We Were There by Roxy
It was such a dream -
We were there
I felt you breathing
I danced in your eyes
I stroked your lips
I stole a kiss
It was such a feeling -
We were there
Oh so warm inside and out
I laughed with you
I talked with you
I touched you
I hugged you
Our souls were together
We were there
Angels danced
Stars twinkled a little brighter
The moon smiled at us
The world stopped
No one can understand -
We were there
We became one
for a moment in time
We are now a part of each other
for a lifetime
It was the sweetest of sweet -
We were there
I took a part of you to keep
I gave you a part of me to keep
We gave each other a dream
We were there
We were there
I felt you breathing
I danced in your eyes
I stroked your lips
I stole a kiss
It was such a feeling -
We were there
Oh so warm inside and out
I laughed with you
I talked with you
I touched you
I hugged you
Our souls were together
We were there
Angels danced
Stars twinkled a little brighter
The moon smiled at us
The world stopped
No one can understand -
We were there
We became one
for a moment in time
We are now a part of each other
for a lifetime
It was the sweetest of sweet -
We were there
I took a part of you to keep
I gave you a part of me to keep
We gave each other a dream
We were there
This poem is about someone I met on-line. It was an unplanned meeting but ended up changing my whole world. I never thought that I could feel the way I felt during our brief but unbelievable encounter. This was the best way I could try to describe the way I felt about our meeting I met my soulmate, maybe at the wrong time in both of our lives, but I am glad it happened in any case.
| I just want to say that this poem is very touching. A year ago I met someone on the internet and the time that we spent was so wonderful, we fell in love before we even met. There is no feeling that compares to the loneliness that you feel when you say goodbye for the night and turn off the computar. I am glad to say that today I call my computar love my husband and we are very much still just as in love as the day we met. This poem describes so well to me the feelings that I would feel at night when I would turn into bed after talking all night with my soon to be husband. - Caree | |
| That's what I experienced in cyberspace.Roxy is right. I vote for him. - Madelief | |
| beautiful words and sad too - Maria | |
| We live in a world where the so-called standard of man and woman is taken for granted. This poem speaks for ALL who "love"..not just one standard. A woman loving a woman, man loving a man...it is still LOVE...so precious to find! - Pam | |
| this is a very sweet, and more true to life poem than most I have read. Regardless of cyber love becomes real love, we do give a part of each others hearts when emailing. I hope that when I meet my cyber love, it is just as sweet. - Lusaluma | |
| wow............. it just happened to me a week ago... and we felt the same.... thanks - Tina | |
| Very nice poem...Said so much in such a short line of words.. - Darlene | |
| The poem made me think about someone, that i never had the chance to be with, but hope that all my dreams of her, & I would be as you wrote! Loved it!! - Jeremy | |
| I met my fiancee on the internet and we became friends. We also fell in love. He is my best friend and my soulmate. This poem is a reflection of our lives. - Darlene | |
| man o man this one hit home.i met my girlfriend 6 months ago on here.and we just met face to face and its been heaven on earth everytime. the timing in our lives is diffucult but weve made it this far so i knowll shell see me thru. we were there too . alex and karen 10 out of 10 - alex | |
| This was a poem that i could relate to! - Emily | |
| The most beautiful and heartmoving thing I have ever read. Thanks Roxy. - starman | |
| i loved it! :-) - tina | |
| Brilliant poem; can relate to it so well. - mark | |
| This is a very real poem, it describes how interaction on line is somehow more intense than a face to face meeting. Perhaps it's because in a cyber meeting you can only communitcate through one medium. There are no extraneous sensory signals coming at you to difuse the focus. - Beverley | |
| i can relate to this poem cause i went threw the same thing not to long ago - Cesar | |
| It describes my love and I somewhat we met in cyber-space and in real life and we do love each other so much X - Mike | |
| Well put, and true! - Brian | |
| hi i have been sent one of your poems it was so nice ;so warm ; so loveing . i and my frind thank you 10 out 10 - mick | |
| This poem is brilliant at capturing the thoughts and emotions that you go through when you love someone. It shows that love can seem like a dream, and is very moving and powerful - NISHA | |
| Roxys words touched my heart! I know just what she felt - heather | |
| I too was there. - shellie | |
| This poem totally describes the way I felt when I first met my love, Karen. She lives 760 miles away, and we are still together, 6 months later. I am so glad to see we are not the only ones! Thanks for the great poem. - Michael | |
| it touched me personally....I was searching for a poem to send someone from long ago....that I have recently reunited with....It wasn't a romatic relationship long ago....but we have now become part of each other....our souls united...even if due to other commitments in life....or shell of a body will never be united....Thank you for putting into words something that I experienced with this person....and was able to share with this person.....who I believe is my soulmate.....I feel as if long before we ever knew each other...even years ago....our souls have know each other...and finally our souls feel complete in this way. Thank you again, I appreciated the beauty of the poetry. - Melissa | |
| I love your poem, all the words you use are so powerful. I have a online boyfriend who lives in Germany and I live in California, with you poem I know he will understand how I feel. Thank you so much and your a true talent. - deidre | |
| I met this Kid of the internet and he is the best thing that has ever happened to me, I never thought that I would find someone so perfect for me. This poem is so sweet and fits us so perfectly:) - Brandie |
