Ode To A Chatroom by Marie Lehmkuhl
One day I decided to get on the net,
I thought a chat room would be my best bet.
I saw names and words come up from where
I knew not.
I soon took a chance and had a nice thought,
Could I do this, it looked really neat.
I saw names on the screen that started with sweet,
sweet smiles, Jo, and Smokey were there too,
And then I saw it, "Oh, yes, we're talking to you,
come on in and chat for awhile. "
And when I did I started to smile.
I saw Chuckie and Robbie and soon I was friends
with quite a few people by the days end.
And after awhile they called me their friend.
Sometimes I come in and my friends are not there,
But I'll go back again because I know that they care.
Some live in the states and some do not,
But they always know when I need to talk.
I am so glad I took the leap and went into the
chat room where friends are so neat.
I thought a chat room would be my best bet.
I saw names and words come up from where
I knew not.
I soon took a chance and had a nice thought,
Could I do this, it looked really neat.
I saw names on the screen that started with sweet,
sweet smiles, Jo, and Smokey were there too,
And then I saw it, "Oh, yes, we're talking to you,
come on in and chat for awhile. "
And when I did I started to smile.
I saw Chuckie and Robbie and soon I was friends
with quite a few people by the days end.
And after awhile they called me their friend.
Sometimes I come in and my friends are not there,
But I'll go back again because I know that they care.
Some live in the states and some do not,
But they always know when I need to talk.
I am so glad I took the leap and went into the
chat room where friends are so neat.
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This is a poem about me meeting people in a chat room and how I found some very special friends.
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i think this poem is great and i hope to see more lots lobe haleyxxx - haley |
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this poems is soo great - zina |
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Good, its bright and has a nice use of ryming I used that style on a few of my pieces. It also has a nice flow to it even at the end that some poems I read lack. 3/5 good job. ((forgive spelling errors if any have a way with words, but not with spelling them. Also I relise that this is not a critique as it says above but I know I like to have some input on my works so I hope you dont mind)) - Nate |
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great - sai-ann |
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This poem reminded me of my friendship with my friend Allicia. She lives in Nebraska, and I live in NJ! We email eachother a lot and tell eachother about cool sites - Mary Beth |
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Hi I thought ur poem is so true. - Tina |
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I liked the poem. It describes so well how many friends I have found in the chatrooms I have visited - Tommy |
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two thumbs up! - marsh |
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thanks 4 the words i was huntin 4 my chat friend! - meera |
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I couldn't have said it any better, how very true - Ian |
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Fab! - Steph |
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thank you for the words i wanted to say to my chat room friends!! - pattie |
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great!!!!! - joy |
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so very true! - Mazen |
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This poem tells it all. It is beautiful. And well writen from the heart. - Marlene |
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it was very good - janet |
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The words of this poem made my dull day brighten up I had a bad day so I came here to smile this is my special place when I have a bad day I come and sit here and read read read all day - Amanda |
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summed it all up..I loved it. made me smile. - Marilyn |
