Jackie by Jon Macomber
play into this heart and soul
and it seems like we've been down this road before
and I don't want to run into problems anymore
scary as it seems we are quite well
the best of friends can often be hell
when you feel much more for the other
than yourself
and at times I try to fight it away
but your touch makes it stronger day to day
frustrated, I only push you away
how many time has the topic come up
between us , how much I love you
and you get scared, then we don't talk for days
silence ain't golden for this boy
I feel alone in the world without your voice
seeing your face makes me rejoice.
don't know what I'd do if you weren't around
my heart hurts at just the thought
but you never seemed to really care
what of us will become
I hope you realize that I love you, hun,
and I'd never leave your side
if it were my time
and it seems like we've been down this road before
and I don't want to run into problems anymore
scary as it seems we are quite well
the best of friends can often be hell
when you feel much more for the other
than yourself
and at times I try to fight it away
but your touch makes it stronger day to day
frustrated, I only push you away
how many time has the topic come up
between us , how much I love you
and you get scared, then we don't talk for days
silence ain't golden for this boy
I feel alone in the world without your voice
seeing your face makes me rejoice.
don't know what I'd do if you weren't around
my heart hurts at just the thought
but you never seemed to really care
what of us will become
I hope you realize that I love you, hun,
and I'd never leave your side
if it were my time
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I wrote this poem about a girl who is my best friend. We have never had any romantic experiences, but through the years I've known her, I've fallen madly in love with her. She kind of knows this, but I don't know how she feels about it.
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If there were more poems like this, the world would be a better place. Jon if you read these know that your poem touched me and that i love you madly - Claudia |
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this is the most beautiful poem that ive ever read. i once knew a jon with the same name. i loved him much. i hope he loved me as much as this jon loved this girl. - Jamie |
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that's so beautiful, i wish that my boyfriend now would of wrote that to me way back when. but now it's a happy ending. - snow |
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IT'S A FANTASTIC POEM WRITTEN WITH HEART. BY READING THIS POEM I REMEMBER MY OWN STORY. KEEP IT UP. - vicky |
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Your poem really touched me so beautiful. - crave |
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i think it was a rad poem, i was hoping to maybe turn it into a song,but i wanted to ask for your permission first. anyway, i think it is a great poem and to remember on valentines day - jay |
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It is an abosolotly beautifull poem. I feel that I understand the way the poet feels I have been touched by the sweetness that the poet has felt for the subject. his was treuely wirtten thinking of the personit is about. - Angel |
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i liked this poem a lot. My name is also Jackie and I think that this is a great poem and I would like someone I like to write me something as pretty so that. - Jackie |
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Its a very nice poem - Mark |
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I thouht this was a beautiful poem. I can really relate and im sure that a lot of people can. You really have a gift and i hope to see more poems like this. - jamie |
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A fabulous poem.Truly written from the heart.Every word in the poem sounded so very real and personal to me having been through the same. - Chetana |
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Jon, dude. Same deal here man. My friends name is Christa. I took it a step farther, after telling her, we're still best friends, but it just isn't the same. I'm not saying don't tell her, but watch your step. All the luck to you, man! - Kevin |
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Your poem is so beautiful. - Tanisha |
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Awesome poem! I'm in the same situation, only I made the mistake of telling her without thinking. We still talk, and see her almost every day (her husband is my business partner), but I think the closseness we once had is for ever gone. I'm so sorry S! - Alex |
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well done yeah it's hard. and know it all to well going an a 16 year best friend relationship..been by her side through thick in thin ..never stop!..one question? did you ever give her the poem? and are you guys still just friends? - ducky |
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Well, my name is Jackie so that was kinda unique.but I can totally relate to your poem except towards a guy of course..I wish some day to have a sweet guy write a poem about me.great poem! - Jackie |
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this poem is really wonderful..as my very best friend is called jackie..and i really love her so much..and i wish she would enter the site and recognize how much i love her.. - emmy |
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I think this poem is very sweet.It totally describes how i feel about my best friend. It gets me thinkin. - Damian |
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I really liked your poem. I just thought i would let you know. - charlotte |
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whe i read this poem it felt like this person really had strong feeling for this friend of his but he didn't know what to say, or do. this poem really touched my heart. - Angel |
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I believe the poem Jackie to be very nice and wonderful abouta guy who feels that He is in love with his best friend and He shows his feelings wounderfuly. - Jacqueline |
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It's a beautiful poem and I think you should let your Jackie read it. - Jackie |
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. It's wonderful. I am just a teenager, but i have already completed a few poems I am quite fond of. I love poetry, and i read a lot of it, and this was on of the best poems i have read! - Stephanie |
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I loved yer poem. It seems to say it all. I have a friend right now that is in love with me but I don't have the same feelins. I am married n he isn't. What can one say to someone that loves u n u can't return that love? One may never know!! I do love yer poem!! :o) - Kathy |
