Clutter by Ilab
I'm sitting in my room
there's a mess on the floor
I'm waiting in my gloom
to come rushing in the door.
I'm laying in my room
there's clothes on the bed
I'm lonely in my gloom
that never leaves my head.
You're sitting in my room
you're cluttering my bed
bringing all your hate and doom
as you sit in my head.
You're laying in my room
I'm forced onto the floor
my face shows the gloom
as you walk out of my door.
there's a mess on the floor
I'm waiting in my gloom
to come rushing in the door.
I'm laying in my room
there's clothes on the bed
I'm lonely in my gloom
that never leaves my head.
You're sitting in my room
you're cluttering my bed
bringing all your hate and doom
as you sit in my head.
You're laying in my room
I'm forced onto the floor
my face shows the gloom
as you walk out of my door.
This poem is about how sometimes when you love someone, you realize that you can never possibly have them, but you never learn to live with the pain of not being loved in return.
I'm 16 years old and live in Australia.
I'm 16 years old and live in Australia.
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| This poem was awesome and its simple words were packed full of emotion!Great job! - Stormy | |
| good - niki | |
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| this poem has real tension and feeling i know where your coming from with this - colleen | |
| I LOVE YOUR POEM IT TRULY TOUHED ME - NORMA | |
| This poem reminds me of how i felt when me and my bf of 2 years broke up. For no good reason. But i have learned to be stronger and i realized there is better out there. - Heather | |
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| This poem explains exactly how I feel about my ex! I know it wasn't written about an ex but that's what it makes me think of. - Me | |
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| i like this pome it makes me think - Whitney | |
| I don't know if this poem is about you or not, but I feel like you already know me. This describes the relationship between this 17 year old and I. I am too young for him and it kills me to know that if I were older I could have him. Keep writing. You are really good. - Nikia | |
| this poem totally relates to what every teenage girl goes through at one point - christina | |
| This poem hits right at home, I have had this problem for about 6 years, and it is very hard to deal with. This pretty much sums it up in a few stansas. Thank you for the great literature. - Nick |
