The Heat Of My Desire by David Farrar
In the still of the evening
Without sunlight to intrude
I see the twilight's in your eyes
As the moon sets up the mood
Playing music soft and low
While romance fills the air
I can't help but feel aroused
The very moment you come near
You submit to my embrace
While candles flick their flame
And the smell of sweet perfume
Seems to drive my lust insane
As I look into your eyes
And run my fingers through your hair
I taste the sweetness of your neck
As I nibble at your ear
I then whisper words of love
As you answer with a sigh
And in a very sexy way
Your sweet body comes alive
Your the heat of my desire
As we slowly come undress
I then start to lay you down
While you welcome my caress
With your luscious sexy curves
You have a taste I can't resist
And your breast show some response
When I touch them with a kiss
As I soak inside your love
To a sexy love condition
Feeling passions start to rise
While making love in all positions
You give me so much pleasure
For ecstasy is here
With you wrapped inside my arms
To this heated love we share
Now no one can come close
To this love that we inspire
For only you can fill this joy
And the heat of my desire
Without sunlight to intrude
I see the twilight's in your eyes
As the moon sets up the mood
Playing music soft and low
While romance fills the air
I can't help but feel aroused
The very moment you come near
You submit to my embrace
While candles flick their flame
And the smell of sweet perfume
Seems to drive my lust insane
As I look into your eyes
And run my fingers through your hair
I taste the sweetness of your neck
As I nibble at your ear
I then whisper words of love
As you answer with a sigh
And in a very sexy way
Your sweet body comes alive
Your the heat of my desire
As we slowly come undress
I then start to lay you down
While you welcome my caress
With your luscious sexy curves
You have a taste I can't resist
And your breast show some response
When I touch them with a kiss
As I soak inside your love
To a sexy love condition
Feeling passions start to rise
While making love in all positions
You give me so much pleasure
For ecstasy is here
With you wrapped inside my arms
To this heated love we share
Now no one can come close
To this love that we inspire
For only you can fill this joy
And the heat of my desire
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I wrote this poem when I was once madly in love to a very sexy woman named Rosa. She was a woman filled with so much passion and love.
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a truly wonderful poem congratulations - makus |
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Now I think that this is the bomb. I really really like this one. I can really relate to it, it's really great! - Amanda |
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VERY INTENSE. VERY INSPIRING. LOVED IT! - EBONY |
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I LOVE THIS POEM, I WOULD LOVE TO SEE SOME MORE OF YOU WORK. SOME MORE LOVE POEMS. WHEN YOU HAVE SOME EMAIL THEM TO ME. - JESSICA |
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David it was great thanks - David |
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Very exotic. You have a great choice of words. Keep up the good work. - Lucy |
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WOW! when i first heard this poem i thought it was so moving but what i didnt no is that my boyfriend didnt write it for me like he sayed he did and i hope your reading this - lindsey |
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It is wonderful to know a men could express their passion so beautifully. I felt like I was there with him at that moment. Great Job. I loved it - Arelis |
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This poem has substance and really lets me feel what it says. - Christopher |
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i love the poem. it was romantic a i would like to read more. - mrs.taylor |
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You are the man! I could imagine myself right there. You have a deep expession that can only come from passion. I would love to read more of your work. - Lori |
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This touched the depth of my soul, the very feelings that I could relate to in my current relationship. - Janice |
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that was a truely a wonderful poem - tabitha |
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I would love to see more of your work. It's so real and it doesn't seem written. It seems more like you're sitting right beside me telling me a story. - Lovely |
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goodness gracious! i loved the poem! it was amazing. i began to reminsince and chills were sent down my back. keep up the good work! - Courtney |
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Very exotic!my guy luv diz poem! - Narenzgal |
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you go david! i love this poem. i am really feeling you with this. keep it real and good. for you have a talent that must go on. i really truely like this poem. - candy |
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I love it - Sharla |
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this is a very special poem. i love every part of it. good work. - Deandris |
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After reading this poem I had to send it to the person I thought of and love. It described exactly how I know I will feel the first time we make love. I couldn't have thought of the words myself. - Gary |
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I Love This Poem! Its So Deep & Sexy! It Made Me Want To Go Home To My Boyfriend. David You Truly Have A Gift Keep It Up! - Sandra |
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wow, i don't know if that has ever been put like that before - nick |
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That has to be the best poem I've ever read! I got completely lost in it. Keep up the great work! - Liz |
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excellence - jaide |
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love it! - magda |
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it was touching! - Rebecca |
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I really love the peom it remind me of myslef i would rate this a ten - Tameka |
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this poem was great. it reminded me so much of how my boyfriend and i are every night. you did a very good job, and please keep up the good work - alores |
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I WAS REALLY FEELIN THAT. KEEP DOING WHAT U DO! - DADDY |
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hey babe i just found your poem and it made me fall in love with you all over again (if that's possible)! never ever stop writing these awesome poems because if you do i'll. well you know the rest! can't wait for more to be published. - Short |
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that poem was deep,very passionate, and sexy keep up the good work! - Chardonnay |
