Loving You Loving Me by Ashley Mclean
As we walk along the moonlit beach
Watching and listening to the waves gently roll in
Underneath the vast, clear star- filled sky
We stop and stare into each others eyes,
You lean down, gently kissing me and take me into your arms.
We start to dance, slowly moving from side to side,
But all of a sudden we stop.
You carefully lift up my face from your broad chest,
Then you tell me how much you love me.
I reply by telling you that I love you as well and always will.
Its just then that you kiss my forehead and take my hand,
We begin to walk again and find a place to sit.
As we sit, we talk for hours,
It seems like wed only been there for minutes
Then we see the sun peeking over the horizon,
We watch the sun rise and then go out to breakfast
Thus starting another new, beautiful day together.
Watching and listening to the waves gently roll in
Underneath the vast, clear star- filled sky
We stop and stare into each others eyes,
You lean down, gently kissing me and take me into your arms.
We start to dance, slowly moving from side to side,
But all of a sudden we stop.
You carefully lift up my face from your broad chest,
Then you tell me how much you love me.
I reply by telling you that I love you as well and always will.
Its just then that you kiss my forehead and take my hand,
We begin to walk again and find a place to sit.
As we sit, we talk for hours,
It seems like wed only been there for minutes
Then we see the sun peeking over the horizon,
We watch the sun rise and then go out to breakfast
Thus starting another new, beautiful day together.
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This poem is about my boyfriend and myself. I wrote it in hopes that it would spark his romantic side and give him some ideas.
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this poem is great only if i had a brain like that - jennifer |
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WOW-Wee! Talk about romantic ideas. Beautiful. - Brittany |
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your poem was amazingly touching, it reminds me of my last love, absolutley perfect! loved reading it, thank you for brightening my day. . . - Clara |
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I absolutely love it. It reminds me so much of me and my boyfriend. It is so sweet, keep it up girl. - Ashley |
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this poem's mad sweet. awwwww that lucky girl better be happy cause if she dont want him anymore ill take him. - jasmine |
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I loved this poem! It says everything that's real in a true relationship. Also, it seems as if you can picture yourself w/ that special someone while you read. It's a beautiful poem. - Janna |
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This poem was really beutiful, very touching. - Jessica |
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your poem makes me thik orf my frist love and how we would tell each other how much we love each other so much your poem was one of the best one hae read this year and i hpe it stays that way - stephanie |
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tihs is a good poem. but there is a weird thing . a couple of months ago my EX-BOYFRIEND and I were on a date and he was telling me about this fantiseand it was the same exact thing only at the end we went into a log cabbin and thae only light was candle llight and rose pettals were flying ever whereand we just layed in bed with eac other and just enjoying the time we had to gether and i waish he actually meant it so it's really a relly good poem . i just wish we were still toghter some times. - brittany |
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I love this poem. I am the one who would like to turn it into a song. - bobby |
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It was a nice and cool - windoline |
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Oh my od, I really wish my girlfriend would say something like that. But she doesn't even know what the world looks like after 10pm. - Jase |
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that was a very good poem i really liked it alot - neelam |
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I like this poem i think it wounderful. It reminded me when i first fell in love with a guy that i really liked - sheri |
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great poem. very poetic and expressive. :) good luck with this guy! - innoxius |
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eventhough most don't realize that the dept of teen love is sometimes the best and deepest it's evident in this poem. i loved it mostly because of the insite. - Lady |
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I just wanted to tell you that this poem was very nice. I liked it so much, and it really reminded me of me and my boyfriend. The things you wrote is exactly the things that i want to share with him. So yea excellant job and keep up the good work. - Laura |
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Good poem - Emmy |
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THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD! I loved it. im in love as well with elliot and i know how u feel! - kyleigh |
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This is such a great poem. - Jenny |