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this poem is great it seems as though Macomber has felt the feeling in which i'm in torment right now. great poem. - lakwan |
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it's lovely my fren feels the same for me - priyan |
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WELL, I WHEN THRU THE SAME THING BUT WE DID TRY IT BUT IT DID NOT WORK AND IT ALMOST RUIN OUR RELATIONSHIP OF FRIENDS, BUT THANK GOD IT DID'T AND WE ARE STILL FRIENDS AND HE'S GETTING MARRIED AND I'M HIS BRIDESMAID - IVELISSE |
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i just would like to say that this poem describes the same thing i'm going trough with my girl.I just give it a 10 b/c it's great - franky |
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i am in the same situation and it hurts it realy hurts - bridget |
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This poem is often true and I hope it will reach out to lots of people before it's too late. - Tillie |
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I just wanted to say how much I loved that poem. It describes the way I feel about my best friend and it's amazing. I just wanted to say you're an amazing and wonderful poet. - Jennifer |
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this is a very nice poem. - amber |
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this is a touching poem. I had the same experience b4. any way good luck to u I hope this friend of yours will be touched by your sincerity. - penn |
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I am haveing a personal crisis nearly identical to this, so because I can identify with this so well this poem earned my vote. - benmerica |
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this is SOOOOO strange. I was just surfing, and came across this poem. Jackie is my younger sister. Great poem! - Crystal |
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this poems really resmbles the feeling i have towards this girl and i think this poem has shows great expression - fernando |
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This is so true, I am going through this exact thing. It is kind of a relief to know that it isn't just me! - Nikki |
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Your Poem is a perfect description of myself and a very special lady. I just don't know how to come out and really tell her how I feel. - Michael |
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to bad Jon wasnt born centuries ago; i'd like to quote him like Shakespeare. - Charlie |
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I just cannot explain how I felt when I read this poem but it is so true It is exactly what I am experiencing at the moment The poem is just so lovely - Sonia |
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i love this poem - bobby |
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Waw. I can really recognize myself! COngratulations. - Nele |
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My name is jackie and i wish my best friend felt this way about me. Thank you for just showing me a little bit of what his love could be like. I wish you the best. Your Jackie is lucky. - Jackie |
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it's really good...it shows the depth of the love felt by the author - mariel |
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it was awesome - rick |
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it was the best poem i have ever read - noah |
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I do know how u feel, because i'm in the same situation. Its been ten years since i loved this persona and he never returned my love, but i'm not giving up, maybe one day - stefanya |
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this poem was very nice i like it very much - jackie |
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I love it. It describes exactly what I feel (even if my best friend is now living several hundreds of miles away from me, so that I can only meet her every 3 to 5 weeks *missing her*). - Johnny |
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This is a good poem and it is how a lot of people feel trust me on this one - anthony |
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Its cool - Albert |
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This poem expresses some things that I have often felt but never shared. - dy'er |
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The poem really expresses my feelings. Its really beautiful. - Wico |
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i loved your poem. i started crying, it was almost how i felt. - vix |
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I found this poem to be esquisit because of the title of it. It is also my name that's why I love it - jackie |
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I feel the same way about a friend and have the same experience you have. The only problem is I don't have the courage to tell her as I am afraid I would loose her forever. - Brett |
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This poem is so truthful in real life situations! - Katie |
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that was a very sweet poem I wish I were the one to be with you cause you got a terffic heart and I hope it will work out with you and her! - Cassandra |
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This poem has touched me like none other could. If poems like this one did not exist then things would be severely wrong in the world. It makes me more than happy to write these comments for this person is not only a great author he has a wonderful and inspiring soul - Jennifer |
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I am 16 and I love your poems about friendship and of course LOVE. Happy Valentine's Day Jon! - Christina |
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Great ! I love it - D |
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most good, does sum up how i feel - peter |
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It was a very beutiful poem and I enjoyed reading it. You are very talented. I like to write poems to. I think it is fun and enjoying, how poeple can express their feeling in poems - Jackie |
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that's a very heart warming charming poem. - Brandy |
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wow..Thanks so much.I too have fallen for my best friend(though it's a little more complicated cuz we're both female)but I haven't told her..Maybe your poem'll be it..thanks again:) - nicole |
