The Rainbow And Real Fun by Jisnu Dunlop
The weave of romance, friendship and love
Always alive, moving with the two
Their hopes and sharing
The strength and warmth
Each can give Each can be free
And then the play unfolds
When each can
Live for the other
Nurturing and inspiring
Only the problems unforgiven
Could end . . .
The rainbows and real fun
The times outdoor and flush
With each other and breezes
The light fills both lives
A beach is the edge of their one heart
The sky the cover of the naked
Excitement and delight
In giving
Giving
Giving
If it isn't giving
It isn't living
Always alive, moving with the two
Their hopes and sharing
The strength and warmth
Each can give Each can be free
And then the play unfolds
When each can
Live for the other
Nurturing and inspiring
Only the problems unforgiven
Could end . . .
The rainbows and real fun
The times outdoor and flush
With each other and breezes
The light fills both lives
A beach is the edge of their one heart
The sky the cover of the naked
Excitement and delight
In giving
Giving
Giving
If it isn't giving
It isn't living
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You will see the spontaneity in The Rainbow and Real Fun. It was written in a cyber chat, when normal conversation would not express the feelings best. The Rainbows and Real Fun was written as two new friends, Cheryl and I, discovered our mutual love for poetry.
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THAT WAS AN EXCELLENT POEM - OYMO |
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THIS POEM IS TOO MUCH BETTER THEN EVERY POEM ON FRIENDSHIP. I LOVE TIS POEM - MANAN AKRAM |
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i sounds great i think so - amber |
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Very good. I liked it. - KYLIE |
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'If it is'nt giving it isn't living. ' That sure sums it up! - EMan |
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the poem is so heart felt. I was really sad tonight and the joy of it made me glad. Thank you. The last stanza is masterful. - Wanda |
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Absolutely touching! - Karen |
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You expalin - in good way. - Riz |
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Lovely poem for lovely friends. - Robinson |
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very good - Jonathan |
