My Kindred Spirit by Babycakes
My kindred spirit,
Do you doubt well share,
A love transcendent,
And truly rare?
Our souls dominion;
Will give us no choice.
Time will stand still,
When I hear your voice.
If fate has its way
Your eyes will meet mine,
Lost in forever
Well travel past time.
Then, long awaited
Our hands will touch;
Mine, fragile, soft,
Yours warm and rough.
No thoughts will break,
Or suspend our dance.
When our souls meet,
Well be left to chance.
A force of nature,
Destiny shall ordain.
Our will cast aside,
Released from the pain.
To each other's center,
We will be led,
Seduction upon us,
Our hungers fed.
My heart, for you only,
My flesh will surrender,
Respond to your warmth,
To your touch, so tender.
A coveted encounter,
Fulfilled at long last,
Well know from then on,
If this will just pass.
The danger for us,
Will be revealed then -
What might be our future,
Are we lovers or friends?
Do you doubt well share,
A love transcendent,
And truly rare?
Our souls dominion;
Will give us no choice.
Time will stand still,
When I hear your voice.
If fate has its way
Your eyes will meet mine,
Lost in forever
Well travel past time.
Then, long awaited
Our hands will touch;
Mine, fragile, soft,
Yours warm and rough.
No thoughts will break,
Or suspend our dance.
When our souls meet,
Well be left to chance.
A force of nature,
Destiny shall ordain.
Our will cast aside,
Released from the pain.
To each other's center,
We will be led,
Seduction upon us,
Our hungers fed.
My heart, for you only,
My flesh will surrender,
Respond to your warmth,
To your touch, so tender.
A coveted encounter,
Fulfilled at long last,
Well know from then on,
If this will just pass.
The danger for us,
Will be revealed then -
What might be our future,
Are we lovers or friends?
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This poem simply expresses my feelings for a man I met online and our new found love. After more than five months of ignoring each other on our forum, our worlds suddenly collided one night in a chat room where, when alone and with all pretenses aside, our conversation was like second nature, honest and refreshing.
We became friends. Since then, we have discovered that we have more in common and have shared more than many who have lived their whole lives together. This poem wrote itself as I attempted to describe my anticipation in meeting him for the first time. I sent it to him for his birthday . . .
We became friends. Since then, we have discovered that we have more in common and have shared more than many who have lived their whole lives together. This poem wrote itself as I attempted to describe my anticipation in meeting him for the first time. I sent it to him for his birthday . . .
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Hi, Very good,I really like it! Very deep. - Ron |
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OOooooo.... Like it alot. Wow... that one hit deep. Very nice. You write very well... and keep it up. - AJ |
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I know how she feels...I met the lovely lady I intend to marry much the same way. I wish her all the best and hope that her and her man spend their lives together. - Roy |
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This is the poem that most expresses my utter wonderment at finding the man of my dreams. - Beverley |
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It is a most beautiful and very appropriate for these cypertimes and the many relationships that happen over the network and the sentiments are spot on and I can relate 100% - diarmuid |
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I think the poem is extremely powerful and it hit my heart because it is exactly how I feel about this guy whom I've met over the internet. - Brianna |
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THANK YOU! My Lover and I are in the process of meeting for the first time but we already know that we are Kindred Spirits and we are planning to spend the rest of our lives together. Something we thought we would NEVER find. Your poem brought tears to both of our eyes as he sat and read his copy so did I and all we can say id "Did she write this just for us?" - Echo |
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Nice poem.....hope the dreams expressed come true - snark |
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Bravo,bravo.The best the poet could offer,it's worth it's weight in gold. - QAISER |
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this is the most beautiful poem, my eyes ever encountered. Everytime i read it my heart beats faster, my breathing gets heavier, because this is the true description of love - Reina |
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This was a very pretty poem. I really enjoyed it and I also can relate to it. It touched my heart to read such words. Thank you for sharing this poem! - Tamika |
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That was a very nice poem and it tells you what love is really like it was a really lovely poem and i would send it to my boyfriend any day. - Christine |
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I really can relate toyour poem, for I have found my kindred spirit. than you for expressing what i feel in your poem. - Sandie |
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It truley reminds me of my love for naga-chan. A beutiful poem. - ssai |
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Lovely amature work! - Maggie |
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Now this poem i honestly love,it makes me think of a very dear friend that i never met face to face. - Mary |
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Wonderul poem, i too can relate to this, having met someone that i am now engaged to online. It happens, and its GREAT! - bonnie |
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As a poet writer myself this poem was beautilly writtin you Are a great poet keep up the beautiful work. Your Poem was great I must say that will I see it I think about my love way Hes far from here and all my tears I wish this day will finnally end cause I think I have no boyfriend - crystal |
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this poem is very good. i can relate it to my personal life, and i found it to be very moving. - jess |
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In cyberland it is so easy to love. but yet so hard to let go. thank you for this poem just what I needed as I LET GO - Katerina |
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Very beautiful words.. - Flower |
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i met someone on the internet about a year ago. from the moment i got to know him i knew i was in love. we met and now we've been going out for 8 months. hes brill and i really love him and the poem means so much to us both. thanx - sarah |
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Wonderful piece of work. - anita |