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OMG! I absolutely love this poem. I'm so glad that there is a guy who can write a poem that has meaning but yet is still about guy things. I would love to read some more of your poems. You're a great poet. - Sara |
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I really love this poem this is how my fiance makes me feel - Erica |
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this poem was lovely and within each word i read, memories of my husband and i, just comes alive. your poem did that for me and i'm very greatful. keep up the good work this is the best poem yet - saxon |
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David, you are truly blessed with the ability to have words come alive. This poem is so pure and private that I do not even want to share it w/ someone. lol. please continue to write! - Lish |
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I always am astonished and surprised when I see how some people can find so easy words to tell so much. My deepest compliments and respect for this poet. - Dik |
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very well written - will |
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this was a very beautiful poem. i can really relate to it, because i am hopelessly in love righht now, and i can really feel it. - debbie |
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I thought this was a really good poem. I hope to find more poems from David. - dena |
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This is very descriptive and drips with passion - Michael |
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i really love your poem. it is very sexual in all types of ways. it explains how a guy feels about a girl! - donna |
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WOW, THAT WAS SO AMAZING. IM SO IMPRESSED. IM GLAD SOMEONE IN THE WORLD HAS/HAD THE FEELING I DO RIGHT NOW. - TIA |
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I really don't know what to say about this poem. It was amazing. The words were so strong, passionate, and intimate. I think the poem was better that a perfect 10. Very beautiful. Great Job David! - Brittany |
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Wow, you got skills! I wish a guy would write ME a poem like that. - Irina |
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This is a deep poem that seems to be true about love & lust! - Jazmi |
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Your poem sent shivers down my spine. - Kat |
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realy a fantastic poems i liked it. - med |
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HOT! This poem was sweet. a real turn-on. You go boy! :) - Manda |
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I loved this poem so much! - Brittany |
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Thank you David this describes me to a tee. - dana |
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hey my friends! it's a top hit to my heart! my love is named Rosa. - Zolee |
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he got talent he real it's how ladies out here feel it describe me it's the way me and my boo! feel 4-real thats the dazzle my nazzle. - Yari |
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congrats! it's a great poem. - jean |
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I'll tell you how I felt about this poem when I start breathing again. - Aweda |
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Absolutely devine. i can taste it. very moving. well done - liza |
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Amazing, truly a beautiful piece of writing. - Sarah |
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. You have a nice choice of words. They (words) say alot - Shea |
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i love it.its ggrrreeeaatt - yamyam |
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Loved it, it was so emotional. - Loretta |
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this poem brought a tear to my eye when i read it. it makes me think of my one and only love and it totally expresses my feelings for him. it is very touching. - stephanie |
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You could just feel the emotion in this poem and im gonna read more by this person. Great job! Keep it up - Danielle |
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All I got to say is..WOW - Green |
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David has true talent. Very well done. - Megan |
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I think this poem was intimate and very sexy! I love it! - heather |
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I really liked your poem - Elizabeth |
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This poem reminds me of my fiance. I love it. - Becky |
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I love this poem.It has alot of meaning and is so sweet that he wrote this for her. - Trinity |
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Oh, poet. I could most certainly feel your desire in this poem. She was a lucky lady. This poem was also very soft and gentle. Good job. - Donnatella |
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it was soo amazing. It made you picture the love and intamacy being shared. to the one who wrote it you are unbelievably talented. - gina |
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your poem was very touching, and i love everything about, keep it up - Alteris |
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wonderful, - Clark |
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I think this poem is good, very good. His coice of words and positions are erotic. - Kyra |
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Your poem was excellent man. You are really good. Keep it up. - Christian |
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EXCELLENT - Seba |
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Okay I have 2 give you your props excellent towards the end of this poem all good got's 2 give ya a 10. Keep up the good work. - Kristie |
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This poem is beauitful. I can completly relate to what youwrote. I printed it out and gave it to my fiancee for V-day..He loved it..The best thing about your poem is that you can feel everything that you wrote, which is awsome. - liz |
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I love this poem.It explains everything me and my sweet boyfriend feel! This poem is real touching - Mayra |
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This poem was truly touching and very passionate. You could feel the authors memories and love that he once had for Rosa. - Kelly |
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excellent poem very well written! - amanda |
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That was so wonderful it made me feel so warm inside. - Lissa |
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It sent chills down my spine. I wish my boyfriend would write stuff like this for me. - Larissa |
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Lust and hungry between two lovers. - Jackie |
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*that's very romantic* - Barbie |
