My Angel by Boardman
There was a short time in my life
When my problems were more than my ex-wife
When all of a sudden this angel popped in
It was love at first site you could tell by my grin
Her hair was as golden as the brightest summer sun
For a while there, I was actually having fun
Her eyes were as blue as the purest blue ocean
And comfortable I was even without any motion
My Angel, I wanted to keep her
When we were together I had no more pain
Her beauty was breathtaking please let me explain
With her in my arms I melted like ice
She was gorgeous and smart and incredibly nice
Well now that you know the way that I felt
Let me tell you about the hand I was dealt
She came with her friend who was not even dating
And then she flew home to her boyfriend who was waiting
My Angel, I wanted to keep her
Oh Well!
When my problems were more than my ex-wife
When all of a sudden this angel popped in
It was love at first site you could tell by my grin
Her hair was as golden as the brightest summer sun
For a while there, I was actually having fun
Her eyes were as blue as the purest blue ocean
And comfortable I was even without any motion
My Angel, I wanted to keep her
When we were together I had no more pain
Her beauty was breathtaking please let me explain
With her in my arms I melted like ice
She was gorgeous and smart and incredibly nice
Well now that you know the way that I felt
Let me tell you about the hand I was dealt
She came with her friend who was not even dating
And then she flew home to her boyfriend who was waiting
My Angel, I wanted to keep her
Oh Well!
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This is my first poem. A new e- mail pal I now have inspired it. I was way down in the dumps and she came into my life for a few days. Everything was pure intuitive magic. The few times we had together were very precious to me. I will never forget the moments of deep feeling. After her visit my luck did change and things started going in a positive way. She was my Angel for a short time!
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that was funny and also sweet. - Samantha |
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You very good at writing poem. Keep it up. - David |
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Lovely!. sweet,romantic,and actually. even funny in some parts. - Maggie |
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I liked how you described "your Angel" upon your first meeting,it reminded me of seeing my boyfriend walk through the door, (before we were dating), on our first meeting. I really do love him, and it HAS worked out for us:) - LaRae |
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THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM AND IT INSPIRED ME TO REALIZE THAT SOMEIMES YOU HAVE TO LET GO. THANK YOU. - DANIKKA |
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Boardman, this poem has touched me, it's interesting how life. love can deal you those cards. I'm sorry, but, it seems, she ,however was just an infigment of an angel. - Olivia |
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This poem made me cry, and that doesn't happen just everyday. You have inspired me to continue my love of the written word, so good luck to you! - Nicole |
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Gosh Im truly speechless. this poem has touched me like no other. It was so real and so true on how life really can be, I couldnt help but cry. Boardman, what a wonderful job and Thank You for sharing! - Jessica |
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I loved this poem. - KATE |
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well i think this poem is really good i foret it was wrong what she did but u will find another angle all the best with your poems - daniel |
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so great! i just wish some of the lines will happen to me. (ie me in his arms) it keeps me dreaming. oh well (sighs) - jen |
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this poem was so beautiful. Just keep your angel in your dreams and heart. - Candy |
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been there done that - sam |
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almost exactly what happened to me too....except there was no ex-wife... oh well! - foreheadplay |
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I LOVED this! - Donna |
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Just so true, in a lot of aspect and writen in such a way's that it kind a toke me by surprise. Have just love it! Keep it up, you will be one of a kind. - Marcel |
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Was it just a game she was playing? t makes you wish that sometimes youcould make somebody love you. - Dawn-Marie |
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a very neat poem, i wish i could have more from the author! Thanks - david |
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so sad so beautiful all wrapped in one. - jaqi |
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THIS POEM IS JUST SO GREAT - VIANEY |
