Thank You by Rose
You took me in under your wings
When I was too scared to fly
You told me that I had to live
When all I wanted was to die
You saw the fear and sadness I had
By only the sound of my voice
You said I didn't have to talk-
You were the first to give me that choice
You told me just to take my time
We'll always have next week
There were many, many times
When you'd just let me weep
You somehow made me smile, though
Through my pain and all the tears
You told me all about my life
And what happened in those years
To my surprise you were right
You already knew me so well
So I decided to stick with you
"I like her already, I can tell. "
You opened my heart very slow
And took a look inside
Then you found the part of me
That I wanted so badly to hide
But you didn't laugh, nor did you leave
You didn't say I was wrong
You told me that I'd be fine -
Something I'd needed so long
Then I realized something was wrong
When I sat there all those days
Then I finally figured it out
It was something I didn't say
Thank you was all that I could get out
Though I wanted to say much more
You have taught me of life and love
And that I have something to live for.
When I was too scared to fly
You told me that I had to live
When all I wanted was to die
You saw the fear and sadness I had
By only the sound of my voice
You said I didn't have to talk-
You were the first to give me that choice
You told me just to take my time
We'll always have next week
There were many, many times
When you'd just let me weep
You somehow made me smile, though
Through my pain and all the tears
You told me all about my life
And what happened in those years
To my surprise you were right
You already knew me so well
So I decided to stick with you
"I like her already, I can tell. "
You opened my heart very slow
And took a look inside
Then you found the part of me
That I wanted so badly to hide
But you didn't laugh, nor did you leave
You didn't say I was wrong
You told me that I'd be fine -
Something I'd needed so long
Then I realized something was wrong
When I sat there all those days
Then I finally figured it out
It was something I didn't say
Thank you was all that I could get out
Though I wanted to say much more
You have taught me of life and love
And that I have something to live for.
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I wrote this about my therapist. She has changed my life so greatly, that I do not know where I'd be today without her.
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WOW! I can really see to this poem it's really good it's something of me too. i can really see it it's so deep and true kep it up. - Sarena |
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OmG I showed this poem to my big sister after we had a huge fight and we both started to cry. Thanks for the poem having my sister mad at me is horrible cuz she and I are the people in the poem! - Olivia |
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This poem reminded me of one of the new friends I made. This poem is great! I wrote this poem down and I'm going to give it to her tonight when I see her. I'm telling her I found it on the internet and it reminded me of her. Keep up the great work of writing poems! Great job! - Bridgette |
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This Poem is Really good I Love It - Taleshia |
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that touched me as I hope it will my friend that i sent that wonderful poem! I loved it and I encourage you to keep on writing on this poem will I'll leave it at this I LOVED IT! i sooooooo mean it! i dont lie when it comes to writing!:) - katrina |
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r8 gd poem it tuched me it rel8s so much to me a really good poem - dan |
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You have captured the words that I couldn't find myself. - Jules |
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Very beautifull poem it touched my heart. Maybe because I have been there too. - Teodene |
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The words expressed in this poem were very moving, and i could relate to it very much. - DOROTHY |
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An absolutely amazing poem. I too have a counselor who I think the world of and your poem says it perfectly. I hope you keep writing, Rose. - Beed |
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I am not a poet, I was looking out for a poem which speaks my feelings for my friends and Rose's poem is just that! Thank You Rose. - Bhanu |
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this rembers me of my mom how life was for her intell i was in her life. - Aarika |
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WoW! Thats all i really have to say! i can realate to this SO much! GOOD JOB! - Crystal |
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wow this poem really touched me . i sent it to 2 of my friends cause i really think it is so sweet that you are thanking them for being their friend. - Danai |
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it is excellent touching i simply loved it! - joanne |
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I know the feeling. Nice! - Anna |
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it is the most touching of all poems in this site my best wishes. - rich |
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awww. i luv this poem so much. it related to me somehow. but den i have lost a relationship btween me and mah friend. i dont noe what to do. wen i read dis poem. its make me realize that i didnt respected what i had recieve before. and now i had lost it. i cant never have it back. i miss mah fwen alot. me and her dont have much time anymore. =( - Trish |
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Thank-you for this lovely poem. It really summed up the way i felt about a certain friend indeed. It really helped me say to her what i really felt. Thank-you. -x- - S |
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you said in this poem what my heart is yearning to say. thank you so much for writing this, your therapy may have been in writing it, mine was in reading it. - indigo |
