Wet by Moondance
Wetness does not always pertain to water
in an ocean, river or lake;
Sometimes it refers to how I feel
when I remember your embrace.
I only have to think of you
to remember me in your arms;
My legs quivering, my mouth moaning
I have fallen captive to your charms.
I long to feel your body on mine
to know the taste of satisfied love;
To lie quietly in your arms
we fit together like a hand to a glove.
You are the sweetheart of my life
you are my one sure bet;
You never have to wonder babe . . .
you can always keep me wet.
in an ocean, river or lake;
Sometimes it refers to how I feel
when I remember your embrace.
I only have to think of you
to remember me in your arms;
My legs quivering, my mouth moaning
I have fallen captive to your charms.
I long to feel your body on mine
to know the taste of satisfied love;
To lie quietly in your arms
we fit together like a hand to a glove.
You are the sweetheart of my life
you are my one sure bet;
You never have to wonder babe . . .
you can always keep me wet.
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Sometimes just the thought of someone can stir up emotions in us when we least expect it. Hopefully, there is someone in your life, or in your memory, who can stir the following emotions in you.
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This poem describes what I would be experiencing when I am besides my lover in a public place and cant get my mind off him. wet is the correct word to describe how I would feel. I give the poet 2 thumbs up for this poem, it shows that he has really experience what true love can take you through. - Unknown |
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This poem explains exactly how I feel about my boyfriend, and what he does to me! I loved it! - Blue |
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i love this poem b/c it makes me think of my boyfriend. - shonta |
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Just to let you know that poem reminds me of my one and only. My fiance'Ruben! - Patricia |
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I really really love "Wet". The main reason I love it is because it describes how I feel about this certain someone. It's like Moondance took the words right out of my mouth. I also love the rhyme scheme and the way the words were put together to be read so erotically. I give "Wet" a two thumbs up! Keep up the good writing Moondance! - Melissa |
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The poem was well written. I like how I could feel what was said and how I could relate to the poem. You did a wonderful job! The poem sounds like it truly came from experience. - Myeasha |
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Exquisite. captures each of our senses - staci |
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that poem brought a chill to my spine, i thought of my love and the thought of us sharing intimacy - lisa |
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I like this poem alot! - Mrs.Reese |
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this was an exact feeling i have for my partner. i want to thank u for sharing the feeling to everyone. it was a wonderful, passionate poem. - Katrina |
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This poem took the words from my heart and inner most thoughts that I only knew, but could'nt put the rights words together. - Tiff |
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This is a real nice poem, this is how my fiance makes me feel - Erica |
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This is a wonderful poem. I love it. - Aimee |
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I LOVE THIS POEM. ITS SO COOL NICE JOB ! - melissa |
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I love this poem! - Amber |
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heyyyy, this poem was killer, i hope u dont mind i used it for a schol project! - Nikki |
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i read this poem when i think of my girlfriend - baby |
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This peom is beautifully written. Its written in such a way that you feel cherished and wanted and loved when its given to you. I applaud you Moondance. Its great! - Jenny |
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I love that poem! It totally describes my feelings! good job! - Kassi |
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Wow, very well said. - dee |
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it is exactly how i feel when im with this girl - baby6 |
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OHHHHH MY GODDDDDDDDDD, I LOVE IT! - Jenni |
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HOW I FEEL - baby |
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i can't believe how you could capture exactly what's on my mind! whenever i think of my guy i get that "wet" feeling. that feeling where my heart drops all the way down to my feet,and my breath gets caught in my throat. i am so going to share this poem with my baby! keep on writing! - Candy |
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i love the poem alot - baby |
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this is what my chick does to me - baby |
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Great poem, I know exactly how you feel! - Cindy |
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I LOVED this poem. This one, by far, is the epitome of my relationship with my fiance. Thank you for creating such wonderful words of prose. - Erica |
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This poem is just erotic and I loved it. I conjured up the sweetest thoughts! - Cindi |
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Loved your poem!! This is exactely what my guy does to me - Babe |
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Unbelievable! You are so talented I came back two days in a row to read this piece. Not everyone feels this deeply-not everyone can express it. Its funny how you recognize a kindred spirit through their writing. - Tom |
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Very true and passionate. Had to send it to my wife. Thank you. I hope to be able to write like that someday. - Pete |
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Very good.. I like that one ;) - Ne |
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I really love this peom. It has great erotic passion and it just makes me tingle all over. - Recia |
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Yeah, My goddd..Moondance u rock! This poem also reminded of my special sweety. Who i love very much.Well done, KEEP IT UP - Analia |
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I loved this poem, if I could write poetry, I would have written this. - Lisa |
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I really love this poem! It reminds me of the love shared between my husband and I. It made me laugh and giggle. Who knew someone knew! Thank you! - Tammy |
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Took the words right out of my mouth. GREAT! - Lisa |
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you have put into words exactley what i want to shout from above about the love of my life DIANA. i love her so much it hurts (great) - merv |
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I couln't beliveve when I read your poem that you descibed just how I feel about a certain someone in my life right now. I have already e-mailed it to him and I can't wait to hear his response because it's exactly how I have been telling him I feel about him. Thanks for putting it into the perfect words for me. I think it's great!!! How about some more poems soon huh?? - carol |
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I like this poem. You are soo awsome, whoever wrote this!! - Myle |
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Wow! This really says it all about how I feel about that special someone. What a great poem! - Lisa |
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good poem i liked it a lot - LaDwidia |
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Very erotic and tasteful. - starr |
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This poem expresses the way I feel and how I think about my mate. Thanks for putting it into words for me. Until next time keep up the good work! - Linda |
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it good - nadieshda |
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This is a great little poem to let the man in your life know how they make you feel. - Barbara |
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outstanding - diane |
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YOU EXPRESSED EVERYTHING I'D ONLY JUST TRIED TO EXPLAIN TO MY MAN. - LISA |
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beautiful .what more can i say - stephanie |
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i like your poem very much thank you for writing like this its geat - kokin |
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When I read this poem I was so amazed I loved it - Jessica |
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nice - Sonya |
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This Poem is Awesome!!! - Christina |
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My husband and I have been apart for a few months because of business- this poem was just what I wanted to send to him. Thank you - Danette |
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This was a very sensual, sexyl,beautiful poem. I LOVED IT! She is a terrific poetess. - Claudia |
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I REALLY LOVE THAT POEM IT MAKES ME THINK ABOUT THE TIMES I SPEND WITH MY BOYFRIEND - LADY |
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Thank you for helping me tell someone how i feel. The Poem is Brilliant Well done - Deborah |
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excellent poem, exactly what i wanted to say to a special person in my life. - joan |
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I can't believe how you captured my feeling for someone in this poem you have written. I sent him this poem and he loved it too. I think it's great and keep up the good work!! - carol |
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Hey this poem really reminded me of my Nick ! i had to tell you it was great! Great JOB! - Mary |
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What a great poem. I just sent this to my boyfriend. It is a great use of the word wet. It has put me in a lustful mood. Great work. - Carrie |
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How erotic...how familiar.. you revive wonderful memories... thanks! - Tenderheart |
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Very visual....very accurate. - K |
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This poet seems very talented. I'd love for him or her to send in more - Stasha |
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Very sexy! - Lane |
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Great poem Moondance.Keep on keeping it real - caroline |
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I have someone in my life that makes me feel the same. What a gift! - Ginny |
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the best part of this poem is the knowing smile it brought to my face. - phyllis |