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It's all good and I can definately relate to this! Keep up the excellent imagery! - Tyrico |
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Totally captivating! - Heather |
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i felt the passion in this poem, and it gave me chills. - melissa |
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I thought this poem was wonderful. I could picture every detail. Being in a long distance realtionship is hard, but when I send this to my boyfriend hopefully it will give him ideas for when we meet again. - Teri |
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This be a heartwellming poem - Naren |
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Very sensual, very mood inspiring... A powerful poem! - Rob |
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arghh - JB |
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Wonderfully written and very passionate....bstgirl - Ranea |
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great poem says exactly what i was feeling. - russell |
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LOVE IT, - GEORGIA |
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It is a very lovely poem that flowed nicely... it was good... - Heart_of_Jazz |
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I love this poem this is the best one. - Kim |
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It's good to know that there are still people out there who like to have sex. - Peanut |
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WoW! That was a VERY nice Poem! I Loved it!!! - Brown |
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Boy this poem has prominate tender heat. I loved it!!!! - Starr |
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He's up to it again. This guy is tops. More please. - Larry |
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This poem is so hot! This is how I like it. - Danny |
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I FELT ALL THE PASSION TO THE POINT IT WAS ME WHO WAS ROSA!! WONDERFUL FEELING - EVELYN |
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Kickass! - Istvan |
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Love this poem,Would love to have my lover send me a poem like this one. - Mary |
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DAVID THAT WAS A VERRY NICE POEM I LOVED IT. HOPE YOU HAVE A LOT MORE LIKE THAT ONE. - MELISSA |
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He is super and should write more - Lawry |
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A Beautiful poem of sexual love...and much more. - Alexandra |
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This was a fantastic and well written poem! - David |
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Love and lust, i can't resist the feeling, and this poem is filled of it. Gentle but hot. You simply have to read it! - Hans |
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Great! - Jessie |
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I really liked your poem. It was great, it was so real. - Christine |
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Bravo! This poem was written with excellent taste. I would like to see more of David's work. - Charolette |
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LUV IT.Describes me and the luv of my life. - Stephaine |
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I think this is a good poem . I really Know what your talking about . - tiffany |
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THIS IS A VERY LOVING POEM AND I REALLY DIG WHAT YOU ARE SAYING. - JAMONICA |
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i love that poem it's very deep and full of feelings keep writing poems - sugar |
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That was a GREAT poem...in a way it describes how I feel for the love of my life when he is near me! - Beverly |
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This poem is exactly what I and My love feel when we are near or apart. But never apart for long. Thank You - Robert |
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excellent.. food for thought. i have a long distance love that is coming in 10 days and this was insight to their visit.. thank you - tll |
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I always wished for this kind of romance. I had it once but it vanished into the night. It is comforting to know that there is men out there who feel things like romance. great job! - lorraine |
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The poem is very powerful. It really caught my attention. - Clifford |
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This poem is fantastic - Gabriel |
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I absolutely loved it. Strangely gentle yet simply erotic. - Donna |
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Words such as this cannot even begin to utter from a pperson who has not experienced true love. This was so beautiful and heartfelt. I could just feel the words as i read them - Johnna |
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Your poem "The heat of my desire" was one of the most endulging poems i've read in a long time. - Rachel |
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I do believe this poem was VERY well done. Thank you. - Gina |
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I really liked that poem - april |
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I really love his poem "The Heat Of My Desire", because it is the bomb,it really blew me away. - Karebear |
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good stuff - surfrun |
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this is a great poem and it relates to me in every way - Jose |
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This is so beautiful, so vivid, it makes you feel what he was thinking when he wrote the poem - Farah |
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touchy! - lani-gurhl |
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Its very touching and in dept. It gets you into the feeling of actually having that special some one right next to you feeling there sweet caress. - Robbie |
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So sexy yet he brings in the hint of love they shared as well! Awesome! - Lindsay |
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THis is a well exicuted poem with the proper choice of wording , dedicated to a lucky woman, describing his love for her clear down to her very soul. - sandi |
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I think this is a really deep poem I liked it a lot. - teah |
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This poet is very talented,and so are many others but i really like his work the best!! - Sarah |
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now THAT is a love poem! - shanaya |
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EXCELLENT - norm |
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This is a great poem,capturing some heart felt passion....good stuff..reminds me of Yeats....too cool - GalaxyHunter1 |
