Because Of You by Starburst
Ive been in darkness for so long just waiting for the light,
And now that you have come my way, my days dont seem like nights.
Im glad Im finally overcome my fear of the other side,
Thank you for showing me the way, by taking me on this ride.
Ive never really felt this way about a guy before,
Youve truly touched me deep inside, youve opened, unlocked, the door.
I know its nothing serious, but surly its a start,
Youve treated me so equally, I feel it in my heart.
And even if this does not work, Im glad Ive had this chance,
To see how great you truly are, even just for a glance.
We never know whatll come of this, it really just depends,
Im glad were taking the first step, were becoming better friends.
With you I never have to guess just how you really feel,
You talk to me about the facts and tell me whats the deal.
With you I feel so comfortable, like nothing can go wrong,
I get this tingly feeling inside, you sing to me like a song.
The fact that you are older, really did freak me out,
But you treat me like Im your age, now Im rid of all my doubts.
Im trying to live in the moment, by forgetting about the past,
And so far its been working, and its really been a blast.
So hopefully from this day forth, Ill know just what to do,
If ever I come across a guy, another guy like you.
And now that you have come my way, my days dont seem like nights.
Im glad Im finally overcome my fear of the other side,
Thank you for showing me the way, by taking me on this ride.
Ive never really felt this way about a guy before,
Youve truly touched me deep inside, youve opened, unlocked, the door.
I know its nothing serious, but surly its a start,
Youve treated me so equally, I feel it in my heart.
And even if this does not work, Im glad Ive had this chance,
To see how great you truly are, even just for a glance.
We never know whatll come of this, it really just depends,
Im glad were taking the first step, were becoming better friends.
With you I never have to guess just how you really feel,
You talk to me about the facts and tell me whats the deal.
With you I feel so comfortable, like nothing can go wrong,
I get this tingly feeling inside, you sing to me like a song.
The fact that you are older, really did freak me out,
But you treat me like Im your age, now Im rid of all my doubts.
Im trying to live in the moment, by forgetting about the past,
And so far its been working, and its really been a blast.
So hopefully from this day forth, Ill know just what to do,
If ever I come across a guy, another guy like you.
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This poem is about liking an older guy. The fact that he has considered my feelings for him and now actually returns some of them. We have started to work on building a relationship based of friendship and just have to wait and see where it heads. This poem just expresses my feelings up until this point.
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This poem really touched me, because it seemed as if the author was reading my thoughts and living my life, because I can relate to the poem so much. It is very well written and has great emotion. - Kirstie |
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I think this poem is beautiful. This is exactly how I feel. I feel for an older guy but he makes me feel like I am his age. - Zambria |
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THE REASON WHY I LIKE THIS POEM BECAUSE IT REALLY SHOW HOW SOMEONE FEEL ABOUT THEIR BOYFRIEND AND THE REALLY SUPRISE - OLIVIA |
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This poem is incredible! I have recently gotten with an older guy and I could never find the words to tell him how I felt about him and he couldn't understand why. but I found the perfect words to say in your poem. You are an insperation to all of us girls with older bfs or working our way up to the older bf. -I think this is one of my most favorite poems out there! lol thank you for the priveldge. *~*~Megan*~*~ - Megan |
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it is a inspiration for teens to love - Justin |
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this poem was like the best really cause well lets say i just went through this problem and i read this poem and it said it all that i was feeling! you are a great writter! good job - Amanda |
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it a great poem - Brittany |
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I enjoy this peom. keep writing peoms like this. - kenyate |
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well, i'm speechless; i think there is a deep feeling in your heart that will not go with the winds. You did a good job - Angel |
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This poem is so beautiful to me. I can relate to this poem right now. - Shondrea |
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When i read this poem it reminded me of this girl I go to school with. She's really a great girl and I've been dropping all kinds of hints that I like her and I'm hoping that this peom is it. - Chris |
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I really luv dis poem it's very good it inspiring and it's so real cuz their are many people who can't explain how they fell on paper but they did a very wonderful jov expressing they feelings - Cutie |
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i love this poem! it's like all you have is hope for that relationship. you're thinking of the good but know in your head it may not last. i like how you said you took a chance and glad you did, i think all girls should take a chance if they think it'll work. - Holly |
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Hi! That was beautiful. Its not always easy to put your feelings into words and even make them rhyme. Especially when theyre really deep feelings. Again, that was great. Keep it up! - Kerri |
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aww, thats so cute. you're a great poet. i really loved this poem - Kori |
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Hey, i loved your poem it was very deep and i feel the same way about someone else accept they are the one afraid to take the chance. Anyways good job. - anonymous |
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I think that the poem was really great, and i enjoyed reading it! - pebbles |
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this poem was good - kayla |
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this poem is so ture i feel the same right now about a very close friend. keep writeing poems like this and ull deffently have my vote - Savannah |
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i know exsactly how u feel. i wwish i could have made this poem to explain the troubles w/ likeing an older guy, and haven him like you too. but having his age in the way. thanks - Alex |
