) - Jessi |
