What Would Life Be by Scott Wheeler, Sr
What would life be with out friends like thee
I'll tell you, like no longer being free.
Imagine what life would be so sad and blue
To go through life without that special you.
And I know we live so far away
Through the internet we are like castaways
Never get to touch or hug you for this I only pray
For some day I hope we can meet
To hug and laugh and dance to the beat
I know this would be a treat
For now this is all I see
Is my good friend here with me
Just think what life would be
Without friends like thee
I'll tell you, like no longer being free.
Imagine what life would be so sad and blue
To go through life without that special you.
And I know we live so far away
Through the internet we are like castaways
Never get to touch or hug you for this I only pray
For some day I hope we can meet
To hug and laugh and dance to the beat
I know this would be a treat
For now this is all I see
Is my good friend here with me
Just think what life would be
Without friends like thee
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I wrote this poem to let all my friends know just how I feel about them because we all go through life and never take the time to think what life would be without them. So I did. I hope you do too and let them know how you feel about then too because its them that make life what it is today.
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I really liked this poem and sent it to alot of my friends. - Tiffany |
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This poem reflects my thoughts. My net friends are always there to share my ups and downs. Nice to see the thoughts put into words! Thanks - Jasmine |
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This was very good! Your words really touched me becuase I can relate to this so well! One of my very good friends i havent even met in person and i havent had a way to express my feelings so i'm definitely gonna send this to her! Very good! Thanx! - Leslie |
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This poem speaks my heart too that is why i like this. I do wonder what life would be now if i haven't met my love here -- - arlene |
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I love this poem because it lets me see how i feel. having no friends is hard to live with but i have learnt to manage. - lottie |
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Perfect! Describes it perfectly! What a great poem. - Sarah |
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That was just perfect thank you - Harlee |
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OMG! I cried when I read that! Just wonderful! :D - Cate |
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I really like this poem. It makes me think of my friend on the net. Thanks sooo much! - Marissa |
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I write poetry myself, but your words touched me and i thank you for that - Lorraine |
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his is a really good poem! keep them comin it does touch alot of poepls heart expesally mine! lots of proops - savannah |
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It's a great poem. i surely will send this to some of my internetfriends - Joyce |
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OH MY GOSH!, THIS POEM WAS STRIKINGLY POWERFUL AND PROFOUND ,I WONDER HOW SOMEONE CAN EXPRESS IN A FEW WORDS SOMETHING THAT FOR MANY WOULD BE INDESCRIBABLE ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE, BUT YA DID IT AND IT TOUCHED MY SOUL, AND IT GAVE ME A BETTER UNDERSTANDING OF FRIENDSHIP , SPECIALLY TODAY WHEN I FELT I WAS A LONER. AFTER I FAST FORWARDED THIS POEM TO A KEYPAL OF MINE HE SENT IT BACK TO ME , ONLY THEN DID I REALIZE HE TRULY WAS MY BEST BUDDY,ANYONE SOULD BE HONORED TO HAVE YA AS A FRIEND - CARLOS |
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THIS POEM IS SOOOOOOO NICE! I CAN TOATALY RELATE TO IT! THANKS - rosie |
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this poem is a good poem Why not write more like that. - barbara |
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I just wanted to say that I really liked this poem. The reason being I have a few friends that i know through the internet. I also have a person that I have had many special times wiht even thought i have never met him before, and I kjow how hard life would be without him! - Kylie |
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It spoke to me because i have friend i made over the internet and wish to see him very much, but he's several hundred miles away. I'm sending this poem to him and am hoping he likes it as much as me. - Dae |
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it is so lovely poem, I would send it to all my network friends. Thanks - Mohammad |
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At this time, this poem fits perfectly to my needs - Pedro |
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This poem meant alot to me, cause I have a friend in another state and we've made a promise to meet one day, anyway this poem says exactly what I feel while I'm talking to her. - Tom |
