Still My Mind - Act 1 by Bentwig420
Still it rushes through me,
in every pore,
through every cell.
What is this . . .
what feeling is this?
I cannot tell,
what secrets unveil
capabilities
unknown to limits.
This absolute emmersion
blankets my every
conscious thought.
Drawing you closer,
bringing you here.
So close to me I dare not say -
still not within my sight.
I feel your breath,
heat penetrating my skin
like a hard summer rain.
I feel your face, your eyes,
trace your mouth
with my fingers.
You give me breath
so close to your mouth,
still we do not touch.
Smoldering fantasies
ignite burning,
lust and longing.
Desire tempts me.
"Move closer . . . " she whispers,
"closer, closer. "
A paradox? Closer to you,
like the finest lace -
our bodies occupy exactly
the same space.
Deeper you come!
Taking you in -
surrounding me and filling
me up- and down- push, shove
CRASH!
Eyes open, must I see?
Truth is now . . . this reality.
in every pore,
through every cell.
What is this . . .
what feeling is this?
I cannot tell,
what secrets unveil
capabilities
unknown to limits.
This absolute emmersion
blankets my every
conscious thought.
Drawing you closer,
bringing you here.
So close to me I dare not say -
still not within my sight.
I feel your breath,
heat penetrating my skin
like a hard summer rain.
I feel your face, your eyes,
trace your mouth
with my fingers.
You give me breath
so close to your mouth,
still we do not touch.
Smoldering fantasies
ignite burning,
lust and longing.
Desire tempts me.
"Move closer . . . " she whispers,
"closer, closer. "
A paradox? Closer to you,
like the finest lace -
our bodies occupy exactly
the same space.
Deeper you come!
Taking you in -
surrounding me and filling
me up- and down- push, shove
CRASH!
Eyes open, must I see?
Truth is now . . . this reality.
Rating: N/A |
This poem explores the feelings that surrounded me late one night, when the 'projector in my mind' was playing reels and reels of someone that I love. The twist, as real as the feel, the reality is not the Picasso painting I have created in my mind, but a space filled with questions unanswered, running to, to run away - and the harsh truth that I have to open my eyes. But it is oh so nice, with my lover, in my mind.
The reason for the Act number is that I have written other poems regarding what goes on in my mind.
The reason for the Act number is that I have written other poems regarding what goes on in my mind.
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WOW THIS POEM WAS SO GREAT IT HAD SO MUCH MEANING TO IT IT GIVES YOU FEELINGS THAT YOU COULD NOT IMAGIN BUT HEY WAT DO YOU THINK? - Tiffany |
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just lovely - Tamika |
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great and incridible. i loved it - Robyn |
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Wow! One can certainly become moved to action reading this. Wonderful, thankyou:) - Noreen |
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REALLY NICE - DEANNA |
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I could visual this happen. tight joint - DSGB |
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this is a good poem, keep up the good work. - LaRosa |
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this poem got me very emotional. wow im so speechless thats how good it was! - lolly |
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THIS POEM WOW. YOU HIT ON MY DREAM. TO WANT SOMEONE SO BAD. AND THE ONLY WAY YOU CAN IS TO SLEEP. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT - MELINDA |
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This poem is hot. - Shereca |
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this is fantastic. has a smooth touch and flow. keep up author - frank |
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That was truly incredible! - kristi |
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Juxtapose this poem beside the painting called "Alone" by Henri Toulouse-Lautrec and the stage is set! - Anna |
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Wow, it's like you read my mind! Keep using and sharing your insatiable talent. - alissa |
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thankyou for moving me - dianne |
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I love it! Your poem awoke my spirit,very passionate! - Brenda |
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it was good - ANGLE |
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This poem is very spritual. It touches me deep within my soul like poetry should do. Please post more of what you have done. I would love to read more! - Val |
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This is absolutely wonderful. - Alendryal |
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it seems someone finally captured for me the reason why sometimes it hurts so bad when you lose someone you love.maybe your poem speaks to me differently than others.but to me it is beautiful. - ladysweetleaf |
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i love this poem cause it reminds me of what i feel when me and the love of my life are getting close together, this poems really captures the feeling and lust of two people sharing so much. if you can't find the words to tell someone how you fell about that, this is the poem to send. it gave me shills just reading it cause you explained everything so perfect.. thanks for writting this poem. please write more like this. thanks Leigh McCormick - Leigh |
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I think this is deep, thought envoking and again spirtual. - suzanne |
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IT TOUCHES THE REALITY! IT IS ABSOLUTELY THRUTH, SPEAKING OUT OF EXPERIENCE. I LIKE IT VERY VERY MUCH! - GERARD |
