My Star by Bri Biggs
Breaking through the darkness I see no light,
I'm in a dark mysterious night.
In the corner of the room,
My tears no longer can be consumed.
I walk over to a little shining star,
What is it? It seems very far.
Closer I walked to the star,
Then I stop, it's the head lights of a car.
The car comes and goes through me,
It flips and tumbles and hits a big tree.
Soon other cars were there,
The lights from them looked like a fair.
They pull two bodies from the car,
I see one of them, it was my star.
I followed it to a small room,
And I enter it I hear a familiar tune.
There's a small little bed with a small child,
As the doctor left I waited a while.
I approached slowly and I saw,
My good friend lying there looking so dead.
I collapsed in agony and cried,
I told her don't you dare die!
But too late. She grew pale and was gone.
But she went inside of me.
And through her friends,
She said to us, I'll be with you till the end.
I'm in a dark mysterious night.
In the corner of the room,
My tears no longer can be consumed.
I walk over to a little shining star,
What is it? It seems very far.
Closer I walked to the star,
Then I stop, it's the head lights of a car.
The car comes and goes through me,
It flips and tumbles and hits a big tree.
Soon other cars were there,
The lights from them looked like a fair.
They pull two bodies from the car,
I see one of them, it was my star.
I followed it to a small room,
And I enter it I hear a familiar tune.
There's a small little bed with a small child,
As the doctor left I waited a while.
I approached slowly and I saw,
My good friend lying there looking so dead.
I collapsed in agony and cried,
I told her don't you dare die!
But too late. She grew pale and was gone.
But she went inside of me.
And through her friends,
She said to us, I'll be with you till the end.
This poem was written the day we found out that my friend, Angela, was in a car accident. She died about a week later. I went to visit her in the hospital but the doctors wouldn't let us see her because the injuries were so bad. She was only 14 years old! Her sister had to have lots done to her face, but she lived. I miss Angela so much! We were best friends.
| I really loved your poem it reminds me of my friend she died in a car accident 3 months ago and it is really hard to lose a friend i know the way you feel sorry about your loss - Jaylnn | |
| wowwww. really it's a gr8 poem i like it so much - antaka | |
| the reason i like your poem, is becuase it made my believe again. it made my believe that best friends do exist and that true friend care for each other and that girl was lucky havign a friend like you in this world. - janina | |
| Oh my gosh! What they must have gone through! I promise you I will pray for them. The Lord has not and will not forget them. He is right beside them. God Bless, Mandy - Mandy | |
| I lost one of my friends last year in a car accident! she burned to death after her car aught on fire because she was with a drunk driver! I know how it feels to lose someone that you care about! i miss her so much and i just wish that i could have told her good-bye! In Loving Memory Of: Shanell Jane Williams July 6, 1991-October 15, 2005 - Christine | |
| It was a beautiful poem it touched me from my own experiaces. Bri Biggs is a person that has talent that everyone should know about. I will tell everyone about this poem. Bless You. - Emma | |
| It is so good,its lovely,The moment i read it,i sated feeling smthing inside of ,i nearly cried. - Li | |
| i just was recently in a car accient 12/7/05 and so was one of my best friends, adn she didnt make it . i never lost some one close to me and its the hardest thing in the world. theres not a day that goes by that i dont think of my little angel. its just not far she was only 14 years old. and it was all becuase of drunk driving. so please dont ever drink n drive its that worst take my advice u never want to go through what every one close to me or alyssa went through. - Devin | |
| Hi, I lost a best friend, but ti was too cancer so I do kind of know hwo you feel! You just have to keep thiunking of the good times and no that they are there with yu all the time! I will never forget her! R. I. P Sam Miss you! xxxxxxx - Kelly | |
| that was a good poem - shannondawn | |
| your poem was touched me dearly,i went through the same thing at sixteen so the feelings were quite true for me - michelle | |
| IT was really good. - AMBER | |
| Your poem is really good - Danielle | |
| DEAR BRI BIGGS I REALLY LIKED YOUR POEM ME AND MY COUSIN NAURENEE ALSO WRITE MANY POEMS TOO. WE ENJOYED READING YOUR POEM AND I HOPE TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK. - MARILYN | |
| well i lost a close person in a car accidant 2 and it was really bad this poem touched me inside thanx for writin it - hiba | |
| This poem really spoke to me because I have had someone really special die before-my boyfriend- and it was really really painful. I give whoever wrote this poem all my respects and my love. I know what they've been through. I give them the credit for it. Love, Sophie - Sophie | |
| omg this poem made me cry all day - leslie | |
| it is very good and thurthful - fernando | |
| this poem has touched me because i have writen poems before and this one is just amazing to me i love it very very much! - lindsay | |
| i love this poem! it really touched me. thank you for sharing it with me! Thanks. Adi Jeanne - Adison |
